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Examination on the composition of "get it off your chest quickly"
Pick up a pen, spread out a piece of paper and quickly wipe it off your chest.

-The urge to write.

People who study writing often fall into such a misunderstanding: as long as they master writing skills, their compositions will have high quality and level. Actually, it is not. Learning to write, skills and techniques are important, but the most important thing is the enthusiasm and impulse of writing. Without a strong desire to write, without a sense of urgency and responsibility, even the best skills are difficult to master, let alone touching.

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Enthusiasm is a powerful emotion, which affects and even determines people's thoughts, words and deeds. The writing enthusiasm in the chest is like fire, which will produce an impulse to get it off your chest. Once the writing impulse is formed, it will be full of thoughts and witty remarks, and writing will enter the best state. Writing enthusiasm and writing impulse are not born out of thin air, but the result of writers' frequent contact with nature and society, and the writer's understanding, understanding and feelings about natural landscapes, flowers and birds, and countless people and things in society.

Middle school students have read "Who is the cutest person" written by writer Wei Wei, and they have all been moved by it. In the early 1950s, this 300-word newsletter once caused the ideological collision of hundreds of millions of enthusiastic young people, and also brought tears to hundreds of millions of readers. For a time, the strong feelings of loving the motherland and loving the most lovely people permeated the 9.6 million square kilometers of the motherland and took root in the hearts of thousands of people in Qian Qian. Why is this article so charming? The words that the author pours out his feelings can give us an excellent answer. This is what he said:

"Every day in North Korea, I am moved by some things; The tide of my thoughts and feelings is flowing freely; This makes me want to tell my friends in my motherland everything. But what I am most anxious to tell you is an important experience of my thoughts and feelings, that is, I feel more and more deeply who is our most lovely person. "

"I can write" Who is the cutest person ". The most basic reason is that the heroism and heroic deeds of our soldiers are so great and touching; And all this completely touched me. "

"Deep feelings in real life, how important it is for writers! You have a deep feeling. If you write it, you will definitely have such a strong feeling, and others will have a deep feeling when they read it. What you feel is shallow, and what others get from you is also shallow; You don't feel it at all, so needless to say ... you become close friends with them, and you know them well. Their temperament, thoughts and feelings will infect you and make you sink into their emotions. In other words, it can make you feel deeper. "

From these three paragraphs, we can at least understand the following reasons for writing an article.

First, the author's thoughts and feelings are rushing, eager to say, eager to write, eager to tell others. It is this writing impulse and this uncontrollable writing enthusiasm that has created this well-known article. Writing impulse is the internal driving force of writing, which makes thinking active and life materials emerge in the brain. If the writer's thoughts and feelings are not surging, and he does not express his feelings for joy, joy and joy, he will never write, and his momentum is touching.

Second, the passion and impulse of writing comes from the contact and understanding of real life. The author devoted himself wholeheartedly to the fierce struggle to defend the country, made friends with volunteers-instructors, war heroes, ordinary soldiers, cadres, freshmen and backward people in the past, got to know them, sank into their emotions, and understood, felt and felt deeply, so he had the enthusiasm to pour out his feelings quickly. People who learn to write should be able to express their love and hate passionately, praise beautiful things and noble sentiments, and attack ugly people and things. They must live seriously in social life, see with their eyes, listen with their ears, think carefully, pay attention to everything, accumulate everywhere, and cultivate their enthusiasm for writing. If you don't care about life, turn a blind eye and listen to it, then there will be no touching realm of writing impulse anyway.

Third, the passion and impulse of writing also comes from a lofty sense of responsibility. The author lived in the army for a long time. The great heroism and touching heroic deeds of the soldiers constantly hit the author's mind and shocked it. Out of lofty dedication and sense of responsibility, he wants to tell his friends in the motherland about the pure qualities, strong will, simple temperament, broad mind and heroic achievements of soldiers, so that people can be proud of having such heroes and being born in this heroic country. Students who study writing should have a sense of responsibility, although the purpose of writing communication reports is not exactly the same as that of writers. Correctly understanding and using the Chinese language and writing articles with content, reason and order are the needs of study and future work and information exchange. The clearer the purpose and significance of learning to write, the more responsible you are, the more you can stimulate your writing enthusiasm, and the easier it is to breed your writing impulse.

Writing impulse is by no means posturing and moaning, but objective things act on the author's eyes, ears and heart, arousing the author's inner anxiety, pouring out, shouting, singing, flogging and other strong emotions. The autumn wind breaks the thatched cottage by Du Fu, a great poet, is a masterpiece of the ages, and it is a person's voice, especially at the end:

There is no dry place in the bedside table, and the feet are numb with rain. What's the point of getting wet all night? There are tens of millions of luxury houses in Ande, which greatly protect the poor people in the world from the spring breeze and the wind and rain! Oh! When I suddenly see this house in front of me, I will freeze to death alone!

After the Anshi Rebellion, Du Fu built a thatched cottage in Chengdu, which was not very strong and finally got a place to live. Who knows that one day, a sudden storm hit and the river went over the mountains. The tall Alstom tree next to the thatched cottage, which is said to have grown for 200 years, struggled with the thunderstorm, but its root was broken, pulled up by the strong wind and fell like a dead dragon and tiger among thorns. Another day in August, the autumn wind roared, and the three layers of thatch on the thatched roof were swept away by the ruthless wind, some hung on the top of the forest, and some sank into the pond depression. At dusk, although the wind stopped, it was overcast and began to rain. It rained all night and there was no dry soil at home. Raindrops fell on the ground, on the house and on the poet's heart, and I couldn't sleep for a long time. The poet's thoughts are ups and downs, thinking of people who have been displaced by their own disasters, and thinking of how to build thousands of houses so that the poor in the world can smile and never suffer from storms again. The poet was filled with emotion, so he sang the song "The Cottage Was Blown by Autumn Wind" in the sleepless night. This emotional impulse constitutes an eternal swan song, in "alas! When I suddenly see this house in front of me, my house will freeze to death by one person. " Shouting is the outpouring of my heart and the dedication of my life. This noble and broad feeling makes readers excited and awed.

There are different ways to express writing enthusiasm, some are diligent in writing, some are willing to express their thoughts and feelings smoothly, some are persistent for a long time, and strive to express their feelings accurately in words. For example, Su Shi, a great writer in the Song Dynasty, once said, "There is no happiness in a certain life. If you write an article, you will find that your pen is full of twists and turns, and you call yourself a pleasure on earth. " Nothing in my life is happy or happy. Only by writing articles can I fully express my thoughts. I think nothing in the world is happier than writing articles. This passionate writing enthusiasm and writing impulse can be said to be the pinnacle. It is precisely because Su Shi sublimated his poetry creation to the realm of the joy of life and integrated the joy of life into his poetry creation that his works were magnificent, fluent and free. Tang Geng, a fellow countryman, is also a famous poet in Song Dynasty, and his writing situation is quite different from that of Su Shi, who likes Tang Geng and is sad. Tang Geng said: "Poetry is the hardest thing! I ... painstakingly wrote a poem, lamented for a long time, and then wrote an article ... I'll read it tomorrow, full of flaws, and then I'll go back and correct it after a long time of mourning ... I'll take it out for a few days, and I'll be sick when I come back, so many times. " This passage reveals the persistent enthusiasm for writing from another angle. He said that writing poetry is the hardest thing. It's hard to write poems by yourself. It takes many days to memorize painfully before you can write it. When I took it out the next day, I found many problems, so I painstakingly deliberated for several days and revised it repeatedly. After a while, I took it out and read it again. I found it was wrong and repeated it many times. This passion for writing is very valuable.

From the above two examples, we can understand that writing enthusiasm can take bold, implicit and deep forms, but no matter what form, its similarities are writing and loving writing, fully and accurately expressing their feelings. And this is exactly what we modern students should and must have.

Love is the basis of cultivating writing enthusiasm and stimulating writing impulse. Love life, love and appreciate the beautiful things in life, take the initiative to receive education, cultivate the mind with noble humanistic beauty, majestic rough or elegant and exquisite natural beauty, increase knowledge and enrich the mind, and there will be a steady stream of thoughts in the heart. Love life, full of hatred and disgust for the falsehood, evil and ugliness in life, and also have emotional impulses to say and write.

While loving life, we should also love the language of the motherland. In Dude's The Last Lesson, Mr. Hamel said that French is the most beautiful language in the world. After reading this content, the students are unconvinced and think that the language of our motherland is the most beautiful. I think our students' understanding and feelings are valuable. The language of our great motherland is vivid and beautiful, and its treasures are extremely rich. Its accuracy and delicacy in expressing feelings are rare in the world. Only with deep feelings and unremitting exploration and excavation can we appreciate the mystery and infinite scenery. Language and writing are tools for exchanging ideas. To master tools and skillfully use them, we must persevere in serious training. Only by training with strong interest and deep feelings can you enjoy writing and have a strong and lasting enthusiasm for writing.

The experience of countless writing practices tells us that the higher the writing enthusiasm, the stronger the writing emotion, the more sincere and rich the articles woven by language, and the more successful the practitioners can enjoy. Young students are in their prime and full of lofty sentiments. As long as they have a strong desire to learn the language of the motherland and constantly cultivate their enthusiasm for writing, there will be a touching situation in which pens and paper can be stretched.