Think about the materials you need, choose the writing order and choose them in detail. It is necessary to better reflect the hierarchy of the composition and make a strong proof or explanation.

2

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There is a good title.

Use more poetry idioms and just do the topic directly.

three

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There is a beautiful beginning at the beginning.

You can use a few words of scenery to brighten the atmosphere, point out the theme or viewpoint of the last sentence of this paragraph, or raise another topic. After all, the topic is the center of the whole article.

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middle

Pay attention to segmentation first. It is best to use a separate paragraph for detailed materials and another paragraph for sketch materials. It is best to use a separate transition between the two materials, one or two lines. It is best to have outstanding significance during the transition period. For materials, choose the one that best highlights the theme.

Secondly, pay attention to using more poems and idioms. Use rhetorical devices such as parallelism, metaphor and personification. To achieve detailed description at the same time, the gorgeous article itself.