New Song (Ayue)
The Story of Wukong is an online novel I like very much, but it is far from the best. After all, Crouching Tiger, Hidden Dragon exists on the Internet, in addition to new songs, blasphemies, true marrow and other various religious leaders. Therefore, if you want to separate the strongest, you still have to compare with each heavyweight.
"New Song" is undoubtedly the pinnacle of spanning overhead history. Two years ago, "Ming" and "Saving the Country by Curves" were called "YY Four Books" when they were updated together with it (there is also a book "Longteng the Great Man", which I haven't read). Now, the last two books have been written one after another, and the response is getting smaller and smaller, while the new song has not even reached its climax, and it still flows quietly like a long river.
The first time I saw "New Songs" was when I saw the recommendation in Xuanyuan Spring and Autumn Period. I didn't know at first, but I read the old edition when I came up. Although I feel that the author's writing style is still immature, it is quite touching, because this is the first time I have come into contact with this novel that changed the history of China by going back to the past. Especially when I saw the "I" in the works make new moves, China's fate changed in his hands, and his eyes even got wet. ...
I had a crush on the Song Dynasty a long time ago. Her prosperous culture, her enlightened system, and her many virtuous ministers and gentlemen ... most of them are stories of the Song Dynasty: Three Heroes and Five Righteousnesses, Yang Jiajiang, Yue Fei Biography, etc. This makes me feel close to the Song Dynasty. Later, after reading more books, I realized that this was the highest peak of China culture, but unfortunately it died at the hands of foreigners. Now it is exciting to see that this situation can change.
I read the old edition in one breath, but it was a pity that it was closed after "I" became prime minister, so I buried myself in the new edition. At first glance, the feeling has risen to a new height. For example, the singer of a Chinese Odyssey in Travel Notes of Lao Can didn't feel what a new world was until the white girl came out. In the original words of bow riding, it is "like a pupa cocoon, it comes out and becomes a beautiful butterfly." Not only is the style fresh and dignified, but it is no longer won by invention like the old version. Instead, we should honestly adapt to the northern song dynasty environment, start with Confucian classics, write books, set forth opinions, run education and run newspapers.
After that, I followed in Shi Yue's footsteps and started my journey in the Song Dynasty. I am happy for him to be an official, happy for his foul language, sad for Chu Yuner and angry for not updating for a long time ... After 2006, the style of this book has changed again. After Shi Yue finished what he should do, he was hidden behind the scenes, and the political arena in the Northern Song Dynasty was surging. Anyway, it's getting better and better ...
This book has two characteristics: first, it truly reproduces the local people in the Song Dynasty, unlike historical novels. The second is to focus on the political disputes in the temple. No opponent is mentally retarded, and no success requires no effort. Of course, trees attract great winds, and many people pick the wrong books. Almost every time the author makes a mistake (in the eyes of readers, he may make a mistake), it will cause an uproar. I have experienced it at least twice, once in a dream and once in the surrender of Youshengjun. There is always a storm in the book review area and Baidu Post Bar. The recent feudal conspiracy in the South China Sea excited many people.
Old readers know that the update speed of New Songs is one of the best in popular novels. In 2008, Ayue didn't update much, which made people think of TJ. However, it seems that RP broke out this year. One update was incredibly fast, and it was a little slow recently, but it was ok. This book is a representative of slow work and fine work. No matter how slow the update is, I will wait, because the author is a serious and responsible person.
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Scoring:
Fluency: 0.9. The author chooses words and sentences carefully, and there is no easy nonsense. But because of the slow update, sometimes I can't remember the old chapter when I read the new chapter.
Details: 1. What the author pursues is an effect of trying to restore the old view of the Song Dynasty, and almost nothing has no origin. The style of writing is simple, soft outside and rigid inside.
Imagination: 0.9. The author's rigorous attitude in writing papers has bound his imagination. But when the feudal South China Sea policy came out, who could say that the author had no idea?
Rationality: 1. If a Shi Yue really crossed back, what happened might be similar to what was written in this book.
Personality: 0.8. The author's brushwork of writing historical figures is almost perfect, but he has a general grasp of several virtual figures (Sang, Jou-chia, etc. The protagonist lacks personality charm.
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General comment: 4.6. If you love someone, let him watch a new song, because it's nice. If you hate someone, let him watch a new song, because it updates slowly. ...
Ming (drunk).
Since I saw the new songs, I have a good impression on the overhead historical novels, which is just the most popular time. So I read Minghe, a traitor and two devils. Explain first.
Similarly, modern people inexplicably broke into ancient times, but the writing of this book is almost the opposite of that of the New Song Dynasty. Shi Yue is a liberal arts student and Wu Anguo is a science student; Shi Yue focuses on ideological innovation, while Wu Anguo focuses on scientific and technological innovation. Shi Yue as a civilian, Wu Anguo as a military commander; The new songs are mainly about infighting, and Ming mainly about foreign wars; The new song is simple and lyrical; The new song dynasty is like a raging river, as bright as Qiantang frenzy ...
Wu Anguo, the hero, spans the late Yuan Dynasty and the early Ming Dynasty. When he first arrived in ancient times, he met Judy, the prince of Yan. Under his crazy enthusiasm for invention, the Ming army invaded Mengyuan in the north and the Japanese army in the east, sweeping the world. However, the contradiction between the peasant emperor Zhu Yuanzhang and the emerging businessmen is inevitably exposed. ...
When you see clearly, you should always be prepared to shed tears. The author's sensational skill is even better than Zhu Jun's, however, fluent language and passionate feelings still can't cover up the practical nature of the work. After all, at the beginning, there were too many new weapons of our own. Although killing people is very enjoyable, it always makes people feel invincible. Ge Ming's enthusiasm for businessmen and capitalists seems too much. After all, there is a greater possibility of collusion between officials and businessmen in China than in Europe ... In addition, the author does not think about his own national culture like Ayue, but returns the ending to the capitalist system like other YY novels.
Despite its defects, Ming is quite good as a novel, and what is more valuable is that the book has been completed:)
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Scoring:
Fluency: 0.8. The rhythm of narrative is well controlled, but the feeling that comes out from time to time will be interrupted.
Details: 0.9. Panoramic description of the early Ming dynasty, the details can be called first-class.
Imagination: 0.8. I crossed the novel earlier, which was original to some extent, but I didn't think far enough about the system.
Rationality: 0.5. The great leap forward in science and technology is very unconvincing, and the greatness of the protagonist for decades is too fake.
Personality: 0.7. The protagonist is too idolized, and Zhu Yuanzhang's description is a bright spot.
General comment: 3.9. Through the top grade in the novel.
Li Fugui, two demons and traitors (also known as the curve to save the country).
Some books have no feeling when read, and only when they are memorable can they feel meaningful; There are also some books that grab people's hearts the first time you read them, but after reading them once, you put them down and never want to revisit them again. The former is called classic, and the latter is called fast food. In my opinion, this Li Fugui belongs to the latter.
This is also a journey back to the past. There is not much in this book except the plot. However, this plot is also quite meaningless. Back in the late Qing Dynasty, Li Fugui joined the church, gradually unified the whole country with the support of western countries, and then retired-giving people the impression that everyone except the protagonist was mentally retarded, and the virtues of western powers such as Britain and France were even more mentally retarded. The author puts forward a "utilitarian-oriented" military strategist's ideological system, but in my opinion, this is not much different from Machiavelli's voluntarism. The rest is total westernization ... there is nothing to say about language. Plain, simple and smooth, that's all. Of course, I didn't feel it until I finished reading it. It's interesting to follow the plot all the time.
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Scoring:
Fluency: 0.9. Very suitable for writing online novels, straightforward. There was a little procrastination towards the end.
Details: 0.7. The writing is not profound enough, and the general plot is there, but it lacks rendering.
Imagination: 0.8. The protagonist's success is unique in his travel novels, but his military thinking is not very clever.
Rationality: 0.7. Generally speaking, it is logical, but the description of war is almost a joke.
Personality: 0.7. The protagonist is plump and lovely. No one else can impress people.
Good people in the Tang Dynasty (more than half)
In the early time travel novels, the protagonist came to an era of war or at the crossroads of change. After all, crossing is not a treat. The protagonist came to a different era, and his idea is nothing more than to make history change because of him and take the route that the author hopes to take. All kinds of novels, big and small, are like this, from the earliest Rise of China to New Songs and then to Stealing Ming. The protagonists pointed out the country and rebuked Fang Qiu. A little history changed in the temple, and the scenery on the battlefield was infinite. At first glance, this novel is quite cool, and it is too tired to read it aesthetically. The basic routine is nothing more than reciting some poems, inventing some glass powder, beating little barbarians, and picking up girls by the way.
Creativity is a very important thing. No matter how you fiddle with the egg, it can't be put on the table. Columbus picked it up and smashed it, which most authors lacked. More than half of the people saw the readers' aesthetic fatigue before writing this novel, in which the hero lived his own life honestly and did not seek to change the times.
Wang Xiu, the protagonist, is undoubtedly luckier than Wu Anguo in Huangshi, Shi Yue, because he passed through the most powerful era in China's history and enjoyed a peaceful and prosperous time. The emperor he met was Tang Gaozong who put pressure on others. And living in Chang 'an, the capital, is a hereditary aristocrat. He has a car and a house, his parents are dead, and his wife and concubine are blessed ... Wang Xiu has enough reasons to enjoy his happy life instead of standing up to save the world.
Full of life is the greatest feature of this book. In that era when there was no shochu, toilet water, usable paper or even Chinese cabbage, the protagonist's invention and creation first considered not how to make the country strong, but how to make his family's small life easier. This writing makes the protagonist look real and cute. Of course, after the protagonist became famous, he did a lot for the country and the people, but this seems to be just a passing act. Generally speaking, this is a book that starts small.
Although the protagonist has only three or four women, it covers Lori, sister, wife, princess, mature woman and so on. Although the author claims not to keep horses, it is actually a novel about keeping horses. At this point, we should profoundly expose and criticize Lao Duo's ugly face. ...
Scoring:
Fluency: 0.7. Needless to say, this is a soap opera book, especially in the middle and late period.
Details: 1.0. If parents' short-lived novels are not written more carefully, who will read them?
Imagination: 0.9. The whole book is full of creativity, but it still falls into a bit of a cliche in the later period.
Rationality: 0.8. Everything else is easy to say. The relationship with Princess Lanling is developing too fast, and the plot of the princess giving birth is too mysterious.
Personality: 0.8. The protagonist is lifelike, and the supporting role is a little npc.
General comment: 4.2. A very distinctive book.
Stealing Ming (Big Bang)
The most controversial travel novel in history, perhaps the most controversial online novel in history, is not among them. This book is not only a subversion of Ming history, but also a subversion of the whole world of travel novels. People say that "there is no crossing after stealing" is actually reasonable.
In most of the time-travel novels we have seen, the historical celebrities that the protagonist met in the past are mostly the images we saw in the history books. At best, it just makes him more vivid and three-dimensional, makes the bad guys more human, and makes the good guys more problematic. Even the novels with convictions are the same as those already talked about in Otawa, such as Cao Cao and Wang Mang. These travelers never thought about it. What if the historical figures of the era I went to were different from those known by modern people? What if Shi Yue returned to the time when Sima Guang was actually a sinister villain and Lv Huiqing devoted himself to serving the motherland?
Stealing Ming is such a book that uses novels to reverse history. Yuan Chonghuan's image in the minds of most readers will change dramatically before and after reading this book, right? Of course, the premise is that you can read this book carefully. The author's method of influencing people's hearts is ingenious and the layout details are very detailed. Panda has read many books about the late Ming Dynasty, and he has taken out all the historical materials that are powerful for his own views, which makes us ordinary readers blindsided at once. What's more, the scene written by the author is cruel and makes people want to cry. The enemy seems invincible, but our own people have their own problems-all this makes people feel real. And when the author described Mao and Wei Zhongxian in front, he did a lot of work, so when the author quietly pointed the finger at Yuan Chonghuan and the Party, the readers didn't feel very abrupt, at least they would think carefully about the historical materials they had seen before. When it comes to the decisive battle with Jiannu, most readers have only hatred and disgust for Yuan. ...
The writing style of the author of this book is similar to "Buddha is the Tao". At first glance, it seems rough, but its description of details has a top-level influence on people's minds. Of course, the detailed description of war tactics, the comparison between the modern army and the feudal army, and the exposure of crimes in the Qing Dynasty are all brilliant, but these are really not the focus compared with the controversy over Yuan Chonghuan.
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Scoring:
Fluency: 0.9. The description is quite smooth and can firmly grasp people's hearts. However, Huangshi's experience in Southwest China and Fujian seems to be idle.
Details: 0.8. The detailed description of the war is second to none in the novels I have read, but some details are lacking in textual research, such as official titles. Besides, emotional drama can't be sloppy.
Imagination: 1.0. Restoring the situation in the late Ming Dynasty through sporadic historical materials, the description of "Long Gun Array" is refreshing, and there are many novels that illustrate their views with novels, but not many people change their original views after reading novels like Stealing Ming.
Rationality: 0.8. I don't know much about history I can't say what kind of person Yuan Chonghuan is. But the author's point of view is also a family statement. Koukou is mainly because the author used characters as loudspeakers in his later period.
Personality: 0.9. The protagonist is a little confused, but the younger brothers are more brilliant. Mao, Wei Zhongxian and Yuan Chonghuan wrote quite well.
General comment: 4.4. A very subversive work
Go home (by drunkards)
Alcoholic and Ayue are two very talented, knowledgeable and diligent authors. Both of them are good at historical themes (to be exact, historical overhead themes). I started reading their works in 2004, and it has been five years now. In the past five years, drinkers have written three books, and the fourth book "The Founding of the People's Republic of China" has also finished the beginning, while Ayue's "New Song" has only seen a little tail, which seems to be far from over. I don't say this to praise the hard work of the drinker, let alone criticize his shoddy work. He and Ayue published books at different speeds only because he chose to make money by subscribing to websites, while Ayue chose to earn royalties by publishing. Two different writing styles determine that drunkards must speed up the code word when writing books, and his books are bound to be more passionate, fluent and readable; Ayue, on the other hand, can ponder every detail slowly, which makes his book more detailed and memorable. Under the background of young, utilitarian and vulgar online readers, Ayue's way is undoubtedly wiser, while drinkers are even more admirable. After all, it must be tiring to compete with authors who can write novels without thinking.
On a whim, I talked about writing, but I still talked about the book Home. Among the online novels I have read, it is the most "unlike" online novel. Obviously, drinkers absorb a lot of nutrition from the writing of orthodox literature. In addition, Xu Li, the protagonist, is neither a traveler nor possessed by ghosts and gods. His writing attitude of respecting history makes this book exude a strong fragrance. Even except the deeds related to the protagonist, most things can be described in history books. When I was reading this book, I happened to be eating the purple tongzhi sword. I felt a sense of shock when I saw that the plot of Mai's death in Liaodong was almost the same as that in the novel. Some people say that the fictional composition of this book is by no means higher than that of The Legend of the Condor Heroes, which is true.
Home describes the troubled times of Sui and Tang Dynasties. In the past, we always described troubled times as a lot of heroes, which made people excited. But Home tells us from the beginning that although there are heroes in troubled times, ordinary people suffer. Since then, with the development of the plot, the author's brush strokes have touched on the sufferings of the people at the bottom of the world, where wars are frequent and thieves rise. Until the appearance of the old general Zhang Xutuo, the theme of this book "The duty of a military commander is to guard" will come to the fore. This is something we have to reflect on. What did the outlaws in the storytelling do for the people?
From the beginning, the drinker rebelled against his usual style of writing, and his writing was simple, meticulous and authentic, which made people think that he was going to switch to making yam egg pie. After the protagonist entered the grassland, he gradually recovered his familiar passionate writing style. But obviously, he is deliberately restraining himself and making his writing more simple and heavy. The so-called epee has no front, and clever thinking is ineffective. It is the luck of the drinker and our readers.
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Scoring:
Fluency: 1.0. It's really one go, which makes people want to read it in one breath.
Details: 1.0. The description is both grand and nuanced, and the technique is simple.
Imagination: 0.9. The author's imagination is very rich, extracting the protagonist from the limited campus stories, and then blending into the troubled times of Sui and Tang Dynasties. But it must be based on real history, which is somewhat bound.
Rationality: 0.9. It can be seen that the author devoted a lot of effort to that history, and the historical details were almost impeccable. It's just that the protagonist grew up a little faster. Promotion is a little too fast. It took less than five years from being an ordinary soldier to being appointed as a general?
Character: 1.0. It not only conforms to the historical truth, but also describes many historical figures with his own eyes. I didn't really know Zhang Xutuo until I read the book, and Tang gaozu and Yang guang's descriptions are very skillful.
General comment: 4.8. There is no best online novel I have ever read.
Hui Ming is king (the moon closes)
I don't like some books myself, but there are many people seeking after them online. I also recommend them. Let's judge for ourselves whether they look good or not.
My first impression of Huiming was quite good. The author's writing style is excellent, and his relaxed and humorous style is quite pleasing. The description is very delicate, although the plot is a bit bloody, it is acceptable. The protagonist is infatuated with his wife. Although he is more Gao Daquan, he occasionally does some stupid things, which is even cuter. Respect for history, especially the description of Emperor Zheng De, is refreshing. It should be said that this book is a very good work.
However, this book is too stallion. There are already six or seven heroines in the middle. I wonder if there will be more than a dozen after that. A stallion is ok, but I can't accept this level.
I haven't finished reading this book. Those who don't hate stallions can have a look. This is a masterpiece of its kind.
There are still many, so I won't turn them around. I'll give you a website, and you can read it yourself. /public forum/content/no 124/ 1/9744 . shtml