First, the total score structure

The relationship between all levels of the article is general statement and individual statement. There are three basic forms of this relationship: 1. Summarize first and then divide. At the beginning, the article summarizes the overall appearance, basic characteristics or central point of view of the event to be described; Here are thousands of examples to describe in detail or put forward arguments from different angles to elaborate. 2. Divide first and then combine; 3. Always say first, then divide, and then say forever.

No matter which form is adopted, it should be noted that there must be a close internal relationship between the subsection and the general section. The subsection should be developed around the center of the general section, and the general section should be a general outline or natural generalization of the subsection.

[Model essay] (2000 questions "The answers are colorful")

Life is like the wind.

Wind, rain, thunder and electricity, I prefer the wind.

Love the wind, because it comes and goes without a trace; Love the wind, because it is warm, warm, chic and violent.

Someone asked me, "What kind of wind do you like best in the four seasons?" For me, how can the answer to this question be unique? Spring, summer, autumn and winter, the wind in each season has a realm of life.

Spring breeze is so gentle, just like a baby's little hand, caressing your face. She silently brought the fragrance of plums and the green leaves in spring. "Blowing your face without chilling willow", not cold is fake, there is always a slight cold, right? It is this slight chill that makes people unable to sleep on this sunny spring day, forgetting that "a year's plan lies in spring". Oh, spring breeze, you brushed away the chill of winter and brought vitality. How can I not love such a beautiful spring breeze?

The bright and vivid colors in summer make the summer wind warm. This warm Xia Feng makes people feel open-minded, and it also reminds people of surfing on the distant seashore, wanting to sing on steep peaks, and wanting to ride the wind and break the moon on a clear summer night. My friend, close your eyes and feel the fresh gift from Xia Feng quietly!

"When a leaf falls, you know the autumn of the world." When the leaves fall, the autumn wind comes early. "Autumn wind and autumn rain worry people", which shows that the autumn wind is not unknown to people, and it boldly blew through Du Fu's hut. How can it not be annoying? But in any case, I love the autumn wind, and I just love the kind of bleak that hurts people and people avoid it. To me, bleak is actually a unique pod of life. I like to watch the autumn wind blow off dead leaves in the autumn dusk and feel the homesickness of falling leaves. I also like to walk alone in the quiet autumn night and breathe the cool air freely. Let the autumn wind sweep away my fatigue and restore my original peace. It's rare to relax during the day, but this silent night and autumn wind make my mind suddenly enlightened. I love autumn wind!

I used to worry about the winter wind, that the biting winter wind would brutally kill all the green of life, and that the fierce winter wind would mercilessly blow out the lamp that germinated life. But now I know that this kind of worry is unnecessary, and Dong Feng is just doing his due duty. Imagine, if it has not been tested by the biting and fierce winter wind, if it has not been baptized by winter, how can a vibrant spring breeze be born?

The winds of the four seasons have given me too many feelings about life: the spring breeze brings me hope for life; Mr. Xia told me the beauty of life; Autumn wind taught me to be calm; The winter wind urges me to fight hard. So, to ask me what kind of wind I like best, I have four answers, which is my favorite. It is because of the wind of the four seasons that I understand the truth of life and get a lot of inspiration from it.

Life is like the wind, I love life! I like the wind!

[structural review]

Total one point and one total: the structure is clear, showing the total one point and one total. At first, I always wrote "I" prefer the type of wind. The main part writes the warmth of spring breeze, the warmth of Xia Feng, the chic of autumn wind and the fury of winter wind in turn, and the ending is always full of words.

Second, parallel structure.

It is a structural writing method that describes events and things in parallel from several aspects, regardless of primary or secondary, or demonstrates the central argument at several parallel levels. It is characterized by dividing events, things or topics into several aspects to describe, explain and discuss, and each part is an independent and complete part, which is in parallel with other parts.

Note: 1. The content of juxtaposition is independent, closely surrounding a center. 2. Parallel parts must be parallel, and all aspects should be prevented from crossing or subordinating.

Subtitle structure is also one of them, and the college entrance examination is often excellent.

[Model essay] (2003 topic "Emotional closeness and cognition of things")

Give feelings a ruler.

Whenever, the moonlight will shed bright colors on the earth, no matter how high or low; Wherever it is, dandelion will scatter its seeds to the earth, whether it is barren or fertile; Angels in white, in the SARS ward, planted a "love" tree in everyone's heart, whether it is an enemy or a friend; Then, should we also give our hearts and feelings a ruler, and don't let the closeness of feelings confuse your conscience and mine?

(1) Give emotion a ruler and reason a way;

Life has given us countless intersections, so let's choose with our heart. When facing the judgment of closeness, we should give ourselves a ruler and tell ourselves to make a choice based on justice. It's time to give feelings a ruler. Don't let kindness stop our long journey of understanding and transforming the world. Let rational feelings accompany your life for a long time, which will make your heart easier and make the world better.

What made Emperor Taizong sever his intimate relationship and let the wind of Erhai Lake, the curtain of Uighur and the snowstorm blow into a national unity!

What made Galileo not take the old theory as the key link and let the footsteps of truth step into the history of human civilization!

What kept Beethoven from becoming a slave to traditionalists and created the ninth symphony full of life pride!

It is the yardstick of feelings, allowing people to move forward without affection; It makes people no longer feel far and near, and makes people rush to know the truth; It is it that allows us to give reason a way, wisdom a way and civilization an eternity!

(2) Give feelings a ruler to revitalize the nation;

Lin Zexu added a ruler to his feelings and launched a patriotic ideological movement under the ideological background of "middle school as the body and western learning for use", which made the Chinese nation's cognition go global; Deng Xiaoping gave a ruler to feelings and put forward a new idea of reunifying the motherland in the great concept of "one country, two systems", which made the development of China society choose rationality; In the war, mothers gave their feelings a ruler, and resolutely sacrificed their children's lives for the victory of the whole nation, so that the suffering nation could rise under the power of blood!

Now! Angels in white, fighting in the front line of fighting against SARS, also gave his heart a ruler. This ruler needs not only dedication and rationality, but also wisdom and courage, courage to make a commitment to life and death, a sense of justice and compassion. They not only gave their rationality a way out, but also gave a perfect display of the national spirit. They sent the same love to every patient regardless of their feelings!

Eyes can forget the ruler of feelings.

Dandelion can also forget this ruler.

But don't forget to measure your heart with an emotional ruler, because the rejuvenation of the Chinese nation requires you to open up a successful road with rational thinking!

[structural review]

The text is divided into two parts, namely subheading (1) and (2). The full text is seamless.

[Model essay] (200 1 Title "Honesty")

Five bright hearts

Story a

In the storm, three old people huddled in an umbrella, pale with cold. Although they sat under the eaves, the rain kept hitting their faces and bodies. At this time, their clothes were soaked.

However, they don't care about themselves. Three pairs of eyes are staring at the square in front, where two bicycles are parked and they are wearing their only raincoats. The owner hasn't come to pick up the car. "May be trapped by the rain?" They said, but no one wants to go first. The cold wind blew in waves, and it rained again and again. However, none of them got up, and three pairs of eyes were still staring at two bicycles not far away.

Are they only a few cents?

Story b

He sat in front of the TV with two lottery tickets in his hand. He bought this this afternoon, but one of them was for their section chief. He has marked it.

It's time for the lottery. He looked at the lottery ticket in his hand with rapt attention: "One digit, two digits, three digits … Ah, none is bad!" " "However, for an instant, he was silent again, because the winner was the one marked.

He lowered his head and covered his face deeply with his hands. He thought of his home: his wife was laid off, his son was in the third year of high school, and his life was not affluent, which could even be described as poverty; He remembered the section chief again, and their home was magnificent; He also thought about how he would spend it if he had money. ...

However, in the end, he picked up the lottery ticket and walked out of the house firmly. ...

Story C.

At the wholesale station, he skillfully parked his motorcycle and entered the gate.

Before coming to the wine bar, he smiled at the smiling face of the wholesaler: "As usual, bring me a batch of goods." The wholesaler still smiled: "I'm not talking about you, Lao Li. The last shipment was snapped up as soon as it arrived. I specially left some for you, you don't want it. " Well, just some water. What are you afraid of? Now I have a new batch here. Do you want it? "

"Thank you, I still don't want it." His voice is small but firm. The wholesaler shook his head and looked helpless.

Three stories and five sincere hearts are not touched, but true feelings. Isn't that what people live for?

Third, demonstrate the statement formula

Narrative structure of argumentative writing is a common structural mode. Articles often put forward the central argument at the beginning, and then demonstrate the central argument from different angles in the form of sub-arguments. This structural formula is clear and clear.

[Model essay] (200 1 year)

If you die, you can't lose your integrity.

Life is long and full of temptations. As a small and lonely individual, people will inevitably wander before the multiple-choice questions in life. On one ferry after another, in one danger after another, what can people choose and what should they choose?

Choose honesty. Because it is more reliable than beauty. A life without beauty may be a life without enough sparkle; But a life without integrity is a life without a glimmer of light. You may not be Pan An or Shi, but you must not lose the most basic trust of others. "People, based on sincerity, take faith as the sky." Without honesty, do you want to be a dust suspended in the world?

Choose honesty. Because it is not so much clever as foolhardy. Honesty is like a country boy, who bows his dark and broad back every day and works silently on the fertile soil of life; Smart is more like a computer hacker. He is always so witty and flexible, but he is always nervous about not revealing the truth. In the script of life, an honest and practical actor is always more popular with the audience than a treacherous and eccentric character.

Choose honesty. Because it has more meaning than money. Holding the banner of "money makes the mare go", life is doomed to be a hard and boring life, and the smell of copper will eventually bring nothing but a cold grave piled up with money; Honesty can polish the foundation of life, make life tall and full, inject intoxicating colors and rich connotations into life, and make life full of attention from beginning to end.

Choose honesty. Because it is more timely than honor. There is no one-time performance, and there is no fixed country. No one can live with the aura of honor all his life. Honor is short-lived, it is only a small piece of beautiful scenery on the journey of life, and no matter how beautiful it is, it is only a short life; But honesty is the seed to cultivate the beautiful scenery of life. If you keep working hard, you will always be beautiful. If you sow the seeds of honesty all over the earth, your life will be beautiful forever.

Choosing honesty is the right choice. When you weigh them one by one and sift through them layer by layer, you will suddenly find that the most fascinating thing under the veil of life is the least pretentious and unpretentious frankness! You will find that life is so dull without honesty! In the baptism of life and wind and waves, with honesty, you can sing in the most sunny mood. To die and live, integrity can't be lost!

[structural review]

The narrative structure is based on sub-arguments, honesty and beauty, money and honor are contrasted and reasoned one by one, and the levels are orderly.

Fourth, the control type

The structural form is one positive and one negative, one yin and one yang, one reality and one deficiency, and the contents are true and false, good and bad, beautiful and ugly, good and evil, or the structural form of commenting, expressing feelings and remembering people by comparing other counterparties.

The ancient Greek philosopher Heraclitus said, "Mutually exclusive things are combined, and different tones create the most beautiful harmony." This is the advantage of contrast. Pay attention to this structure: 1. The contrast must be clear and strong, and the characteristics of things are clearly highlighted through the contrast of right and wrong, merits and demerits, and honor and disgrace. 2. The author's praise, criticism, love, hate and hatred are permeated between the lines.

[Model essay] (2002 title "The Choice of Mind")

On the fork in the road of the mind

You can't control others, but you can control yourself;

You can't control the weather, but you can change your mood;

You can't choose your appearance, but you can choose your heart.

A person goes all the way down, I don't know how many forks in the road to go, how many painful choices to go through, and how many times not to participate in the struggle of the soul. However, it is often that short moment, sometimes it helps you, sometimes it destroys you, and your journey also determines its light and darkness at that moment.

When the train entered the mountainous area, an escaped prisoner was preparing to jump. At this time, a child at the back of the train was stabbed in the eye by a falling bottle. There are no passengers in this carriage, but the shouts of the police are approaching. The escaped prisoner is in a dilemma. After a painful struggle, he resolutely picked up the child and ran to the front of the car. The child was saved. The policeman told him, "You saved the child and yourself, because the place where you just jumped was an abyss."

The choice of mind requires great courage, and it will often sublimate your soul.

There was a guest in a small country hotel. He was very generous and had an extraordinary conversation. The boss's wife and daughter are unkind and want to take the rich businessman's money for themselves, so they rack their brains; Chose the most vicious method: poison him! Later, they succeeded. Just as the mother and daughter were immersed in the ecstasy of money, the veil on the man's face was blown off by the wind. It turned out that it was their son and brother, who never came back after traveling many years ago. The next day, the boy who wanted to show his identity and surprise the mother and daughter died.

The choice of mind needs to be weighed by the balance of mind, and any big deviation and mistake will leave indelible stains and scars on your mind.

On the fork road of the mind, maybe we treat people honestly and without any precautions, but others have already set up barriers. It doesn't matter. As long as we choose the road that is worthy of my heart, then we will feel our greatness!

On the fork road of the mind, maybe we inadvertently find ourselves going the wrong way, so we turn back immediately. God shaped people, gave them the opportunity to make mistakes, and chose a new way to go, otherwise you will sink deeper and deeper in the darkness and let the darkness mercilessly swallow you up.

Without the depth of the blue sky, you can choose the elegance of white clouds;

Without the vastness of the sea, you can choose the elegance of the stream;

Without the agility of an eagle, you can choose the carefree of a bird;

Without the fragrance of yuan leaves, you can choose green grass.

The choice of soul may not be the greatest, but it is the most real. Let's wash our hearts in repeated choices and let the eternal light shine on them!

[structural review]

The main part lists two contrasting stories, and the theme of the article stands out in the comparison. The language at the beginning and end is wonderful.

[Model essay ](2002)

Spiritual choice of mountaineers

There is a mountain, towering into the sky, difficult for birds to cross, and its tens of millions of meters are unknown. Climbing the mountain to see the world, there are two roads before and after the mountain. The stone steps of Qian Shan Road are paved, straight and open; The back mountain path is full of hazel trees and twists and turns.

One day, father and son went to the foot of the mountain. Father raised his hand to shade the sun and looked at the mountain peak, with a voice like Hong Zhong: "You two race to climb this mountain;" There are two roads up the mountain, the main road is near and the small road is dangerous-choose the road yourself. " After careful consideration, the two brothers embarked on their own journey of choice.

Two months later, a figure in a suit and tie appeared on the summit, and my brother came. His face is moist and slightly fat, and his eyes are shining under his shiny forehead. He smoothed his stiff sleeves with great energy, went to the prospective father and cleared his throat majestically and said, "I won, I won!" This road is really busy. On the open road, I just need to move forward, move forward! The gentle slope makes me calm, and the flat stone makes me relaxed and happy. There is no fork injury here, and there is more shade for me to shade. My mind didn't deceive me. It was a wise choice and helped me win. Practice has proved that only a fool will give up flatness and choose firmness between flatness and firmness. What a proud journey I have completed with my clever choice. I won, I should win! "

The father looked at him kindly: "You made a wise choice, and the scenery along the way was very good-my good son ..."

I don't know how long it took after this, but another figure appeared: his pace was steady and his whole body showed endless vitality; Although black and thin, ragged, but bright eyes, reflecting the brilliance of youth. The younger brother smiled and went to his father and brother, telling the story on the road unhurriedly: "Oh, what a meaningful journey! Thank you, Father, for giving me a choice. Along the way, steep cliffs blocked my climbing steps, and clusters of thorns pierced my bare arms, adding loneliness and bitterness to my tired body and mind. But I persisted, and finally I learned to be flexible and selective, agile and self-protective, independent and persistent. Occasionally there will be beautiful scenery on the roadside, so I will slow down. At the foot of the mountain, I saw flowers in full bloom and butterflies flying, so I sang with flowers and danced with butterflies. On the mountainside, I saw green grass, Hua Mu as the cover, a clear stream flowing quietly in the forest, and birds worshiping and singing at the top of the forest. I embrace natural chords and chase cheerful waves. These are often my happiest times. But when it was surrounded by cold fog, it was blocked by thorns and thorns. Looking around, yellow leaves are all over the sky and rotten grass is all over the road, but I see rich fruits in the yellow leaves and feel the hope of new life from the rotten grass. Surrounded by bleak pressure, I feel that I have matured inch by inch. Further up, there are cold winds and lifeless pebbles. I wanted to give up, but suffering once warmed me, enlightened me, gave me strength and confidence, made me forget the dead silence more dangerous than suffering, and threw away the confusion more painful than pain! I finally came! I saw the spring scenery in the mountains all the way, and I also tasted the warmth and coldness of the journey. For this, I thank you, Father, for giving me the best choice. I learned a lot from my spiritual choice ... "

My brother's eyes were puzzled, but they disappeared immediately. He said proudly, "But you lost!" "

"Yes," the father said regretfully, "Son, you lost the game ..."

The younger brother looked at the distance with a peaceful smile on his face: "But I won my life!" " "

Verb (abbreviation for verb) question setting structure

One of the commonly used construction methods in this paper. The relationship between the front and back parts of the text is the relationship between questions and answers. Its advantage is that it sets questions at the beginning, introduces attention, and the article revolves around the questions, with clear thinking and clear context.

Pay attention to: 1 when using the question structure. The main part should focus on the problem and not digress. 2. Answering questions must use vivid narration, concrete explanation and eloquent exposition, and cannot be simplified into exposition.

[Model essay ](2000)

What is childhood?

Time the old man came to the world on the orders of the jade emperor to collect the answer to "what is childhood?"

The first thing I was asked was a little boy patting the ball. He touched the back of his head and replied in a childish voice, "childhood is a ball." I always bounce like this ball. I'm always happy. My childhood was a ball, round and never bothered. " Time old man nodded thoughtfully: childhood is a ball, giving out happy laughter and making naive fantasies; Every time I land and jump, I don't hesitate. I have a positive attitude. Everyone pats the ball out of childhood, out of innocence. "Keep shooting!" The old man touched the child's head and aimed his eyes at the female classmate who endorsed on the opposite grass.

"Sorry, girl," the old man stepped forward. "What are you looking at?" "Back to history, the college entrance examination is coming soon." "You have passed through childhood. What do you think childhood is? " "Childhood?" "The girl couldn't help smiling at the corners of her mouth." Childhood is mulberry fruit, purple dream, purple temptation, which makes people memorable; Childhood is a bow, which makes me innocent; Childhood is ... "Suddenly, she stopped and looked into the distance." Childhood is a lost history. The purple dream has been transplanted into the hearts of today's generation of children, and the mulberry fruit of childhood is nowhere to be found. When I was a child, I realized the burden on my shoulders. Life is not always carefree ... ""Read, son ". Time makes the old man walk away slowly, leaving only fond memories of childhood, and those precious shots will become the driving force for young people to struggle forward.

The third person the old man asked was a middle-aged man who was working. He stopped what he was doing and smiled, and wrinkles appeared on his mouth and forehead. "Childhood is another name for carefree. When I was a child, I had no responsibility and I didn't have to pay. The care of my elders is the nourishment of my childhood. That's how I grew up, out of childhood and through youth. Now that people are in middle age, they feel a great responsibility. There are old people and little people in the world. Men, only childhood is truly their own. I am tired from work now. Just think about my childhood, and I can find my true self and chat with him. " The middle-aged man said, his eyes moist, and the old man walked away quietly. Childhood, no responsibility, no pay. When I experienced the hardships of life and the setbacks of life, I discovered that I was the real me.

Twilight is already thick. Through the afterglow of the sunset, Time Old Man saw the old man leaning on the bench to enjoy the sunset. "What is childhood?" The old man turned his face, full of vicissitudes. He pondered for a while and said, "Childhood is a newly nurtured sun, which is about to set foot on the pale East, so it is a sign of hope. When the first sunshine from the east shines on the earth, people will leave their childhood and start a bittersweet life ... As the sun sets, I have entered the old age, and I often sit here to recall my childhood, open the lens of memory and shake off the stars of my childhood, each of which is the embodiment of true beauty ... "

It's time for the old man to finish his task and return to heaven. The Jade Emperor looked up for a long time and asked, "What is childhood?"

"There is more than one answer." Time the old man replied.

[structural notes]

"What is childhood?" Around this question, the author ordered the virtual "time old man" to come down to collect the answers to "childhood" and listed the different views of little boys, girls, middle-aged men and old people, thus drawing the conclusion that different people have different answers.

Sixth, the form of scattered gods gathering together

This is the structure used in prose and essays. "Form is scattered but spirit is not scattered", pursuing the beauty of meaning and artistic conception.

[Model essay] (200 1 year)

Grazing in the heart

The sun chose the day and generously gave the earth a piece of sunshine; When the moon chooses the night sky, it calmly scatters Yin Hui; When the path is chosen ahead, it will extend into a broad road. Since the hiker has chosen the journey, it is sure to have a storm. ...

In fact, when and where, all natural things, including human beings, are not choosing? It's like a shepherd waving a whip and choosing his cattle and sheep.

The choice of spring breeze is green all over Shan Ye; Yu Xia's choice is to wave wine and pride; The choice of autumn rain is to gain encouragement; The choice of winter snow is to lay a crystal layer on the earth.

Shelley's West Wind, petofi's Flag, Ai Qing's Reed Flute and North Island's Answer were chosen.

Choice is the first straw floating on the river in early spring, the first Hong Fei flying across the sky at dusk, and the first ape walking from the tree to the ground. ...

The sea has tides, the mountains have veins, and the fruit has stones. People also need to have their own choices, choose others and choose themselves:

Picasso chose to write on an empty stomach and wrote The Woman Ironing Clothes.

Lu Xun chose literature, so he threw his sword and gun into the boundless darkness without mercy.

Only by choosing passengers can Li Suli "serve the people and have no terminal";

Wang Wei chose the country and left his figure in the eternal blue sky;

Xu Huizhen chose family ties and pulled three siblings into doctoral students;

Wang Yang Lake chose the party spirit and the people, and "being diligent for the people" became his motto all his life.

Li chose to contribute to the party, and he will be loyal to his duties for 20 years.

Instead, the rig was chosen to make the poor ore rich; Choice is a filter that precipitates the essence of life; Choice is a mirror, reflecting a person's soul; Choose the intersection and you are the guide. ...

"Fish, what do I want; Bear's paw is what I want You can't have it both ways, and you can't have it both ways. " How can you hesitate in the face of choice? Make your choice, bear's paw is in hand.

Deciduous leaves choose to return to their roots because they want to repay the gift of the earth; Soldiers choose "never break Loulan and swear not to return it" because the love of the country is beyond words; Xin Qiji chose The Iron Horse Glacier Dream because he loves his country too much. ...

Grazing in your heart, please hold your whip tightly.

Raise the lamp to find the shadow, and the lamp will go out. Stick to your choice and save the "life password", my friend, ok?