Once upon a time, a man went to visit a tribal leader and wanted a piece of land. The leader said, you go west from here and make a mark. As long as you can walk back before the sun goes down, the land between here and that mark is yours.

The sun went down, and the man didn't come back, because he walked too far, and he was exhausted on the road.

Requirements:

Write an article with the title "People who can't go back". Style is not limited, more than 800 words.

First of all, examine the questions and make suggestions.

① Ideas about raw materials: "I can't come back" means losing my life, and the reason for "I can't come back" is greed. Based on the original meaning of the material "greed makes people go to the point of no return", write a composition in connection with real life.

② Starting from raw materials: Think about what other "can't come back" states are available in life, and what other reasons can make people "can't come back". As long as you are within the scope of this topic, you can choose the content that you feel the most keenly, understand the deepest and have the richest material to write. For example, some people make big mistakes in order to cover up small mistakes, and make bigger mistakes in order to cover up big mistakes. As a result, they can't go back on the wrong road; Some people are getting deeper and deeper in the casino and can't extricate themselves; Some people lose their nature in pursuit of fame and fortune; Some people are devastated by failure; Some people are often troubled by trivial matters of life and forget the true meaning of life.

Only from the topic itself. Topic composition is different from material composition. When writing, the material is only provided to a middle school where I write, and the topic provides us with a broader scope of writing. I don't approve of adding a paragraph of "material" in front of the topic composition. This kind of "material" often causes "psychological suggestion" to candidates, which leads them to follow the trend and slide to the atmosphere and style it predicts, making it difficult to innovate. The topic composition can and should jump out of the "material", and the "material" can not be mentioned throughout, as long as the reviewer clearly sees that the content of your composition is internally related to the content in quotation marks, and points out the topic in time. For example, the title of this article "People who can't come back" may not always be written as "Never look back" because of greed, mistakes and failures, but it can also be written as "Unwilling to compromise and change because of clinging to ideals and setting goals". For example, Tianqi Luo's article is quite novel, and his views are contrary to the materials.

④ Syndrome differentiation and typing. If you want to write a profound article and add a little spark of dialectical thinking, it will light up your article. For example, this topic can show that some people can't come back because of greed, and some people can't come back because of their ideals. They have different outlook on life, different roads and different endings, so they learn to reflect on themselves and examine their three views and one virtue. For example, Jiao Jing and Liu Fang's articles all belong to dialectical conception.

⑤ Learn to analyze topics. General topics are divided into 1, such as "believe in yourself and listen to other people's opinions" and "gains and losses". Don't castrate such topics, just write one aspect; 2. Verb objects, such as the topic "Learn to appreciate" in the last monthly exam, can not omit the appreciation of key verbs; 3. If it is formal, such as "The Choice of the Mind" and this topic, we must grasp the modifiers; 4. Subject-predicate sentences such as "the answers are colorful" and "people are in senior three" cannot be omitted.

A little warning: any topic should not be conceived only from the surface, but also dig deep into the essence and connect with social life. If we take "imbalance" as the topic, we should not only write about ecological imbalance such as earthquake, but also talk about mental imbalance, mental imbalance and ideological imbalance. This idea will be profound.

Second, put forward arguments and choose materials.

1 Arguments include central arguments and sub-arguments. The central argument is the soul of an argumentative essay, the product of our investigation and deliberation on things discussed in many aspects according to the requirements of the topic, and the result of rising from perceptual knowledge to rational knowledge after careful analysis. The refinement of viewpoints reflects the author's understanding level of a problem. The distinct viewpoint should be: correct, novel and profound.

2 Methods of presenting arguments in argumentative essays: ① Presenting arguments from examples. For example, Liu Fang's article in Senior One 1 1 class begins like this: "Haizi said that he has three kinds of sufferings: vagrancy, love and survival. He walked a long way and looked back at the sky. He found that he not only went through the hardships on the road, but also had his happiness compared with the starting point: the throne, poetry and the sun shone on his tomorrow. " ② Propose arguments from questions. ③ Propose an argument by using the sentence pattern of parallelism metaphor. (4) Quoting the classics to put forward arguments. For example, Yu Yang of Class Three has done well in these three aspects:

What is tolerance?

Mathematicians say, "Tolerance is infinite."

The chemist said, "Tolerance is the omnipotent solvent."

The musician said, "Tolerance is the rest of the symphony."

Philosopher said: "Tolerance is aimed at the vast abstract matter."

Looking out from the railing, the long river of history, which was rolled up by anger, hatred and resentment, merged into an inclusive ocean and instantly calmed down.