In argumentative writing, many articles have a * * * wound-narrative is tedious and lengthy, and narrative is used instead of discussion. In fact, the presentation of examples is not simple, and there is great room for art and development. Whether to use a single sentence or a complex sentence, whether to use a single sentence or a multi-sentence, what materials to choose, how to deal with the materials in detail, and what kind of people to report need careful design and planning. The following are several effective and easy-to-operate case studies.

Way.

First, the single case display type

That is, to prove a point with an example. The advantage of this method is that it can comprehensively summarize the connotation of the case and fully prove the argument. For example:

Relax and let life regain hope. It was a very dark and lonely time, and no one could tell right from wrong. Ten years of catastrophe have hit many people's hearts. At that time, all the literati and scholars were labeled as capitalist roaders and lived in the bottom of society. Yu, a famous scholar, mentioned in "Lend Me My Life" that when materials were scarce, the scholar was treated inhumanely, and he was punished for sweeping the street, so he endured humiliation and burden. Just at the moment of his despair, a little boy took a dirty candy out of his pocket and handed it to him, saying, "Uncle, eat." It was only a small effort that made him remember his life, and it was this small effort that made him pick up the hope of life again. He took one look at this feeling and left firmly. (20 12 Henan candidates are "easy, always moved")

A brief example of a little boy's hope for life was returned by a piece of candy when he was down and out, which proved the view that "life can return hope without blowing off dust" Examples are carefully analyzed and proved.

Second, many situations are foreshadowing.

That is, list multiple examples in one paragraph. The advantage of this method is that it can not only increase the richness of the material of the article, but also demonstrate the views in many directions and enhance the persuasiveness of the article. For example:

I think of such a group of people, most of whom were born in the late Qing Dynasty and the early morning of the new century, and the ancient civilization has already ushered in the pain of rebirth. They have more anxiety, confusion and hope than any generation. They lead the people and paint the future through their own pens or in various meaningful ways. They all run on this glorious thorny road without clapping on the roadside. They all bravely picked the beam of society and established their own reputation. Among them, there are Shen Congwen's poetic praise of Xiangxi culture, Ba Quan's deep complaint against the old ethics, Mao Dun's profound analysis of social economy and Guo Moruo's "The Scream of Phoenix Nirvana". They all bravely participated in this battle, and finally opened a brand-new era. If everyone just applauds, what about progress and revival? We should all bravely embark on this thorny road. (20 12 Zhejiang examinee "glorious road of thorns")

A brief analysis of Ba Jin, On Contradiction, Guo Moruo and other literary giants shows their elegant demeanour running on the thorny road, which enhances the persuasiveness and authority of the article. Examples are presented in the form of an overview, which is concise and rich in cultural connotations.

Third, the presentation of complex sentences.

Is to use complex sentences with different relationships to present materials. Commonly used complex sentences include: turning sentences, causal sentences, conditional sentences, hypothetical sentences and so on. The advantage of this method is that the ideographic focus is prominent, which can better integrate materials and opinions.

Causality: This type of narrative often uses related words to express causality, such as "because so", "because so" and "why because". For example:

Refuse blind worship and learn to be a rational citizen. Why is Zhang Can Wuben a street liar? Why is his "mung bean therapy" and raw eggplant all the rage? Why is his nonsense of "eating back the diseases you have eaten" worshipped by countless people? Why did his "Wubentang" 15 minutes consultation of 2000 yuan make an appointment one year later? This is because people blindly believe in his coat of "a family of Chinese medicine", his name of "the first dietotherapy person in China" and the media.

Celebrity effect of sports hype ...

The author uses "Zhang Wuben" materials, closely follows the pulse of the times, and analyzes the essence of blindly worshipping celebrities from the perspective of phenomena.

Contrastive type: this type is often used to express contrast in narrative. Such as "opposite" and "opposite".

Dickens lived in the19th century, and was at the beginning of reform, with social unrest and the bourgeoisie wearing a veil of hypocrisy. It was not an era suitable for the development of literature and art, however, Dickens, who lived in that era, did not indulge in love songs and despair, nor did he put all his eggs in one basket by writing life with a pen. On the contrary, he prescribed a good prescription for Britain at that time: forgiveness and love. He wrote A Tale of Two Cities and Oliver Twist. What he wrote was not revolutionary historical facts, but

It captures the breath of that era and tells people with a story that when revenge is over, bloodshed can only cause more bloodshed, and only forgiveness can save the world. Kindness, like Dickens, seems to be the least suitable for that dark age, but it can face it bravely, influence that society with its own strength, and make the most suitable feat in the most unsuitable period. In the society (20 12 Guangdong college entrance examination composition "Born at the Right Time"), Dickens did not have extreme resentment, but prescribed a recipe for tolerance and love, which highlighted his kindness.

Fourth, the method of transforming people.

When the case is presented, the second person calls you or you instead of the third person, which avoids the boring discussion and enhances the intimacy and realism of the article. For example:

What can drown your shadow, what name can last longer than your name, and what hand can turn the deepest and heaviest page of life! You use these hands to comb the thread of China's history. Looking back behind him, there is a dog's fly camp; Those who look on coldly on the world of mortals are people who seek fame and gain. When the shallowness and noise of modern times become the main theme of life, who will pay attention to touching the soul of China people? But, sir, you stood up bravely, understood your burden, and held the dark door. With those powerful hands, you have smoothed the history of China and combed a new chapter in the development of China. Finishing, a difficult process, requires us to have courage and courage different from ordinary people. ("finishing")

This paper briefly analyzes the examples presented in the style of Touching China, and tells that Sima Qian jumped out of personal humiliation and combed the lifeblood of historical development, which makes people feel cordial and true.

Fifth, put yourself in the shoes.

Examples are not objective narratives, but personal narratives, which can be expressed by narratives, arguments and lyricism. For example:

The cold wind is cold and refreshing. Walking alone, let the cold winter test the tough tibia. I still remember reading this article in Chinese class two years ago. Liu Liangcheng, born in 1960s, had an elegant childhood. Perhaps our life is too stable, and the scene of driving an ox cart and chopping wood will make us feel novel. Living in a greenhouse for a long time will always admire people who endure the cold outside, but they can't move if they want to experience it. That winter should be lonely, right? Without a partner to play with, the hard work of the whole day made him understand the hardships of life prematurely. That winter should be very sad, right? His father's cold face and harsh words made him doubt whether he was loved. It was a hard winter, wasn't it? The howling cold wind blew in through the crack of the door with heavy snow, threatening the flickering flame. As a child, he experienced the winter of life prematurely, and his four seasons were reversed, but these bitter snowflakes paved the way for the wheat in the coming year. After growing up, Liu Liangcheng made the best interpretation of life with perseverance and courage, and his spring has arrived. (Waiting for Spring)

Simple example analysis is not a simple narrative, but a combination of self-emotion and discussion, lyricism and narrative. Based on the connotation of Waiting for Spring, this paper interprets Liu Liangcheng's loneliness and hardship while waiting for spring by means of questioning and parallelism.

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