Eighth grade Chinese composition 1 heaven, the place where I was born and raised, I am proud of you and wish you the song …
Mysterious mountains, heartbreaking Longtan River, beautiful legends and simple customs played a vibrant green melody.
Who doesn't know that heaven is the hometown of folk songs? You see, the farmers are all wearing hoods, sandals, mountain clothes and a strong paradise accent. Although it looks a little rustic, Tujia people live a happy life, have a cheerful mood and have a mellow voice. While working, they sang folk songs: "The Party's policy is to balance the left and right ends ..." The songs flowed into Longtan, the Yangtze River and the sea. That song flew out of the mountains, across the Qian Shan, to Wuhan and Beijing ... Their songs are earthy, heavenly and Tujia, authentic, simple and vivid.
I love heaven and its songs. When you walk into every village in heaven, you will be surprised to find that there are almost no people who don't like songs. Every July, when the party's birthday comes, the park will hold a folk song competition. Male and female singers dressed in red and green gathered in Paradise Town and suddenly turned into a sea of singing mountains, which was very lively. "Heaven" is really a veritable paradise.
Singing is intoxicating. In the singing contest, singers always show off: "Your songs are not as wide as mine, and your ancestors are buried on the mountain of songs." My eldest brother is called Master Song, my second brother is called Song Xiucai, and my name is Song Dou. " Before the song stopped, the other party went on to sing: "Sang Mu's shoulder pole is three feet long, causing a song book to be sung everywhere." Changyang sang to Beijing and 10,000 folk songs were dedicated to the party. "
It would be more meaningful if men and women sang in duet. The woman sang, "You are not shy if you want to sing folk songs. Brother Qing, look up quickly. Look at the flowers attracting butterflies on the mountain first, and then look at the vines around the willows by the stream. " The man sang, "My beloved sister held her head high and sang, and the song followed her. Flowers attract butterflies and love flowers, and vines wrap around willows and hold them into balls. " Chorus of men and women: "Brother and sister are deeply in love, like a banana born from the same root, brother is like a banana leaf, and sister is like a banana heart." Bursts of songs drew warm applause.
This annual singing contest has become a grand festival for Tujia people. In fact, on weekdays, Tujia people also love to sing, always singing from one mountain to another: "There is rice and tea, the first tea is harvested, the early rice is cut into the late rice, and the rice is fragrant." Melodious songs float across the mountains, sweeter than sugar water.
Ah, heaven! A paradise full of happy songs, may your beautiful songs last forever!
The Beauty of Casuality in Grade 8 Chinese Composition 2
There is suffocating beauty everywhere in life. A careful person, those casual beauty will ripple out a kind of warmth and sweetness in his heart.
Grandma has been suffering from Alzheimer's disease for two years. In the past two years, she gradually forgot her name, the way home, and her wife. Finally, it was my granddaughter's turn.
Grandma has been in my house for two years, and I don't seem to care about her at all.
It was not until that day that I finally found her busy figure and the beauty that emanated from her.
I remember a guest came to my house that day and brought me maltose. Grandma is sitting on the sofa watching TV. She saw maltose and took it from me. She murmured, "This should be for Hui Hui. She likes maltose ... "She got up and walked around the house several times, sticking her head out and looking around. Finally, her eyes lit up and she took out a chopstick from the disinfection cabinet. Then I smiled and held maltose tightly to the table and sat down. I tightly wrapped maltose with my left hand and carefully rolled it up with chopsticks. With the last sweetness of maltose broken in the air, grandma got up and happily stuffed maltose into her mother's arms. My mother took it doubtfully, and my grandmother grinned. "You haven't eaten sugar for a long time, right? This is your favorite maltose. Eat quickly, Hui Hui ... "My mother leng for a few seconds, looking at the smiling face. Mother put maltose in her mouth and sipped it bit by bit. Tears fell on the silky maltose. Grandma immediately panicked and quickly wiped away her mother's tears with her hands. "What's the matter with Hui Hui? Don't cry, we won't eat if it's not delicious, okay? " The wrinkled face was filled with worry in an instant. Mother suddenly hugged grandma tightly, and they hugged each other face to face. For an instant, I couldn't help being shocked. I accidentally saw the oil painting "Mother and Child". In the warm sunshine, the picture of mother and child hugging each other overlaps with the picture of mother and grandmother hugging each other, which is so beautiful and touching. I couldn't help crying when my nose was sour.
In the evening, my mother cooks in person and dishes of food are served. At this time, grandma looked at us warily, and when we were not paying attention, she quickly picked up a big fish and put it in her bowl, concentrating on picking the fishbone for fear of missing one. After picking, she straightened up, put the fish in her mother's bowl and urged her mother to eat quickly. "Hui Hui, eat quickly. Don't let them rob you of your fish. I have already picked the fishbone. Eat quickly, eat quickly ..." When I was eating with my head down, I didn't look up when I picked vegetables. I found that my grandmother's face was full of happiness, and my mother was quietly putting the half-eaten fish back into the bowl. Suddenly there was warmth around her, and it was moved by simple actions.
My heart becomes delicate and soft in the glory of grandma's maternal love. In my life, many beautiful and casual fragments that pass by me will be collected for me, beautiful my life, beautiful my life.
Teaching design of the third volume of eighth grade Chinese composition
In your life, there must be something that makes you excited and excited. Someone must have cared about you and helped you. These people will sometimes leave you good memories and cherish them in your heart. Recalling these past events, you will be excited again, excited again, encouraged again and gain strength. Now, pick up a pen and write down your cherished memories.
ask
1, choose one or several things that you have experienced personally and can't forget to write.
2, to write the ins and outs of things clearly, the narrative should be complete, to avoid straightforward narrative.
3. In the narrative process, it is best to insert appropriate lyricism or discussion around the central meaning and write your inner feelings about this one or several things.
4. You can use "Treasured Memories" as the topic, or you can draw up another topic, but it must contain the meaning of "Treasured", not less than 600 words.
Writing instruction
This is a composition that recalls the past and expresses emotions. You must have experienced many exciting and exciting things in your life. Since it is a treasure, it shows that its impression is vivid, profound and unforgettable. This requires that the article must be a personal experience, and the narrative must have its own inner feelings and experiences. At the same time, "cherish" is always loaded with some feelings, or excitement, excitement, regret, regret, warmth, admiration … or both. These subtle feelings should not only be vented by the words and deeds of the characters and the rendering of the background, but also be directly strengthened by the essential lyricism or discussion to reveal the connotation, value and significance of "treasure". In content, the object of "treasure" can be people or things; It can also be some kind of experience, some kind of feeling ... In short, it should be a "treasure" with personality, which is only your experience, so that you can write a good article with true feelings.
"Chinese Curriculum Standards" has repeatedly stressed: "Writing should be sincere and strive to express your unique feelings and real experiences of nature, society and life." Writing is to see with your own eyes, hear with your own ears, think with your heart, and experience with your own words, so that sincere feelings can naturally flow out from the depths of your heart. Articles should come from nature, and only truth can be "good" and "beautiful". Nothing is difficult unless you experience it. Love is tasteless unless you feel it. Emotion is abstract, especially for junior high school students without rich experience. How to let the emotions in the article vent and be truly perceived and understood by readers? In this respect, the first text of this unit, "Reciting", is a model. This character is the epitome of a loving father image left in the author's memory; This figure is the shadow of a statue saturated with "I" to understand what my father did and express his respect, gratitude and yearning for "I"; This figure is a tearful figure.
If you want to express your sincere feelings, unique feelings and real experiences smoothly in your composition, you must also pay attention to your conception and writing skills, so that you can write a composition with a wave of your hand. In other words, you should learn to practice and train according to the procedure of "examining the topic (preparing the topic)-conceiving-selecting materials-fixing the body-writing" and gradually improve your writing ability.
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With "Treasured Memories" as the topic, the content that can be written is relatively extensive, and there are few frame restrictions, but it does not mean that there are no frame restrictions. Even if another topic is raised, it must be closely related to the word "treasure". Therefore, writing examination is the first priority. Examining questions is a process from shallow to deep. "Shallow" judgment explicit information; "Deep" judgment hides information. The explicit information is clear: the number of words, expression, title, conception and style all have certain requirements. Implicit information is to firmly grasp the connotation of "treasure". The so-called "treasure" refers to some things that have happened, including people or things related to things, which can be left in the heart, meaningful and worthy of "memory". Recalling these past events, writing about your feelings about these people or things, writing about your enjoyment of beautiful things, writing about your interests, writing about your feelings, and writing about your opinions are the key points of writing, which is the implicit requirement given to us by the title.
(2) Conception
Clear the meaning of the problem, we should consider the problem of opening our minds and determining our intentions. The topic of composition provides us with a broad space for daydreaming. How can we think about a colorful situation? Since childhood, we must have experienced many things, met many people or things, enjoyed the fun and gained a lot of insights. For example, looking back on colorful and cheerful childhood, describing visiting beautiful natural scenery, recalling two or three things raised by parents, describing unforgettable junior high school life, describing the friendship melted in youth or tracing back the regret experience of regret and guilt, and so on. This topic covers a wide range. You can talk about your childhood, your parents, your friends, your classmates, the environment and nature, and even the bits and pieces you have experienced. You can write yours or his, but you must stick to the topic of "treasure" and reflect the value of "treasure" by recalling the past and remembering people or things. Feel the life of all beings, enjoy the beautiful things, experience the fun, talk about your own feelings and unique opinions. In the face of numerous materials, we should have a unique vision and choose those that are deeply felt and interesting. Starting from a small place, "there is not much gratifying spring scenery, only a little red in the evergreen." Choose good materials, stand high, see far and dig deep. The thinking should be not only clear, but also novel and profound. For example, most students may get their own "treasure" from the narrative of one or several things, but we can't cover everything. We might as well change our perspective and find another way. Just like the idea in the second text of this unit, Eternal Regret-"My Eternal Regret: I shouldn't have left my hometown and my mother", the beauty lies in regret.
(3), material selection
People's feelings and emotions are always influenced by the objective environment, only by accidental events. Excitement and excitement are like this for people. Knowing this, when we write a composition with "cherished memories" as the main topic, we should first mobilize the accumulation of life, recall the people or things, feelings or scenes that once made us excited, excited and inspired, and choose materials with rich connotations that are worth chewing and pondering repeatedly. Writing such a composition can of course be lyrical or argumentative, but the main framework for organizing the above materials into articles is lyrical and argumentative on the basis of narration and description. Otherwise, the feelings expressed and the theories discussed will become passive water and trees without roots, which will not only infect readers, but also make them bored and stay away. This is a place that must be paid attention to when writing a composition on this topic. When it comes to people or things, feelings or scenes that remind you of excitement, excitement and inspiration, you are by no means making them up. When writing this kind of article, you must take the memorable things in your life as the material and express them in simple and frank words. Naturally, how to arrange and use materials in an article can vary from article to article. It is a writing method to write the material as the main body of the article, and then trigger the necessary lyricism or discussion. According to the needs of writing, it is also a writing method to sort out the materials and intersperse them in all parts of the article to write prose with "loose form and condensed spirit"; Even if there is only narrative, no lyric, no discussion, it is not bad to integrate feelings into narrative and express their feelings implicitly, so that readers can figure it out and play with it themselves. There is no certain method for writing. As long as the content of the article can focus on the topic, explain the deep connotation of "treasure" and show a positive value orientation, it should be said that it meets the requirements of the topic.
(4), fixed body
The style of this composition has been delineated in the narrative category. You can only choose the style that suits the general narrative or narrative prose you want to express. On the basis of narration and description, narrative composition can make proper use of argumentative and lyrical expressions to enhance its appeal and appreciation. You can't do whatever you want. To realize your writing, you must have a clear definition. What you wrote must be what you wrote, and what you wrote must be what you wrote, and you can't write it as a "hodgepodge". As far as this exercise is concerned, you can describe your experience of feeling beauty, discuss the connotation and significance of appreciation, and express your feelings about beautiful things.
In short, to write a good composition, feelings must be sincere. Without any affectation, it is the embodiment of sincere feelings. To write a good composition, the content must be substantial. The so-called enrichment does not lie in the length of the text, but in the highly concentrated content, not rambling and not escaping. To write a good composition, you must think clearly. The structure of the article is in the author's mind.
Article 4 of the eighth grade Chinese composition "A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step", and the journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step, so does Zhou Ran. The first level is more difficult than the first level. In order to pass the customs smoothly, we must have excellent equipment, indomitable spirit and superb technology.
The cold wind hissed and stimulated every pore. In the comfortable and warm bed, those are just floating clouds, but with the harsh roar, I have to face the biting winter wind. "Alas, I have to get up and go to school again." The moment I walked out the door, I was shocked. It turns out that today is the final exam, and I hurried to school. The road was deserted and lonely, and the oncoming long wind messed up my hair, but these were not my concerns. My goal is the school. The school runs at full speed like Liu Xiang 100 meter sprint, and the school beckons me not far away.
The morning glow is gray, and the white dew is frost. The so-called Iraqis are on the water side. The beautiful figure of the teacher is watching the students review at the door of the classroom. I strode to the teacher and inadvertently lowered my huge head. Although the weather was cold, my hands and feet trembled and I was silent for a while, I could feel the volcano about to erupt swimming, but something unexpected happened. The teacher patted my trembling shoulder and said, "Have a good exam!" "
At that moment, you took a new step.
The teacher's meaningful words awakened my troubled heart, slowly raised my heavy head and looked at the teacher's happy smile. I made up my mind to walk into the classroom lightly for fear of disturbing other struggling students. I can't help but feel relaxed when I think of the teacher's words.
The Yangtze River flows eastward, and the waves wash away heroes. Although she no longer teaches us, she will always be my teacher. His words let me constantly leap to a higher level, gain more skills and have an indomitable spirit.
At that moment, I bought a new level! Always remember the process of smiling.
It has been found that passengers aged 30 to 40 on the plane are often reading books, most of the passengers in business class are reading magazines or working on computers, and most of the passengers in economy class are reading newspapers, watching movies, playing games and chatting. It is found that passengers in different cabins have different behaviors, which makes me feel that a person's behavior will affect his position.
People in different cabins naturally have different identities, and people in different positions are related to their behavior. Some people may retort that someone in economy class is reading a book carefully, but he still takes economy class, not first class. Undeniably, this statement also makes sense.
However, how many passengers are studying in economy class? Most likely, there are only a handful. And can we judge whether those who can read carefully in economy class will fly first class, and will you stay where you are? Those who are flying economy class now but are still studying hard are likely to be eligible to fly first class in the future. A person's position is decided by himself, and his behavior has great influence.
In fact, if you carefully observe the people around you, you will find that some students who have studied well will stay in the classroom after school, while many students who have not studied well have already left the classroom. This behavior of staying in the classroom affects the study of different grades in the same class. This is similar to the reason why passengers sit in different cabins on the plane. You have to pay, you have to harvest, you can get a higher position than others.
Except on the plane, in the airport, most people in the VIP room are reading books, while people in the general airport area are playing mobile phones. This phenomenon makes me more convinced that behavior will affect the position.
As early as the Song Dynasty, when Song Lian was young, he borrowed books from others and copied them at home, even in the dead of winter. This was different from other behaviors of the same age at that time, which affected Song Lian's lofty status as a writer after he became an adult. It's like passengers in the first class, business class and VIP room of the airport are reading books, while passengers in economy class and ordinary waiting area are playing mobile phones.
Although all people are created equal, many times, we still divide people of all colors into different grades. The assigned grade is inseparable from its behavior. On the plane, passengers are divided into first class, business class and economy class. The position depends on your behavior. If you want to have a higher position than others, you must form good behavior. If you just want to play mobile phones and games all day long and don't read books to improve yourself, you will end up in economy class, not first class.
Therefore, only by changing your bad behavior, studying more and playing less can you have a higher status and a better future.
The sixth teaching purpose of eighth grade Chinese composition;
1 Cultivate students' ability of induction and generalization through abbreviated novel training;
2. Master the methods and principles of abbreviation;
Learn to use concise language.
Teaching focus:
1 Cultivate students' ability of induction and generalization through abbreviated novel training;
2. Master the methods and principles of abbreviation.
Difficulties in teaching: mastering the methods and principles of abbreviations.
Teaching process:
Primary import
There is a humorous sketch language, "It's all condensed", which we will talk about before class today. Guide the students to say why they say this. You can give examples. And talk about how to "condense") In fact, articles can also be condensed. In this unit, we learned four novels. Today, let's train "abbreviated novels" for today's composition to "condense" these literary feasts. Abbreviation is a common form in composition. Abbreviation refers to articles with more content and longer length, which are written into shorter articles according to certain requirements without changing the basic content, center, genre and order. Learning abbreviations can help us better understand the content of the text, cultivate our reading ability and generalization ability, and then improve our language expression ability.
Second, writing preparation
Mainly based on the characteristics of "abbreviation" and "novel".
Abbreviation of 1: Ask students to talk about the requirements for abbreviations in what they have learned in primary schools. Summarize the main idea without changing the original intention
2 novel: the three elements and structure of plot development
Three instructions:
1, extraction method
Grasp the center and main points of the original text, mainly extract the important sentences of the original text, appropriately increase the cohesive language and link them into words. A brief narrative can extract important sentences about time, place, people, the cause, process and result of things. Concise argumentative essays can extract the central arguments and sub-arguments of the original text, and retain the main arguments, secondary examples and quotations. Some can be omitted and some can be extracted from it. Abbreviation can extract more parts that can best explain the main characteristics of things, and minor problems and parts that have little to do with the essential characteristics of things can be extracted or not recorded.
2. Delete method
The initial narrative or explanation is specific and detailed. Delete these when abbreviating, cut off branches and leaves, and leave the trunk. Abbreviate sentences and keep emphasized clauses. Paragraph abbreviation can grasp the main sentence in the paragraph, and the rest of the words can be kept appropriately. Such as narrative, you can delete minor characters, upcoming plots, non-critical details, and some descriptive and rendering language. Explanatory text can delete some repetitive examples, descriptions and argumentative words, and delete those decorative languages, narratives and minor details that do not directly affect the explanatory object, and retain the characteristics and essence of things. Repeated analysis, minor cases and critical papers can be deleted from argumentative papers.
3. Generalized method
Summarize the meaning of the original text in concise language. Narrative, detailed description can be compressed into rough description, detailed description can be compressed into summary description, and detailed dialogue can be changed into short dialogue. Explanatory text can summarize those words that explain the characteristics and essence. In argumentative writing, theoretical arguments can be compressed from specific quotations to general quotations, factual arguments can be changed from specific details to general generalizations, and some arguments can be mentioned in one sentence. You can also compress several sections into one section. You can also shrink paragraphs into sentences, long sentences into short sentences, and lyric sentences into general declarative sentences.
The above three methods may be used in combination, so it is necessary to keep the wonderful sentences or central sentences of the original text as much as possible in the abbreviated article, so as to make the structure complete, the center clear and the language fluent, especially to make the reserved parts and the changed parts naturally match. You can't change the genre of the original text, disrupt the order of the original text, start a new stove, reorganize the materials, and you can't play it at will.
Fourth, writing training.
(1) Go back to the original text and work in groups. Take a text in this unit as an example for each group.
1 summarizes "three elements, plot structure and theme" respectively;
Retell each text;
3. On the basis of affirming students' retelling, put forward the main principles and methods of abbreviation (textbook 148 page writing training)
(2) Sub-exercise
1 people: ask students to summarize relevant contents from the original text around people, such as the characteristics of people and events.
2 plot development: division of labor within the group, which is referred to as each stage of plot development, and the teacher gives guidance to the group; Look at the students' model essays and communicate with each other.
Fifth, talk about experience
Students talk about their experiences or gains through a training class.
Six assignments:
Students write a series of paragraphs to abbreviate the novel.