1, outstanding professor of Chinese Department in Peking University, with more than 30 years' teaching experience. A lot of attributives are confused.

Changed to: Excellent Professor of Chinese Department of Peking University, with more than 30 years' teaching experience.

In order to write the paper assigned by the teacher, many students have been reading eagerly in the reading room in recent days. Many adverbials are out of order.

In order to write the paper assigned by the teacher, many students have been reading eagerly in the reading room in recent days.

He jumped out of the pond and came to the edge of the pool, where he swam soon. The clauses are out of order.

He came to the pool, jumped into the pond and swam quickly.

We have carefully studied and listened to your opinions. Words can reflect the meanings of inheritance and priority. Word order must meet this objective requirement. In this case, "learning and listening" reverses the order of commitment. It should be changed to "Listening and Research").

Students, leaders and teachers all attended the opening ceremony. (It should be changed to "leaders, teachers and students").