Article 1: Excellent argumentative essay in senior high school: Free Yun Fan and help the sea. This is a strange road for us, with no end. Only brightly lit, bluebirds extinct, desolate like a dream.
I set out from this end of the road, put down a cloud sail devoutly and sailed to the other side against the sunrise there.
After winter and spring, the sun rises and finally sets. I saw that it was getting dark and Qian Fan was over, but I was still struggling on the road alone. I know that those who sail and sail, like me, still have a passionate pursuit in their hearts even if they don't say it.
The eagle tries its wings and sucks dust; Strange flowers and plants are born, and I am scared. Keep the grandeur of this life, keep the obsession in your heart, walk through cold and failure, walk through warm spring and walk through glory. When you are tired, look at the scenery of "Sunshine Ocean Half Way"; When I am tired, I firmly believe in the hope that one day I will climb the Changfeng and break the huge waves. If you want to cry, look up at the sky where young people dream of flying. ...
I stubbornly look for my past and future dreams on the edge of time, just because I heard the sound of flowers in my dreams. Therefore, whether it is bleak, bleak or dead, whether it is gentle, colorful or complicated, it is still waiting. It is spring to fish alone in the cold river.
Spring has come and the grass has turned green. Although what we expected can't come as scheduled, sad tears and bright smiles become precious because of faith, and falling injuries and sheltered waves become insignificant and disdainful because of struggle. When the spring breeze blows across the earth, the green breath comes with it.
I would like to keep my heart sailing, draw a dream pattern in my heart under the dim light, in front of the window sill in the early morning, in the empty alley, and hang it on the battlefield filled with invisible smoke, fighting bloody battles. In this world full of tension and competition, only by daring to step out of isolation and inferiority, timidity and inaction can we see the dawn of victory in the distance.
I saw that the spirits of dreams were flying around, the wind was a pen and the ground was a manuscript. It taught me to write down my imagination and my fear of chasing my dreams on the manuscript paper of my youth.
I understand that the things depicted in one stroke and one painting have filled my life, which has added ups and downs to my life and made me taste different beauty.
The road ahead, picturesque, winding, thick ink splashing, light and thick complement each other;
The road ahead, high and low, twists and turns, cadence, noise and crisp, are all tunes;
The road ahead is like wine, long and fragrant, suitable for people to be intoxicated.
This is a road we are not familiar with, and the destination is a more desolate place than the future. But I didn't hesitate, I didn't hesitate, because I know that on my other side, the clouds are light and the wind is light, which is what I want and think!
Article 2: Excellent argumentative essay in senior high school: Let the boat of Yun Fan Jicanghai rise in Yun Fan, and there will be storms on the voyage across the sea; When young trees thrive, they will inevitably suffer from rain, snow, wind and frost; The stream runs forward, and there are not only springs, but also rapids and eddies along the way.
The same is true of the growth of teenagers. The process of growing up is like climbing a mountain. It is inevitable to fall, be scratched by thorns, and be beaten and honed again and again. These are normal phenomena, so families, schools and society don't have to pay too much attention to them, just look at them with a normal heart.
Just like a boat sailing, it will become strong in the tempering of wind and rain. Too much care and protection will add unnecessary load to its narrow cabin and become a pressure and obstacle to progress. The days of seeking refuge under the wings of parents are long gone. We are eager to open our chest, embrace the thunderstorm and enjoy the natural sunshine. When children begin to take their own steps on the road of life, families should give them understanding and support. Please remove the shackles of your eyes and let the children fight the wind and waves in their own boat of life! At present, when children are frustrated, our family should keep a normal heart, don't rush to do it for them, don't care too much, and don't make a mountain out of a molehill. Just smile and watch the children get up, and Ye will naturally sail forward with trusting eyes.
I hope that the perfect school for children will not be too demanding. "People are not sages, to err is human?" Small mistakes are inevitable, in fact, it has set up a golden bridge to maturity. Don't focus on the child's small mistakes, and don't cast an accusing eye when the child wrestles. Treat children's small mistakes with trust and tolerance, let them become helmsmen with mature smiles, and bring back satisfactory answers from the other side of victory.
Finally, our society should also re-examine its attitude towards teenagers. From the early opposition to doting to the promotion of frustration education, the overall educational concept of society has undergone gratifying changes. Society should not pay too much attention to children's occasional falls, let alone hype. The maiden voyage ship, still trembling slightly, is a little afraid of knowing little about this society. Too many spotlights suddenly focus together, which will only make the ship in chaos and panic. If Yun Fan leans during the voyage, the society can smile lightly, put down too many worries, and a self-reliant generation will rise.
Jackie Chan's child, Fang Zuming, once wrote a song called "Please Let Me Fall", which expressed the distress of thousands of children in Qian Qian. It is inevitable to fall down on the road of life. What is terrible is that the eyes of family, school and society immediately flock to weave an airtight net, making children struggle in confusion and unable to stand up by themselves, so they have to become prisoners of their eyes in helplessness.
But look, the boat bound by eyes is desperately trying to attract Yun Fan in the distance. Please let your family relax the eyes of excessive care, please let the school put down the eyes of excessive accusation, please let the society shift the eyes of excessive care to understanding and tolerance, and let that Yun Fan help the sea!
Comments by famous teachers
The composition in the examination room should learn to "turn the title into an image". The so-called "image" refers to being good at using "pictographic imagination" to turn abstract into concrete, express ideas with concrete and vivid images, and try to avoid conceptual graphic topics. The author of this composition is well aware of this. He compared a growing child to "a sailing boat". The full text discusses the image of "a cloud" and emphasizes that the boat "will become strong in the tempering of wind and rain", which greatly enhances the readability of the article and is more attractive and convincing.
In addition, the center of the article is clear and the language expression is rich, such as "Please take off the chain of your eyes and let your children fight the storm in their own boat of life" and "In this way, they will become helmsmen with mature smiles and bring back satisfactory answers from the other side of victory", which is memorable to read. The title "Releasing Yun Fan to Help the Sea" is translated into a famous sentence in Tang poetry, which is also innovative and complements the content of the article.