See the difference in comparison. There is nothing wrong. I admit that this is an ironclad fact. Contrast. Often appear in the mouth of parents. My mother told me more than once: * * often helps my parents do housework at home, and I am also in the top ten in my class. "Although I didn't say anything later, he mainly said that I was lazy at home. I didn't get good grades at school either.
Who has no self-esteem? Who is not self-motivated? But what he said. My self-esteem flew. Self-motivated. I began to be autistic, I closed myself, and I began to be silent. Her comparisons become more frequent.
Every time I hear her say that, I feel sad. I don't study well. Is it just my unilateral problem? I know that you are busy. I haven't worried you much since I was a child, but you seem to have ignored me. I want to have a serious illness to remind you that you have a daughter!
You are busy all day. I know that in this money society, you have to bow to money. Now is no longer the era of "five buckets of rice don't fold". I forgive you. But I am too bad in your eyes!
I will always be an ugly duckling. Can't I become a swan?
Once upon a time, I wanted to run away from home I want to commit suicide, and your comparison puts a heavy burden on me. I can't lift my head and straighten my waist.
Young and young, we need care and friends. You have made me so "useless" under your comparison, not to mention that you have cared about me.
Under your contrast, my budding friendship was strangled alive in the cradle. Should I follow the "law" of making friends "I am no better than others"? I know you want me to make better friends than me, but you can't leave me alone in a few words!
I'm more autistic. Close the door of communication with others, and at the same time, don't open a window for anyone.
At the end of the exam, what you said to me was not that I was modest or encouraging, but "How could a poor student get so many points in the exam?" What's the matter with you? I told you to spend more time on your studies. People are better than you ... "
I'm at a loss. In your eyes, everyone else is beautiful. Then my friend is not good? Why don't you let me make friends?
I don't understand. Under your education, I also learned to compare: how nice other people's mothers are!
I'm at a loss. My time is not spent on studying, but where I spend it.
Mom, next time you scold your daughter, don't compare your daughter with others, okay?
2. Composition topic How to write a good composition, either with an attractive theme or full of words and emotions.
Or both. A composition that combines the two is usually called the best composition, which can be called writing or creation.
As a student, I think it is not easy to reach the level of good composition. Let's talk briefly about writing a composition with some articles or poems.
I really appreciate some articles in Yilin or Reader. To put it mildly, it is called the best composition. Why appreciate it? Because it really belongs to a kind that can impress people and give people deep thinking.
For example, there is an article about the embarrassment of teachers in class. This story is very popular. It is said that one day when the teacher called the roll in class, he met a student's name he didn't know, and he used his decades of teaching experience to deal with it. After the roll call, he asked the students in public: Who did you miss when you called the roll call just now? It is conceivable that if that classmate immediately stands up and says that he dropped my name, it will be a cliche, because everyone knows the story. But that's not what the author wrote.
The teacher's inquiry was silent below. How to end it? Teachers are naturally people who have taught for decades. He said extemporaneously that since all the points have been counted, some students may refuse to speak publicly because of their feelings. Well, you can report in my office alone after class.
This article is meaningless if it is written by a missed classmate who says his name after going to the office. The author's writing was unexpected because the classmate went to the office to find the teacher after class and left after only a few words.
He said, "Teacher, I have encountered the same thing every year from the first grade of primary school to the second grade of junior high school." You said teacher, my name is really unusual. Why didn't the teacher ask me directly? Are teachers so insensitive? "The article came to an abrupt end.
It is also a story that everyone has heard, and it is also a cliche. The author's writing reflects a fresh theme, that is, teachers should learn from students' teaching and should not cover up their knowledge defects with vanity. A good article is like this. With a good theme, the composition is more than half successful.
A good theme is usually to use water droplets to reflect the ocean and sand grains to hide the hands of the world.
3. How to choose a composition topic How to write a composition Choose 1 People have experienced countless choices in their lives, that is, they have grasped countless opportunities.
The right choice can create a bright future of life, and the wrong choice can ruin the dream of life and taste the bitter fruit of regret. Therefore, choice is a pleasant process, choice is a painful process, and choice is a sad process.
Selection requires profound thinking ability, practical judgment, cautious attitude, decisive decision and sufficient time. The choice is active and independent, and you can choose as much as you like; Choice is passive and forced, so we have to choose, have to choose or have no choice.
Choice is both sides, both to choose and to be chosen. There are many choices, narrow choices, easy choices, and choices that require price and sacrifice.
There is no perfect choice in the world, but everything in the world evolves through choice. Without choice, there is no life and history, and there is no rhythm of development. We are eager to choose, we have a choice.
Option 2 lingers between life and death, between light and darkness. Some people choose life, some people choose death, some people choose light, and some people choose darkness. This really comes from a spiritual vein in the depths of human hearts, but they choose eternity. The eternity of choosing an eternal meteor comes from the brilliance of life, the eternity of moths comes from the light and heat pursued by life, and the eternity of life comes from repeated choices.
Standing on the coast of history, I wandered back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu meditated on Zehe and died without regret; Wei Wudi whip east refers to courage; Tao Yuanming is leisurely in Nanshan, drinking and picking chrysanthemums. They chose the eternal da ji. Even if flattery and slander blind people, it is a persistent choice not to follow. Even if Marco is buried in Kansai, he should raise his voice and try his best to sweep away the smoke. This is a heroic choice. Even if you work hard all day, you are willing to entertain yourself and plow the fields. This is an elegant choice. After many choices, emperors will become their great achievements, and sages will touch guests and become their eternal articles. However, today, in the gentle and rich countryside, how many people are weak and numb? How many people are willing to choose poverty, simplicity and vitality? They exhausted their blood and sweat, singing and dancing calmed their ambitions. They cater to mediocrity, pursue fame and fortune, and endanger the people. Who sings and leads the traditional virtues with a long history of 5 thousand years? Who teaches and guides us to choose eternity? We are not asking us to get rid of the Millennium civilization.
Choosing eternity requires the spirit of "mighty and unyielding" and the heroic ambition of "walking with iron horses"; Choosing eternity requires the exploration of "I will go up and down" and the nobleness of "keeping innocence in the world". Choose with your heart, give people shade, choose with your will, and hold up a clear sky.
The worship of life and the pursuit of self-confidence require us to choose eternity. In the torrent, the soldier chose his own departure, but gave others life; In the vast desert, soldiers chose their own hardships but gave others happiness.
Facing gangsters and difficulties, the choice of life gives people vitality, pursuit and success, and the choice of soul produces eternity. Choose eternity.
"Tian Xingjian, the gentleman strives for self-improvement", "The terrain is Kun, and the gentleman carries things with morality." Choose eternity.
Pursue the totem of life, inspire the fighting spirit of life, cheer up those who are caught in the quagmire and make people in danger safe. Even if you get nothing, even if you die in pieces, you should pass on the torch of civilization and morality, and choose eternity with a choice without regrets in this life, even if you die nine times.
4. How to write the title of the composition 1) Topic composition is a form of composition proposition that provides the scope and direction of thinking according to the provided materials and tips, and requires the author to write around this "topic".
Topic composition is a new form of "self-made topic, self-defined idea and self-selected style", which allows candidates to show their creative personality, give play to their advantages and show their talents; At the same time, students who can write different styles needed by colleges and universities can also be satisfied in the form of topic compositions. With the continuous reform and deepening of composition teaching, the propositional form of topic composition is also constantly improving. According to the composition questions of the three-year senior high school entrance examination in various provinces and cities, the composition form of the questions has changed: 1. Lead the topic with a lead.
For example, in 2003, the composition of the senior high school entrance examination in Hebei Province: In life, there are many people and things that move us. At the same time, some of our actions may also touch others.
Please write an article on the topic of "moving". Requirements: (1) Style is not limited, except poetry and drama.
(2) the article is not less than 600 words. (3) There should be no real names of people, schools and places.
2. Use materials to lead to topics. The topic consists of two parts: text or picture material and topic.
The function of materials is to activate thinking, lead to topics and limit the scope of writing. Most provinces and cities are in this form, so is the college entrance examination.
3. straightforward. The composition directly presents the title of the topic without any explanation.
It is very important to examine the topic when writing a topic composition. Taking the composition of the senior high school entrance examination in Hebei Province in 2003 as an example, we analyze what the examination content includes: the requirements of the preliminary examination composition, the prescribed language and the clear writing scope.
The main body of the topic composition test includes at least three parts: writing introduction, topic scope, specific provisions or requirements. We need to read these three parts one by one, analyze the requirements, define the boundaries and avoid violations.
Hard and fast rules on topics, such as stylistic restrictions, word count requirements, and selective marking, shall not include suggestive words and requirements for names, school names, place names, etc. Must obey. If you run a red light, your score will be bad. The second instance article genre requirements, determine the appropriate writing genre.
Although the topic composition is generally not limited to style, every article should have a style color. You can't write a narrative on the topic of touching, and you can't write an argumentative paper on the topic of touching journey. Argumentative writing should not have inscriptions, subtitles and other writing forms with narrative characteristics. If the article lacks stylistic norms and adopts four writing methods, large paragraphs of narration and large paragraphs of discussion will be rigidly tied up, which will make marking teachers very confused. They don't know whether to appreciate it from the perspective of image thinking or logical thinking, whether they have the ability to master this style, or whether they can't distinguish the functions of narration, discussion and explanation, and their marking impression will naturally be affected.
The relationship between the third trial materials and the topic. Topic composition often covers a wide range of writing content, such as "moving" as the topic, which easily makes candidates feel confused and at a loss. In addition, time constraints lead candidates to write wherever they want, and write a thousand words, which digress from Wan Li.
The solution to this problem is to limit the "big problems". From big to small, from abstract to concrete, write your own experiences or feelings from one angle, and pay attention to the transformation process of emotions.
Such vivid, unique and novel articles will naturally gush out, making the article reach the ideal state of "seeing the world in a grain of sand and saying human feelings in a half-petal flower" (2) Full-propositional and semi-propositional composition refers to the propositional form in which the proposer determines a part of the composition topic, and then sets aside a part of the content to be completed by the author as required, and then writes.
The main sign of this form of composition is that there is a gap in the title of the composition. It is characterized by greater openness and flexibility, leaving people a broad creative space, but also limited.
In recent two years, many provinces and cities in China have adopted the form of semi-propositional composition. Semi-propositional composition can be divided into two forms according to whether there are hints or not. According to the position of the topic vacancy, it can be divided into front empty type, hollow type and back empty type.
The premise of writing this kind of composition is to complete the topic as required. The problems that need attention are: 1. Consider the given information of half a topic, and then combine your life experience, writing expertise, writing content, etc. To become a full-proposition composition, skillfully turn unfamiliar new topics into familiar old topics and calmly complete a familiar composition.
For example, I believe that students have written countless articles about reading, family and school life. We can write the composition topic of Chongqing senior high school entrance examination in 2005 as "Reading experience is a song", "Motherly love is a song" and "Learning life is a song". It is also possible to develop the essay topic "Wonderful" for the senior high school entrance examination in Wuxi, Jiangsu Province in 2005 into a similar form.
2. Pay attention to the requirements of the exam and make clear the scope of material selection. For example, in the essay questions of Zhanjiang senior high school entrance examination in 2003, we should distinguish between "life" and "life".
3. The title should not be big and empty, but try to show personality. The title is the "eye" of the article, which is related to the style, spirit and color of the article. Good headlines can make people have a strong desire to read.
4. Clear thinking, concentration and novelty. For example, "Life because _ _" and "Life because _ _" are semi-propositional compositions with less restrictions.
You can fill in the blanks with nouns, verbs and adjectives, such as music, reading, frustration and love. And you can also fill in phrases, such as getting attention, struggling, suffering, etc. Once the topic is established, we should be good at digging out the most dazzling and shining paragraph from the ordinary life color chain and writing wonderful moments, wonderful scenes and wonderful spiritual feelings.
In short, it is necessary to highlight the wonderful words and themes. Secondly, the angle of expression should be clever.
On the premise of highlighting the main idea, you can selectively use suspense, narrative, echo, contrast and other skills to design the beginning and end of the article, appropriately interspersed with discussion and lyric, and pay attention to repeating questions in writing. In addition, the materials should be new.
We should be good at mobilizing all kinds of descriptive means to impress people, thus arousing readers' emotions. (3) Material composition The so-called material composition is a form of composition that requires the writer to write according to the specific materials such as a given paragraph of text or pictures and the requirements of the composition proposition.
Its characteristic is reading.
5. How to write my model essay in the composition for reference:
My name is * * *. I am 10 years old this year. I am a lively and lovely little girl. I like painting and singing very much. My weakness is that I am too careless.
I like painting. Every day after school, I go home. After I finished the homework assigned by the teacher, I began to draw with a pen. The walls of my room are all my favorite works. My mother always talks about me. "Don't put stickers on the wall. Sometimes, in class, I draw pictures in books. I like not only painting, but also singing. I sing, and my mother always says that I sing out of tune, but I still want to sing. When I do my homework, I sing while my father watches, and he will say me. " Don't be half-hearted in your homework. "When I was sleeping, I sang loudly and woke up all our neighbors.
Although I love painting and singing, I also have shortcomings. My weakness is that I was too careless in the exam. Let's just say that after I finished the exam, I felt that I could get 100. Unexpectedly, after the papers were handed out, I did badly in the exam because I was too careless. For example, I wrote 108 as 180.
Do you like me? Do you want to make friends with me?
6. How to write a composition The topic is how to write a good composition. 1. The first thing to do in writing a composition is to examine the questions. Otherwise, it will directly lead to "the article is irrelevant" and "writing a thousand words, digressing Wan Li".
How can I do well in the exam? According to the usual forms of composition topics, they can generally be divided into two categories: propositional composition and material composition. The examination of proposition composition is to examine the specific requirements of a given article to determine the topic, the intention of the topic, the requirements beyond the topic, and the "eye of the topic".
Through the examination of the questions, the content range, time range, quantity range, character range and place range of the composition are defined. Can't exceed the given range.
The examination of material composition should be grasped from two aspects: one is inseparable from the ideological content of materials, and the other is closely related to the requirements of composition form. 1. Propositional composition Below we focus on the examination of propositional composition and the problems that need attention.
Determine the topics within the content range and make provisions on the writing content. Therefore, when reviewing the topic, we should determine the content scope of the topic: remember who people should remember; Narration, what to say; What scenery people should write about; Things, things to like, and so on.
Second, the idea is to determine the theme of the article and clarify the central idea to be reflected in the article. The idea of the article is to have a foundation for refining life and try to reflect some fundamental things in life.
In order to achieve this goal, we must strive to be correct, centralized, novel and profound. 1. Correct conception is the basic requirement of composition.
We often hear that so-and-so articles are thoughtful, which mainly depends on the depth of the author's creative thinking. Generally speaking, the intention of our composition should be positive and healthy, strive to reflect the essential content of life, and have certain social universality.
In other words, the theme of the article should be recognized or actively advocated by everyone. Third, the topic of the article is to determine good things before writing a composition, just like making up your mind before starting to do something.
The title of the article can reflect the starting point and motivation of writing. Through the title of the article, readers can basically understand the theme and main content of the article.
The proposed topic of the article should be highly concise, accurate and vivid, so as to attract people's attention and interest. According to the needs of expressing content, the topics to be selected in the article can be roughly divided into the following categories.
When writing, everyone can use it flexibly according to the actual situation. Fourth, material selection is material selection.
No matter what article you write, it is very necessary to choose the materials you need. Just like building a house, we should fully consider what wood, stone, cement, brick and so on to use in advance.
At the same time, we should carefully calculate the amount of various materials, without which we can't build a house; It's no use wasting too much. In addition, the selected materials should be appropriate, which is helpful to show the structural function and image effect of the house.
If you use materials at will, you will eventually build a black house like a train skin. Although strong, no one will like it. In the same way, the purpose of carefully selecting materials before writing is to explain the problem and make it vivid and attractive.
Therefore, before writing, in the face of many available materials, we should make appropriate choices, leave vivid and representative ones, and get rid of general ones; Through the effective combination of important and vivid materials, the purpose of the composition is realized, that is, the theme is deeply expressed by "economic" means. The choice of composition materials should focus on the following five aspects: 1. Choosing familiar materials, the author knows it very well and has deep feelings.
Only when the materials are familiar can you make full use of them, be familiar with them and make you handy. If the situation is unfamiliar and the substance is unclear, how can I tell others? This kind of material, even if used stiffly in your article, will not receive good results, and it will appear mechanical and incoherent later.
This problem is easy to understand, and of course everyone doesn't want to do that. First, the composition should learn to accumulate "reading thousands of books, writing like a god" and "a clever woman can't cook without rice". These ancient summaries illustrate the importance of "accumulation" in writing from both positive and negative aspects.
"Usually rely on accumulation, the examination room depends on play", which is the same experience of the students in the examination room. (A) language to establish a "vocabulary".
Vocabulary is the cell of an article. Vocabulary in a broad sense refers not only to the collection of words and phrases, but also to sentences and sentence groups.
There are two ways to establish "vocabulary": the first is reading. Usually, you should read books, newspapers and periodicals extensively, take reading notes, extract some beautiful words, sentences and paragraphs from a specific notebook, or make reading cards.
The second is life. At ordinary times, we should capture the fresh language in the popular spoken language and write it down in a small notebook or card that we carry with us. Over time, we can say it chapter by chapter and write it beautifully.
(2) Strengthen the accumulation of materials. Materials are the flesh and blood of the article.
Because many students usually don't pay attention to accumulating materials, they are worried every time they write a composition, or edit or copy it. The solution to this problem is to accumulate materials.
Usually, you can take a video camera and tape recorder with you, observe life deeply, actively participate in life, and record your experiences in family life, campus life and social life in time in the form of sketching, keeping a diary and writing observation notes. When recording, we should grasp the details and the characteristics of people, things, things and scenery.
The article written in this way is flesh and blood. (3) We should strengthen ideological accumulation.
Opinion is the soul of an article. The center of the article is not clear, or the thought is not profound, which often shows that the author's thought is superficial.
Therefore, it is necessary to establish a "think tank". There are two ways: first, be thoughtful.
"One more miss, one more gain." Think deeply at ordinary times and ask "why", "what" and "how" when something happens.
So you can see the essence through the phenomenon. It is also necessary to record the "sparks" of thinking and the conclusions of thinking at any time.
The second is compilation, that is, extracting famous sayings and aphorisms. In short, the composition should be accumulated, and the three writing warehouses of vocabulary, material and thought should be regularly counted, sorted and classified to continuously enrich and expand.
Second, to write a good composition, first learn to observe Mr. Lu Xun's reply.