With regard to China's prose, we can turn our attention to a generation of literati who experienced the May 4th New Culture Movement. This generation of literati lived in the era of the alternation of the old and the new, the collision between China and the West, and the intersection of clouds and smoke, thus forming a completely different demeanor, temperament, mind, knowledge and interest. For example, Lu Xun, Ba Jin and Feng Zikai. ...
Among this generation of scholars, the article is suitable for primary and secondary school students, and Mr. Ye Shengtao is the first to bear the brunt.
As far as literary level is concerned, Mr. Ye is not the best, but he is the most suitable for primary and secondary school students. As a primary and secondary school teacher and the author of Chinese textbooks, Mr. Wang is one of the founders of modern children's literature in China. Teacher Ye knows primary and secondary school students. He knows what model essays primary and middle school students need to guide reading and writing.
Recently, I read Teacher Zhang's "Three Ginkgo Trees" and was moved by his naive intention to guide children and his subtle wisdom to control words. The structure and emotional rendering of the article can be described as ingenious and natural, which can be used as a model of children's prose.
The article wrote four parts of ginkgo tree in turn: branches, leaves, flowers and fruits. The author describes the beauty of leaf growth in spring, leaf withering in autumn, flower of tree, color and taste of fruit of tree in proper language.
Children generally write articles about the cycle of the four seasons, and generally arrange the structure in the order of spring, summer, autumn and winter. In the article Three Ginkgo Trees, Mr. Ye Shengtao found a new way to arrange the writing according to the structural order of winter, spring, summer and autumn.
Because ginkgo trees, like many trees, begin to give birth to vitality in winter. In order to highlight the overall image, the article starts with the branches of ginkgo trees. In winter, all the leaves fall, and all you can see is the branches, which are the most prominent in winter.
Every article has its own writing ideas, sentence by sentence, paragraph by paragraph, and a good author will not wander around. See how he started and wrote. Follow the author and imagine why he left like this, and you will gain something. In this article, the author uses the circular structure of deep winter, spring, summer, autumn and early winter to show the endless growth of ginkgo trees.
The other line of the article is the emotional line. Man is the sender of emotion. What kind of simple feelings does the author describe? This is the joy of simple life.
This is the joy of playing and running in childhood;
Behind standing proudly is the joy of growing up;
This is the joy of colorful vision.
Compared with "smoking", "cooking", "smoking a pipe" and "cooking a pot of rice", the rhythm is more soothing and the mood is more calm. The smoke of the people on the bus is not rushed out, not jumped out, but slowly "curled up". This is the most daily happiness and the most peaceful freedom.
Mr. Ye's article, like the ginkgo tree in his article, stands on the vast land, like an ancient painting against the background of this literary sky.
Mr. Zhu Guangqian's words are so hit the floor:
I wrote this article with reference to Mr. Zhang Xueqing's class record. )
Attached are the original texts of three ginkgo trees: