The fastest: XX national college entrance examination composition comments and scores one by one.

1, the whole country volume 1 composition topic (Hebei, Henan, Shanxi, Guangxi volume)

Material: comic composition (comic sketch)

At the dinner table, many cats eat fish, so one cat catches mice. Other cats said, "Do you catch mice with fish?" ?

Comments: It belongs to the composition of "comic material". This form of composition has appeared many times in the college entrance examination papers, from 1983' s Digging Well to 1996' s Truncation, and then to XX's Wrestling.

The advantages of this proposition form are: concise, intuitive and interesting; The disadvantage is that there are unfair factors in the familiarity of comics. People who are familiar with the subject matter of comics are easy to examine, otherwise it will be difficult to examine. Because a good cartoon must be ironic, and the connotation it reveals must also be hidden. This invisibility undoubtedly increases the difficulty of some students' exams.

2, the national volume II composition topic (Yunnan, Guizhou, Gansu, Jilin, Qinghai, Xinjiang, Tibet volume)

Please write an article on the topic of "Path".

Requirements: 1, choose your own angle and make your own ideas. There is no limit to literary rest except poetry.

3, not less than 800 words.

Comments: Proposition composition. The exam questions are very difficult. For more specific terms such as "road" and "Tao", all candidates will be very easy to grasp; The word "path" seems clear, but it is abstract. In the dictionary, the word "road" has two interpretations: first, it is similar to "road" (but it has directionality and purpose, which is subtle but important from the word "road"), and second, it is the road. Overlapping with the meaning of "method" and "method". These two meanings are the key points of intention examination, which seems simple. In fact, candidates may not be able to grasp it well. It is estimated that many candidates write this composition similar to propositional compositions such as "Road" and "Road". In fact, this is a typical "trial and error" or "quasi-digression".

3, Beijing volume composition questions

XX year college entrance examination Beijing composition topic: down-to-earth look at the stars. Write an article of not less than 800 words, regardless of style except poetry.

Comments: Proposition composition. This topic is symbolic and philosophical. It is also the most poetic composition proposition in this year's college entrance examination, which can best mobilize the writing passion of candidates.

What candidates should do is: first, we should make clear the connotation of looking up at the sky and being down-to-earth: looking up at the sky is a metaphor for ideals and future, longings and wishes. This is empty. Down-to-earth means starting from your feet and doing everything well, including study, life and work, which is true; In short, this topic is the core content: the relationship between ideal and reality.

What candidates need to avoid most is to write this proposition only from one aspect of "looking up at the sky" or "down-to-earth", resulting in the deviation of examination and conception.

The college entrance examination essay questions are: what and what, generally examine students' dialectical analysis ability, mainly to write the relationship between them, which can focus on one hand, but must involve the other; Both are emphasized, but they must be taken into account.

Stylistically, you can write argumentative, narrative or prose. Argumentative writing can focus on the proof of examples and facts, and narrative writing can write one thing. In short, you should pay attention to the implementation of symbolic meaning and dialectical analysis ability.

4. Shanghai composition questions

Fishing rules in life

According to the following materials, choose an angle, do your own topic, and write an article of not less than 800 words (don't write poetry).

Danes take a ruler with them when they go fishing. When they catch fish, they often measure them with a ruler and put small fish that are not big enough back into the river. They said, "Isn't it better to let the little fish grow up?" "More than 2,000 years ago, Chinese Mencius once said:" Countless, fish and turtles are uncountable.

Winning food is also. "It means, don't catch small fish in the pond with fine fishing nets, so there will be more fish.

In fact, truth also runs through many aspects of our real life.

Comments: It belongs to "new material composition". The selection of materials is more interesting.

It is hard to imagine. The two materials complement each other, one fact and one theory; One China, one foreign country; A philosopher, a layman. The material itself is not uncommon and easy to understand. But it is easy to examine the questions, and it may not be easy to conceive them.

Some candidates may feel puzzled, but it is good for candidates with high Chinese level, strong reading ability and keen grasp of language information to play their own level.

5, Tianjin volume composition questions

The title composition "The World I Live in" is not less than 800 words.

Comments: It belongs to "no material topic composition".

There is no material, no guidance, but the topic is as relevant as last year's Tianjin composition "I said post-90 s", and there is nothing to say; However, it is not easy to write a high-level article.

Candidates should avoid talking to themselves and look at the world around them with an alternative vision that only the post-90 s can understand. That will make the marking teacher confused and not conducive to marking.

6. Chongqing composition questions

Chongqing college entrance examination composition topic: "difficult problem"

Comments: It belongs to "infinite proposition composition". Although the topic is a "difficult problem", it is easy to understand.

However, due to the lack of information, on the one hand, it is open and flexible, on the other hand, it is impossible to start. For a propositional composition like this, candidates should try to add some necessary information to the empty topic before they can start to conceive and write. For example: life problems, study problems, youth problems, psychological problems, communication problems with parents, …

7, Jiangsu volume composition questions

Green, full of vitality and pleasing to the eye. Green is closely related to life and ecology. Today, green has become a new concept, which is closely related to everyone's life.

Please write an article of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Green Life".

Requirements: ① Angle is optional; ② Self-determination; (3) Besides poetry, the style is optional.

Comments: It belongs to "guiding material proposition composition", which is a new proposition form in recent two years. Different from the so-called old and new material composition, it is also different from the popular topic composition. The meaning of the material is only an opportunity to inspire and induce candidates' writing ideas, so as to avoid some candidates from suddenly getting stuck in a tense time and appearing blank ideas; With a clear topic, we can prevent the phenomenon of doing things at will, getting out of control, and even making a lot of slight changes in structure and interplanting, as in the topic composition. It reflects the concern for social hot spots and focal issues, and plays a very good role in stimulating students' awareness of actively participating in social life. "Green life" is closely related to the current hot topic "low carbon" and life, which is conducive to candidates' play.

8, Guangdong volume composition questions

You and I are neighbors and depend on each other. You can be tangible or intangible. Neighbors can't avoid it, but they can choose. Please contact your own life experience and feelings, and write an article on the topic of "Being your neighbor". Not less than 800 words.

Comments: This is a good composition topic this year, which does not belong to material composition, but has "words" to guide writing; There are also "topics" that control writing. I'll call it "discourse-induced proposition" composition. The language of Quotations can be freely accepted, which is suitable for both reality and reality. The examination space is large and suitable, and the candidates have substance in their words: either connect with reality or talk about their own views on "how to be neighbors"; You can write "tangible neighbors" and "invisible neighbors". Each in his place, each shows his ability!

From the local characteristics, Guangdong Province, with dense floating population and complex and indifferent human relations, is also quite realistic. It can undoubtedly inspire people to think about how to deal with the increasingly indifferent interpersonal relationship in today's fast-paced modernization.

9, Zhejiang volume composition questions

Legend has it that some chicks will feed their mothers when they grow up. People call this phenomenon "feedback".

A similar phenomenon exists in human society. The cultural influence of the younger generation on the older generation is called "cultural feedback". For thousands of years, under the orthodox inheritance mode of parents teaching their children, cultural feedback is like an undercurrent, but in today's rapidly changing society, young people have gained unprecedented feedback ability. They are more and more obvious in scientific knowledge, values, lifestyles and aesthetic tastes.

Affecting the older generation, the roles of teachers and students often change.

Taking "between roles" as the topic, you can tell stories, express your feelings and express your opinions. Style is not limited to more than 800 words except poetry.

Comments: It belongs to the so-called "argumentative material propositional composition", and the material tends to express clearly, which develops the traditional meaning of the word "feedback". The original intention of "feedback" is to "compare children's filial piety to their parents and other elders when they grow up", but the interpretation here highlights the influence of the younger generation on their elders in terms of values. This tendency to provide materials reduces the difficulty of review, but also limits the freedom of review. To some extent, it is counterproductive to "kidnap" candidates' writing ideas. Moreover, the so-called "cultural feedback" only borrows part of the meaning of the word "feedback", not the original meaning of "feedback". From this perspective, it is debatable whether the author's subversive interpretation of the word "feedback" is appropriate.

10, Shandong Paper Composition

Read the following materials and write as required. (60 points)

Everyone has different standards to measure the quality of life. In the past 30 years, China people have become famous for pinning their longing for a better life on the improvement of material life.

Brands and luxury goods seem to weigh more and more in some people's minds.

According to relevant statistics, 68.8% of white-collar workers are willing to spend money on luxury goods, and the average annual consumption of white-collar workers on luxury goods reaches 22,062.8 yuan. Flora, 26, is an employee of a foreign company with a monthly salary of 5,000 yuan. She said that buying luxury goods is mainly to earn face. Amber, a 28-year-old department head with a monthly salary of 8,000 yuan, is also a follower of luxury goods. She claimed to buy famous brands not for face, not for comfort, but to "motivate herself". Amber said she would pay attention to the lifestyle of multi-millionaires, which would make her

Collecting famous brands has a sense of direction.

Do you care about famous brands and luxury goods in your daily life? Is money the only criterion to measure the quality of life? As a modern person, what supports the quality of life?

How do you feel after reading the above words? Please contact the social reality or your own life experience, make your own ideas, draw up your own topic, and write an article of no less than 800 words, which has no style.

Limit. No plagiarism.

Comments: Provide relatively complete materials: data, phenomena, inspiration and thinking. Then let the candidates talk about their feelings about the above words. This is a bit of a return to the so-called "old material composition." Because according to the requirements, candidates basically have to write around the materials. The advantage is that it avoids the disadvantages of too open composition examination in recent years, and candidates will not stray from the topic no matter how they write; The disadvantage is that there are too many restrictions on candidates' writing, and it is not easy to mobilize the space of candidates with higher writing level. But this is a contradiction in itself, and it is difficult to demand the proposer.

What is worthy of recognition is that the proposition subtly touches on some phenomena in real life. It not only inspires candidates to think about literacy and morality, but also avoids blunt moral torture.

There seems to be another version of Shandong composition circulating on the Internet. I don't know whether it is true or not, so I am in doubt for the time being. )

1 1, Ningxia essay topic

The material is: three male students went to play basketball and met a begging little girl on the way. The girl wrote on the ground with chalk: "My wallet was stolen because I went out for a trip. Please help me." One of the boys gave it to a girl 10 yuan. The other two boys said that the boy was cheated because he didn't bring chalk when traveling. Another material is that a coal mine was flooded, and a few days later, the rescuers found the bodies of the victims. Next to a miner named Nie Wenqing, they found a helmet with his last words written in chalk, which read: "I owe my mother 200 yuan, I owe Deng Shuhua100 ...", written on the topic of honesty and kindness from the perspective of self-selection.

Comments: It seems to be the same theme as last year's Ningxia composition, so I have doubts for the time being. Post evaluation.

12, Jiangxi essay topic

Proposition composition "Recovering Childhood"

Why do you want to get your childhood back? Because the society is too utilitarian now, children are under too much pressure and have left their childhood.

Today's society needs innocence, and it needs to find its childhood back.

The key point is the verb "back".

Narrative discussion is ok, and the style of writing should be clear.

Comments: This is a good proposition composition this year. The essay topic of "Recovering Childhood" can arouse students' strong sense of * * * and express their feelings. Childhood should be a song, a beautiful memory, full of happiness, freedom and innocence. However, with the development of the times, children's childhood is more filled with heavy homework pressure, as well as various cram schools and extra-long classes. Children's childhood has been "tampered with", coupled with the influence of the information society, all kinds of information have poured into children's brains indiscriminately, and their childhood has also been polluted. Therefore, it should be noted that the topic of this composition focuses on "retrieval", and it must be written around this aspect when writing.

13, topic of Liaoning paper composition

Read the following materials and write an article of not less than 800 words as required. (60 points)

Happiness is an eternal topic, which truly fills our life.

Materials1xx165438+1October 19 China youth daily conducted an online survey on the relationship between happiness and houses. According to the survey, 80% of the respondents in China think that "happiness has something to do with houses", but the opinions of Japanese netizens are quite different. About 90% of Japanese netizens think that happiness has nothing to do with the house.

Material 2 A philosopher accidentally fell into the water and was rescued ashore. The first sentence he said was: breathing is a happy thing, and living is happiness, but why do so many people ruin themselves for the so-called happiness?

Material 3 Some people think that the shallowest happiness in life is brought by desire and material, and the life of desire and material can never be satisfied.

Material 4 Some people think that everyone is pursuing happiness, but you can't hurt others or even the country in order to pursue your own happiness.

Requirements: choose the right angle, clear thinking, choose your own style, and take the "happiness is"

"For the topic (fill in the blank lines with the words or phrases you choose); Don't deviate from the content and meaning of the material, don't copy it, and don't copy it.

Comments: It belongs to "material semi-propositional composition". The four materials have different angles and different expressions, including digital investigation materials, factual materials and explanatory materials. Can inspire candidates to think about the topic of "happiness". The topic of "happiness" can be said to be both an eternal and traditional topic and a realistic and modern topic. Materials and propositions are not only binding, but also open and close to real life. However, the moral meaning of the materials is too strong, and the expression tendency of the four materials is too obvious. It is not conducive to candidates to write good articles with novel and creative ideas.

14, Fujian Paper Composition

According to Fujian News Radio reporter, XX Fujian college entrance examination composition is based on the birth story proposition of Grimm's fairy tale.

According to the material, the brothers Grimm thought that folklore was related to human history, but after they collected many legends, they could not find the exact relationship and gave up. Later, a friend.

Accidentally found that they arranged, contact the publishing house for publication. This is the last Grimm fairy tale. "

Comments: the information is not complete for the time being, so I won't comment for the time being.

15, Sichuan essay questions

A point can form a line, a plane or a solid. Life is like an irregular point, which can be connected into countless lines and form different planes, and different planes can form different geometric bodies. Please write from the perspective of life. Write an article of not less than 800 words according to your own topic.

Comments: It belongs to "words are like inscriptions", with little material content and strong openness. This form of composition is very flexible in the conception of the exam, but it is quite difficult. But writing from the perspective of "life" seems to limit the freedom of writing.

It is good for candidates to have a flexible mind and a high level of writing, but it is estimated that some students will feel "unable to start." Experienced candidates can also write a good composition after concretizing the topic.

16, Anhui essay questions

Xing Wu's miscellaneous poems

(Qing) Ruan Yuan

The four rivers that communicate are inclined and scattered into thousands of streams.

Plant water chestnut in the depths, rice in the depths and lotus in the depths.

What kind of thinking or association does this poem contain? Please refer to

Write an article with your thoughts or associations. Subject matter is not limited, not less than 800 words.

Comments: It belongs to "self-propositional composition of poetry materials". On the surface, poetry should not be difficult to understand, but the so-called "philosophy" it contains may not be easy for candidates to grasp well. It is beneficial for candidates to exert their imagination and write high-level compositions; However, it may also cause some candidates to fail to really understand the meaning of poetry, so they randomly conceive and write articles that are neither fish nor fowl.

17, Hainan Volume Composition Title:

Please write an argumentative essay or narrative with the topic of "participation" of not less than 800 words. (60 points)

Comments: "Proposition composition", the topic itself is clear at a glance, but the conceptual space left for candidates is also flexible. "Participate" in what? It is something that candidates must achieve in a very short time. Don't waste too much time here, trying to write everything, but in the end nothing was written.

This composition is characterized by easy examination and strong openness; But it is easy to "sigh at the topic" and I don't know where to start. The general rule is: "make big problems smaller" and "make a mountain out of a molehill". That is to say, relatively empty topics need to add necessary content to have "things" to write, and too specific topics need to think about their profound connotation to write new ideas.

18, Hunan paper composition topic

Please write a narrative or argumentative essay of not less than 800 words on the topic of "Morning".

Comments: Like Hainan, it is a "propositional composition" with few restrictions and large space. However, the title and last year's Hunan essay "Stand on tiptoe" are a bit shocking, puzzling and incomprehensible. It seems that "there is more room for imagination; But it actually belongs to the "mystifying" type. Suspected of deliberately making things difficult for candidates!

It seems that the questioner in Hunan is different.

18, Shaanxi volume composition topic

Environmental remoulder

In the form of material composition, * * * gives three kinds of materials, to the effect that 1: put a tropical fish in a small fish tank, it can only grow to 3 inches; Put it in a big fish pond, it will grow very big; 2. The wolf is brave and vigorous because it has lived in the wild for a long time; 3. A psychologist selected 10 people and told them that they were all talented people. Later, all these 10 people succeeded, but the psychologist finally admitted that they were just ordinary people.

Candidates are required to write an 800-word composition according to the above three paragraphs.

Comments: It belongs to the so-called "new material composition". These materials are enlightening and open to some extent. It is helpful for candidates to use their imagination and write compositions at different levels. However, it is still difficult to understand the connotation of the material. For example, we can conceive from the perspectives of "environment and success" and "motivation and success", but to write more innovative compositions, we need to use our brains and find another way.

19, Hubei essay topic

Read the following materials and write as required:

The Monkey King's somersault cloud and Nezha's hot wheels are the products of magical imagination, which embodies the good wishes of human beings for rapid progress. Who would have thought that the fantasy novel "New China" in the late Qing Dynasty predicted that the World Expo would be held in Lujiazui, Shanghai more than 100 years later, and the dream of French science fiction writer Valle's "From the Earth to the Moon" came true today? Fantasy originates from human instinct for knowledge and shows human extraordinary imagination. Fantasy drives reality, fantasy illuminates life and fantasy is the source of happiness. ...

Please choose a suitable angle and write a composition according to your understanding and experience of the above materials.

Requirements: Choose your own style and write your own topic (please write the topic on the answer sheet), not less than 800 words.

Comments: It belongs to "new material composition", and the materials are enlightening, which can fully mobilize the phenomenal power and writing enthusiasm of candidates. It is more conducive to the development of candidates with high writing level, and may cause "knowing but not expressing" distress to candidates with ordinary imagination and logical thinking. Writing "fantasy and reality", "fantasy and life", "fantasy and happiness" and so on, no matter from which side or angle, is easy to become empty without philosophical thinking, heavy history and other related knowledge.