"The content is substantial and the center is clear" is the main requirement of composition conception. The "content" here refers to the thoughts and feelings, people's events and data written in the article. "Content enrichment" refers to the completeness of narrative elements and the concreteness of character events; The argument elements in the argumentative paper are clear and the arguments are sufficient; The explanation in the explanation article is clear and informative. Besides, "pure heart" comes from the topic of composition. Only by defining the "center" contained in the composition topic first, and then drawing a train of thought for the article to be written on this basis, can we achieve "clear center". When "clarity" is implemented in the writing process, only when selecting materials, organizing materials and writing articles are closely around "center" can "center clarity" be truly realized.

Famous method guidance

First, the main methods to enrich the content of the article:

1. Overlap the same method. This method is suitable for writing argumentative essays and argumentative essays. One material is always thin, so it is better to stack several materials of the same kind together. When the materials are concentrated, the content will naturally be enriched. Rich materials, not piled materials, the more the better, the selection of materials must be carried out around the center, so that the selection of materials is refined, quality wins, and the materials are rich, typical, true and novel.

2. Lenovo imagination. "When writing, we should make full use of the association and imagination around the center to enrich the article. Lenovo can broaden the thinking space, and it can be selected as examination materials for thousands of years and Wan Li. Imagination should be reasonable, around the theme and in line with the situation.

3. Anatomical enrichment method. It is to break down the whole article into several small parts from different angles such as place, time, events and people, and then write it in a certain order. However, we should pay attention to the principle of taking service as the center and be meticulous and appropriate. For example, the record-breaking scene of high jump can be divided into "run-up, take-off, crossing and landing"

These four steps can be described in detail in order when writing.

4. Methods of supplementing and raising. It is to recall the scenes related to the time or present, and enrich them by interpolation or supplementary narration. As far as the school sports meeting is concerned, we can compare the record-breaking situation of this school sports meeting with the previous school sports meeting, and we can also compare the record-breaking performance of athletes with the previous performance.

5. Detail concentration method. It is to add some details related to people or things around the center to achieve concrete and touching results. For example, about the school sports meeting, an athlete's eyes, a small gesture, the performance of the students after the athlete's success and so on.

6. Skills enrichment method. It is to use a variety of writing techniques to organize and arrange the content reasonably around the center, thus enriching the content and highlighting the theme. For example, negative content can be arranged to set off positive content and highlight the theme through comparison and contrast, and so on. Using various rhetorical devices can also enrich the content of the article.

Second, to clarify the center, we should start from the following aspects:

1. Review the questions and define the center. Examining questions is the first step in the composition process. The quality of this step will determine whether the whole content meets the requirements and whether the idea can be carried out in the right direction. It is not uncommon for a thousand miles to make a mistake, and it is not common for a composition to be irrelevant because of unclear questions. It can be seen that the examination of the topic originates from the composition topic, and only by first clarifying the connotation of the composition topic.

Han's "center", and then make an article on this basis, in order to achieve "clear center", after the exam, you should make appropriate ideas according to the requirements of the topic. The so-called conception is to establish the center and theme of the article. In narrative writing, "conception" is the central idea to be expressed in notes. In argumentative writing, "conception" is to establish the central argument of the article. There are three main requirements for conception: first, it should be distinct. What the article praises, criticizes, advocates and opposes should be clear-cut, and should not be vague or ambiguous. The second is to be correct. The requirements for conception in the composition scoring standard of senior high school entrance examination are: narrative writing should be "healthy in thoughts and feelings" and argumentative writing should be "correct in views", which is the most basic requirement and should be conscientiously implemented. Third, we should try our best to think creatively and profoundly. This is a higher requirement on the basis of the first two. The article should be written with originality and depth. Don't repeat the topic that others have said many times, and don't talk about the matter. Give it a try. Pay attention to intention.

Times and pertinence.

2. Select the material and surround the center. The selected materials, feelings or opinions expressed must be closely related to the center. Don't say anything irrelevant to the center; Negative words can only be said simply, and avoid going to extremes. How to select materials around the center? First of all, we should go to the old and welcome the new. Select new people, new things, new faces, colorful "highlights" and unique experiences of characters in life. noteworthy

It means that not all new materials are important and new. Ordinary little things and things familiar to acquaintances often contain new ideas, waiting for you to discover them, depending on whether you have keen observation. The second is to give up the big and take the small. Is to choose ordinary small materials. Start from a small place and see the big picture from a small place. Small material does not mean meaningless trifles, but refers to short stories, events and scenes that reflect the trend of the times and contain philosophy of life. The third is to get the essence from the rough. In other words, it is a way to get twice the result with half the effort to abandon the rough material and choose the essential, typical and most representative material. Choose things that are developing.

The most wonderful fragments, outstanding deeds and typical experiences of the characters can enrich the content and highlight the center of the article.

3. Try to write an article and point out the center. When writing, you should clearly express your thoughts and opinions in accurate language. Putting the sentence in the center of expression in a prominent position can make the marking teacher see at a glance and clearly understand the author's point of view or theme, which is of great significance in the examination composition. There are many ways to point out the center: in terms of expression, there are lyric points, discussion points, narrative points and description points. From the perspective of rhetoric, there are repeated questions, questions, metaphors, comparisons, personification and quotations. As far as the position of the topic is concerned, it can be divided into title topic, opening topic, ending topic and paragraph topic. If the topic composition requires a self-made topic, we will point out the center with the topic, so that the marking teacher can see it at a glance.

In short, there are many ways to point out the center, which can come straight to the point and reveal the theme; You can show your ambition and make the finishing touch; You can also repeat it at the beginning of the paragraph.

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If you want to be wintersweet.

Lihong Zhao

If you want to be Chimonanthus praecox, if you want to be a member of our family, then you must be patient, persevering and dare to fight the snowstorm with your naked body. Is it okay?

When the north wind roars in the empty and lonely land, the snow and ice mercilessly freeze all the plants rooted in the soil. When countless lives use passive hibernation to avoid the cold, you should be awake, you should stick out bare branches without fear, and you should concentrate your life's efforts on these bare branches and condense them into countless small buds.

Let the cold wind blow them, let the frost wrap them, and let the snow cover them. Can you stand this kind of suffering in ..........................................................................................................................................................? Perhaps, any happiness and beauty come from pain, and they have all experienced life-and-death struggles, but this truth may not be understood by the world.

If you want to be a wintersweet, you must have the spirit of sacrifice, and you must dedicate your hard work and the crystallization of life without complaint. Is it okay?

You must cherish these beautiful flower of life when you finally bloom your little flowers against the wind and snow. However, disasters often come from this. People's knives, axes and steel scissors will mercilessly fall on you for your unique flowers when everything is cold, and for the fragrance of your forecast of spring information. Can you afford such a sacrifice? Maybe,

When you walk into the hall of mankind with the scars of knives and scissors, and silently finish the last movement of your life in a snow-white porcelain bottle or a transparent glass bottle, you will have endless sadness, although many people smile and admire you and send out heartfelt admiration one after another. If someone tells you that giving and giving is a great happiness, do you agree?

If you want to be a wintersweet, you must endure loneliness, and your habits will be forgotten and left out for a long time. Is it okay?

Remember, in your life, only those days when the buds bloom will you be noticed by the world. Even when the flowers bloom, you are lonely. No other flowers want to bloom with you, not even a bunch of green leaves to accompany you. The adage that good flowers must be supported by green leaves has nothing to do with you. When the ice and snow melt, when the warm spring breeze blows the world green, when flowers bloom.

Red flowers bloom against the green leaves, and your flowers have long since withered. At this time, people will forget you, and the waltz in spring will not play for you.

If you ask me, then why do you want to blossom?

I want to answer you this way: we blossom, not to show off, nor to flatter, but to show the world our character and integrity, and our understanding of the meaning of life. Of course, our pride also contains gentle humility, and our silence is also full of strong enthusiasm. All this, people may not understand. What about you?

I told you all the joys and misfortunes, joys and pains of making wintersweet. Now, please tell me, do you still want to make wintersweet?

Oh, my southern friend, I wrote down everything wintersweet revealed to me here. When you read them in the warm wind, I wonder if you will miss the wintersweet on my desk. At the moment, the north wind is knocking on my window, and my wintersweet is still blooming silently, silently spitting beautiful fragrance. ...

(Excerpted from Zhao Wenxuan)

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Wanting to be a wintersweet is a beautiful article praising plum blossoms. In this article, the author is the spokesperson of several blooming Chimonanthus praecox plants planted on the desk. The article not only truly expresses the respect and emotion for the "pale yellow flower" who is not afraid of the cold and is so weak, but also vividly expresses the profound philosophy of "plum blossom fragrance comes from bitter cold" The full text tells people in the form of questions: "If you want to be Chimonanthus praecox", it means that you must give and give, not take and return; It means that your "meaning of life" will be presented and displayed in "people may not understand". The second person in the article said that "you" has the dual meanings of real person and virtual person, which refers to both southern friends and all people who want to be wintersweet.