Can you hear the roar of the country? Can you see the blood and tears of the people? At the moment of national crisis, who extended a strong arm to help the stormy motherland? Who opened the warm heart and covered the cold and trembling heart with heat at that miserable moment? Looking back at the history books of 90 years, you will see that the epic recorded by the nation with blood and tears is still bright red and warm.
2. How to write a progressive argumentative essay in high school needs a method, which refers to a deep argument in content, such as from general cases to special cases, from small cases to large cases. , so that the article is in a "hierarchical" structure. Of course, this method is often associated with the idea of argument. If there is an article "Inspiration from Looking in the Mirror", the article first shows the view: "In work and study, we should always look in the mirror"-"Second, we should know how to take pictures; Third, when you look in the mirror, you should wash it off in time and do some careful finishing work. In this way, the structure is very strict.
I am also a high school student, and my Chinese is good. I suggest that you don't write argumentative papers in the exam. I am experienced, with the lowest score of 9 for argumentative essays (except excellent) and the highest score for new stories.
3. How to write a progressive argumentative essay in high school needs a method, which refers to a deep argument in content, such as from general cases to special cases, from small cases to large cases. , so that the article is in a "hierarchical" structure. Of course, this method is often associated with the idea of argument. If there is an article "Inspiration from Looking in the Mirror", the article first shows the view: "In work and study, we should always look in the mirror"-"Second, we should know how to take pictures; Third, when you look in the mirror, you should wash away the unclean places in time and do some careful finishing work. In this way, the structure is very strict. I am also a high school student, and my Chinese is good. I suggest that you don't write argumentative papers in the exam. I am experienced, with the lowest score of 9 for argumentative writing (except excellent) and the highest score for writing new stories.
4. strive for progress argumentative example: thrift is a virtue
With the progress of society and the improvement of people's living standards, the phenomenon of extravagance and waste is becoming more and more serious. In this case, I want to say: frugality is not a helpless strategy for the poor, but a virtue that everyone should strive to possess. (factual argument)
Thrift embodies a person's respect for others' labor achievements and personality.
Thrift is a virtue. Because thrift reflects a person's respect for others' labor achievements and personality. Presumably, everyone has read such a poem when he was a child: "It was noon when weeding, and sweat dripped down the soil. Who knows that every grain of Chinese food is hard. " It is not just the "Chinese food on the plate" that condenses the hard work and sweat of farmers. Then the clothes and things in our hands are not full of the hard work and sweat of thousands of people? Therefore, wasting these things is disrespect for the fruits of others' labor, that is, disrespect for others' personality. So, on the other hand, frugality means respecting the fruits of others' labor and their personality. (arguments, pros and cons)
Thrift embodies a person's sense of responsibility to the country and mankind.
Thrift is a virtue, and it also reflects a person's sense of responsibility to the country and mankind. The energy of a country and even the whole world is limited and by no means inexhaustible. Therefore, saving energy is everyone's responsibility. Cherish every drop of water and save every kilowatt hour, which is a truth that even primary school students know. However, some people disagree: there is no one in the room but the lights are on; When using water, whether it is necessary or not, the tap is always open. Friend, you waste not only your personal money, but also the resources of the country and all mankind! Moreover, with the increase of world population and the decrease of cultivated land area, the food problem is becoming more and more serious. When you throw away the leftover food, have you ever thought that in some corners of the world, there are still people who live without food? These people who don't care about frugality, waste resources and food are just irresponsible people who are "blessed". And only those who have the virtue of thrift are those who have a sense of responsibility to the country and mankind.
5. How to use the progressive order in the composition? The article uses three examples and writes three celebrities respectively, so the themes of these three examples are progressive.
For example:
Subtitles (headline words) with progressive relationship:
Poetry, poet, poetic bone.
Mountains, rivers and oceans
Themes with progressive relationship:
Personal open-mindedness (freedom), [write personal pursuit];
National pride and pride [written for national pursuit];
Pursue the truth, [write for the world and for all mankind].
But the above progressive relationship is a dark line, and a good article should have a main line, which is the theme of the article.
6. Progressive subtitle composition subtitle structure method is a structural method that selects several typical materials that can express the author's unique perspective and thoughts around the center, and leads them under several subtitles respectively to connect the articles in units.
In this way, the article is not only novel and ingenious in structure, natural and smooth in connection and artistic, but also rich and fresh in content and profound and prominent in theme. This is a wonderful use, full of brilliance.
This structural arrangement seems to put on a magical new dress for the article, which greatly increases the color of the article. If you can skillfully use this writing form in the composition of the senior high school entrance examination, your composition will certainly get a satisfactory score.
When writing, we should use the following structural methods according to our own accumulation: 1 time series method: that is, arrange materials in chronological order. The way is as follows: (1) concentrate several materials a day.
For example, the subtitles "morning exercises", "siesta" and "evening self-study" show the love between teachers and students through three specific times: early morning, noon and evening. (2) Divide the material into a person's life and edit it at large intervals.
For example, Zhuang Xiaoying's work Growing Up, she wrote three shots. Although there is no clear subtitle, she organized the full text into three segments: shot 1, shot 2 and shot 3, among which three segments are structured as childhood, primary school and junior high school, which is very layered. (3) Divide the materials into four seasons.
For example, an article "Four Seasons Songs in My Hometown" in "Selected Works of the First Future Writers Cup National Middle School Students' Innovative Composition Competition" is subtitled "Into Spring", "Taste Summer", "Sing Autumn" and "Read Winter". (4) Make up a book with one or several students' diary fragments.
For example, write such subtitles as "September 1 day, registration", "September 2, seating arrangement" and "September 3, first Chinese class" that impress the new teacher, and express your views on the new teacher through three things; Teachers, let me have a rest. This is about school life. The subtitle is Monday, Abala, Tuesday, let's try, Wednesday, sad voice, Thursday, short spring in winter, Friday, darkest moment before dawn, Saturday, bitter sea, Sunday, and then to the lake and mountain. (5) Arrange the materials according to the sequence of events.
For example, I wrote Xiasha, a rising star with hardware. I organized the material according to the development process of Xiasha, a poor and remote village, from poverty to prosperity. The subheadings are "Out of the Poor Cottage", "Innovation Leading", "Take the Road of Getting Rich" and "Strive for Progress". Subtitles of making friends, such as "acquaintance", "acquaintance" and "parting" also belong to this category. 2 Spatial arrangement method: that is, arrange materials according to different spaces.
The arrangement of materials can be from primary to secondary, from near to far, from real to virtual, etc. For example, in the exercise imagination of the new century, the subtitles are "Ecological Park", "Underwater World" and "Moon Village".
Step by step method: that is, the author narrates things from light to heavy, or from shallow to deep, and arranges materials step by step. For example, the subtitles of the exercise "Fog and Rain of Youth" are very hierarchical, such as "understanding life", "learning to give up" and "pursuing ideals".
4 parallel assembly method: it is a method of assembling materials with lenses. For example, Zhuang Xiaoying's My Family, attached at the back, shows life and themes from several people with unique personalities in the family. The content is clear and rich, and the structure of subtitles adds a lot of color to the plain article.
5. Emotional series method: A student's composition "The joys and sorrows brought by modern science and technology", combined with typical examples in modern life, is subtitled "joy", "anger", "sorrow" and "joy", which is refreshing.
7. The feeling of being loved should be written in 600 words step by step. Some people say that the feeling of being loved is sweet and full of happiness. It is also said that the feeling of being loved is very practical and safe. But I think the feeling of being loved is rainbow candy, sweet and sour.
sweet food
When the first sunshine of spring came in, the sky and clouds also opened their hazy eyes, and the spring breeze passed through the clouds, and the clouds giggled. Accompanied by my mother's intimate cry, "Little lazy pig, get up and eat!" "I also had a stretch and got out of bed. Lazy into the kitchen, and then, the smell of lunch slowly aroused my appetite, so I had to kill the greedy bugs in my stomach with delicious food. Mom said cheerfully, "slow down, slow down, don't choke." I said, "You eat, too." Mother smiled, touched my head and said, "The child has grown up." A ray of spring breeze mixed with the smell of sunshine came in and blew my mother and me on the cheeks. At that time, the feeling of being loved was sweet.
ferment
That year, I was eight years old. I had never seen the mountains or the sea, so I stayed in the walled back garden all day. In summer, there are many butterflies in my back garden. Maybe it's the flowers at home. I often think so. That time, I put the butterfly I caught in a glass bottle. The bottle is very big, and the butterflies in it flap their wings as if to escape from the cage. I put the glass bottle in the sun and watched the escape game quietly. A day later, when I came to see it again, some butterflies were motionless in the bottle. I was frightened (after all, I was young), so I quickly called my mother and asked her what was wrong. Mother said without explanation, "silly child, these butterflies can't see their mother. How pitiful!" Maybe if you let them go, they will get better? " I was a little reluctant, but I finally opened the bottle cap. I feel a little sad when I see those butterflies flying out to find my mother. The feeling of being loved at that time was sour.
difficult
Once, on my way to school, a sudden storm attacked my body impudently. I finally opened the door in a daze, but I couldn't help falling down on the sofa. I only heard one sentence in my ear: "You boy, don't take an umbrella." When I woke up, I was already lying in the hospital bed. When I opened my eyes, I saw my mother's red eyes. The doctor said, "The child has a poor foundation. Take good care of him. " My mother snorted and gave me medicine to drink. As soon as I took a sip, I spit it out and cried, "It's too bitter." Mother sympathized with this and said, "Good medicine tastes bitter. Hey, it's all my fault. " At that time, the feeling of being loved was bitter.
The feeling of being loved is a rainbow in the sky that day, rich and beautiful.
8. Write a composition of about 300 words with progressive transition. My friend Li Xiaoming.
Li Xiaoming is a good friend I have known since I was a child. He is tall, with a round face and a smile all the time. Every time he laughs, his eyes squint. My mother always said that he was more polite than me.
Li Xiaoming is a very quiet person, so quiet that sometimes people forget his existence. Once we went out to play with friends, talking and laughing all the way. Li Xiaoming got separated from us on the way, but friends forgot that he came out with us. It was not until we went home that we met Li Xiaoming's mother and asked him. Just when his mother wanted to find him, he appeared out of nowhere.
Although Li Xiaoming is usually quiet, he will become a different person when he reaches the basketball court. As long as he plays basketball, his eyes will open wide and he will concentrate. Once, in order to save a ball that was about to cross the line, Li rushed at the ball without thinking, trying to get it back. As a result, the ball speed was too fast, and Li's nails were cracked by basketball, but he just ran to the toilet and simply washed it with water.
Another time, I was playing basketball. In order to rebound, Li Xiaoming was hit on the nose with his elbow. At that time, blood gushed out, and we were all scared silly. As a result, Li Xiaoming didn't say anything painful. After stopping the bleeding, he came back to play.
This is Li Xiaoming, a quiet boy who loves basketball and is full of fighting spirit.
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9. Write a composition with a progressive structure on the topic of "compulsion". He said people were forced out, but I agree with a word in the internet. -inscription
People are forced out, and some people will be forced to change.
People are forced out, and some people will be driven crazy.
People are forced out, and some people are forced to do stupid things.
People are forced out, and some people will be forced to get better and better.
A word often has double meanings. I remember the first time I heard this sentence, it was in a friend's QQ data. I always liked this sentence because of my mood at that time. Later, I found that this sentence is ubiquitous in the network, and now it seems like a motto to me.
The topic of "face" is always interpreted on me. Everyone has a different role as a guest. I don't remember the first time. Let's talk about the first time since I remembered. What impressed me the most was He Erliang's "God".
God, what a derogatory term. Hum, face. They just want face. She said, "I shouldn't talk about you in front of so many people, but I can't." "Where do you want me to lose face?" "I don't think you are ashamed!" Every time I repeat these words, there is a word with the same meaning * * * which is face. In this case, my evaluation of them is only "hypocrisy" and "hypocrite"!
This looks like a real soap opera. I don't want to write anymore. Their hypocrisy is not worth recording in my book. In fact, I'd rather be a child in the village, so there won't be so many tragedies. They always feel that they are important in this county, so I am humiliating them. Actually, people should have their own way of life.
Although I am younger than you, I have lost to you in other ways.
Do you feel tired, hypocrite?
I envy my friend's mother, but I found that I didn't dislike my parents' capital.
I am trying, and I have been trying silently, but no one knows after my bosom friend. I always thought it was my respect to find fault with me in front of me and not speak ill of me behind my back, but they always forgot to say, "I'm giving you face, don't …" Oh, I can't stand it. In their minds, face is above everything else.
They, always treat me as a substitute, and shout twice to scare me if nothing happens.
My heart, no one can read.
More and more found that reality is more hypocritical.
Death is a good way to escape.