Writing 1: a complete set of argumentative essays
There are many arguments in the argumentative essay.
Generally, it should be collected according to the content classification.
Just collect some from each category, which can cover a wider range.
The following are some main points of the debate.
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Ideals and ambitions:
1. The richest thing in life is life. Life only belongs to people once. A man's life should be spent like this: when he looks back on the past, he will not regret for wasting his time, nor will he be ashamed for doing nothing. (ostrovsky)
Although the road of life is long, there are few key steps, especially when people are young. (Liu Qing)
Where there is a will, there is a way. Burn one's bridges, and the end will be in Chu. Hard-working people are rewarded by heaven, and they have tasted courage. More than 3,000 armour can swallow Wu. (Qing * Pu Songling)
4. When you are old and strong, you would rather use your head; Poverty is strong, not falling into the sky. (Don Wang Bo)
5. Aim high (Zhuge Liang)
6. The most important thing for birds is their wings, and the most important thing for people is their ideals. (proverb)
1. Swedish chemist Nobel was determined to invent explosives in order to reduce the heavy labor of workers during excavation. In the past four years, I have done hundreds of experiments at my own expense. Inspired by a lofty goal, it produced amazing perseverance and selfless lofty spirit, and invented explosives.
2. When Xu Xiake, a famous geographer in Ming Dynasty, was young, he made a great wish of "famous mountains and great rivers". Later, he was in distress many times and almost died, but he was never afraid. Finally, Xu Xiake's Travels with great academic value was left behind.
3. When Zhou Enlai was in primary school, he answered the principal why he studied: to study for the rise of China.
4. Li Shizhen in Ming Dynasty found many mistakes in the previous drug book and decided to compile a drug book. After more than 30 years, Wanli finally wrote an epoch-making medical masterpiece-Compendium of Materia Medica.
Chen She was an employee when he was young. He sighed that "Swallows know the ambition of swans".
Educational issues:
1. participated in killing pig godson.
2. In South Korea, the campaign of "Leave no legacy for children" centered on upper-class people has been quietly carried out 1 1 year and made public. This movement has made outstanding contributions to society and donated property to social welfare institutions. Some members even donated hundreds of millions of yuan of their land to public institutions.
3. Statistics show that the working hours of primary school students in different countries vary greatly: 1.2 hours, 0.7 hours in the United States, 0.6 hours in France, 0.5 hours in Britain and only 0.2 hours in China. A considerable number of urban primary and secondary school students go to school by their parents. They can't strike matches and dare not turn on the gas. The so-called labor is just cleaning the table and sweeping the floor.
After the son of former US President Ronald Reagan lost his job, he did not lend a helping hand to his father, but lived on welfare while looking for a job.
5. Mother Fox: The warmth in the cold. There is a plot in the movie "The Story of the Fox": When the little foxes grow up and can go out to make a living, the mother fox starts to drive them away like crazy, and no one is allowed to stay around.
Diligence scholarship:
1. The industry is diligent, but it is barren to play; What I did was thought, but it was destroyed. (Han Yu)
This is the night for men to study. Teenagers only know how to play, but don't know how to study hard. When they are old, they regret why they didn't know how to study hard when they were young. (Yan Zhenqing)
Genius comes from diligence. Gorky!
4. A = X+Y+Z [A stands for success, X works hard, Y works correctly, and Z talks little. (Einstein)
1. Sima Guang, a historian of the Song Dynasty, presided over the compilation of Zi Tong Zhi Jian which lasted 19 years. He made a pillow out of logs and named it "police pillow" in order to alert himself not to sleep. When he sleeps on this wood, as long as he turns it a little, the "police pillow" will roll up and wake him up. Then, immediately sit up and continue to write.
2. Wang Xizhi is studying in Linchi, where the water is dark.
3. The story of poet Li Bai's "Iron pestle grinds into a needle".
4. Kuang Heng, a scholar of the Western Han Dynasty, was born in a poor family and was eager to learn. He didn't turn on the light at night, so he stole the light from the wall and eventually became a learned scholar.
The famous painter Qi Baishi is over 90 years old, but he paints five paintings every day. He said, "Don't let go of a day." He wrote this sentence and hung it on the wall to encourage himself.
Learning and thinking:
1. Learning without thinking is useless, thinking without learning is dangerous. (Confucius)
1. Dai Zhen, a great scholar and thinker in the Qing Dynasty, asked Zhu who he was and why he knew about things more than two thousand years ago when his teacher explained "University Chapters".
2. Newton's thinking about apple landing put forward the law of universal gravitation.
Accumulation and knowledge:
1. No accumulation, no miles; If you don't accumulate small streams, you won't be a river. (Xunzi)
2. Fold the wood for life; Nine-story platform, starting with tired soil; A journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step.
1. Every time Li He goes out to travel with relatives and friends, he always brings a white brocade bag, comes up with a witticism, writes it out immediately and puts it in the bag. Go home and clean up at night, almost every day.
Pu Songling stood under the big tree, prepared tea and cigarettes, and warmly invited passers-by to tell their stories. After more than 20 years, it finally became Strange Tales from a Lonely Studio.
Perseverance and perseverance:
1. As long as the kung fu is deep, the iron pestle is ground into a needle. (proverb) 2. Fist never leaves, mouth never leaves. (proverb)
Reading is not playing drums at five o'clock in the middle of the night, but being afraid of catching cold. (Guo Ruoruo)
4. Perseverance, rotten wood can't be carved; Perseverance, the stone can be carved. (Warring States * Xunzi)
There is no royal road to science, and only those who climb along steep mountain roads can hope to reach the summit of glory. (Marx)
1. When Mei Lanfang was young, in order to put on a good show, she got up early every day, staring at homing pigeons flying in the distance and never stopped. Finally, she corrected the weakness of drooping eyelids and eyes, and became a well-known Peking Opera performance artist at home and abroad.
2. Gong Yu moved mountains.
Tang Xuanzang left Chang 'an for a westward journey at the age of 25 and finally arrived in Tianzhu after nearly a year. After studying in India 14 years, I went back to Chang 'an at the age of 44 and brought back 657 scriptures.
4. World masterpiece: write a book for decades.
It took Marx 40 years to finish Capital.
It took Tolstoy 37 years to write War and Peace.
Writing 2: The Importance of Argumentative Analysis
Generally speaking, middle school students can put forward correct arguments and demonstrate them when writing argumentative essays. Examples are often used in demonstrations. Although the written article is correct, appropriate and rich in content, it makes people feel dull and lacks strength and depth after reading it. The reason is that we can't evaluate the argument. In this kind of article, arguments are piled up, without analyzing the cited facts, commenting, explaining and extending the words and deeds of others, and separating arguments from arguments. Therefore, it is imperative to guide students to write comments.
Comment-reveals the essential attribute of the argument.
In an argumentative essay, the author lists many arguments, some of which are phenomena of things. If the author does not analyze and comment on the argument, then the author's ideological understanding stays on the surface, which is superficial or even incorrect, and the argument is pale and powerless. Only through evaluation can we reveal the essential attributes of the argument, make it powerful and effectively prove the point to be discussed. The argumentative essay written in this way is profound.
So, how to evaluate this argument?
The so-called "analysis" is analysis, and analysis is to reveal the truth contained in the argument. Brilliant analysis can improve the ideological depth of the article and give play to the power of the argument. In order to make readers understand the intention of using arguments, it is necessary to clarify their essential attributes. In the article "Against Liberalism", Comrade Mao Zedong pointed out after listing eleven forms of liberalism:
"Liberalism in revolutionary collective organizations is very harmful. It is a corrosive agent, leading to disunity, loose relations, negative work and disagreement. It makes the revolutionary ranks lose strict organization and discipline ... "! This paper profoundly discusses the harm of liberalism, fully demonstrates the central argument of "opposing liberalism", and closely combines ideas and materials.
The so-called "comment" is to directly reveal the essential attributes of the argument. Accurate and appropriate comments can directly show the ideological significance of the article. In the article "On the Surprise of Friends", Mr. Lu Xun first listed all kinds of gaffes of "friends are inexplicably surprised", that is, he pointed out:
"What kind of party state, what kind of' friends'. Friendly countries hope that our people will be slaughtered and become silent. If they are slightly out of line, they will be slaughtered ... "! @ JFU & amp;
The mask of collusion between "AIA" and "Party State" was thoroughly exposed, exposing the sinister intention of the imperial "AIA" in trying to carve up China.
In composition teaching, purposefully strengthening the training in this aspect in combination with the text will certainly improve students' ability to write argumentative essays.
During the training, students' comments should be closely linked to the word "quasi". That is, after quoting an argument, one sentence reveals the essence of the argument and shows the depth of understanding. At the same time, in the training, students should be deeply analyzed and have a strong awareness of this. Sometimes, after quoting an example, there is no rush to comment, but a process of analysis and reasoning, which will give the argument a certain strength.
After a period of training, students' argumentative writing level will be greatly improved.
Writing 3: Learn to write a good narrative.
First, the training goal 1, to understand the characteristics of memorable articles. 2. Learn how to write a good narrative. Second, the training process (1) understand the characteristics of the diary article, which is to record things purposefully, that is, to record the whole process of their occurrence, development and end. The narrative of a chronicle should focus on narrating things, show some meaning of things and reflect the author's attitude and views on things. (2) aspects that should be paid attention to when writing a good composition. First, the material should be refined, typical events should be selected, and things familiar to you should be selected to write. Typical events are representative and universal events, which can get twice the result with half the effort and have great persuasiveness and appeal. In life, we should pay attention everywhere, be good at observing, be diligent in thinking, and be a person with a conscience in life. Try to choose something familiar and deeply felt in your life to write. Write it out like this, reflect your true feelings, and you will be handy. Second, the narrative should be clear and specific. Everything has a cause, a development and a result. Writing a chronicle article is to explain the event clearly according to the development law of the event. Generally, it is necessary to make clear the six elements of time, place, person, reason, process and result, among which reason, process and result are particularly important. Write events, but also seize certain clues. Because the clue is something that runs through the whole article and becomes the thread of plot development. Only by grasping the clues can we determine the choice of materials and highlight the center. Third, we should arrange the narrative order. In real life, the occurrence and development of a thing always has a beginning and an end, and there is a certain order. Narrative is a reflection of real life, and the things it narrates should also have a certain order. Common narrative sequences are: direct narrative, flashback, insertion, etc. Of course, in specific writing, it is not necessary to use the chronological way. You can also use flashbacks to set suspense and solve problems in order; Interpolation can also be used in writing to make the article ups and downs and fascinating. Fourth, the center is prominent, the materials are reasonable and the details are appropriate. Any chronicle has a writing purpose-what to tell the reader, which is the center of the article. Therefore, the center must be clear. Selecting the most meaningful, valuable and excellent materials through strict and careful screening of the materials collected by yourself is the choice of materials. On the basis of selecting good materials, write out the most valuable materials that can highlight the center in detail, and sketch out other materials at the same time. This is the detailed arrangement. There are bright red flowers and green leaves, so the articles written will certainly achieve vivid, true and interesting effects and highlight the center. Fifth, the structure should be complete. The so-called integrity refers to the integrity of things from the cause to the result, and the structure of the article is complete. A very important one is "call first and then respond".
Writing four: the method guidance of writing innovation
From the perspective of the objects involved in innovation, it mainly refers to four aspects: material selection, conception, conception and language. The purpose of innovation is to personalize our composition. In order to express this personality, we can work hard from the following four aspects. First, break the framework of material selection, find the personality of material selection and innovate in material selection. First, we must understand the "diversity" of life. Life is broad and diverse, with three religions and nine streams, and life is rich and colorful; With all kinds, life is colorful. The second is to find the personality of life. There are no two identical leaves in the world, so the people, events, scenery and feelings in our works will be different. The northland scenery of "thousands of miles frozen, Wan Li snowing", the southland amorous feelings of "Lu Juyang Mei is the best in the world", the Lushan Waterfall of "Flying down to the three thousands of feet" and the Three Gorges spectacle of "The apes on both sides of the strait can't stop crying" all show unique personality charm. The third is to write about ordinary life. The evergreen seasons of pine trees are ordinary, but some people can feel its pride; The grass everywhere is ordinary, but some people can appreciate its tenacity; The colony of ants is ordinary, but some people can notice its resultant force ... Only by knowing the true value of ordinary life can we write extraordinary articles. Second, loosen the pliers of intention, publicize the personality of intention, and renovate and show personality. First, there is a little less "meaning". "Meaningful" is the consistent pursuit of many students. What on earth is meaningful? There are some things in life, which may be meaningless, and that will be extremely meaningful. Sometimes, it makes sense to look at it from the side of the mountain. In fact, the composition is not what to write, but how to write. The second is to drag a "tail" less. Many students always drag a tail at the end in order to make their thoughts profound, which leads to a little philosophy. Skipping rope means skipping rope. At the end, add a sentence "Success lies in the last persistence". Flying kites means flying kites. Later, I insisted on adding "My ideal is like a kite flying in the blue sky". It seems that only in this way can my idea be different. Doing so is often self-defeating, so that the concept of literature falls into a rut and loses its own personality. Third, the overall design of the content and expression of the article is to broaden the ways of conception and explore the individual conception of conception. It is a creative and complicated thinking activity in the process of composition, and the old and rigid concept of students' composition is the planarization of ideas. The biggest manifestation of this flattening is to simply copy life and copy everything that happens in life into the article. The second is the simplification of the concept. The main performance is that the way to solve contradictions is simple, and it is often done in a few words. The third is the formulation of ideas. Such as introducing memory-expanding memory-ending memory; Total report-sub-report-summary, etc. In order to make the ideas innovative, we can grasp an article and train from multiple angles to seek innovative ideas as much as possible. Let's use a composition with the title of "Grade Three" to explore several new ideas-① The full text takes the word "busy" as the main line, and writes the busyness of life in Grade Three through three groups of pictures: "morning, hurry", "noon, hurry" and "evening, hurry". (2) The idea of clipping the full text is divided into four parts. Block 1: Excerpted from Chin's conversation; The second piece: Excerpted from Fang's Complaints; The third block: selected from an essay by Xue; The fourth block: excerpted from Hong's diary. The four plates have been edited and cleverly put together. (3) The full text of scripted thinking is centered on the lunch break of a day, and the theme is expressed by the scripted conception method through the story of students' lunch break "cut" by the teacher of six subjects. (4) The full text of radial thinking is spread out with several sentence patterns of "Grade Three is ……", and a short paragraph locks a "point" to show the joys and sorrows of life in Grade Three. ⑤ The full text of Jingle Ideas is written in the form of Jingle, which expresses the bittersweet life in grade three through three or four groups of pictures. ⑥ The whole idea of work and rest schedule is a self-made "work and rest schedule for senior three", and a work and rest schedule serves as a window to see through the life of senior three. ⑦ Imitate thinking. Imitate many poems in full text to show the efforts and unremitting pursuit of junior three students from all directions. The full text of the series focuses on the day of the third grade in the form of TV series. In one episode after another, it shows the tension, busyness and distress of life in grade three, and expresses students' aversion to exam-oriented education. See, once the way of thinking is broadened, we can have a lot of ideas and a good structure. Fourthly, it is a big problem for students to open the box of language and develop the personality of language. How to open our language box and let the writing language have personality? The first is to seek "novelty". This is mainly aimed at those popular and formulaic languages. Seeking "novelty" means "just doing and speaking" and writing the diversity of languages. For example, "the sun gently turns over the flowers and trees, and also turns over the wrinkles on the old man's face." This sentence mainly talks about the novelty of words. If you change "sun" to "photo", this sentence is very general. The second is to seek "Jane". Many of our classmates have a wrong idea that only beautiful language is a good article, so they try their best to "draw" and the result is flashy. In fact, as long as "plain words are unfamiliar, common words are dangerous, old words are novel, and plain words are colorful", language will have unique charm. Look-mom is leaving. Dad, do you want to go? Then mom said she was leaving, and dad said she wasn't. It's just that I'm in pain I don't know whether to follow my mother or stay with my father. (Relatives disagree, parents contradict) ② One is exquisite, the other is exotic, and the other is rustic. Exquisite is full of aura, foreign flavor is full of femininity, and rustic reveals a bit of stupidity. There are no flowery words in these two paragraphs, but the skill of language can be seen in simplicity. The third is to seek "meaning". The ancients said, "refining sentences is not as good as refining meaning." The refinement of "meaning" should be the highest realm of language expression, which can often contain and cover a variety of aesthetic implications. Take a look at the following example-although there are no white cranes, flocks of crows gather and disperse impermanently, all gathering together in the sunset, and their wings are shining with the brilliance of Qi Fei. If the last sentence is changed to "flying in the sunset", the meaning and rhyme of the sentence will be much worse. To sum up, we should strive to innovate in the aspects of material selection, conception, conception and language. Only by innovation can we write fine works. The "CD-ROM" of American model grade three is a hurry on the way to school and a flurry on the way home. In the third grade, male teachers attend classes, while female teachers drag their feet after class. The third day is the time to study in the morning, and when studying at night, I am in a daze. In the third grade, there are countless materials and the questions are boundless. In the third grade, the teacher of seven subjects was confused and the students were confused. In the third grade, I rushed into the canteen and stumbled into the dormitory to hum songs. The third grade is before the exam, and you will croak after the exam.
The third grade is the teacher's teaching and the nagging of miscellaneous parents. The third day is before and after the parent-teacher conference, with ups and downs. The third day was when the first prize was paid photogenic, but the days in Sun Shan were like years. On the third day of B-end, an unruly wild horse galloped and chased the sunset. The third day is a gorgeous colorful cloud, meeting at the corner of youth. The third day is a touch of bitter fleabane bitter fleabane vitality and hope of the new green. On the third day, a petal was wet by the March rain. On the third day, it was a happy blue bird, which froze its wings in the May sunshine. The third day is the monsoon that lights up the eyes in autumn in September. The third day was a bunch of cold plums rubbed red by snow in the twelfth lunar month. The third grade is a colorful psychic note like Huayu. The third grade is a purely romantic and lyrical prose poem. The third grade is a beautiful fairy tale, with a faint and meaningful rose color. [opinion] this article is a masterpiece with a strong sense of innovation. First, choose "point" innovation. The full text uses scattered radiation to draw some "points" from two "faces" to show all aspects of junior high school life. Second, innovative thinking. The author ingeniously condensed the life of junior three students into a "CD". By reading the content of "A", we can feel the tension and helplessness of life in grade three. Reading the content of "B Face" can not only feel the romance and purity of junior high school life, but also feel the youthful vitality of junior high school students. The third is language innovation. There are two groups of overlapping words in each sentence of Face A, and there is no lack of sadness in the language, which just shows the ups and downs of life in grade three, just like a symphony, noisy and serious. Every sentence in "Face B" is full of youthful tension, and the language is soothing, which shows the vigor and vitality of junior three students, like a serenade, warm and charming. Topic 1: A good start Everyone's study and life will have a beginning, and some beginnings are often beautiful or even unforgettable. Please write an article with superscript, regardless of style. [Hint] This article can be written as narrative or argumentative. Taking the innovation of narrative materials as an example, we can eliminate the old stories whose achievements have declined and cheered up as the "beginning" and try to capture those vivid pictures of life to express the theme. For example, the beginning of class striving for "flowing red flag", the beginning of dormitory striving for "cleanest", the beginning of family striving for "double civilized households" and so on. Take the beginning of an argumentative essay as an example, we don't always have to come straight to the point and make a central argument. For example, we can draw an argument by expanding a set of pictures with a good beginning, drawing an argument through a short story and listing a few famous sayings. Title 2: Please look at my gizmo. As a young junior high school student, we all have some small inventions more or less. Please write an article with superscript, regardless of style. [Hint] It is best to write a narrative or explanatory article on this topic. Now, take the explanatory text as an example to discuss several innovative ideas. (1) cross-reference type. Many students compete to test their own "gizmos", so that the full text can be written as many "Please look at my gizmos". ② Introduce yourself. In the full text, one kind of "gizmo" is invited to make a self-presentation, and several kinds of "gizmos" can also be invited to introduce themselves. ③ Click on the Internet. Introduce the "gizmo" of "I" in the form of online chat. It can also be conceived by letters or official documents. Topic 3: Beauty, now you live in a beautiful era. You can find beautiful footprints everywhere in charming early morning, quiet dusk, warm campus and harmonious family. Please complete the above questions and write an article, regardless of genre. [Hint] This topic can be written in narrative, prose and argumentative. When writing an argumentative essay, you should pay special attention to the filling of the topic. From the point of innovation, we can't write such themes as "dedication", "helping others" and "send warm". It can show the theme of neighborhood harmony, the theme of family spiritual civilization construction, the theme of science and technology going to the countryside, the theme of folk customs, the theme of loving beauty and striving for beauty ... Life is a sea of Wang Yang, as long as it can show the beauty in life, topic 4 of the article: There are many students who eat snacks. Please write an article on the topic of "eating snacks", regardless of style. This article is suitable for narrative and argumentative writing. If you write a narrative, you can choose many new ideas from the perspective of material selection. There must be many fresh and interesting stories in the joy, anger, sadness and joy of "eating snacks", and the more vivid the story, the more infectious it is; From the point of view of conception, the innovation of conception is not to show greatness and loftiness, and many articles that show the interest of life will be refreshing. If you write an argumentative essay, you can express your views from several aspects. You can take a negative attitude towards eating snacks, you can take a positive attitude, and you can also analyze its advantages and disadvantages. As long as it makes sense, it is a good article. Topic 5: Read the following materials, draw up your own topic and write an article in any style. Once, an international wrestling invitational tournament was held in Tehran, and Iranian athletes won. Enthusiastic spectators threw shiny coins at the athletes. Many foreign athletes quickly bent down to pick up money, and some simply took off their jerseys to put money on them. The athletes from China sat quietly. Several foreigners got up and looked up at the athletes in China doubtfully while collecting money. Iranian TV reporters immediately aimed the camera at this scene, and all Iranian TV viewers saw this touching scene. [Inspiration] This article can be written in narrative and argumentative. When writing a narrative, we should be innovative in expanding the details, such as: the exaggeration of the opening atmosphere, the agitation of the audience after Iranian athletes won, the behavior of foreign athletes grabbing money, the disdain of China athletes, the provocation of foreign athletes picking up money and handing it over to China athletes, and so on. Only when we write new details can the article be vivid. Writing an argumentative essay can be titled "The dignity of the motherland is above everything else". The language of the article should be full of emotion and passion. If it is full of cliches, it is hard to convince people. Topic 6: Make a reasonable imagination and write an article according to the materials provided. In the evening, the family had another conflict because of watching TV. Dad wants to watch the sports meeting, grandma wants to watch Princess Huanzhu, mom wants to watch hand in hand, and I want to see the legendary swordsman. As a result, such a scene appeared at home ... [Hint] This is an imaginary composition based on the materials provided, which shows the students' creative thinking. Here is an innovative idea. In the evening, when my parents didn't come back from their relatives, my grandmother was chatting in the next room, so "I" could enjoy "the legendary swordsman" exclusively. I didn't know that grandma came back to see the swallow, but I didn't agree. Just now, my parents pushed the door and came in. As soon as my father came in, he shouted to watch the football match. As soon as my mother sat down, she called Xia Xiaoxue. The channel is chaotic, the screen is flashing, everyone is watching, but no one can see anything clearly. "I" was not satisfied and decided to play a beautiful trick on Ling Huchong. Suddenly, the power went out! Therefore, the whole family is waiting patiently or impatiently for electricity, but it just doesn't come. This idea is novel and unique, full of comedy.
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Prose is a very broad concept. Narrative and argumentative essays written by middle school students can be regarded as prose. The characteristics of prose are that everything written is true, the writing is casual and natural, and there is an internal clue running through it.
About the prose of ordinary life, you can write a narrative, write all the fragments of your life, work and rest on time every day, attend classes, eat and take the bus. These are all things that everyone is doing, which is unremarkable. But you can find a kind of happiness in the plain, this simple and plain life makes people feel very full, don't think too much. Just reveal the main idea of the article at the end.
Accordingly, you don't need to read too many model essays to avoid being bound by other people's ideas.