The composition of the senior high school entrance examination accounts for half of the Chinese examination papers, and its importance is self-evident. However, the composition is always unsatisfactory, which often holds back China's performance. Writing a good composition in the examination room really involves many abilities of candidates, such as the ability to examine questions, conceive, select materials and conceive, lay out articles, express words and so on. The formation of these abilities depends on the accumulation of reading and the long-term practice of writing. From this point of view, the "ice" of writing is not "a cold day". If we can pay attention to some writing strategies and show their "highlights" before the exam, we will get "immediate results" and "practical effects"
Highlight 1: Clever use of novel topics.
As the saying goes, "a well-written article is half the battle" and "clothes make the man, and writing depends on the topic". It can be seen that the topic is important. A good topic will make the commentator shine at the moment and make him feel happy. There are many skills in writing questions, and the use of rhetoric is one of them. Some people say: "Rhetoric is the magic water of composition", so is the proposed topic, and rhetoric will make the topic colorful. Such as "Laba porridge", "the best miscellaneous" and "Haitang is still there? Green, fat, red and thin figures of speech are all used in Zhouzhuang, that touch of green, beware of a double-edged sword, honest wandering let me smell the sunshine.
Highlight 2: Strange use of article inscriptions
Inscription is a sentence that highlights and reveals the theme and emotion of the article, which is concise and implicit. Or quote, or innovate. A good inscription will work miracles. For example, the inscription on "Good deskmate" reads: "The true meaning of life cannot be taught by others. Only in the process of survival can you taste it yourself (in Jing Shangjing). Inscription of "Revelation of Echo": "Those who love others will always love others; Respect people and people will always respect them (Mencius). " "Colorful Happiness" inscription: "Life is like a flower, colorful; Life is like a song, beautiful; Life is like wine, mellow; Life is like a poem, with profound artistic conception; Life is like a dream and colorful. " Inscription of Feeling High School: "It is a clear spring in my heart, which can't stop flowing, can't stop spitting, and will flow forever and ever to water every grass and tree in my life journey ...".
Highlight 3: Make good use of the whole sentence at the beginning.
Li Yu, a A Qing dynasty man, said: "At the beginning of opening a book, you should be surprised by strange sentences, so that you dare not give them up." Generally, the beginning of an article should be "straight to the point" and "start with the meaning". The best way is to use parallelism and rhetorical questions. Or quote classic poems, or use implicit and meaningful sentences. For example, the beginning of Time, Time: "Whenever I pass the border and listen to the loud bell, I feel the solemnity of time;" Whenever I hear the school bell and just step into the gate, I feel that time is tight; Whenever I am lost, I suddenly look up and find that time flies. " "Miscellaneous is the miracle of life" begins: "Have you ever seen faded buildings of all ethnic groups? Have you ever enjoyed the dense clusters of spring flowers in Yangming Mountain? Have you ever heard of jazz mixed drums? Have you ever tasted the fragrant tea of Qingtengge? How simple and terrible life will become if the miscellaneous body is suddenly erased! I said, miscellaneous is the miracle of life. " The beginning of "writing with your heart": "The ancients said,' Climbing mountains is full of feelings, and watching the sea is full of meaning. "Writing is the same. If you want to write a wonderful masterpiece, you have to go all out and do it with your heart. " At the beginning, the author of "Knowing People's Duties, Knowing Yourself and Knowing Yourself" wrote: "People often underestimate themselves when looking up and others when looking down; It is easy to be conceited when you are proud, and easy to feel inferior when you are frustrated. These understandings of people and themselves are obviously wrong. People are expensive and self-aware, and knowing people is also expensive; Don't be conceited, and don't despise others. There is a saying:' those who know others are good, and those who know themselves are clear' ".
Highlight 4: Multi-purpose central sentence
The time for marking the composition of the senior high school entrance examination is tight and the task is big. The marking teacher can't be as careful as the usual marking composition. Looking at it repeatedly, it is often "one eye and ten lines", grasping the point of view, finding the main points and finding the highlights. "Central sentence" is the best form to show the main points of candidates, reflect the main points of the article and show the highlights of the composition. Otherwise, if the marking teacher can't find the main points of your article in a certain short time, it is obviously you who suffer. Therefore, in general, the structure of the "theory" part of the paper is either parallel, progressive or positive and negative. It is best to start each paragraph with a central sentence, so that it is "clear at a glance" and the level is clear. It is also a way for candidates to replace the central sentence with a subtitle. For example, the author of "Miscellaneous is also a kind of beauty" discusses it from three aspects: (1) Miscellaneous changes; Miscellaneous means progress; Miscellaneous is also a kind of beauty. It is also a "miscellaneous" theory. When another candidate talked about how to become a "miscellaneous", he also discussed it from three angles: to become a "miscellaneous", you must have the courage and mind to accept all rivers; To be "miscellaneous", we must have a vision that connects the past and the present; To be "miscellaneous", we must think, choose, refine and develop. Another candidate talks from three fields: cultural scholarship is inseparable from "miscellaneous", social development is inseparable from "miscellaneous", and naturally it is inseparable from "miscellaneous".
Highlight 5: Use famous sentences.
We should not only make the article literary, but also have a cultural background. One of the effective methods is to borrow and use famous sentences appropriately, and "bring them" for my use. These famous sentences are concise and profound, which can arouse readers' association and thinking.
For example, there is a passage in "What is Happiness": "Happiness is the concern and fear that she will make him go home late, and it is the harvest of" planting a millet in spring and harvesting 10,000 seeds in autumn "; Happiness is the wish of' wishing people a long life and a thousand miles * * *' and the memory of' always remembering the sunset in Xiting and not knowing how to go home'; Happiness is the pursuit of "I don't regret that my belt is getting wider and wider, and I am haggard for Iraq." These sentences not only explain the meaning of happiness, but also show the reading breadth of candidates, making the article full of poetry and literary talent. When quoting famous poems and sentences, some of them are not "explicit quotations" but "implicit quotations", that is, clever use. For example, "Missing is a Scenery" wrote: "Missing makes poets lament the bright moon in their hometown, makes female poets thinner than yellow flowers, makes the originator of the wild school dream of returning to their hometown to care for him without words and tears, makes the master of the graceful school wake up in Yang Liuan, makes Mr. Momo enter the state of mind of" missing one person at a time "during the festive season, and makes frontier poets look forward to missing him in their hometown.
Highlight 6: Use vivid materials.
In the demonstration, we should have sufficient theoretical and factual arguments to achieve "reasonable and well-founded, in-depth at different levels." It is worth noting that the narrative is quite simple, not complicated. Old materials can be "refurbished with old materials" and "old wine in new bottles", and the angle can be changed. For example, a candidate in Choosing Eternity discusses eternity in this way: "Standing on the coast of history, we can trace back to the ditch of history: Dr. Chu thought about rivers and did not regret it when he died; Wei Wudi pointed the whip to the east with great courage; Tao Yuanming lives in Nanshan leisurely, drinking and picking chrysanthemums ... They choose eternity-even if flattery and slander blind people, they don't follow, which is a persistent choice; Even if Marco is buried in Kansai, it is a hero's choice to raise his voice and try his best to sweep away the smoke. Even if it's hard to satisfy all day, I want to enjoy myself and plow Long Mu. This is an elegant choice ... "
Highlight 7: insert neat sentence patterns
When describing and expressing feelings, inserting some whole sentences will make the narrative concise, reasoning sufficient, full of feelings and powerful, thus enhancing the expressive force of the article. Especially the beginning, end and key points of the article will leave a deep impression on the marking teacher. For example, "Facing the Sea": "There is a sound, which is the passion sung by the waves beating against the rocks; There is a kind of blue, which is the tranquility of the sea and the sky; There is a feeling that it is facing the' shore heartbeat' aroused by the sea. Facing the sea is like facing a song, a painting and a book. " Another example is a passage in "Choice": "Choose with your heart and give people shade; Choose at will and hold up a clear sky. The worship of life and the pursuit of self-confidence require us to choose eternity. In the torrent, the warrior chose his own departure but gave birth to others; In the vast desert, the warriors chose their own hardships but gave others happiness. "
Highlight 8: the end of clever implication
Li Yu once said: "At the end of the chapter, when you capture your soul with flattering words, let it stay with you. It is difficult to say goodbye." The so-called "flattering language" is a language with rich literary talent and profound meaning. The end of a literature and art is thought-provoking and will make the marking teacher fondle admiringly. Such as "listen, that is the song of victory in the waves;" Look, that's a picture of the beauty of human nature. Fly, it is the book of the whole universe. Face the sea, listen, appreciate and taste ... "... Another example is" Raise the sail of life, let the waves accompany you, take the rope as the string and the strong wind as the number, and play a movement that transcends time and space. Between rocks and strong winds, I open my arms and embrace fraternity with my boiling heart-tightly-and have no regrets all my life. "
Writing guidance and examples of semi-propositional composition
[Topic] Read the following text and write as required.
Dashan, I want to say to you: "I worship your greatness and composure;" College entrance examination, I want to say to you: it is not easy to get in touch with you; Lu Xun, I want to say to you: Can you not let Ah Q die? ...
We may have our own unique views on many people, but for various reasons, we have no chance to talk. Now, please choose an object to express my unique views on the selected object.
Please write a composition on the topic "I want to tell you".
Requirements: ① The topic must be completed; ② Must use the first person; ③ The number of words is about 800; ④ The content is healthy and upward.
[Examination Guidance and Thinking Guidance]
The key to completing a semi-propositional composition is to make up the questions. As long as the questions are made up, writing is no different from other propositional compositions. Make-up questions should fully mobilize the accumulation of life and reading, consider writing your own expertise, avoid being unfamiliar, and show your personality and style.
First of all, the selection of materials should be familiar from scratch. Everyone has his own favorite things, and the favorite things often go through an obsession process, so they are often very familiar with the favorite things and often have deep feelings and thoughts. We should be good at connecting the examination questions with what he is familiar with, so that we can definitely introduce the examination composition into a realm where we can write it easily. Secondly, when choosing a style, you should be familiar with it, choose the style you are good at, and foster strengths and avoid weaknesses.
This question is suitable for candidates to grasp the people or things they feel and think can express their feelings most directly. Everyone has something to say for sure, and the key is to write "their own unique views". In writing, you can first write out your feelings about someone, something or something, whether you are happy, angry, sad or happy, then write out the reasons and reasons for this feeling, deeply analyze its significance or harm, and finally put forward your own opinions.
[Example 1]
Kobe, I want to tell you.
You are above ten thousand people and can do anything. If the NBA is Jianghu, then you are invincible in martial arts, but what I want to tell you is that martial arts are not all in Jianghu.
When you are like nobody's business on the court, you tear your opponent's defense line and destroy his confidence with precise investment and strong dunks again and again. Have you ever thought that going to Longtan alone can't reflect the highest level of basketball? Only by uniting all teammates to make progress together can your team be truly invincible. You probably don't know that a hero in China's martial arts novels is called Qiao Feng, who is superb in martial arts. On chivalry, chinese odyssey. Qiao Feng led his beggar brothers to unite and fight to defend the country against the enemy. Therefore, Qiao Feng will become a knight-errant and a legendary story in the Wulin. Kobe, because you are my favorite star, I have to tell you frankly that you are not a good captain.
People often compare you with Michael Jordan, but compared with Jordan, his greatness lies in that he won the game not because of his own data, but because his teammates became better. During the bull's six consecutive championships, Jordan was simply superb. Looking at the whole league, how many people are comparable? But he didn't play solo. He made Pippen an all-around defender, Rodman won the title of rebounding king in a row ... Kobe, you should make the team better. If you can complete this step, its significance will overshadow your feat of getting 865,438+0 points in a single game.
Kobe, you should be modest. Maybe you don't think so-genius is a natural talent. I'm so good at martial arts that no one can beat me. I don't need to ask other people's advice. Yes, I admit, you can go it alone without consulting those senior people, but isn't your team very weak on its own? The basketball emperor Chamberlain once scored 100 points in a single game, but he has been studying the excellent performance of others and constantly asking his teammates for advice. What about you? There is a proverb in China: "Modesty makes people progress." Modesty will only make you progress continuously, will only make you feel the strength of the team more deeply, and will only make your team really strong …
Kobe, behave yourself, too. Although you have never been fined by the police for drunk driving, we can see from the "Eagle County Incident" last year that you should also strengthen your self-cultivation, behave yourself and make yourself more mature and full of personality charm.
Maybe you can't hear me, Master Ke, but I hope you can understand that martial arts in Jianghu are not everything.
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The author chose his favorite NBA star Kobe Bryant as the object and expressed his feelings. He criticized Kobe for his extraordinary skills and omnipotence, but he has some shortcomings, such as personal heroism, lack of modesty and misconduct. He warned Kobe that "martial arts is not omnipotent in Jianghu" and used Qiao Feng, Michael Jordan and basketball emperor Jaco.
[Example 2]
Qu Yuan, I want to tell you.
When you are full of sadness, when you sigh that you have been slandered because of your faith and loyalty, I understand you; When you sang "I want to search up and down" in the cloud, I understood you; I understood you when you were haggard and pondered that "the world is muddy and I am alone" and threw myself into the river.
Qu Yuan, I want to tell you that your loyalty to the monarch and patriotism is admirable, but it deeply regrets me-it is a kind of foolish loyalty to be loyal to the monarch blindly.
I still don't understand what makes a courtier so loyal to his monarch. Does your virtue stop at the top of the mountain, is your talent learning the world, or is your benevolence loving the people like a son? None of these Chu Huaiwang seems to exist, so why don't you find another way and stick to the king when you are misunderstood, alienated and exiled again and again? Qu Yuan, I don't know what kind of reward you got for your great loyalty. Silly persistence is a kind of tie, which binds your heart in a barren and cold desert and is devastated; Blind loyalty to the monarch is a foolish loyalty, which drives you to the roaring Miluo River and kills you.
Qu Yuan, I want to tell you that even if you are patriotic, you should choose the right way.
I often wonder what should I do if I accidentally walk into a dead end? I may choose to go back and find another way out. And you, however, choose to bump into the thick wall in front, hoping to bump into a bright future. I salute your persistence, but in "disgusting and royal, you can't be thin; In the era of yin-yang translocation, it is not timely. You are so persistent, how can you realize your great ambition? If a person wants to choose the right way, why hang himself from a tree? Qu Yuan, your character and talent are obvious to all. You were born to benefit the people, not just to make Chu Huaiwang smile more.
Qu Yuan, I want to tell you that life is the most precious thing.
My heart twitched when you threw yourself into the river in Huai Sha. You chose death, a heroic and humble way. I marvel that you dare to sacrifice your loyalty to Chu Huaiwang with your life, and regret that although you sacrificed your life, you could not save the fate of Chu. If you have a precious life, a person can accomplish many tasks. Life should not be released like this. You should make your life shine, not just your loyalty to Chu Huaiwang.
Qu Yuan, I want to tell you that I am deeply sorry for your choice because of the above reasons. Oh!
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Taking Qu Yuan, a patriotic poet admired all over the world, as the supplementary topic and the object of confiding, while affirming his patriotic thoughts, words and deeds, he emphatically expressed his own views on his "foolish loyalty", which was unique and novel and relevant to the topic. Structurally, the article adopts the form of total score structure, and the three levels of the middle main part are clear at a glance. Language is literary by using rhetorical devices such as metaphor, parallelism and summoning.
[Example 3]
Harry, I want to tell you
Harry, I wonder if I can call you by your first name like this. Please forgive my rudeness. You are a famous honest official in the history of our country. You are upright and upright, and dare to make decisions for the people. What is particularly admirable is that you dare to criticize the Supreme Emperor directly. Your courage and absolute loyalty are admirable. You are a model in history who is not afraid of powerful people.
But I want to tell you sincerely that it is not advisable to call a spade a spade.
You should know that it is precisely because you are not afraid of powerful people and dare to speak out that you have been repeatedly relegated and can only go through fire and water for the people in the narrow scope under your jurisdiction. Therefore, even if your talent and strategy can benefit the whole country, you can only pour all your blood into that narrow place. Therefore, I don't think calling a spade a spade is the best way to protest. Imagine that if we can change the way to make the "good medicine" of Wang's disease wrapped in "sugar-coated", it is sweeter than the mouth. I believe that the effect will be better. Isn't it? Every time I make a suggestion, my words are fierce and sharp-edged, but even if your words are sincere advice and good medicine, did the emperor listen again? Just wishful thinking, the king was angry. Most people love flattery and hate criticism, let alone emperors who are above them. Wise emperors advocate "speaking clearly and taking good advice", but how many wise emperors have there been throughout the ages? How many harsh suggestions have been adopted and implemented? The sage's king was still confused for a while, let alone a fatuous king. Your fierce attack on the emperor's wrong country and several months' imprisonment are the best proof.
Maybe you will say, Wei Zhi outspoken, not get the reuse of emperor Taizong and Li Shimin? However, you should also know that Li Shimin tried several times to belittle this outspoken loyal minister after being accused of his faults by Wei Zhi. Thanks to his grandson's timely dissuasion, he realized the correctness of his suggestion, and Zheng Weicai was able to become a mirror for himself in the future. I dare tell you that outspoken suggestions often fail to achieve the expected results, but will cause misunderstanding, disgust and even hostility.
I think you must know Zou Ji? He knew that "the king is terrible", but he didn't choose to say it, but paid attention to strategy. He made an analogy with Wang Wei through the little things that happened to him, and gently advised him, with good results.
To sum up, Harry, I want to tell you that it is not advisable to call a spade a spade. If you were given another life, would you still choose to say it?
[Comment] The author expressed his feelings by focusing on the outspoken advice of the famous honest official Hai Rui. While fully affirming his integrity, loyalty and courage, he pointed out that although his spirit is commendable, his way is not desirable. It is necessary to make good medicine sweet and beneficial to illness, and pay attention to advice. It can be said that his point of view is distinct and unique, which is in line with the topic. The author talks with the ancients with modest tone and sincere words, and uses aphorisms, examples, positive and negative comparisons and other methods to reason, which is flexible and thorough.
Tightening requirements are targeted.
-Directional material composition writing guidance
Test paper sending
Read the following text and write as required.
Nowadays, many people in society have a problem, that is, they always want to find a "best" major, learn a "best" knowledge, and then design a "best" learning method, thinking that this will easily achieve the "best" effect.
In fact, this idea is quite simple. What is the best and who can define it? Please write an article, no less than 800 words, aiming at this problem, connecting with reality, choosing your own angle and making your own topic.
Test analysis
This is a composition with directional materials. Its greatest advantage is to prevent the formation of obstacles and let people with serious thinking patterns in the composition lose the battle. The material in front of this question type often lists a bad phenomenon or wrong idea, and the prompt behind it will ask a question. The reason why it is said to be "oriented" is because the stem of the question requires writing "in view of this problem", which is the orientation of the composition. For example, "this question" in this question refers to "what is the best". General argumentative writing can be started from three aspects: what, why and how. With this restriction, why and how are almost useless, and we can only write "what", that is, "what is the best", which is the only way to meet the meaning of the question.
In actual combat, I came across the following ideas. Please judge whether they are right or wrong:
1 struggle is the best;
2 just work hard;
"There is no best, only better", learning and art are endless, and we can't be satisfied with the endless pursuit of the so-called "best".
To be "the best" is to have lofty ideals, adopt the right methods and persistently put them into action.
⑤ What suits you is the best, because there is no absolute standard for "best", which varies from person to person, from time to time and from thing to thing.
The safest is the best.
The above six ideas: ① there is no deduction of the materials provided by the topic, and there is no wrong idea, which is a "problem" that many people in society have now. If "strive to the top" is also accurate, then almost all related commendatory words can be used, such as "being strong is the best", "being diligent is the best" and "being honest is the best". Even if the word "line" is changed to "best", it still won't work for the same reason as the previous item 1. What is said is "how to do the best", which is outside the direction of the topic. ③ Answer "What is the best" and "This question" from a negative perspective, respectively. The wrong ideas listed in the title are accurate ideas that take into account the requirements of materials and orientation.
[Example 1]
The best personality.
If you are a pine tree, you will have rough pride; It is a bud, a charming charm; It is grass, and it has indomitable spirit.
The best personality. Pursue the so-called "best" blindly, don't respect your personality, always want to find a "best" major, learn a "best" knowledge, and then design a "best" learning method, not only the "best" effect may not be there, but also you will lose yourself.
Plum blossom does not compete with flowers for spring, but pursues its own personality, so it has the charm of "fragrance at dusk"; Willow does not admire Song Qing's straightness, but pursues his own personality, so he has a graceful "tapestry of thousands of strands of green silk hanging down"; Maple leaves do not envy green trees, but pursue their own personality, which is why they have the beauty of "frost leaves are redder than February flowers"
Personality is to truly show yourself.
It is better to have no absolute definition, and no one can define it. Therefore, you are you, don't live in the shadow of others in pursuit of the so-called "best"; Show your personality, live your colors, and a life with personality is the best life.
Why can Super Girl be popular all over the country? Why can Chris Lee drive so many fans crazy? Why can "threesome" become more and more popular? The fundamental reason is that they have their own distinctive personalities, which can fully display their personalities and create their own unique brands.
Personality is the true pursuit of self.
When Li Yonggang was the host of Lucky 52, he was afraid that he was not as handsome as other entertainment hosts, and even hesitated and failed completely. When he got home, he was depressed and sad. His wife, Ha Wen, smiled and said to him, "Anyway, I just hope you can stick to your personality, forever, forever, and I believe you will be the best." Really woke up the dreamer, and Li Yong found his home like a lost lamb. The next day, he walked on the stage in high spirits and talked with the guests warmly and sincerely, so that his keen reaction ability and humorous language style could be fully presented. His distinctive personality flashed in the conversation, which made the program Lucky 52 an instant hit.
Personality is sticking to your own style.
"Go your own way and let others talk." When you do a good thing but are ridiculed by others, will you stick to it? When your unique and charming personality is regarded as heresy by others, will you persist? There is such a joke: Grandpa took his grandson out on a donkey, and passers-by laughed at them for not riding a donkey; Grandpa rode a donkey, and passers-by accused him of ignoring his grandson; Grandpa quickly got off the donkey and helped his grandson to the donkey. Passers-by criticized his grandson for being unfilial. Grandpa and grandson rode donkeys together, and passers-by condemned their cruelty; Finally, grandpa and grandson had no choice but to carry donkeys.
In fact, you can ride as you like, no matter what others say, being the truest self is the right choice. Only by being your own master, dominating your own life, sticking to your own style and mastering your own destiny can you reach the other side of success.
Like a pine tree, like a bud, like a stream, show your unique personality, show yourself, pursue yourself and stick to yourself! The best personality.
Field marking
What is the best? In view of the wrong views in the materials, the viewpoint of "personality is the best" is expounded, and the central argument is properly decomposed into three specific aspects: true self-expression, true self-pursuit and adherence to one's own style, which is clear and relevant. The author quoted many poems, famous sayings and vivid materials from real life, and the arguments were detailed and sufficient.
He is good at using metaphor and parallelism. His language is fluent, his literary talent is flying, his structure is complete, his levels are distinct, his views are novel and his personality is distinct.
[Example 2]
Nothing is the best.
Do you have the best flowers? Tao Qian takes chrysanthemum as his best friend, Dunyi takes lotus as his favorite, and Lin Bu takes plum blossom as his beauty.
Is there the best woman? Baoyu likes weak Daiyu, Grandmother Jia likes dignified and virtuous Baochai, and Jiao Da likes strong and sturdy village girls.
Is there the best yard? The princes in the Central Plains are proud of the imperial city with yellow tiles and red walls, the literati in the south of the Yangtze River prefer the gardens with winding paths and secluded places, and the hermits in the deep mountains and forests regard the huts in Chai Men, Liu Yin as beautiful.
No ruler can be recognized by everyone. Everyone has his own interests, and everyone has his own advantages and disadvantages. What suits him is the best. Only in the sky suitable for him can he spread his wings to the maximum and fly to the highest height.
Mark? Before Twain became a famous writer, he decided to be a businessman, like a successful businessman at that time, "as rich as an enemy", but he suffered two fiasco and was heavily in debt. In the end, he clearly realized that his talent lies in literary creation and that business is only suitable for others.
Everyone has his own best sky and different advantages and disadvantages. Imagine letting Yu play basketball and Kobe engage in literary creation, and the result can be imagined.
Some people in society are bent on finding the "best" major, learning the "best" literature and finding the "best" learning method, which will only lead to blind obedience, waste time and have little effect. Gorky, a great writer, was active in thinking and had many ideas in the early hours of the morning. Is writing in the early hours suitable for most people? How many people are there in such a big world and such a long history? Blindly pursuing the best is only a toddler in Handan.
There is no best, only better, and our pursuit of "best" is endless.
There is no absolute pure gold, only a larger proportion of gold-bearing mixture; Without pure silicon, scientists have tried their best to purify it for decades, still in vain. Even so, human beings are constantly improving their purity.
The human brain is a blank that human beings urgently need to develop. It can store a lot of information. Ordinary people only use 2% of its storage function in their lifetime, and Einstein, who uses it the most, only uses 15%. As Newton said, in the face of the ocean of knowledge, human beings tend to pick up the smoother pebbles on the beach smugly. The road of human progress is long. As a member of society, Xiu Yuan can only strive for "better" and cannot be satisfied with the so-called "best".
There is no best, everyone has different eyes and talents, and what suits them is the best!
Without the best, the road is long, and I will go up and down!
[Site marking]
The first three paragraphs of the article ask themselves and answer themselves from three aspects, which vividly shows that there is no absolute best in the world, and what suits you is the best truth; Keep using mark? Twain's initial failure to pursue the so-called best in his career proved his argument. Then, by using the method of hypothetical argument, Kobe Bryant is put in a wrong position, pointing out that most people at the peak of Gorky's creation can't be imitated, thus further demonstrating the central argument. This is the first floor. The second layer cited two materials, natural science and physiological science, and proved that there is no best, only better, and our pursuit of "best" has no limit. The last two paragraphs are the third layer, which summarizes the full text from two aspects.
Throughout the full text, the conception is accurate, the content is substantial, the structure is complete, the level is clear, the methods are diverse, the sentence patterns are flexible, and the rhetoric devices such as parallelism and analogy are good at using, and the language is fluent.