Language test paper analysis
The first volume (36 points)
A, (15, 3 points for each small question).
1。 B is (item A, Man/Wan, She/Zhebao, B Jie/Ji 'ang, Wu/E, C Za/Cha Qiaozhan/Chen D, Chiang Mai,/Man, Jie/Xie Cha).
2。 A (project b, located in project c, fishing rod, project d, going against the sky)
3。 ("prejudice" refers to fixed viewpoint "damage" and one-sided prejudice. "Supervision" refers to retreat and impulse; "Supervision" refers to supervision and management. "The fact of participation is already"; First of all, from the content, we have been away from a period of burning passion for many years, which is a fait accompli, so we use "although")
4。 (Speak freely: try to create conditions for the opinions of your subordinates and the masses, and should be changed to "speak freely". Rules and prohibitions: The original reference to Buddhists observing the rules and precepts of temples now refers to the rules and regulations with unreasonable prejudices and constraints. For the first time, metaphor is used to discuss novelty and surprise. Amazing: He quoted from "Ber Ber and the Harp", a poem describing the sound of the harp suddenly becoming high-pitched, sometimes deep, surprising and indescribable fairyland: praise what you see, extreme judgment, misuse).
5。 D (item a, with mixed sentences, should be deleted, and the same cannot be discounted. B, the related words are not in the right position, which is inconsistent with item C, promotion and quality brand, plus "construction" and "quality brand")
II(9 points, 3 points for each small question)
6。 D (Item A, "Production in Southern and Eastern China", says "marine culture" instead of "Lingnan culture, and B has been more fully developed compared with the Central Plains culture" is wrong. It should be compared with marine cultural projects in other coastal areas, and it was originally a metaphor to illustrate the compatibility of Lingnan cultural characteristics, not a real writing).
7。 C (changing the traditional Lingnan culture ",the original words:" This is not the characteristic and mutation of Lingnan culture ")
8。 Item c(A) says that "only its characteristics and values make a comprehensive judgment" without realizing the mistakes in quality and value of Lingnan culture. , b, the "wrong" theory that eventually perished has not been properly developed. "Project D, the primitive Lingnan culture that jumped into the upper reaches of the world's marine landscape and culture has no such information."
Three, (12 points, 3 points for each small question).
9。 D (win: change)
10。 C (item A, the first is an adverb, which will be the next item B, with the first conjunction juxtaposed with the table and the last conjunction with the table turning, but c, two months is an adverb, indicating the mood, probably D, before the adverb and only after the verb).
1 1。 (1) Modesty is benign; 4 performance, its character is resolute and does not walk with others; (5) show your responsibility)
12。 D (the mistake of "the imperial edict allows him not to go to court and not to deal with the government" and "the imperial edict allows him not to go to court, but leaves them with the behavior of handling public affairs")
Volume II (1 14 points)
(Volume 2: Learn 600 and 300 copies of sunshine pumping from the experiment, each article, science)
The average sampling score of the second volume is 79.35, and the difficulty of the test questions is 0.69.
The fourth question (24 points)
The ability to translate this big topic, the ability to learn classic sentences, the ability to appreciate poetry and the ability to recite famous sentences and articles. The average sampling score of the big questions is 13.40, and the difficulty of the questions is 0.558.
13。 The average sampling score of this question is 5. 12, and the difficulty of the question is 0.5 12.
(1) [Reference Answer] In the case that any academic achievement extraction tool has ruled the country, four people who saved lives have been wronged. (3。 Take the prison as an example, a book is a tool of governance; Live, so ... live, save)
Respondents to candidate questions
Living makes the law unable to explain its "hell", and the meaning of "book" is not accurately understood; After that, the general misunderstanding is "to avenge the wrongs to heaven" or "the four enemies are still alive."
[2] The official in charge of the official seal accepted it, but he didn't read it and then gave it up. (3 points. Nursing, back; A little, do a little end, stop, give up)
Respondents to candidate questions
Incorrect understanding of "care" or "care" translates into "look" or no explanation; "Shao" is misinterpreted as "Shao" or translation is ignored.
(3) [Reference Answer]
The patient and the dumb queen mother also pulled her clothes many times. There seems to be some commission. What is this? (4 points. Disease, disease, number, repetition, repeated quotation, pull; Belong to, entrust)
Respondents to candidate questions
There are no incorrect translations of nouns and verbs of "disease", which are translated into "clothes", "seeing" into "taking", "yes" regardless of the phenomenon of common falsehood, and some are translated into "heart belongs".
[Thoughts and Answering Methods of China's Classical Famous Sentences Translation]
Translate (1) sentences into words, give specific answers, and try to make every word, especially important content and special sentence patterns, without omission.
(2) Pay attention to some special language phenomena, such as passing on function words, some notes, and accurate explanation of special sentence patterns.
(3) The meaning of some words that are not easy to determine should be inferred by reading the specific situation, whether it is fluent or not, and whether it conforms to common sense.
14。 The average sampling score of this question is 4.563, and the test difficulty is 0.570.
[Reference answer (1)] The majestic momentum of the "plug" is full between heaven and earth, so it is very exaggerated. (2 points) (2) The Student, Ascending to Heaven vividly depicts the scene from the top of the mountain to Nanshan and the rising sun. (2) (This means that you can)
Respondents to candidate questions
I misunderstood the meaning of this word, and became the original interpretation of many students as "generating", "maintaining growth" and "blocking".
(2) The analysis of combined poems is not in place.
Thinking and mode of answering questions]
Firstly, it points out the meaning of words and the means of expression (rhetoric) used, secondly, it analyzes the combination of its beautiful poems, and finally points out how to express emotions (for example, in what way, what kind of pictures are depicted, and how to express emotions).
(2) Reference Answer This poem expresses the opinion and feeling of boredom of the favorite poet Zhong Nanshan. (2: 00 1: 00) The beautiful, quiet and comfortable environment of Nanshan fascinated our poets. Being in the mountains, people's loyalty level is at peace with the world and feels detached. (2) Its significance.
Respondents to candidate questions
(1) lacks thought and organization, and the organization answers IOU management.
The understanding of feelings is not comprehensive enough and many students don't like it.
3 incorrect understanding, some students are tired of the secular "understanding as" the hatred of the court "and" the ambition to serve the country is hard to pay ".
Thinking and mode of answering questions]
(1) First, it summarizes the feelings and makes a poetic analysis.
(2) If the artistic conception of the poem itself is not messed up, try to prove it on the basis of analysis.
15。 The average sampling score of this question is 3.72 and the test difficulty is 0.620.
[Reference answer]
(1) If you die a thousand times, you will not regret it. A thousand miles is like a river.
(2) Gordon Gordon Gordon didn't know Txutxi.
(3) On the side of the sunken ship, Qian Fan surged over Hongbo.
(4) The jade carving fence is still in the Qiongyao newspaper.
(6 points. You can choose three small questions.
Respondents to candidate questions
(1) Writing error: Utah-specially organized training-oil refining, carving-drying, bar-Rana, jigsaw puzzle-car, report-Qiong Yao-Qiong Ju.
(2) What is the error within the specification? ① The number of small students is in the specified answer; (2) Two minor problems in reverse order; (3) self-problem, in a small problem where two small problems are recombined. There is no score above a ..
Question 5 (12)
This topic examines the language skills of cohesion, compressed discourse and slogan drafting. The average sampling score of this big question is 8. 128, and the difficulty of the question is 0.677.
16。 The average sampling score of this question is 1.676, and the test difficulty is 0.559.
Reference answer ⑤ 42 13 (3 1. Answer three, five, two, three points)
Respondents to candidate questions
(1) Most students can't accurately analyze the confusion of logical relations between sentences.
(2) Individual students missed the serial number, so don't repeat the mistakes.
17。 The average sampling score of this question is 2.4 15, and the test difficulty is 0.805.
Example of reference answer: A piece of paper "Father-son Agreement (1) caused (1) social controversy (the above words are at the appropriate deduction point).
[Candidates keep asking questions.
(1) Subjective rather than objective news content can be summarized as: "The contrary ethics agreed by father and son.
(2) The language is not refined and redundant. For example, the "sub-agreement" caused controversy and was fierce.
(3) Pursuing novel but unqualified news content, such as: father and son signed "AA life system".
(4) The language expression of the draft title does not meet the requirements. For example, it is reported that the agreement between parents and children is controversial.
(5) I can't help but summarize the main contents of news, such as how to carry forward traditional ethics.
(6) expressing confusing and incomprehensible language, such as the moral change and degeneration of "father-son agreement".
[Solution ideas]
(1) Filter news content and summarize the most important, fresh and important content;
(2) The processing and polishing language is so rigorous and clear;
(3) tax refund check, if necessary, the title text is consistent.
Response mode
News text+news content
18。 The average sampling score of this question is 4.037 and the test difficulty is 0.673.
Care about children, not children in cages. (3) Don't focus on children's achievements blindly, only emphasize letting children lose at the starting line; (1) Pay more attention to children's physical and mental health and their actual needs. (2) (This means that you can)
Respondents to candidate questions
(1) Many candidates didn't notice the word limit requirement.
(2) The language expression is inaccurate. For example, don't let your study go with your children. Fighting for the Lord, you can't win your childhood.
(3) The material of the development content deviates from a slogan. Spoiled and never had a childhood. Protect the environment.
The content of (4) is contradictory. For example, let children have more joy and fantasy.
(5) Lack of expressive language. Please let me play for a while. I want to be free, not go to a remedial class.
(6) explain the reasons. Many students only have an objective view of some children's lives, and lack analysis of the reasons for this state.
Thinking and mode of answering questions]
(1) Read the material and summarize the main idea.
(2) Choose appropriate ways to express your ideas.
(3) Polish is concise and friendly.
Question 6 (18)
This topic examines the understanding, analysis and appreciation of prose reading. The average score of headline sampling is 10.95, and the difficulty of the test questions is 0.609.
19。 The average sampling score is 2. 122, and the test difficulty is 0.530.
The bright stars after the rain, the outstanding openness and natural appreciation in autumn and the following explanation: Xing 'an Lingqu, the writer feels relaxed and happy under pressure, which paves the way for the beautiful panorama of Lingqu in the future. (4 points and 2 points for each question, indicating that it is ok)
Respondents to candidate questions
Moderately, most students didn't grasp the requirements and hints of the topics "Why to write more in ink" and "Autumn" and "Emotion", but they just felt aimless, or failed, or confused in logic. Many students know that "some students can know the result after paving the road" leads to the following situation, and only a few students can know the result "easy to sum up rain and autumn", which is characterized by "open uncertainty".
The word first appeared in the first and second sentences of this paragraph, and it is even more unclear to write "autumn" with the sentence "open". This illustrates the idea of answering several questions. The only explanation of "Rain autumn scenery" is what is clearly written into it.
Again, the answer is not concise enough. The expressions of the answers are closely related, and quite a few students plagiarize the original text or work in their spare time. For example, "the second paragraph is covered with more ink, and even in this article, it is mainly about Xing 'an Lingqu" was plagiarized. The focus of the answer is not eye-catching, but it also wastes valuable time.
Some students used the emotional tone laid down below and did not check the full text correctly. Some students will lead to the autumn point that paves the way below, which is incorrect, because the role of panoramic memories behind in emotions and excitement-it is natural to use correct terms, not to rely on it.
Thinking and mode of answering questions]
To answer this question, you must try first. The main points of the clear answer are the reasons for "writing rainy autumn scenery" and "artistic conception". Second, organize the points around to answer. Poetry can be used to appreciate the relationship between "Wang" and "Wang", and the broad function of "autumn rain" is "uncertain openness" (if you can choose in the text) and "relaxed and happy mood" (you can stretch it by using the key sentence of "water singing", "soft cloud" intoxicating wine "and" fun ". Use Lenovo's imagination to appreciate. Prose, write "Autumn Rain in Xing 'an" clearly, and the following leads to the "paving the way" points you can think of.
Answering a similar question can summarize the characteristics of the scene, then explain the reasons, then appreciate and summarize the author's mood, and then clarify the reasons.
20。 The average sampling score of this question is 3.27, and the test difficulty is 0.8 17.
The rhetoric used is parallel prose, and the anthropomorphic sentences are short, long, diverse, unpretentious "normal" and "painting", in other words, the flowing characteristics of Lingqu are written, and Lingqu has a distinct personality. (2 points, 1 minute, "anthropomorphic" analysis that knows the result points out that this means it is ok)
Questions of candidates and interviewees]
There are three main problems: first, students failed to catch up with this sentence, gave up personification and wrote "parallelism", and "effect (beauty)" became personification. Second, students can't grasp the key words in rhetoric and answer generalizations, but a considerable number of students are generally not "elegant" by copying the rhetorical effect of the original text. Once summed up the last sentence from a paragraph, "it is a small number of students who answer incorrect ideas." Explain sentences without highlighting the rhetoric used or combining rhetoric. The order is incomplete or too simple.
The lack of appreciation of ECC function does not affect the score, but it also reflects that students' appreciation angle is not wide enough.
Some students' useless "personality" should be more accurate with "spirituality".
The fourth paragraph: [Reference answer uses metaphor and personification rhetoric, "Enron" is calm and indifferent, "a series of adjectives vividly describe the characteristics of Lingqu's calm and indifferent, quiet (broad, generous, calm and deep). (2。 The "analogy" of practice can know the result of analysis, that is, it can)
Questions of candidates and interviewees]
The main problems are the same as above. , has become the only rhetoric of China people. Many students' "personification" reflects that students' thinking in the examination room is not clear and rigorous. The metaphor of "vivid" can repair the influence of Word, but some students can't write it. Whether there are enough concise sentence metaphors and standardized explanations.
Thinking and mode of answering questions]
Reflections on answering the sentence questions of RMB appreciation and poetry appreciation. First of all, you should know the speech (or exercises, methods, sentences, etc. ) and the original sentence "How" and "Why".
The answer of the organization should pay attention to the integration of sentences or paragraphs with keywords, and do not copy the original sentences.
2 1。 The average sampling score of this question is 2.405, and the test difficulty is 0. 1.
Reference answer ① Lingqu has a long history, thick and elegant; ② Lingqu guide, boats, people who nourish the city center and save the world economy; ③ Lingqu has unparalleled design and inspiration; ④ Lingqu Station in 2000 was not destroyed, which reflected the harmony between man and nature; ⑤ Lingqu teaches cleansing, keeping holiness and heart to heart. (4 points for each question is 1, and knowing that the result is 4 points, it means that it is ok. )
Respondents to candidate questions
There are four outstanding problems. First of all, this is not comprehensive and accurate, whether it is setting; Fourth, if there are too many copies, the main points will be lost. This reflects that some students' answers are irrelevant, or reading the text is not standardized. They choose sentences with appropriate keywords in the text and process them comprehensively to form the main points of the answer.
Maybe a few students don't understand. This is a general title, so the answer is far-fetched.
Thinking and mode of answering questions]
First of all, according to the title, it is obvious that this is a general problem. Then, according to the characteristics of "scattered form and concentrated spirit", I searched paragraph by paragraph with "spirit" as the core, and found that the first paragraph is the material that embodies the "spirit of spring". I found that I should be good at grasping the leading sentences and concluding sentences of each part, then filter them, arrange these sentences in order as far as possible, form the main points of the answer, and write the historical soil and accumulation of ① and ③ points at the end of the paragraph ... What a kind of! The first paragraph "grounded spring" ... The unparalleled design inspiration of the contact point also comes from the harmony between man and nature "; ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ ⑤ 93 1
22。 The average sampling score is 3. 153, and the test difficulty is 0.526.
Praise the expressive power and popularity of Lingqu with reference to the answers, express profound opinions and deepen the main idea of the article. (2) The inspiration comes from: (1) looking at things dialectically; (2) study and work; (3) a relaxed attitude. (4 points, 2 points and 2 points for each question, indicating that you can know the result)
Respondents to candidate questions
The main problem is that the answer to "role" is incomplete. Many students know that the complete article "Student A" in the full-text "OR" group is a connecting link between the preceding and the following, and it is the result of summation, mainly considering the structure.
Some students know that "summing up the center" or "revealing the results of the spirit" and "Zhang Xianzhi is dead" have some truth and will not affect the score.
Inspire many students not to be as abstract as the answer, as long as the points are full, it will not affect the score; Some students have a single point of view, and one aspect of speech and harmony affects the score.
Thinking and mode of answering questions]
First of all, read through the full text and clarify the author's wording ideas. The materials can be realized by grasping the sentence or paragraph summary of the corresponding 1 sentence at the end and the middle turning sentence, clarifying the content of the article, organizing the grasp of the article and expressing emotions. In the underlined sentences of the selected text, the author's previous papers grounded the "panorama" and "memory" of the spirit of spring, which is natural and emotional. "You may think," I know, this is actually the feeling (emotion) of hair. "Face" urges our sudden inner "feelings", "Lingqu and shovel mouth", how can people "admire". So some "inspiration" is taken for granted. In fact, this also reflects the universal law of learning, cultivating sentiment and improving literacy.
Because of the function of the second question, this sentence should be (mainly) considered as "content" The inspiration of thinking structure comes from "don't want to".
It should be an answer to the "inspiration" of abstract organizations. After all, it is due to the author's philosophical perception that it needs a certain height. Although most students didn't do it, or answered their understanding and appreciation, they were graded accordingly.
Of course, it is not unreasonable for some students to get a copy of "harmony between man and nature (human resources and society)", make contributions to others (society) in Lingqu learning, and get an "inspiration" for Lingqu economic peace.
Question 7 (60 points)
This question examines writing ability. The average sampling score of this question is 46.87, and the difficulty is 0.78.
[Summary]
Article form material+proposition. In two paragraphs, the first program "My own secular world" is a common phenomenon, emphasizing that "it involves the real soul". In fact, my voice "constitutes" and highlights "the need to be myself", which urges the latter, while the former is the connotation of "being myself".
Explain the necessity and importance of "being yourself" and how to have a profound concept of "being yourself" and "being yourself" and talk about this problem. "How to do" or "how to do" is in line with the meaning of the question, and the necessity of "being yourself" (the materials specified in the first paragraph) is basically in line with the meaning of the question.
Its main advantages [article]
(1) Most of the candidates are moderately accurate in concept, and can resist words such as "how to be yourself" and "the meaning of being yourself".
(2) Most students can use modern materials, and the rich parameters are encouraging.
(3) Some students can make more in-depth analysis and reasoning, talk to a certain depth, and improve their reasoning and ability.
(4) The article is clear and distinct, and there is no basic structure of the "third paragraph" format.
(5) Some candidates' language is concise, vivid and vivid, and their expression level is very high.
(6) The majority of candidates have standardized writing and clean test papers.
(7) Strong candidates turn a deaf ear to consciousness, the starting point and end point of consciousness.
Highlight the problem [student thesis]
(1) indicates insufficient depth. Materials that don't really grasp the connotation, natural voices, vague talk about "doing it yourself", lack of specific connotation, rather than "why" and "how to say it", and some even lead to the elaboration of "going to the secular world" in the first part of the living textbook, which is in line with the meaning of the question.
(2) Bill of materials, fillers, topography and lack of logic. Throughout, some are old, some are touching, there are no examples of editing, and the length of reproduction is too long, which has been described.
(3) Incomplete analysis and reasoning. The case of Syria is simple and lengthy. The case of Syria lacks the necessary strong analysis to explain the superficial empty talk, language and lack of performance. As far as Syria is concerned, there is a lack of change in the case of single discussion.
(4) From a fuzzy point of view, the center is unknown. The articles listed in the book, such as the virtues of "strength" and "goodness", lack refinement and sublimation.
(5) Just for the convenience of discussion, reasoning naturally, lacking attention to life, reflecting realistic speculation, and lacking real feelings.
(6) There are many typos and cursive scripts, and the paper surface is untidy.
[Sample composition]
Ⅰ. 42 basis points
do it yourself
The meteor across the night sky told me that I have no regrets, because this is my choice. Looking up at the night sky, my eyes stay on the bright moon and little stars that I accidentally caught a glimpse of. I felt sorry for them and asked loudly, "doesn't the foil of the moon bother you?" They seemed to understand my mood and winked at me playfully. I stood in the breezy night wind. It turns out that they are so happy because they made it themselves!
Long life and peace of mind. Once upon a time, he wandered in the officialdom, and the voice of "do it yourself" echoed in his ears. Yuri, the official VIII, fell into a dilemma in his career because he was not his own. "Rongxi leisurely in Yi 'an County, relying on the south window to send proud experiments, made him self-sufficient soon. This is his life, and he made it himself. "Almost! Apartment buildings or complex how long, the heart of any destiny river port Committee. Hu almost panic, wealth is not available, unless I wish DiXiang ... "After all, do it yourself. Just imagine, if Tao Yuanming makes a compromise and continues his boring official life, how can he have an eternal voice? If he doesn't do this, how can he have the leisure of "picking chrysanthemums under the hedge"? So, do a good job of your achievements through the ages.
In the world of literature, there are some strange lights and magic in the field of science. After Mendel's hybridization experiment, his separation phenomenon is still controversial. Morgan originally opposed Mendel's genetic law, and people in the scientific community only talked in general terms, and no one verified his own persistence and one of his assistants. However, Morgan's comprehensive research, full of troubles, looked down on the fruit fly Morgan Mendel, and finally made him a leading biologist. Imagine that if Morgan were a parrot, the concept of genes on the X chromosome might have been delayed for several years! It is Morgan who doesn't want to copy mechanically that makes his indelible footprint in the biological field. Therefore, create your own eternal truth.
Throughout history, China is no different. Think about the revolution and the Hundred Days Reform. Is this the theoretical basis of the untenable West? This is a fundamental failure. I remember that when New China was founded, the Soviet Union withdrew all technical personnel, and the whole country panicked. Imagine if Qian Xuesen, an early technical backbone in China, was caught off guard. So, be yourself, make our country stronger and stronger, take the road of Socialism with Chinese characteristics, and make China stronger and stronger!
No matter what individuals, groups or countries do, they can bloom with infinite charm. What they did was to show their true meaning. Suddenly, the stars were happy. They smiled and said, good night. Turn around, quietly leave the sky, get dressed and say to yourself: be yourself!
Comments will be closely related to "being yourself", the integrity of the prose structure that conforms to the meaning of the topic, and the discussion that meets the basic requirements. This is also an obvious deficiency, mainly manifested in the following aspects:
(1) This paper lacks the parameters of in-depth sharp concentration. At first, I didn't mention the happy star, but in the end it boils down to "be yourself and bloom with infinite charm, and be yourself and show the true meaning." It seems unreasonable and far-fetched.
(2) As an argumentative essay, the beginning and end of this article are simple and naive.
(3) The depth of proof is not enough. The whole article lists several examples to prove that you want to have your own discussion about why you do this.
This sentence is based on 42 points for several reasons.
Ⅱ Volume with 55 points or above
Volume 58 point
do it yourself
What happens when opera meets rock? CoCo Lee's Beijing Opera Blues gives us a good answer. This is her world-famous Peking Opera, which combines opera and rock perfectly. However, how many people respect traditional culture like her? How many people still remember the excellent traditional virtues? How many people have lost themselves? Ignorance of life, moral decay, lack of integrity ... China people, what's wrong? Be yourself, be the purest self.
Do it yourself, China! Simplicity-we won't let our traditional culture be lost. Christmas without worshipping foreign things and obsessing over foreign things! This is a festival for foreigners. We don't believe in God. Our faith is mom and dad, and it is the producers' party in China. Now eat KFC! Don't refuse foreigners to be babies. Even in today's economic globalization, learning English cannot be forgotten! China is the most beautiful language, is not it? We have a history of 5,000 years, we have Confucius, we have a unified country, and we have excellent culture. Why can't we be at the forefront of the world in the field of culture? China people who lack respect for excellent traditional culture! China people, be yourself and show the world that China people are patriotic.
Your own integrity, China people! Sanlu milk powder, dyed steamed bread, plasticizer, poisonous seeds, clenbuterol ... what will the moral decline become!