True self style

It may be a fashionable move in today's society to carefully paint yourself with protective colors so as not to be seen through at a glance.

Take me for example. In the eyes of my parents, I am a shy and unsociable boy. Among my classmates, I was portrayed as a lively and happy "ADHD" patient. Most of the comments the teacher wrote to me were "Enhance the spirit of hardship, improve self-control ..."

Man is a polyhedron, and sometimes "seeing is believing" is inevitably wrong. The ancients said that "knowing a son is like a father", and I want to say "knowing your friend is like yourself". After several measurements, I finally found my "true self style"-

Impatient temperament

When I was in junior high school, I lost a good friend because of a sesame big thing. At that time, because I was not calm, I used my childhood madness to hurt people. So, we ignored each other and went our separate ways. Since then, there has been a lack of a pair of good partners who learn from each other in the classroom and a pair of excellent partners who cooperate tacitly on the basketball court.

Born with an open mind

Speaking of which, I'm not bragging. I am absolutely generous and open-minded. I don't mind lending you a valuable reference, which is an inseparable repeater and electronic dictionary. I won't show any embarrassment. Boys, be open-minded, or you will be in trouble if you get the nickname "Iron Rooster".

I am also very open-minded, because I don't like crying and don't want to be coy. I hate people's duplicity and hurting people behind their backs. Talk, don't leave you three points, live ammunition, everything is clear and neat. I have always believed that being open-minded is also a kind of beauty.

Have a good sense of humor

People who get along with me can easily find that I am still a humorous person. Where there is me, there is laughter.

Isn't it? On the basketball court, the game entered a "white-hot" stage. Our team often makes mistakes, and many players are impatient. At this time, I received a pass from my teammate, a beautiful passer-by, and then jumped high and shouted "slam dunk"! Helpless to jump to the top, but also with the rebound gap is very big, so we have to sigh: "wipe the board!" " "When the ball touches the net, the atmosphere on the court becomes relaxed. Everyone played better and better, and won the game with great enthusiasm. This, I can play a big role!

Anyway, this is me, a real, full of personality!

[opinion]

The most important thing for "true self style" to return to innocence from the so-called maturity is "truth". This article embodies this feature. The little author wiped off the protective color and showed an impatient, open-minded and humorous boy image with vivid and humorous language. The author is telling the truth, writing about his own personality and true self. It is full of pure, sincere and naive truth, which is much more meaningful than virtual and profound nonsense. In addition, the author added section subheadings, which made the organization more clear and unique, and enhanced the readability of the article.

Article 2:

I have formed a good habit.

Character determines fate, and habit determines the future.

-inscription

In the eyes of teachers and parents, I am smart and flexible. But there is also a shortcoming, that is, carelessness and forgetfulness. I don't know how many times my mother has said this shortcoming, but I just don't want to change it after all. I don't think it is a big problem. Buy things if you lose them. And I also comforted myself by saying, "Who can have no shortcomings, as long as he is careful in big things?"

Mother said angrily, "You didn't cry until you saw the coffin. You will know when something is broken. "

I spat out my tongue and forgot my mother's lesson in the blink of an eye, still doing my own "carelessness"

Unexpectedly, I really let my mother say that my problem is finally broken-

Last year, I forgot to bring my admission ticket for the senior high school entrance examination, and it was not until I was blocked by the invigilator outside the examination room that I found it was a serious mistake, and sweat and tears dripped down my cheeks. I almost fainted when my mother tried to send me the admission ticket. Although the invigilator comforted me repeatedly, the "nerve-racking" just now still affected my first subject. Finally, the key high school I dreamed of for many years, because I didn't do well in the science exam for the first time, which affected my total score and passed me by. After the scores came out, teachers and classmates felt sorry for me. I am like an eggplant beaten by snow. No matter how my mother scolds me, I can't reply.

As a last resort, I went back to my original school to repeat my studies. The teacher told me the story of the famous mathematician Chen Jingrun. Chen Jingrun used to pay little attention to Chinese because he studied mathematics. Therefore, his papers always fail to meet the standards of publication, and even his famous paper on Goldbach's conjecture has been delayed for many years. In those years when the publication was postponed, fortunately, no other mathematician put forward his research topic, otherwise his years of hard work would be wasted because of the defects in Chinese. Since then, I have a thorough and clear understanding of the fault of "Ma Daha". It turns out that a person's habits can determine a person's future. In the whole year of reviewing again, no matter what I do, I tell myself to be careful.

Now, I finally got rid of Ma Daha's faults and developed a good habit of being careful and meticulous.

[opinion]

This article is worth learning from: 1, pointing out the center with inscriptions. 2. The "harm" of "Ma Daha" includes both "I" and "Chen Jingrun" lessons, which are specific and detailed. These are the "central materials" of the full text. Whether you can highlight the center of the article depends on whether the "central material" is dull and empty or concrete. We say that a good article should be "Leopard-tailed crested pork belly", and the "center material" determines the size of the pork belly.

Article 3:

Send you a bright moon

Bathed in this watery moonlight, I stood alone on the dark balcony. It's so quiet everywhere that I can't help shivering. Time is gradually entering summer. Why is the wind still so sad, which has aroused a slight injury in my heart?

At present, the senior high school entrance examination is approaching, but my state has dropped again and again, and my scores in the three models have dropped by dozens. I seem to have become a solitary grass, and my original approving eyes have become cold. Dare not look directly at teachers and parents. And those blunt and questioning words are really unbearable.

Looking at the darkness, I was silent, as if I had fallen into the abyss. How can I easily avoid the cold and darkness? The moonlight becomes so far away in an instant that I can't feel its softness. ...

Suddenly, a familiar voice came, "I am here alone!" " I looked back and it was dad. I gently "hmm" and turned around. "What, are you still depressed about your grades?" Dad asked with concern, "Depression?" More than that? It's simple ... forget it, forget it. "I have some didn't good the spirit replied by the way, son, I didn't do well this time. Dad will not only punish you, but also reward you! Want to know what it is? "When I heard this, I immediately looked at my father in disbelief. I saw him staring at the bright moon overhead and pointing and saying," I want to send you a bright moon. ""ah! Are you okay? " I opened my mouth wide. Dad said calmly, "Of course not. Look at the moon in the sky. Don't you see his light? "Even in the endless darkness, so what? It is still firmly blooming its own light, and it has a belief that gives people light in the dark. Qian Qian has thousands of nights, and it insists on wandering in the dark. Even if this black is thick, it will not dilute persistence and never give up. " Dad's firm tone seems to have touched me, and I seem to understand something. Dad patted me on the back and went downstairs, leaving me alone on the balcony looking at the bright moon he gave me.

Gradually, I felt the softness of the moonlight again. Its light is the embodiment of its persistent and tenacious soul. Quietly, I took the moon from my father, and I melted it in my heart.

This bright moon, full of support and love, shines on my life, washes my soul with its brilliance, and accompanies me to find my way in the boundless darkness of life and keep sailing.

Composition review

The perfect integration of scenery, emotion and reason is the biggest highlight of this paper. Scenery, shady sky, dark balcony, a bright moon hanging high in the sky. Love, the little author is facing the situation of rapid decline in grades, and his mood is as dark as that of rolling in the deep. No matter how boundless the night is, the moon "still sends out its own light firmly, and it has a belief that it gives people light in the dark." So one night, I felt like "I" in the dark, facing the dilemma of not finding my way. My father used a bright moon in the sky to let me know that no matter how bad the situation is, I will persist and never give up. After receiving this special gift, I finally realized something. As the author wrote at the end, this round of bright moon "washed my heart and soul with its brilliance, and accompanied me to find my own direction in the boundless darkness of life and continue to sail."

Article 4:

Be a walker (1)

"Knowing is easier than doing", "knowing" is valuable, and "walking" is more valuable. Apes evolved into adults by action, and scientists explored the truth by action. Then, as knowledgeable people, why don't we be "walkers" to explore the sublimation of life?

Why not be a "walker" and show your true feelings with actions? The ancients said: "Sign from color, and then metaphor." Some poets are sentimental, but they miss the beautiful women in the wall but dare not go near them. In the end, "love is always ruthless", leaving only one poem, but the beautiful women don't know it. Some young people are passionate, but they are afraid to approach real ladies. They play the harp in their dreams just to make friends with them. Finally, they "thought about it day and night" and left a wind, which the lady didn't know. Don't you know these two people? Some violinists broke their Aegean because of the death of their confidants, and some swordsmen hung their swords on their graves because of their promises. Aren't these two walkers Be a "walker", pursue emotional exposure and spiritual sublimation, and don't hold grudges!

Why not be a "walker" and use actions to narrow the distance between dreams and reality. Can entrepreneurs become famous big enterprises in their dreams if they don't start from childhood? Can online writers become famous writers in their dreams without working hard on the grid? He who can tell dreams is a knower, but only a dreamer; People who can act are "walkers", they are doers and successful people! To be a walker, no one wants to be a loser!

Why not be a "walker" and interpret the meaning of life with actions? Some people say "I think therefore I am", while others say "I think therefore I am". The meaning of life lies in "thinking on the premise of life". Although you have a life now, how can you prove your existence if you don't think about the world, prove your thinking with actions and harvest your thinking and feelings with actions? How can I make my life meaningful?

Be a walker! Your actions will make your life as full as bread, cruel reality as sweet as dreams, and illusory emotions as tangible as streams!

Be a walker!

Comments:

Be a "walker", "show your true feelings with actions", "narrow the distance between dreams and reality with actions" and "interpret the meaning of life with actions" and start step by step. There is both historical inheritance and present consciousness. In the second paragraph, Mencius' argument is quoted, and Su Shi's poems and The Book of Songs Guan Ju, as well as Boya's piano practice and Ji Zi's hanging sword, are used. The argument is just right. This is an excellent argumentative essay in the examination room! Such rigorous speculative analysis and such rich material accumulation are really commendable for a junior three student!

Article 5:

Be a "walker" (2)

"Last night, the west wind withered the green trees, and I went up to the tall building alone and looked at the horizon." In the dead of night, leaning against the tall building, the black sky is divided by the window lattice, and the rain in the distance is like a curtain.

Asparagus, once tall and straight, is gaunt and not outstanding. In this complex sound of nature, it leans left and right, groans and struggles, and finally it is inevitable to be entrusted to the dust.

So my thoughts, like Artemisia without owner, fly in this changing season. ...

I used to be so complacent! With the ambition of "seeing a glimpse at the top once", I live a tense life of "there are lights at night and chickens crow at night", hoping that one day "the pen will shake the wind and rain, and the poem will make the gods cry" and become the number one scholar. However, "After the flowers are picked into honey, who will work hard for whom?" Reality is like an iron wall, making dreams elusive, which is the embarrassment of "a dragon swimming in shallow water for a shrimp play" If gangrene is attached to the bone, it is a painful experience that "the phoenix in the water is not as good as the chicken".

Since time is running out, forget it, and abandon the persistent idea that "if you have a drink today, you can get drunk today, regardless of right or wrong in front of him"!

Don't! Don't! No way!

Have you forgotten your mother who cooks and washes for you under the bright moon? Have you forgotten your great desire to high-five your best friend for the benefit of your motherland?

You shouldn't forget!

Years are like smoke, and the past is like poetry. A talented stranger appeared. He once suffered the pain of "I lost my pride and Yang Jun lost my willow", but with confidence and lofty sentiments, he never backed down. He can shake his arm and shout, "The dragon plate of the tiger is better than in the past, upside down and generous"; He can smile at the crowd, "ask the boundless earth, who is in charge of ups and downs"; He can wield a sword, Long song. "Count the romantic figures and look at the present." ...

Everyone should be a "walker", making his own way with youth and blood and tears. The bitter wind and rain tonight, the melancholy and confusion tonight, are just wonderful scenery along the way.

There is no name on the list, but the road is under your feet. As long as you leave your hard steps in the snow, your heart will be calm.

All roads lead to Rome. As a "walker", I know that I have passed the life post of "beat the devil"! I know I can make the career of "Walker" better and better!

Comments:

Starting from the conflict between dream and reality, this paper reflects on my mother's hardships and her own ambitions, and finally jumps out of the emotional entanglement of "self" after feeling the great feat, "conquers my demons" and is determined to be a "walker" and "walk out of my own way with youth and blood and tears". As an argumentative essay, the author has sincere feelings and real feelings. The language image is elegant, and the poetry quotation is ingenious and natural. It can really be said that it is "full of poetry books", and the lyrical discussion is chic!

Article 6:

Be a "walker" (3)

Her figure has begun to tremble. I can see that her sweat stains are getting more and more dazzling on the transparent white clothes. There are more and more water droplets, which divide the clean white clothes into pieces. Her face was red and her gums were clenched tightly, as if she were going to do something important. The sun kissed her warmly. On her face, there is no disappointment, no pain, only a feeling close to hope. The wind blew through her wet hair, but she still kept running and was baptized by the sun. Although, there is no one else on this runway.

Ear buzzing, I wiped my warm eyes. "Silly girl, stop running, it's been 4 minutes ..." "Fat girl ..." Laughter flooded in, but she was still running without any impatience or pain. She has dwarfism, and she is short, like a helpless child.

Tears began to flow from my eyes. I looked at the rolling basketball next to me, and I had mixed feelings. Yes, I only got 29 points in the sports simulation exam, and my only score was lost in basketball. I looked up and saw that little figure was still running, and I couldn't help but freeze.

Her feet have almost no strength, but she is still running, although the speed is no different from walking.

The basketball next to me is still jumping, but the image of the girl in front of me is getting higher and higher. ...

Why does she keep running? Time has long since ended, but she still hasn't given up. Even if her sweat soaked her white clothes, even if there were tears in her eyes.

The sun shines obliquely on the girl's side, and her gradually hardened side line is deeply reflected in my mind. I picked up the basketball on the ground and stroked it gently. At this time, the girl's figure was pulled longer and longer by the sun.

"Here we are!" The teacher's crisp voice echoed in the empty playground, and the girls took a long breath. Sweat kept shouting, but there was a smile on her face!

I picked up the basketball in my hand and gently threw it out. Maybe I can't control its movements, but I can pick it up and shoot at the basket.

"Bang!" This is a goal! Looking at the bouncing basketball, I found that, originally, I can! You can act, you can create your own future with your own actions!

That girl walked in front of me, and that figure is forever engraved in my heart. When I cry, her strong back always tells me: create your own future with your own actions, don't give up, don't back down.

Comments:

Being good at capturing the details of life and having a sentimental heart is the basis of writing, because only being moved by life can touch others. This article is full of life, the theme is not novel but true, and the story is not wonderful but touching. Feel the value of "walker" from other people's actions and motivate yourself to "create your own future with your own actions" and accurately interpret the topic. At the same time, this paper uses double-line writing, which is compact and ingenious, and the description of characters is also very specific and delicate. It is a narrative with rich content, true emotion, simple language and rigorous writing.

Articles 7, 8 and 9:

Life is like a flower.

Nantong examinee

Life is like a flower, and everyone's life is like a flower in that garden, which will be thanked at the meeting.

However, who can say that it has never been beautiful or fragrant? Everyone is like a flower, tangible, colorful and fragrant.

You may be born on a cliff, or you may be born in a hundred flowers. You have to ask yourself how to let others know your beauty. You don't have to cry. Although your life begins on a cliff, no matter where you are born, there will be beauty, such as snow lotus in Tianshan Mountain and roses in flowers. Life is not like a flower, but you should know: I will work hard so that everyone who walks by me can see my beauty and everyone who stops can breathe deeply for my floral fragrance. ...

Occasionally go to the flower shop to buy flowers. The shopkeeper filled her transparent flower shop with all kinds of flowers with a faint fragrance. She asked me whether I should give it away or decorate it myself. I said keep it for myself, but I'm afraid the flowers will wither and lose their fragrance. The shopkeeper opened several boxes for me, which are also flowers with strong fragrance, but the flowers are dry and hard. "This is a dried flower. Put it at home. It looks good and smells good. No need to water. " . Finally, I bought some flowers.

I don't know, flowers are so beautiful, why do people change them into dried flowers from time to time? Is it for the fragrance? For beauty? Or for infinite life? On the other hand, we are worried about the shortness of life and always want to find something, leave something behind and make a permanent substitute. The reason must be that life is not beautiful and there is no effort when you are alive. Until the end of the day, I was extremely sad.

In that case, why don't we never give up and strive for self-improvement at the beginning of our lives? In our life, we create our own miracles. In this way, when you are about to leave, you won't cry because of regret. You will say, I used to be beautiful, until the end, I still never give up and strive for self-improvement. I believe that even if I die, I will still be as fragrant as flowers because of my past efforts.

Life is like a flower. While it is still there, let's try to live out the value of life. Like a flower, since I'm here, leave my beauty and my value here.

Life is like a flower, let's continue to work hard; Let our own life bloom beautifully.

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The topic of this paper is not big, and the topic is wide and narrow. It only discusses and lyrically expresses Life as a Flower. In this way, the theme of the article is single and concentrated, and it is easy to write deeply and vividly. Life is like a flower, we must work hard and never give up. The article firmly grasps this center to write, with strong pertinence and lyrical narration, and the two are naturally combined. The article adopts the method of "taking the spirit from the pen" and uses the sentence conception framework of "life is like a flower" at the beginning and end, closely following the theme expression, enhancing the charm of the article and shocking people. This is just like the near peak, the middle peak and the distant peak in landscape painting, which is not only the repetition of peaks, but also the extension of hierarchy and structure and the deepening of theme. This article is a masterpiece with profound meaning and rich literary talent. The patchwork of sentences is combined with exquisite and elegant language.

[Excellent Works Exhibition 2]

Treat life

Nantong examinee

"When the song of wine, life geometry. Such as morning dew, it is more bitter to go to Japan ... "Prime Minister Cao Hengyun wrote a poem lamenting that life is short. Lieyukou walks against the wind, detached and free; Zhuang Zhou is not afraid of worldly fatigue; Li Bai gained both fame and fortune, leaving an eternal story. On the other hand, people like Zhou Xing and Lai Junchen are greedy for money and lead a restless life. Wei Qing had made great contributions to Huo Qubing's resistance to Xiongnu, but he killed Li Guang for fame, and he himself died of depression. Be kind to people in life, but those who pursue fame and fortune by hook or by crook will have a bleak life.

Although everyone appreciates the philosophy of life that "life is precious, love is more expensive, and if it is free, both can be thrown away", life is a person's first wealth. Only the existence of life can make it possible to talk about others.

To be kind to life, we must make life meaningful. A person's existence should make people around him feel happy, and should not make others realize that he is only alive. When you make great contributions, people will respect you and long for your life. Your life is great because you are defending its dignity with your actions. And if you want to gain the envy of others through ill-gotten gains, it can only be spit on. The famous purple poppy is small and beautiful, but it is very toxic. Do you want it to accompany you all your life? Or do you wash your life with green tea like Lu and infect people around you? Without fame, life itself is wonderful and has a higher status in others' hearts; Not for profit, it is also an intangible wealth, which is more valuable than gold and silver. The nobility of life lies not in being strong, but in being kind to life. Money will not change the value of a person's life; Some people want to use money to cover up the shortcomings of life, but they don't know that this is really shattered glass, who is trapped in it like Grandet. This is true for those who take bribes and embezzle, and so is intrigue. Even if you have a million possessions and a prominent position, you can't change back a complete and wonderful life. Only indifferent to fame and fortune, self-cultivation and dedication can we get a complete and wonderful life.

Everyone knows that life is only once for everyone, but not everyone cares about what everyone knows. There are many people who are desperate to ignore safety issues. Are there fewer safety accidents on TV in newspapers now? People always talk about safety, but often they are still glad that they are extremely lucky and absolutely safe when disaster strikes. Once a disaster falls from the sky, only one person regrets it, and some people may have died before they can "hum". Life is like this, floating in the wind. With the death of life, how can we talk about the beauty of love and the preciousness of freedom? Without life, all wishes will become fantasies in dreams. Without life, the value and meaning of life is even more impossible to talk about. Therefore, we should be kind to life.

Be kind to life and make it meaningful. Be kind to life and cherish it.

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This paper talks about treating life well from the meaning of life, and the discussion angle is clear and concentrated. The author cited a large number of typical examples to assist the argument, and used comparative methods, which greatly enhanced the power of reasoning. This paper pays attention to the beauty of structure, has a sense of rhythm and a certain momentum. The author has a good command of language and can freely use various expressions and rhetorical devices. Prose is parallel and scattered, with uneven levels; The use of Huamao words, sound and rhyme harmony; The language is picturesque, vivid and beautiful.

[Excellent Works Exhibition 3]

Colour the small one.

Nantong examinee

In the journey of life, you are struggling to find the color of life. Looking back suddenly, you find that the answer is colorful.

-A little quote

Under the buttonwood tree in summer, a childish voice broke the silence. "Grandpa, grandpa, you say, what is life?" What color is that? Looking at the eager eyes of the child, grandpa thought for a moment and replied in a loving tone: "Life is purple, and there are all kinds of novelty in it. You will understand when you grow up. " The child nodded puzzled, but he was looking forward to growing up early.

As the sun sets, maple leaves are like fire, making the whole classroom red. The child became a student, and the student asked the teacher, the person he admired most, the same question. The teacher hesitated a little and said affectionately, "Life is red, like a candle, which brings light and warmth." Students carefully taste the teacher's words and feel that they contain profound teaching.

Snow-covered, endless. The wind whistled and blew up the snow outside the checkpoint, spilling it in succession. The soldiers stood at the window, still aching in their hearts. After studying hard at the cold window for ten years, two thirds of them fell into Sun Shan. In anguish, he asked the monitor a question that had been buried in his heart for a long time: "What color is life?" The monitor knew the soldier's heart and slowly replied, "Life is white, just like the snow in Tanggula. The wind can't disperse it, nor can the sun melt it. " The soldier listened to the monitor and lost in thought.

In spring and March, the grass grows and the warblers fly. Bing took his questions and comrades to the southwest. Until one day, the relentless artillery fire engulfed the young body and the dying soldier, but his mind was clear. The scenes of pursuing the color of life for 20 years seem to be in front of him. Suddenly, he understood that the true nature of life is not one, and different people will have different answers. Grandpa's answer pinned his nostalgia for his past life; The teacher's answer is a symbol of his dedication; The monitor's answer shows the strength and loyalty of the border guards.

The soldiers are all gone. He also found his own answer. His answer is green military uniform and evergreen cypress. He set up a monument for himself with his green answer.

A question, the answer is colorful, find your own one among the colorful answers!

-P.S.

Reveal the inside story of success

This article has profound meaning. The author firmly grasps the connotation of the topic, makes appropriate extension, expands rich imagination, and expounds a profound philosophy through the condensation of a unique "life journey". With the scenery as the background, the article is vivid and impressive. The article is cleverly conceived, and the "introduction" and "postscript" are both inside and outside the article; It is not only a summary of the content of the article, but also a sublimation of the theme of the article, which has moved some thoughts; The Color of Life closely connects different time and space like a red line, making paragraphs jump and run naturally. The language is fresh, euphemistic, simple, colorful and expressive, which shows that the author's language skills are also very deep.

The last article:

You are in my heart

In the intense study of junior high school, you, youth, quietly walked into my heart, let me really feel your figure fluttering in the wind, let me feel your vitality like the sunrise, and let me learn to cherish you in my junior high school life.

In my heart, you always help me remember those beautiful dreams. In the sound of Lang Lang's book, you helped me remember the endless knowledge and let me swim in the ocean of knowledge. When I was playing with my classmates, you helped me paint a clear picture and let me remember this wonderful time forever.

You are in my heart, and I feel your flower-like life with that calm heart, beautiful but easy to wither. If you don't take care of it, it may disappear before it becomes beautiful. Feel your footsteps like the wind, coming and going in a hurry. Now sitting in the examination room, I feel the deepest, because I find myself missing too much. I feel your figure is like rain, hazy but affectionate. If I don't catch you, it will turn into tears and break in my heart.

You are in my heart, I admire you wholeheartedly, even if you encounter setbacks, you will still have a firm and persistent dream; You are like a thick book, which can be filled with happiness or loneliness. You are like a steep mountain. Let me know that only climbing can range rover, and struggle can succeed; But your steps will never stop because of me. You are the most beautiful scenery in my junior high school life, beautiful and spectacular, recording my joys and sorrows. Catch you, cherish you, and let you walk into my heart; Having you and praising you, I seem to have the vitality of sunrise.

You are in my heart, let me appreciate your melody that doesn't stop because of wind and rain, and let me cherish your footsteps that don't stop because of waiting. I realize that struggle is your essence, and your value is brilliant because of struggle; Sweat is your nutrition, and your life is enriched by soaking in sweat; Tears are your solvent, and you have created a strong body because of the baptism of tears.

You are in my heart, giving me the courage to seize you and cherish your heart. Your presence in my heart has enriched my junior high school life and my knowledge. Thank you-youth, I will always remember you in my heart.

comment

Writing in the examination room must first be related to the topic. This paper is close to the center, with novel materials, and expresses my feelings about youth. High-spirited style, fresh feeling after reading and beautiful sunshine should be valuable in junior high school students' exercises.