Standing on the shore, staring into the distance, I saw the willow trees on the other side green and the lights green. On both sides of the bridge, it seems that there are two green ribbons fluttering at any time. ) Su Dongpo and Bai Juyi left a Su Causeway and a Bai Causeway leisurely, and the neon lights on the bank were shining with charming brilliance.
Sitting on a cruise ship and looking back at the shore, the scenery is more beautiful. The quaint pavilions and pavilions of the lakeside teahouse make people appreciate the charm of ancient architecture. The green light on the broken bridge reflected on the sparkling lake, making the lake green. Occasionally, the red light is staggered in the green light, which is even more beautiful. Looking around, tall buildings rise from the ground and go straight into the sky. The seven of us talked and watched, recited poems from time to time and poured out our hearts from time to time.
The boat is rippling on the lake. "The canoe is short and the West Lake is good, with green waters and green mountains." I think this is what happened when Ouyang Xiu wrote this poem! The fountain in the distance goes straight into the sky, splashing when it falls. It sounds like a lion barking and thunder roaring, which is quite spectacular. The fountain is like a ribbon with a yellow lining, and it is like a cloud falling from the sky for nine days, adding icing on the cake to the beautiful scenery of the West Lake. The fountain is described with great momentum, vivid image, great imagination and observation. The small fountains around are colorful, like beautiful rainbows and curved arch bridges. On the shore, the Town God Pavilion on the Town God Mountain seems to be suspended in the air against the light, really like a mirage.
The ship is still sailing. We came to Yin Yue Santan again. Three gourd-shaped stone pillars stand in the middle of the lake, and the moonlight passes through this gourd hole and another gourd hole, as if playing hide-and-seek with us. The trees on the island set each other off against the pavilion, and the gourd on the pavilion seems to belong to Tie Guai Li. The little author is very observant, and the perspective can show the beauty of the scenery very well. ) He came to the West Lake, and when he saw the beautiful scenery, he was so crazy that he forgot to bring the gourd.
While enjoying the scenic spots, we talked and laughed, and it was very lively. I stayed on this sparkling lake for two hours tonight, which left me a good impression and reverie.
2. How to write a travel composition?
1. Clues in Travel Notes
2. Themes in Travel Notes
3. Scenery in Travel Notes
4. Places in Travel Notes
Remember to give priority to your trip.
Composition is a narrative method that expresses a theme through words after people's ideological consideration and language organization. The genre of composition includes: narrative, expository, practical, argumentative, prose and poetry.
Travel composition mainly writes what you see outside, and then records it.
The classification of tourism works can be divided into many kinds. Narrative type is mainly used to record the itinerary; Expressing feelings is lyrical; Describing scenery and scenery is the main type; Explain a truth by remembering the tour, which is inferential. But either way, it is through the description of natural scenery, scenic spots, urban landscapes, people and things in the landscape to achieve the purpose of taking notes, expressing feelings, reasoning and so on. Novices writing travel notes must organize articles with certain clues and form clear writing habits from the beginning. There must be a reasonable clue running through it
How to write a travel essay is to write down the travel process and the scenery you see in a certain order selectively and emphatically. Although there are no certain standards for writing travel notes, there are still some basic methods for writing travel notes. So how to write travel notes?
First, grasp the characteristics. Grasping the characteristics to write is to find out the main characteristics of the scenery you have been to, or to write down what impressed you the most. Grasping the characteristics of the scenery is obtained by careful observation and careful aftertaste. Be a caring person and leave the most beautiful and interesting places in your memory during the tour. Only in this way can there be scenes to write and things to write.
Second, clear your head. The so-called "arranging clues" means that the travel notes should be organized, and the order of what to write first and then what to write must be arranged. Otherwise, there will be problems of unclear thinking and unclear organization, which makes people confused and difficult to understand. Generally speaking, writing travel notes can be based on the place or time of travel. When writing travel notes, you must put the materials in order. Only in this way can the article be orderly and orderly.
Third, the details are appropriate. There is no need to write down all the scenic spots you see, as if there is no focus. You should choose typical and distinctive scenery to write about. In fact, writing travel notes can also be like making a movie. Some places are written in detail with close-ups, and some places are briefly introduced with panoramic lenses.
Fourth, express feelings. Travel notes describe the great rivers, mountains and places of interest in the motherland, but it is not good to write down these scenery. We should also put our feelings into it and express our love for these famous mountains and rivers in combination with the scenes. Finally, the teacher reminded everyone. Pay attention to the following two points when writing travel notes: First, don't write travel notes as "running accounts". From the beginning to the end of the visit, write whatever you see and tell them directly. There is no focus and no order. Second, don't write travel notes as "seeing things but not people". The whole composition is full of scenery descriptions, but no characters appear, let alone expressing feelings, which is not profound enough.
4. How to write a travel note? Don't write travel essays as travel route maps.
Second, write a composition about the places you have been to and the scenic spots that left a deep impression on you.
Third, we should consider the order, space, time and angle of travel notes (from far to near)
Fourth, you don't need to describe everything, you need to know how to delete branches and leaves.
Fifth, choose the points that leave a deep impression to play, among which there must be details, and you must think clearly about which ones to write.
Sixth, pay attention to historical things and historical events. The clever combination of legends can highlight the significance of the tour and the depth of the article.
Seven, should adopt the technique of lyricism by scenery.
Eight, when describing the human landscape, we should set off the environment and choose the appropriate scenery to set off.
Nine, in the description of natural landscape, we should use rhetorical devices, but don't fall into the routine, feel with heart, and it is best to have some appropriate rhetorical innovations.
Read some travel articles. Let's have a look at your prose.
Generally written in the form of travel prose, don't write it as something in a travel map.
5. How to write the composition of travel notes? First, describe the scenery in the order of sightseeing. When writing, on the basis of careful observation and memory, write the scenery in the order of seeing it. Only in this way can you be clear, natural, understand and not messy. There are usually two ways to observe the scenery. One is fixed-point observation. For example, stand in a corner of the park and observe the park from far and near. Another example is to observe the scenery under the tower from four directions: southeast and northwest. The second is the moving observation method, also called the moving step transposition method. It is to change the position with the movement of footsteps, and observe from place to place. The observation point is selected to determine the order of writing. For example, in the text "Visiting the Great Hall of the People", five scenes are written in order of the author's visit. Write the national emblem and column at the main entrance of the Great Hall first, then the ceiling and floor of the central hall, and then the big one. Then write the banquet hall and conference hall. In this way, we can write down the scenery the author saw in the Great Hall in an orderly and focused way. Second, we must grasp the key points of the tour and visit the activities at one time. We can't keep a running account of the scenery we see. We should write down the impressive scenery and write the rest briefly. When you visit, you should grasp the characteristics of the scenery and observe it carefully. For example, we want to write a narrative about the scenery we see, and the focus of writing is to write down the scenery we see. For the particularly good scenery you see, you should describe it in detail and highlight the key points. For key scenery, we should pay attention to describe their position, size, dynamic, static and color in detail. For example, if we write "chrysanthemum", the color will be "red like maple leaf, white like frost, yellow like wheat". Chrysanthemum is shaped like "little girl's curly hair, fluffy chicken, hydrangea" and so on. It is necessary to write the process in detail, with clear priorities and appropriate details, and the articles written can highlight the key points and understand clearly, so as to write the significance of the tour and have educational significance. The beginning and the end should be simple. Time, place, and people should be clearly explained from the beginning. For example, "My hometown is Yixing, Jiangsu, which is a famous tourist attraction" at the beginning of "You Shan Juan Dong". Finally, I should write down my feelings in a discussion or lyrical way. For example, "A Roam in the Nature Zoo" ended with "Haha ……" We ended this pleasant outing with laughter. Zhu, it's no wonder that people from all over the world come in an endless stream. The article written in this way has a beginning and an end, which gives a complete impression when reading. We should melt our feelings into the landscape and write the true meaning. When writing, you should pour your thoughts and feelings. Also, while writing the scenery, discuss the true meaning of life, or talk about ideological issues and academic spirit, so that readers can be inspired and educated while enjoying the natural scenery.
6. How to write a travel note? 1. Travel prose requires the author to have a certain degree of understanding of where he goes and to have his own unique vision. 2. Explain a clear clue, whether to write a travel note according to time or space or from your perspective. The scenery in four directions: east, west, north and south. Avoid conformity, the same scenery has different colors in different people's eyes. Different moods lead to different feelings when visiting. Fourth, flexible use of various rhetorical devices: metaphor, personification, synaesthesia, parallelism and so on. Fifth, insert the mood of sightseeing into the travel notes, so that the viewer can feel that he/she is also sightseeing with you.
On the fourth day, we came to Penglai, a place called "fairyland" since ancient times. The guide took us to Baxiandu, and the commentator said Baxiandu was a gourd-shaped island. There is a small pavilion on the island. It is said that Tie Guai Li left a treasure gourd here, so it became a gourd shape. We went to Baxiandu Pavilion. A column of incense outside the door, an owl rises. It has gathered into a strong fairyland atmosphere, making you feel like you are in a cloud fairyland. Walking into the gate, it was a big stone turtle with its head held high and a big "gold ingot" on its back. It is said that the old turtle absorbed the essence of heaven and earth. We continued to walk in and came to the statue of the Eight Immortals, only to see them crossing the sea with treasures in their hands, one by one lifelike, really "Eight Immortals". The movie "Mirage" we went to see was shot on May 25th, 2005. Hardly had I sat down when the film was released. In front of us is a beautiful sea, and the sea is very calm. After a while, the sea turned slightly red, and buildings such as houses, pavilions and pavilions were clearly visible, and even people could be seen walking. The screen explained that it was a mirage. The four-day tour really broadened my horizons, increased my knowledge, cultivated my sentiment and enriched my life. Ah, beautiful Qingdao, you will be deeply impressed in my heart! Interesting summer vacation-a trip to Jianhu Mountain Speaking of this summer vacation, the most worth discussing should be the experience of everyone going out to play! My uncle and brother didn't follow us to the south because they had to go to work and have classes. On the first day, we set off happily by Japanese passenger transport. When we got there, our relatives' eldest brother came to meet us and stayed at his house. The next day, the trip to Jianhu Mountain began. On the way, my sister and I were very excited and began to plan what amusement facilities we would bring. When I got there, my feeling was: "God ~ just one person!" " ! "A bunch of cars keep looking for empty seats to stop, the police are busy shuttling, and the weather is very hot, which makes us sweat! As soon as we got in, the first plan was to get on the shuttle. It is said that our legs will be weak in an instant, but we have already gone through the graduation trip, which is really terrible … Mom also boldly said that he can sit! Hehe, I really admire my mother's courage! But as soon as he reached the highest point, he began to shout; : "Sister ~ so tall!" I said, "Mom, suddenly ..." Before I finished, we rushed down without warning! After the game, my mother said his legs were weak … and he stopped playing! ! Really, the old man's physical strength is really poor! But my sister and I have gone to be the first girls to spread flowers! ! As soon as we arrived at the scene where there were few people sitting, we didn't have to wait at all, thinking, "It's strange that there are so many people sitting with only a few cats." "Anyway, as soon as we got there, I began to regret it ... my head began to faint ... I didn't dare to open my eyes at all. When I opened my eyes, I felt very dizzy, but because of the speed, the wind was very strong and cold, which made us feel a little hot. But the price is not small, the price of dizziness … really hurts! ! I felt high when I came down, and I couldn't adapt to the land at once! But it doesn't matter that young people recover quickly, and our energy is inexhaustible! So we went to the next thrilling amusement facility: "crazy ride" and "crazy ride", which is the largest roller coaster in Jianhu Mountain, and everyone knows it! ! Just looking at it, I think it must be very * * *. My sister kept telling me that he was afraid to sit down and told me to go back. I said, "That's fun! I took it on my graduation trip, but I was afraid to take it at that time! I liked it the first time I sat down! ! My sister was finally persuaded by me and insisted on sitting next to me. At the moment of departure, my sister said that he regretted it, but it was useless after all! To tell the truth, I'm a little scared, too, because I've been in this facility for too long, and I'm a little scared after the crazy rotation and stabbing! I feel ... really carefree! ! My mother and they were afraid to sit, so they waited for us at the door. When we got to the place where we bought the photos, we saw that my sister and I were both ugly … My sister's mouth was open in every photo … I kept laughing at him, but actually I didn't see where she was … Then we sat in a chair and had a rest, drank something, and then finished some amusement facilities. I've played everything except the rotating facilities! ! At 3: 30 in the afternoon … the thunderstorm fell mercilessly all afternoon …
7. How to write "You" The melodious piano sound at the beginning of the composition echoed in the mountains for a long time, as if to make people praise her piano sound, even the five mountains can stop to watch, and the rocks are foggy.
Altitude 1800 meters, the peak that stands out from the crowd! "Huangshan has been back for many days. Huangshan Mountain has been a tourist attraction since ancient times.
After visiting Huangshan Mountain, Xu Xiake, a great traveler in the Ming Dynasty, praised Huangshan Mountain and said, "The Five Mountains returned without looking at the mountains. It seems to be falling. It's scary. Huashan is very steep. Huangshan Mountain is really unusual. It has the majesty of Mount Tai.
Near Yupinglou, there are several ancient pine trees, one of which is called Welcome Pine, which seems to welcome tourists all the time. There is also a tree called Songsong, which seems to say, "Have a nice trip and welcome to come again next time."
The scenery of Huangshan Mountain is beautiful and magical, especially those strange stones. One day in the summer vacation, I came to Huangshan Mountain, which is called "the first wonder mountain in the world", with great excitement. Huangshan Mountain is located in the south of Anhui Province, with an area of about 1.200 square kilometers and 72 peaks. The return of Huangshan Mountain is still in my mind, and I want to tell you. "
This sentence means that after swimming the five mountains, you don't have to see any other mountains. After visiting Huangshan Mountain and Hengshan Mountain, this is an interesting "dog watching the moon".
There are many strange stones in Huangshan Mountain, such as "the lion grabs the ball", "the monkey looks at the sea" and "the turtle looks at the fish", which makes people find it difficult to climb up and climb to the sky. Especially those grotesque rocks on the mountain.
Just say "the fairy plays the piano". She looked up at the moon with strange pine trees, as if she wanted to see it on the moon. The "four wonders" of hot springs are famous all over the world and are known as "the first wonder mountain in the world". The highest peak of Huangshan Mountain is Lotus Peak, and the Lushan Waterfall is vivid and picturesque.
Look, the clouds are shrouded in mystery. There is a lovely dog on the steep hill. The beautiful fairy plays the piano: Huangshan Mountain is worth visiting. If you don't go, it will be your lifelong regret.
8. How to write a good travel note is a form of prose that describes travel experiences.
Travel notes have a wide range of materials, which can describe the beauty of famous mountains and rivers, record the interesting and rich local customs, reflect the daily life of a person and a family, and also record the major events of a country and express their thoughts and feelings. Some people say that writing an article is like beading. Without a clue to connect all the elements, the article will be fragmented or chaotic.
This is especially true when writing travel notes. There must be a reasonable clue running through it In travel notes, the most commonly used writing order may be whereabouts.
That is, in the order of sightseeing. For example, a travel note about visiting a zoo can be described one by one in the order of the visit.
In addition, there are some clues about the organization and direction of the landscape. The subject refers to the person or group that did it.
Since it is tourism, there must be a main body of tourism. In the writing of travel notes, if there is a lack of people, it is almost the same as expository writing or landscape prose.
There are also many different ways to point out the theme in travel notes, which can be pointed out at the beginning. In addition, the theme of travel notes can also appear naturally in the writing process or be pointed out at the end of the article.
The description of scenery in landscape writing is also an important part of travel notes. Man is the subject and scenery is the object.
Scenery in travel notes should be written selectively and emphatically according to the needs of writing. The description of scenery in travel notes should best conform to the theme of the article.
When writing travel notes, you must pay attention to places to visit or visit, such as aquarium, prairie, science and technology museum, etc. There are two ways to write: read more and write more.
As Ouyang Xiu said: "There is no other way to write. The diligent Ouyang Xiu studies mostly for himself." First, reading more books includes reading and experience.
(1) reading. This is the basis and premise of writing.
Reading is reading other people's books, and some are called "dead books". Confucius read Yi and Bian Wei's Three Musts, and the bamboo slips were broken many times.
Du Fu's "reading a million volumes" is "writing like a god". Han Yu "talks endlessly about the six arts, putting his hand on the compilation of a hundred schools of thought contending" and "thinking about it if you forget it".
Reading plays a vital role in the foundation and premise of writing. Reading can broaden one's horizons, accumulate materials, master writing rules and enrich language vocabulary.
However, this effect is carried out in a subtle way. Generally speaking, the more reading, the greater the effect on writing.
Many are infinite, but for the purpose of writing. The content of reading, first, reading social science books such as philosophy, politics, economy and literature.
The second is to read books on social science and natural science, and to accept both arts and sciences, especially books outside the major. The third is to read books on writing and try to figure out the methods and skills of famous artists.
The first reading method is extensive reading. It can also be called elaboration, skimming, reading through, enjoying reading and so on.
This is exactly what Tao Yuanming did. "Good reading doesn't require much understanding." . Zhuge Liang is also a "general view".
When reading, we often use speed reading or skip reading. Balzac described this reading method in Louis Rabe: "His eyes can catch seven or eight lines at once, and the speed of understanding meaning is equal to that of his eyes. Often a unique word can make him grasp the meaning of the whole sentence. "
The second is intensive reading. It can also be called learning, research and familiarity.
This is reading, using clear abstract thinking to understand and master the contents of books. Some people also developed into copying and reading.
In particular, reading aloud can be said to be a re-creation of the original work. (2) experience.
People call reading a "living book", which means reading "one's own book". Mr. Lu Xun said that we should "read this living book with our own eyes".
Experience is the fundamental way of writing. It is a personal understanding and feeling of contemporary life.
Therefore, the ancients often emphasized that "read thousands of books and follow Wan Li Road". Experience is actually an observation experience in a lifetime experience.
Observation is a visual movement from the whole to the part of the external form of things and their environment. And experience is a unique feeling and discovery in real life.
From the narrative style, most articles with more observation elements are practical articles such as news or reportage, which pay attention to cognitive reflection theory. Many novels with novel themes are actually like this.
Articles with many experience elements can be deeply rooted in people's hearts, write something deep in the soul, and the emotional atmosphere is immersed in the whole article. In any case, experience is the fundamental way to write.
Second, write more. Chekhov, a famous Russian writer, said: "We should all write, write and write as much as possible ... until our fingers are broken. (Life events are written neatly and beautifully! People who are interested in writing should write more and practice more.
Writing more is the key to writing well. Take writing as a pleasure in life, write at will, and don't always rack your brains.
Writing is the purpose and destination of learning writing theory. The ancients said, "It is better to read ten articles than to do one."
Doing more and writing less is a common problem. Of course, we should not blindly do more, but should do it in combination with the breakthrough of the existing level.
It can be said that a person's writing level has such a three-island pass: fluency, publication and style. Once you break a certain threshold, you won't go backwards.
Doing more work should be combined with striving for publication and practicality. Advocate imitation.
Imitation is an essential stage in writing teaching. The confirmation of imitating this method comes from long-term thinking and repeated practice.
People often use imitation to write consciously or unconsciously. As we all know, learning painting needs copying, and learning calligraphy needs copying.
Whether learning Chinese painting or learning the creation of western painting, students are required to read all the famous paintings carefully first, and then copy a considerable number of famous paintings seriously. Since ancient times, there are countless examples of imitation, especially many great writers.
Yang Xiong in Han Dynasty was famous for being good at imitation. In his works, Xuan Jing imitates the Book of Changes, Fa Yan imitates The Analects, and his poems imitate Sima Xiangru's works.
Wang Bo, a little boy, imitated Guo Xin's poem "The fallen flowers fly to Gaizhi, and the flags of willow and spring are the same color" and wrote a famous sentence "The sunset is lonely in Qi Fei, and the autumn water is the same color as the sky". China's four classical novels all have obvious imitations or copies.
A dream of red mansions imitates Jin Ping Mei. Journey to the West and Romance of the Three Kingdoms are both.
9. How to write the clues in the travel composition 1 and travel notes?
Some people say that writing an article is like beading. Without a clue to connect all the elements, the article will be fragmented or chaotic. This is especially true when writing travel notes. There must be a reasonable clue running through it This clue can also be said to be the order of writing.
In travel notes, the most commonly used writing order may be whereabouts. That is, in the order of sightseeing. For example, a travel note about visiting a zoo can be described one by one in the order of the visit. In addition, there are some clues about the organization and direction of the landscape. We suggest that when beginners write travel notes, they must use certain clues to organize articles and form clear writing habits from the beginning.
2. The theme in the travel notes.
The subject refers to the person or group that did it. Since it is tourism, there must be a main body of tourism. In the writing of travel notes, if there is a lack of people, it is almost the same as expository writing or landscape prose. There are also many different ways to point out the text of travel notes, which can be pointed out at the beginning. For example, at the beginning of a travel note, an author wrote: "Today, students in our class visited Peking University under the leadership of Teacher Li", pointing out that the main body of the travel note is "students in our class and Teacher Li"; In addition, the theme of travel notes can also appear naturally in the writing process or be pointed out at the end of the article.
3. Scenery in Travel Notes
Scenery description is also an important part of travel notes. Man is the subject and scenery is the object. Scenery in travel notes should be written selectively and emphatically according to the needs of writing. The description of scenery in travel notes should best conform to the theme of the article. For example, a classmate wrote an article about visiting the Great Wall, describing the ancient and spectacular scenery of the Great Wall and the surrounding clean and tidy scenic environment, and closely combining the scenery description with the themes of cultural relics protection and environmental protection.
4. Places in Travel Notes
When writing travel notes, you must pay attention to the places you want to visit or visit, such as aquarium, prairie, science and technology museum, etc.
Remember to give priority to your trip.
Although travel notes are a record of the tourism process, they are not comprehensive records. I once saw a travel note written by a college student, starting with getting up in the morning, then writing about how to eat breakfast, how to go out by car, what I saw and happened on the road … all, and finally writing about how to go home. A travel note of tens of thousands of words. But nothing can move people. This way of writing is not a travel book, but a running account, and no one wants to read it. Take a trip to Huangshan Mountain.
I have heard of the beautiful scenery of Huangshan Mountain, but I have never had a chance to see it. This summer vacation, my mother will finally take me to visit the beautiful Huangshan Mountain.
My mother and I climbed to the top of the mountain with difficulty. Ah! The top of the mountain is very high, as if above the clouds. Huangshan Mountain is full of hard rocks. It's amazing that pine trees can grow in these hard cracks! These pine trees have different shapes, some are tall and straight, some are spreading, and some are vigorous and powerful. It is really worthy of the name to say that these pine trees are attractive.
Huangshan Mountain is really steep! The dangerous peaks stand tall and the rocks are rugged. The grotesque rocks on Huangshan Mountain are scattered all over the majestic Huangshan Mountain. These stones, large and small, have unique shapes, some like people, some like monsters, and some like objects, which are very interesting. My mother and I stood on Aoyufeng and looked down. Too high! If you move, it seems that you will fall off the cliff.
To the heights, surrounded by sea of clouds, as if into a fairyland. Clouds on Huangshan Mountain are unpredictable, sometimes as white as brocade, sometimes as dragons, strolling in the sky, as if playing with companions. The grotesque rocks and pine trees on Huangshan Mountain appear and disappear in the sea of clouds, which adds to the beauty of Huangshan Mountain.
After my mother and I enjoyed the Huangshan Mountain, we went to the Huangshan Hot Spring. I have long heard that the hot springs in Huangshan are crystal clear, but I have never had a chance to see them. Today I can finally witness them with my own eyes. As everyone said, it is crystal clear, and the clarity can be compared with Lijiang River and West Lake. My mother and I were attracted by the beautiful scenery in front of us, so we continued to visit here.
My mother and I spent a day in Huangshan and Huangshan Hot Springs. At night, a group of returning birds and moonlight accompanied us home, but I will never forget the pine trees, strange rocks and clear hot springs on Huangshan Mountain. It's really beautiful on earth!
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