Simulated test questions
Read the following materials and write as required.
A climber and his guide went through many difficulties and obstacles to reach the top of the world, Mount Everest. Before that, no one in the world had reached such a height.
The top of the world is only two meters away from them. As long as one of them takes a step forward, he can become the first in the world, and these steps are easy for everyone. At this time, Hillary, a climber from New Zealand, gave this precious opportunity to Tenzin, a local tour guide. Hillary Clinton, who lives in this city, knows what these steps mean to her. His ideal, even his hope of living, is to be the first to reach the top. But a few steps away from the summit, he overcame his desire and gave this opportunity to the Sherpas who lived here. He believes that only Sherpas who live with Mount Everest day and night are qualified to be the first person to climb Mount Everest.
Requirements: ① Choose the right angle, determine the train of thought, and do the topic yourself; (2) Don't be divorced from the content and significance of the material; ③ No less than 600 words.
A famous teacher's explanation
This material can be analyzed from the following angles.
Angle 1: Although no one asked Hillary to give up Tenzin, she did, because he thought that "only Sherpas who live with Mount Everest day and night are qualified to be the first person to climb Mount Everest". It can be seen that his behavior is a conscious behavior after defeating his own desires. He overcame his desire and followed his heart. At this moment, his realm has been sublimated. So you can write topics such as "conquer desire" and "follow your heart".
Tips for selecting materials: The materials from this angle are relatively easy to choose, but we still avoid familiar materials such as Qu Yuan, Li Bai, Tao Yuanming and Su Shi, which have been written too much by candidates. Instead, try to choose relatively fresh and less well-known materials. For example, Zeng Guofan refused to split China in the heyday of Xiang, which is a good example.
Angle 2: Tenzin is the guide. In many people's eyes, he is just a server and a supporting role, but in Hillary's eyes, he is a person who gets along with Mount Everest day and night. Hillary Clinton expressed her respect for Mount Everest and Sherpa. He regards Mount Everest as a life worthy of reverence, loves my house and my dog, and therefore respects those who live with Mount Everest day and night. Behind his modest behavior is respect for nature and others. So you can write topics like "respect" and "equality".
Tips for selecting materials: When choosing such materials, we should be careful not to understand "respect" and "equality" only as human beings, but to enlarge them to other things, such as nature and mountains and rivers. As long as these natural things are regarded as a kind of life and given the same respect, the relationship between human beings and nature will be more harmonious. For example, the poem "Give every river and mountain a warm name/stranger, and I will bless you" in Haizi's Facing the Sea, Spring is Blooming, which embodies this equality and respect.
Angle 3: Hillary overcame her own desires, broke through herself, broke through her privacy, reached a higher level, and possessed a kind of tolerance that ordinary people could not reach. Although his choice seems incredible to others, for himself, it is not a surrender to external pressure or a show, but a spiritual choice-just like "Confucius climbed the East Mountain to build a path and climbed Mount Tai to build a small world". So you can write topics such as "choice", "mind", "realm" and "tolerance".
Tips for selecting materials: Students can choose examples of spiritual sublimation to use, pay attention to the breakthrough process of highlighting the realm from small to large, and at the same time write clearly how this sublimation from small to large is carried out and what factors are caused. Li Yu, for example, changed from your emperor to the king of national subjugation, and his inner world changed greatly because of his painful experience. His ci style has gone from deliberate carving at the beginning, pursuing the exquisiteness of ci, to the pursuit of high technology and beauty in the later period. Therefore, Mr. Wang Guowei said in "Ci on Earth" that "the realm of Ci began to grow in Li Houzhu, and then it became a literati's ci", which is a sublimation of the realm.
High score material
Material 1
Among the top 65,438+00 authors of the 2065,438+065,438+0 Mao Dun Literature Award, 8 are the chairmen and vice-chairmen of provincial writers' associations. We don't deny the literary attainments of these "chairmen" with official titles, but the Mao Dun Literature Award is about literature and art, not the title and power of writers. Moreover, looking at the previous Mao Dun Literature Awards, I feel that it is "an iron camp and a mobile soldier". A batch of "official writers" have been evaluated, and the next batch of "official writers" are waiting to go public. This seems to have turned the Mao Dun Literature Award into a vat worn by red-painted officials, which is increasingly out of touch with scholars and writers that ordinary people like.
Material inspiration: this material is a very realistic negative material, and the idea of flattering officials and power and seeking fame and reputation can be criticized. Officials have the right to hold positions, so they want to get some "culture"; And some cultural people want to use the literary prize to "give generously", and they all want what they want and are happy. It's just that the literary flavor is getting less and less. Students can use it to criticize vulgar ideas such as "flattering officials", "flattering powerful people" and "being arty".
Material 2
Taibo is the eldest son of Zhou tribal leaders. In order to comply with the will of his father to pass the throne to his younger brother and then to his grandson Ji Chang, Taibo went to the western Shaanxi with his younger brother and established the embryonic form of Wu culture-Sentence Wu. Shortly after Taber's death, his father died of illness, and he returned to China to mourn his filial piety. At this time, Ji Li offered to make way for Taber. Taber resolutely refused, and the calendar did not follow. Taber failed to escape many times and had to return to Wu tribe. Later, Ji Li sent someone to let Taber return to the north to be king. Taber punished himself by punishing the prisoner, and smiled and said to the bearer, "How can a prisoner be king?" Taber was so amazing that even Confucius, known as a saint, was amazed when he read Taber's story. In his view, Taber's moral quality has reached an almost insurmountable level.
Material inspiration: This material is positive and suitable for topics such as "nobility", "self-protection", "mind" and "tolerance". At the same time, Confucius can be used to set off Taibo's noble personality, and it can also be associated with the growth of the late Zhou Dynasty, which can well highlight Taibo's lofty realm and make the world meaningful and valuable.
Material 3
1864, after Zeng Guofan broke through Nanjing to suppress the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom, he made great contributions to the world. Therefore, not only Ceng Guoquan and Peng Yulin, the subordinates of Xiang Army, conspired to support Zeng Guofan's independence, but even Li Xiucheng, the general of Taiping Heavenly Kingdom, expressed his willingness to support Zeng Guofan as emperor with hundreds of thousands of departments on both sides of the Yangtze River, as long as the empire established was the Han people's own. But after thinking deeply, Zeng Guofan wrote this sentence: there are countless flowers in the sea that depend on the sky, and flowing water has self-knowledge. Euphemistically expressed his intention of not being independent.
Material inspiration: "There are countless flowers in the sea that depend on the sky" can be understood as being high. When you are in the world, you will find countless gorgeous flowers in the world, just as there are many people in the world who are better than me. "Running water knows the mountain itself" means that it, like running water, is willing to live below and meander around the mountain, never changing and calm. This material belongs to historical data, which shows that Zeng Guofan faced the great temptation of the throne, restrained his own desires, followed his own heart, and reached a very high level of being a saint inside and a king outside.
Material training
Feeling like a snowy mountain
Liu, No.1 Middle School in Tangshan City, Hebei Province
Mount Everest stands tall, sacred and noble. People have remembered British mountaineer Robert's "Because the Mountain is there", the legendary story of "Tibet Team" collectively climbing 14 8000-meter peaks, and even remembered Hillary's snowy feeling of restraining her selfish desires when she reached the top.
I still remember that when Hillary passed away, New Zealand mourned all over the country. Mourners lie not only in his great achievements in climbing Mount Everest, but also in his noble character of being indifferent to fame and fortune all his life. It is a pure heart like ice and snow, a gigantic personality like a mountain, and a feeling like a snow-capped mountain.
The wall stands a thousand miles, and it is just without desire. Generally speaking, how many people can not be washed away by the tide of time? It is not difficult to work hard, but it is difficult to stop your steps in the choice of righteousness and benefit. In the face of their painstaking pursuit of success and opportunities that will never return, who can unload the weight related to fame and fortune from the balance of righteousness and benefit? Only a gentleman with feelings like a snowy mountain can abide by morality. In exchange for lost wealth and reputation, I have no regrets in my life.
In the process of climbing the peak of life, a series of past events left us with a huge back: after going through all kinds of hardships to help us climb the throne, we gave up our position to Guan Zhong, a talented man; In order to give up the throne to the sage's brother, Tai Bo, the ancestor of the State of Wu, fled thousands of miles away and lost his tattoo. At the end of the Eastern Han Dynasty, Tao Qian was a separatist in Xuzhou. He repeatedly wanted to cede his land and army to Liu Bei. Whether it's the prime minister or the throne, it's more about countless unscrupulous attempts. And these high-spirited comity, so that all greedy people are dwarfed. Taibo and Tao Qian were the leaders of Qi Hou, Feng, Zhou and Liu Bei. However, when all ambitious romantic figures are silent, their snowy feelings are still praised by people. Fame and fortune will eventually disappear, and only lofty morality can shine forever.
It seems not so easy to pursue a lofty pure land at this moment. It is said that Mount Everest has long been polluted by human activities, so how can our spiritual highland be pure? In the award of a well-known literary prize, sanctimonious officials crossed the ocean to show their magical powers, making it stink; In all kinds of excellence competitions, face projects and extras have long existed; The drill strength in the ivory tower is all scissors and paste mass production. Will the feelings of snow-capped mountains really melt because of global warming? Alas! Please leave a pure land and don't let our spiritual home drift!
The snow peaks are majestic, and the ice fields are clean. Reflect a ray of lonely light, as clear as me. Stop and go, casting my feelings into snow-capped mountains.
Write comments on (literary works) and mark them with dots and circles to attract attention.
Look at this article, there are two highlights:
1. Rich material, ancient and modern contrast. In this paper, a large number of examples of ancient benevolent sages such as Bao Shu, Taibo and Tao Qian are quoted, and compared with the mass production of "smelly", "flattering official power", "face project that ignores people's livelihood" and "scissors sticking" in today's literary awards, the consequences of snow mountain pollution are highlighted, the theme is deeply reflected, and the author's sense of hardship is reflected.
2. Puns have far-reaching significance. In the fifth paragraph of the article, "It is said that Mount Everest has long been polluted by human activities" is a pun, which refers to the pollution of nature and the emotional pollution of Xuefeng, so it is natural to write about the ugliness of today's people. Ending with the Southern Song Dynasty poet Zhang Xiaoxiang's "Nian Nu Jiao? There are two sentences in "Crossing Dongting Lake", which are "clear inside and outside", "lonely photos, ice and snow in the liver and gallbladder", and the old saying "starting from the mountain, stopping at the scene" is rich in literary talent and profound in meaning.