Incomplete or redundant sentence elements 1
I. Incomplete components
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A sentence must have a complete structure if it wants to express its complete meaning. Incomplete structure, unclear meaning will appear? Incomplete ingredients? problem ? Incomplete ingredients? There are mainly the following types:
(A) the lack of subject
In the following specific cases, the subject is incomplete:
1, abuse of prepositions leads to incomplete subject.
Abuse of prepositions is common at the beginning of sentences? At, when, from, for, for? One is to delete prepositions and locative words related to prepositions, the other is to keep prepositional phrases as adverbials and add appropriate words as subjects.
In this film, 1 depicts a typical female intellectual.
Analyze and delete? In the middle? .
After this conversation, it inspired me a lot.
Analyze and delete? After that? .
What do you think of us after observing the trial of the rural management contract law? Village official? The legal level has been greatly improved. (2004 Qinghai Volume)
Analyze prepositions? Right? The use of of makes this sentence have no subject. Remove it. we? Is the subject.
Due to its uniqueness, A glimpse of China's ancient literature has been widely circulated and enduring for nearly 300 years since its publication, and it is still a valuable anthology.
Analyze this sentence? Because? The existence of makes the whole sentence have no subject, and it is complete without it.
All the above are prepositions with subjects, so we should delete prepositions and corresponding words to expose the subject. This phenomenon is more common in sick sentences.
2. The incompleteness caused by secretly changing the topic.
Zhou wenbin, a talented scholar in the south of the Yangtze River, dressed as a woman in "The Tiger King Snatches Parents", was taken home by the Tiger King and sent to his sister Wang Xiuying's room.
The subject of the first sentence is zhou wenbin, and the subject of the second sentence is Wang Tiger. Release? Add before the word? Tiger king? .
Example 865438+1 October1,with the idea of learning from liberal arts classes, our blackboard newspaper was also founded.
Is the subject of the previous sentence analyzed? we? What is the subject behind it? Blackboard? The last sentence can be changed to? We also started the blackboard newspaper? .
It's a pity that this masterpiece has been brewing in his mind for a long time and left us prematurely before it was finished. (200 1 spring college entrance examination questions)
Analysis? Leave us too early? The subject of can only be? Him? , and not in the province? Masterpiece? This sentence lacks a subject? Him? . )
Example 10 The story of Ren Changxia, the female police chief, strongly shocked the readers' heartstrings and was deeply educated unconsciously.
Analysis? Unconsciously? Qianjia? Readers? (the original sentence has become a complex sentence) or? Be a reader? The structure is complete and the meaning is clear.
3. The long attributive of the subject is incomplete.
1 1 On the first day of repetition, in Chinese class, a man with glasses and a few wrinkles on his forehead, about forty years old, came into the classroom with a smile.
Analysis? Forty? Add it to the back? Teacher? Or? People? .
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1. Why has this phenomenon of wasting talents not attracted the attention of relevant departments so far?
From the above obvious facts, what they did is beyond reproach.
3. Observed the trial of rural management contract law, what about us? Village official? The legal level has been greatly improved. (2004 Qinghai Volume)
4. Lao Chen said seriously and sincerely: To tell the truth, the younger those people are, the more eager they are to admit that they are old when they are old. ? (Hubei Volume in 2005)
5. In this work, there are not many positive inspirations for people; On the contrary, some of these plots have many negative effects. (Zhejiang Volume, 2005)
(due to the wrong use of prepositions? For what? Causes the theme to be incomplete and should be deleted? For what? , manufacturing? Phenomenon? Make a theme. )
(Missing theme, delete? Where did it come from? )
(preposition? Right? The use of of makes this sentence have no subject. Remove it. we? Is the subject. )
(lack of subject, should be in? The younger people are, the more passionate they are. Add it to the back? People? . )
The abuse of prepositions makes the subject incomplete. Are you online? And then what? Medium? Remove, let? This work? Make a theme. )
(B) the lack of predicates
Generally speaking, a sentence consists of two parts: subject and predicate. In contrast, predicates are more important because they state the subject. If there is no predicate, you can't figure out what the subject is talking about.
? Incomplete predicate? There are mainly the following situations:
1, improper omission lost the predicate, resulting in incompleteness.
Recently, 15 carried out a comprehensive quality inspection activity, including a series of work such as establishing and strengthening the technical management system.
Analysis should be in? Establish? Add a predicate in front? Is it finished? (finish the work).
Example 17 this column rearranges, combines, retouches and recreates the programs of song and dance, folk customs, culture and entertainment, sports activities and so on selected by local TV stations. (National Volume 2002)
This is a sentence, not a sentence. Original sentence? Will. Obviously an idea? How's it going? , belongs to the behavior; Behind? Re-create? What do you mean? What is this? , which belongs to the result. ? This column? After adding? what's up The sentence is complete and fluent, right? This column is re-creation? .
2. Misuse prepositional phrases as predicates.
Preposition phrases can only be used to modify, limit or supplement verbs and adjectives, that is, as adverbials or complements. A few prepositional phrases can be used as attributes, but not as predicates. For example:
After a winter's hard work, the river finally became clear.
Analysis? we? How did we work hard all winter? . ? After a hard winter's work? This is a prepositional phrase.
One day, Zhu Kezhong, a cook of the artillery company, was on his way to the artillery position when suddenly a man dressed as a pig picker came up to him.
Changing the subject of the statement in the process of analysis will lead to incomplete predicates. This sentence was originally meant for Zhu Kezhong, but suddenly it was meant for another person. Are you online? Suddenly? Make up later? Did you find it? Or? Do you see it? Do it.
(C) the lack of objects
Object is the joint component of verb predicate, indicating the object or result of action. Is it used after the verb to answer? Who is it? Or? What? This kind of problem. If the object is incomplete, there will be no object in the action, no result in the action, and the meaning will be unclear. Transitive verbs must take an object, such as? Solve, develop, develop, adopt, expand, improve, grasp and implement? Wait a minute.
? Incomplete object? There are mainly the following situations:
1, use transitive verbs as intransitive verbs.
If this digestive system works normally, people's nutritional status will be good.
Analysis? Continue? Is this a transitive verb? Working normally? .
Teacher Wang was rated as an advanced worker in our school.
Add after analysis? The title of? .
The county government promotes scientific farming throughout the county.
Add after analysis? Experience? .
They cherish the motherland and the world, vigorously carry forward the courage to fight, and finally win the championship.
Analysis should be in? Dare to fight? After adding? The spirit of? .
2. The sentence is a bit long, ignoring the echo with the front and back components, resulting in incomplete objects.
The Party Committee of our school discussed mobilizing all teachers and students to carry out patriotic health campaign.
Add after analysis? Question? .
In the mid-1990s, the factory introduced the internationally advanced Japanese 50-bell N-series light trucks, becoming the first joint venture manufacturer in China to produce 50-bell N-series light trucks.
Analysis? Introduction? Where's the object? In the first film? Light truck? Should be added at the end? Production technology? .
According to the Disciplinary Regulations, it was decided to give the player the qualification to stop participating in all the remaining first-class teams in this year and impose a fine of RMB 40,000. (2004 Qinghai Volume)
Analysis? Pay? What? There's something behind it, but it's obviously not? Pay? Yes, it's just an attribute of an object. Where should it be? 40 thousand yuan? After adding? Punishment? . This sentence lacks an object.
In order to fully popularize the use of rapeseed cake or cottonseed cake to feed pigs and accelerate the development of pig industry, the county held three technical training courses for breeding pigs. (1997 college entrance examination questions)
Incomplete analysis object. Is it suitable? Feed the pigs? Add it later? Technology? Or? Experience? . At the same time? Technical training course for breeders? Change the statement to inappropriate. Training course on feeding technology? .
What is displayed in the park is a symbol of the soaring of the Chinese nation? Loong? Ice sculptures and other works of art are also based on fairy tales and myths such as The Journey to the West and The Daughter of the Sea. (200 1 spring issue)
Analysis? There are also? Should the object be? Ice sculpture art? ,? Based on The Journey to the West's Daughter of the Sea and other fairy tales? Can only be used as an attribute of an object.
(4) Lack of others
1, head language is incomplete
In the end, regardless of the actual situation in the forest area, one-sided emphasis on grain production can only outweigh the benefits.
The analysis attribute is missing the title language. Production? After adding? Clinic? , or delete? That kind? , let? Regardless of output? Make a theme.
Some children's literature emphasizes education and rationality, and injects too much adult thoughts, while ignoring children's love for games, knowledge, interests and fantasies.
Analyze and delete? In nature? . ? Is it? Add before the word? Natural? , or in? Is it? Add before the word? The characteristics of? .
This preposition is incomplete.
Example 3 1 He has inexplicable regrets and inexplicable guilt. How could he part ways with his friends who shared the trouble together?
Analysis? And then what? Add another word after the word? With what? Words.
In the 47th World Table Tennis Men's Team Competition, which ended in Doha on March 7th, 2004, China men's table tennis team won the swaythling cup championship for the fourth time.
Analysis in? Qatar? Preposition? Yu? .
Russia has also carried out some reforms, such as prohibiting government officials from using imported cars, promoting the commercialization of housing, and streamlining large state-owned enterprises including power companies and railway companies. (2002 college entrance examination questions)
Analysis of lack of sum? Including? Corresponding words? Including? .
3. The related words are incomplete
Although he has never been to school and loves to study, he can write articles now.
Analysis? Love learning? Qianjia? But? .
Our cadres only have excellent ideological style and the masses unite around them.
Analysis? The masses? After adding? Only? .
This academic conference has gained a lot and the time is not long.
The analysis of related words is incomplete. Should be there? Time? Qianjia? Although? This word.
Second, the composition is redundant.
The sentence structure is complete and the sentence meaning is clear. If there are more words, there will be redundant repetition.
? Extra ingredients? There are the following situations:
(A) the subject is redundant
Generally speaking, sentences are long, and after the previous subject finishes, there is a long and complicated adverbial. The author may forget the last topic, and then go on and start again. Another topic will make this topic redundant. In a sentence with redundant subjects, two subjects refer to the same thing.
Generally speaking, we will listen carefully in class and observe classroom discipline.
Analyze and delete the last one? we? .
Our revolutionary ancestors, for the benefit of the people, in order to carry out the revolution to the end, these revolutionary soldiers shed their blood and sacrificed their precious lives.
Analyze and delete? These revolutionary fighters? .
Redundant predicate
Some sentences already have a verb as the predicate, and adding another verb will make the predicate redundant.
The materials you sent have been handed over to the printing room and are being printed.
Analyze and delete? Continue? .
In accordance with democratic procedures, they elected the village head they trusted to take charge of the village administration.
Analysis? Responsible? With what? Master management? If the contents overlap, delete one.
No matter the style, quality or packaging, Xuelian brand shirts are first-class in China.
Analysis? Is it okay? Ben. what's up Meaning, use it again in front? what's up , repeat.
Third, the object is redundant.
In some sentences, the predicate has an appropriate object and an extra object is added after it.
In fact, this is an overly worrying idea.
Analyze and delete? Ideas? ,? Worried? Namely. Ideas? .
Unconsciously, we walked about 10 miles.
Analyze and delete? Distance? .
Fourth, the additional words are redundant.
Over the past year or so, women's work has laid a considerable foundation and gained rich work experience.
After analyzing the last two? Work? Delete and duplicate the object.
For more than four years, he insisted on exercising for forty minutes every morning.
Analysis of attributes is redundant? So far? Delete.
In order to reduce unnecessary waste, the school decided to implement the financial capital placement system.
Analysis? No need? It is dispensable and should be deleted.
Fifth, function words are redundant.
1 1 The almond trees in the south of the village have long been cut down.
Analysis auxiliary words? By who? redundant
Example 12 I didn't do well in the exam this time because I didn't carefully examine the questions according to the teacher's requirements.
It's redundant to analyze the topic? Why? And after that? Because? Duplicate because of deletion? Why? Or? Because? .
Incomplete or redundant components in sick sentences 2
1. Why has this phenomenon of wasting talents not attracted the attention of relevant departments so far?
From the above obvious facts, what they did is beyond reproach.
3. Observed the trial of rural management contract law, what about us? Village official? The legal level has been greatly improved. (Qinghai Volume)
4. Lao Chen said seriously and sincerely: To tell the truth, the younger those people are, the more eager they are to admit that they are old when they are old. ? (Hubei Volume)
5. In this work, there are not many positive inspirations for people; On the contrary, some of these plots have many negative effects.
6. The famous singer Song Zu Ying visited CCTV and told people how she overcame difficulties when she was young, how she made progress when she was young, and how she climbed the peak of singing art step by step.
7. Sa Beining, who was very interested in performing in college, said that he attended many parties during the holiday, but this poetry meeting was different, which was a challenge and a pleasure for himself.
8. Notebook computer has fully demonstrated its characteristics of quickness, stability and convenience, and has become an important tool for news reporting of various sports events.
9. In view of the rising international crude oil prices, the United States, India and other countries have increased their oil reserves, and China should also establish a national strategic oil reserve system as soon as possible.
10. At present, it seems that people are still indifferent to architectural criticism, whether in the domestic architectural circles, or in the general intellectual class and the public. Architectural art has not formed a positive and healthy critical atmosphere like other arts.
1 1, September 16, 2004, the anti-terrorism on-the-spot work conference held in Beijing's Lufthansa Shopping Mall first proposed that large and medium-sized shopping malls and general supermarkets with business areas of more than 5,000 square meters and more than 3,000 square meters must have emergency plans for terrorist attacks, explosions and other emergencies.
12. By studying the 14th Party Congress, we have a certain understanding of the market economy. The key now is to dare to practice and try.
13. Due to the different tax rates in the euro zone countries, the price difference of the same commodity in different countries.
14. I watched "The Dead Visit the Living" created and performed by the Central Experimental Theatre, which strengthened my confidence in drama innovation.
15. In today's emphasis on quality education, it is not appropriate to pursue the exam-oriented effect out of students' reality.
16, focusing on the increasingly serious commercialization and star-like trend of sports competitions, has had a certain impact on this Universiade.
17. There are many reasons for the decline in the number of ducks in He Lixia, Jiangsu Province, among which the most important reason is the shrinking stocking area.
18, if any process of building foundation engineering goes wrong, the foundation of high-rise building will be unstable and even in danger of collapse.
19. The enactment of the Anti-Secession Law conforms to public opinion, which shows that the people of the whole country, including 23 million compatriots in Taiwan Province Province, safeguard national sovereignty and territorial integrity and oppose the secession of Taiwan Province Province from China.
On the afternoon of March 29th, a Boeing plane carrying a Kuomintang delegation landed at Nanjing Lukou Airport. When Jiang Bingkun led a delegation to the VIP room, it immediately became the focus of everyone's pursuit.
2 1, the Ministry of construction has drawn up? Fifteen? During this period, China will build 2 billion square meters of houses, and the per capita living area of China will reach 15 square meters.
22. The knowledge economy revolution supported by network technology has greatly changed people's production and lifestyle and accelerated social civilization.
23. Not long ago, these two papers were highly valued and highly praised at the Eighth Laser Academic Conference held in Canada, with more than 400 scientists from 20 countries participating.
24. After the continuous bombing by the United States, the Taliban organization in Afghanistan has basically disintegrated.
25, in order to summarize the development? Research study? Experience, Sharla Cheung day and night to write a summary report, finally, before the seminar.
26. When I went outside, I couldn't help shivering because of the cold wind blowing on my face, and my mind was much clearer.
27. Did you pass this time? Set an example and promote backwardness? The selection activities have inspired many self-employed individuals to make progress and do business in a civilized way.
From the first day he came to school, he made up his mind to learn cultural knowledge well.
29. After a period of hard work, the teacher finally improved the exam results of a classmate with unsatisfactory academic performance.
30. The business sector actively responded to the government's call to publicize and educate the importance of selling products to the masses in a big way.
answer
1, due to the wrong preposition? For what? Causes the theme to be incomplete and should be deleted? For what? , manufacturing? Phenomenon? Make a theme.
2. The theme is missing. Delete it? Where did it come from?
3. Prepositions? Right? The use of of makes this sentence have no subject. Remove it. we? Is the subject.
4. lack of subject, should be in? The younger people are, the more passionate they are. Add it to the back? People? .
5. Abuse of prepositions makes the subject incomplete. Are you online? And then what? Medium? Remove, let? This work? Make a theme.
6, the composition is incomplete, tell? The object is missing. Can you add it at the end of the sentence? Experience? .
7. Lack of predicate can be used in? But? With what? This poetry meeting? Add between? Attend? Two words.
8. Missing object, change to? The advantage of convenient display? .
9. change to? For the situation? .
10, missing object, in? Indifference? After adding? Attitude? .
1 1、? Objection? Missing predicate before? Establish? .
12, missing subject, delete? Pass? .
13, delete? Because? .
14, remove? Manufacturing? .
15、? Effect? After adding? Clinic? .
16, remove? Around? .
17, duck? After adding? Feeding amount? .
18、? Even? After adding? what's up
19、? Reflection? Missing object prefix, should be in? Get out? After adding? Will. .
20. The subject of the last sentence is incomplete. Immediately? You added a subject before? Him? Or? Visiting group? .
2 1、? Draw the missing object.
22、? Accelerate? Missing object.
23.？ Pay? The subject of is incomplete.
24. The theme is incomplete. Delete it? After that? .
25. The composition is incomplete. ? Timely? Qianjia? Report? .
26. The composition is incomplete. ? Cold wind? After adding? Let me? .
27, lack of subject, remove? Pass? .
28. Delete? From where? .
29. where is it One? Qianjia? Manufacturing? .
30、? Sell? Qianjia? Is that clear? .