the Chen Dynasty
In addition to strict logic, an argumentative essay should be lively, interesting and full of passion. The biggest feature of reasoning prose is that it is mainly based on reasoning, literary and artistic, and it is easy for readers to feel and feel. Therefore, writing an argumentative essay in the form of reasoning is a great trick. When we read those essays, we often get both rational and emotional enjoyment, which is really like drinking wine for a long time.
Let's enjoy two emotional argumentative essays written by two high school students in the form of prose:
(A) beautify life
Ganling
Some people say that life is an accident. I would like to regard this accident as a miracle.
When I join the busy crowd, I find that life is easy to become pale in the busy and vulgar in the ordinary, so don't just bow your head in a hurry, give life some embellishment, it will be full of fragrance.
Come on, give life a height!
I have seen the fireworks blooming in the starry sky countless times, and every time I see them, my heart is greatly shocked. No matter where I put it, it will try its best to rush up until it reaches the highest point, and then bloom again. Later, I learned that it was because it gave me a high-level life, so it worked hard to make progress and bloom beautifully at the peak of life!
Let's give our life a height. Let's keep climbing in the course of life and appreciate the true meaning of life in the process of struggle.
Come on, give life a fulcrum!
Remember Archimedes' heroic sentence "Give me a fulcrum and I can pry up the whole earth". Yes, a life without a fulcrum can only bear the burden of life, full of fatigue and breathing. Let us also give life a fulcrum and find the sustenance of life in the days of poverty and wandering; Find warm and considerate blessings in the melancholy and wandering years; Create surprises in the plain; In the busy pursuit of happiness ...
Come on, give life some color!
If you love ethereal memories, choose blue; If you love faint melancholy, then choose purple; If you love sweetness and warmth, choose pink; If you love the passion of jumping, then choose red; If you like the tenderness of the breeze, then you choose green. ...
You can even use your favorite colors to describe your life, interpret the colorful colors between heaven and earth and interpret the colorful life between heaven and earth.
Come on, give life a little care!
None of us can escape the fragility of life, although many times we hide it behind a strong smile. I would like to turn my life into a string of wind chimes: when there is no wind, I will wait quietly; On windy days, a soft song will be played. When the wind is urgent, it is urgent, and when the wind is light, it is misty. In the stormy night, it suddenly fell to the ground and broke into a sad beauty.
Let's give life some care, let the fragile life grow up gradually in consideration and flow gently under careful care.
Come on, give life an expectation!
Life sometimes needs to wait. Maybe your life is bleak, maybe your story has no readers, maybe the fire you mustered up the courage to light was accidentally put out by the strong wind. It doesn't matter, life can't be a magnificent color forever. () Let go of an expectation when it is gloomy, in the distant future.
When depressed, hope is your strongest support; When you are sad, expectation is your happiest waiting.
So, give life an expectation and let beauty stay.
[Appreciation] The characteristic of this article is the combination of reason and reason, which gives people reason in deep affection. The author's idea of "giving us a limited life and something rich in personality to make our life more exciting" is permeated with incisive lyric sentences, and readers are influenced by emotions while knowing the truth. For example, compound sentence, who expressed the author's point of view, made it clear that "Come on, give life a height", "Come on, give life a fulcrum", "Come on, give life a little care" and "Come on, give life a little expectation". In the next paragraph of every "come on" sentence, it is a sentence with a mixture of reason and reason. For example, in "If you love vague memories ... then you choose green ...", you use alliteration to express your feelings, and you use various colors to make your life colorful. In these emotional sentences, it is undoubtedly a spiritual enjoyment for readers to understand.
(2) Calculation life
Gao Peng
A heart without desert is most easily dyed green by nature.
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A traveler, carrying his bags, set out on his journey with a strong will-he wanted to conquer Qian Shan and run to the other side of the ideal.
At first, he walked very fast. Soon, a few grains of sand slipped into his shoes. At first, he didn't care, just kept walking. Gradually, the sand soaked his feet and blood stained his shoes and socks, so he had to give up his trip and return halfway.
In fact, it is not the difficulty of wading through mountains and rivers that hinders his progress, but just a few small grains of sand.
He didn't know to stop and pour sand into his shoes, so a little sand ruined his future.
Travel is like this, so is life.
A few grains of sand will slip into our lives from time to time. Only by counting your life in time and removing the sand can you move forward smoothly.
Life is like a stream. Only by filtering the turbid sewage can the stream be crystal clear and flow away happily. Therefore, even if it is small and weak, it should remain clear and pure.
Life is like a piece of land. Only by removing weeds can the land be full of crops and bear fruitful results. Therefore, even if it is barren or thin, it should be kept flat and clean.
Lotus growing in the south of the Yangtze River has left a graceful and elegant style in the works of many literati, and abides by the classical dignity. My only wish is to make the hot summer blue. Therefore, its stem is "straight through, not creeping", it "emerges from the mud without being stained", and it "smells far and clear, and plants gracefully". All its efforts are for its huge lotus leaves and full lotus flowers. So, gently lift the skirt horn of Jiangnan, and you can see the lotus rhyme full of freehand brushwork. The trend of Tian Tian's recovery from Tian Tian no longer uses a pool of frog drums to protect the countryside. Is to push a wave of blue waves and reflect a piece of Sichuan smoke; It puts on a skirt, reflecting its pride.
The ease of "staying in a cage for a long time and being close to nature" and the leisure of "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely" are the ideal life that literati with elegant temperament yearn for in past dynasties. "Land reclamation in the south, humble home", the world is troubled, what can I do? The wisps of smoke in the thatched cottage are enough to resolve the intrigue in the officialdom; A few volumes of ancient books piled up on the case are enough to keep the endless grievances in the world out of Chai Fei.
A heart without desert is most easily dyed green by nature. We should always be vigilant to prevent the desert from eroding our hearts.
People are traveling. Did you dump the sand in your shoes for the beautiful scenery in the distance?
[Appreciation] The characteristic of this article is that perception lies in image and reasoning is based on image. The author didn't tell the truth of "constantly sweeping away obstacles in life" in the article, but asked you to examine your life vividly. To say "small problems affect your future", use the sand in your shoes as a metaphor; If we want to say the truth of "constantly removing obstacles", we can use two metaphors: "Life is like a stream" and "Life is like a piece of land". To say "return to mankind, return to society", take lotus as a metaphor; It is reflected in Tao Yuanming's poems that "the ideal should be lofty and life should be optimistic". Even the last sentence "In order to realize lofty ideals, obstacles in progress must be removed" is also a metaphor "Did you pour sand into your shoes?" Say it.
After enjoying the above two examples, we believe that to write a passionate argumentative essay with essay style, we should grasp the following points:
First, we should pay attention to both logical reasoning and image reasoning. For example, the article "Taking stock of life" vividly talks about constantly taking stock of yourself on the road of life. There is a student composition "Good wine is afraid of the deep alley", starting with the wine in life, and then making association and analogy, saying that "all good things should be well decorated, and they should be good at publicity and promotion to let people know". In order to make the text image, it should be short, humorous, witty and lively, just like prose. Explain the problem with a small mouth, you can use a person, an event, or even a sentence, a poem, a story, a phenomenon, etc. Guide to the discussion center.
Second, we should not only pay attention to the clarity and correctness of the logical thinking of the article, but also be good at making the paragraphs varied and interesting, so that the writing looks relaxed and lively. For example, in the article "Adornment of Life", the first natural paragraph and the second natural paragraph are divided into two paragraphs because of their independent contents, even if there are not many words. Every "Lai" sentence is followed by two paragraphs, and together with the "Lai" sentence, there are always three paragraphs, and in order to highlight the "Lai" sentence, it is divided into paragraphs independently. The full text is not just three rigid paragraphs of "what, why and how".
Third, the sentence should be lively, the expression should be flexible, and the sentence should be subtle and profound. For example, sentences: elegance and vulgarity are integrated in one furnace, and literature and white are integrated; For example, expression: narrative and reasoning cross, lyric and reasoning alternate; For example, sentences can be understood as smooth and hearty, but they can also be subtle and tortuous to express deep meaning, but they can also be harmonious, sharp and pungent, and they can also be passionate ... In short, although the style of writing is different, they should all have artistic charm. The sentences in the above two articles are vivid and lyrical. For example, "a heart without desert is most easily dyed green by nature", which is implicit and profound.
[Author: Xiaogan Senior High School in Hubei Province]