Read the following text and write an article as required.

Dedication of Love is a sweet pop song. what is love ? Different people have different answers. Some people say that love is a lubricant, some people say that love is an amino acid, and some people say that love is the honey of life ... because of love, our heart lake is rippling; Because of love, our life is full of fragrance; Because of love, our studies are thriving; Because of love, our souls shine ...

Please write an article on the topic of "love". The title is self-made, the style is self-selected, and the idea is self-determined, not less than 600 words.

Thinking guidance

Love is an old and young topic. From ancient times to the present, thousands of years of cultural history in China are all about love. At home, you feel the love of your parents; At school, you feel the love of teachers and classmates; Strangers lend you a helping hand, and you feel that society is full of beauty and love. Love is an abstract thing, a feeling, a taste, a spiritual activity based on reality and an eternal pursuit of mankind.

Faced with such an open topic, we should first fly the wings of imagination, find our own life, and extract materials from it, and then choose the style according to the materials we have mastered and our own specialties. If you write a narrative, you should first pay attention to the choice of materials. When you choose an event from your personal experience to start your narrative, you can relate other similar events to your life and reading experience, and enrich and perfect your content with the details of other events; Or use the opposite events to compare and strengthen the expressive force of the article. Secondly, we should pay attention to the arrangement of the structure. You can just write one thing and advance the story according to the development of the plot; You can also capture some events and express the theme of "love" in the form of fragment combination. Third, we should create a pearl of detail and make it shine in the text. We should be good at collecting, digging, amplifying and expressing details from our daily life. Writing an argumentative essay requires not only clear arguments, typical arguments and clear argumentation ideas, but also a certain literary talent.

Exhibition of outstanding works 1

There is a lie called sex.

□ Liu

Everything, because there is such a lie in this world, its name is sex.

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Since kindergarten, handicraft class is the soil that breeds my inferiority.

After entering middle school, physical education class became a catalyst for my inferiority, because I couldn't finish those simple actions every time.

One day, the black-faced teacher Ma finally got angry. He shouted angrily, "stand aside and watch what others do!" " "I stood by and watched my classmates roll easily one by one, like happy balls. I was so ashamed that I almost cried.

When I got home, as soon as I saw my father, I immediately threw myself into his arms and cried. "It's all my dad's fault. I passed this shortcoming on to you." When he said this, dad did a back roll, but he couldn't turn it over. I snorted, very happy.

The next day, my mother accompanied me to school. She said that she wanted to talk to Teacher Ma. I'm afraid my mother will blame Mr. Ma. My mother smiled: "I'm not blaming the teacher. I just want to tell him that some of your movements are a little worse than those of other children, but you will catch up slowly and tell him not to worry too much. "

From then on, when I met bad moves in physical education class, Teacher Ma always cut me some slack and stopped demanding, which made me secretly happy.

If it weren't for that time, maybe my life would be as calm as water. That day, I sent my late homework to the office and walked outside the door. I heard Teacher Ma mention my name: "Don't you know that Liu?" She was diagnosed with cerebral palsy. "'cerebral palsy' is not a serious mental retardation? I think her intelligence is ok. "This is the voice of the Chinese teacher." She is slight, mainly manifested in the defect of movement, which is what her mother said ... "

Suddenly, my eyes blurred. No wonder there are so many books about cerebral palsy at home!

An inexplicable force urged me to rush over. I want to stay away from school, from the crowd, and from the world that laughs at me. I ran home and locked myself in my room.

Finally, my father knocked down the door. He pulled me up and said, "Listen, Liu, no matter what happens, you can't shut your parents who love you out!" " "I am a cerebral palsy patient. Why didn't you tell me that you have lied to me 15 years, when will you want to lie to me again? " I screamed at the top of my lungs.

Dad was silent for a while, then took my hand and said, "When you grow up, we will tell you many things. You do have mild cerebral palsy. We didn't tell you because we didn't want the disease to leave a shadow in your heart. We just want you to be happy ... Dad will tell you another secret. Actually, dad also has mild cerebral palsy. You may not believe it, but it's true. The reason why Dad tells you this secret now is because Dad wants you to know that people with cerebral palsy can have a wonderful life. "

Yes, my father lives a wonderful life. He is in power in the shopping mall, giving orders to more than 1 000 employees. But I doubt what he said. Maybe it's just a beautiful lie, just to help me find my confidence. My mother saw the doubt in my eyes and said, "If you look closely, you will find that my father walks on tiptoe, so he is very upset." "Yes, I was desperate, just like you are now. Later, I found that when I ignored my shortcomings, others would not care! " A closer look shows that Dad really walks on tiptoe. Grandma in the country also called and said that Dad's symptoms were much more serious than mine. ...

Just like walking in a novel, everything is so tortuous and bizarre that I have to calm down and sort out my chaotic thoughts. That day I came to the conclusion that I would be as successful as my father; In the face of struggle, cerebral palsy is just a paper tiger!

After the baptism of this storm, I suddenly matured a lot. On the road of life, I regained my self-confidence, struggled forward, and then harvested a string of fruits: I was admitted to a key middle school and got many certificates of winning competitions ... My life was wonderful, although it was not smooth.

Last summer vacation, I went to my aunt's house. Nothing. Talk to your aunt. When I talked about my father's cerebral palsy, she smiled: "Does your father have cerebral palsy? Impossible, he was very naughty when he was a child! " "Then why does dad always walk a little on tiptoe? That is a symptom of cerebral palsy. " "He stood on tiptoe? No way! However, he learned to walk on tiptoe quite well. He looks the most ridiculous! " My aunt was immersed in memories of the past, but I was shocked by her smile. ...

I finally realized the good intentions of my parents. They pruned the branches of my tree of life with lying scissors again and again, so my confidence can stretch freely in the sun. I'm going to call my father at once and tell him that I won't have to walk on tiptoe next time I see him. ...

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Life is the source of writing, and we advocate that writing should reflect the truth. There is no flowery rhetoric in this article, but I can't restrain my excitement and express my feelings in simple language. The author is good at grasping some details and pouring out his heart, going deep into his inner world, and receiving the effect that silence is better than sound here. The structure of the article is exquisite, and the full text takes the time of its own growth as the latitude and the understanding of fatherly love as the meridian to organize the material. Clear thinking, orderly levels, smooth writing, like a beautiful stream, shining with moving brilliance everywhere.

Exhibition of Excellent Works II

Unforgettable parental love

□ Li Wang

Last summer vacation, my mother asked me to help my father collect rice. Because the cut rice needs to be bundled and picked to the designated place for threshing, the workload is very heavy, so the rice thresher must be carried to the field, and generally it takes two people to drag the rice thresher together in the paddy field. Because we have to match the fertile land with the wasteland when we divide the fields into households, the rice fields in my house are not connected together. After harvesting rice in one place, the rice thresher must be transported to another place hundreds of meters away.

I stared at the heavy rice thresher sinking into the mud and said, "Let's both carry it."

Father said, "It is very dangerous for two people not to cooperate well when hurdling or turning.". You walk forward, heavy and thin, and you can't hold on. It's not good for you to walk behind with your head in the bucket. I'll recite it myself. " At some point, my father asked me to help him drag the rice thresher to the edge of the ridge and erect it. I saw him crouching down, leaning against the bottom plate of the rice thresher, struggling to stand up like a giant snail and walking towards another paddy field. I saw his thin body under the heavy threshing machine, almost overwhelmed at any time, and my heart was filled with pity and guilt.

After several hours of hard work, two baskets of rice were filled, and we were ready to go home. It's more than two miles from the rice field to Sunguping at home, and the one my father picked is obviously much heavier than mine. He walked very fast in front and repeatedly told me to walk slowly and rest when I was tired. After he carried the rice to Shaiguping, he strode back to carry the burden for me, fearing that I would be tired. I'm already hungry. I walked behind my father for a while and felt exhausted. There is hardly a dry place on my father's body, and he is soaked with sweat. Looking at all this, I deeply felt how difficult it was for my father to grind his feet under his shoulders in the face of loess.

After returning home, my parents were ashamed. I have repeatedly said that I have worked hard and should not be asked to do such heavy work. When eating, my parents put eggs and sliced meat in my bowl, chanting that I need more energy, but they rarely have these in their own bowls. In fact, they are the ones who have suffered heavy physical labor for years, and need to supplement more energy. My throat tightened, but I didn't let the tears fall.

The love of poor parents is like chopped green onion. When sprinkled, it will have a bright color, and then there will be a life of clear soup and little water, a pale and simple day. Whenever I think of my parents' love for me, I am full of gratitude.

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Sincere feelings are the first feature of the article. Family ties are often like this. There is no deliberate affectation, but the natural expression of feelings, which is inadvertently reflected in life. In the author's pen, his parents' love has become a ray of light that shines on his life.

Excellent selection of materials is the second major feature of the article. It is natural for parents to love their children, and it is a virtue for children to honor their parents. Sometimes parents "sow" a lot of hard work and money to "harvest" their children's filial piety. The author chooses examples from different angles, which not only describes the happiness that parents love their children and are willing to pay, which is the expression of "nature", but also describes the children's deep understanding of their parents' love, which is the bud of "virtue".

Vivid details are the third feature of this article. The author makes good use of details to create a living atmosphere, showing the fatherly love and maternal love of poor families and grassroots families to the fullest, giving readers visual impact and spiritual shock.

Excellent works exhibition 3

Love is colorful.

□ Garlum

On May 12, 2008, the earthquake tore the earth, covered with dark clouds, and death killed countless lives. But we will never give up!

Look, love is shining, illuminating the hope of life!

You said that love is green. Look, the green armed police soldiers are in action! The 8.0 Wenchuan earthquake didn't scare you off. You rushed to the ruins and rushed to the danger zone where aftershocks continued. You are racing against death, ignoring life and death and putting the interests of the people above everything else. You have taken a series of fresh lives from death. You use green to interpret the hope of love!

You said that love is white. Look, the white angel of love is in action! Doctor, the doctor is moving! You race against time, you lift the infusion bottle and use your body as support. The 24-hour running white coat and attentive eyes tell us that love is so sacred and white.

You said love is orange. Look, the orange rescue team is on the move! You go deep into the dangerous ruins to hold up your dying bodies, you shed tired sweat with firm steps, you guard every life with wisdom and create a miracle of life. You show orange love vividly!

You said that love is yellow. Look, the yellow-skinned China child is in action. No matter where you are, it is a disaster area, far away and full of love. Teacher Tan opens her arms like a mother bird. He protected four students with his life and flew to the sky by himself. Teacher Zhang took off two "wings" for the students to fly, but she slept quietly; The director of civil affairs who lost loved ones continuously directed disaster relief and only slept for seven hours in five days. Donation, material donation, charity performance, attention ... China is writing a passionate love song for the descendants of the Chinese people.

What color is love?

Love has no color, red, orange, yellow, green, blue and purple. When all the colors come together, they will become endless light, which will shine with the sun, the moon and mankind. Love will light Wenchuan, China and the whole world!

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This article has a clear point of view and ingenious conception. Focusing on the earthquake relief of the people in China after the disaster, the full text selects four colors: green, white, orange and yellow to show the performance and great contribution of the PLA, the officers and men of the armed police, the soldiers in white, the rescue team and the people of China in earthquake relief. The highlight of the article is "Love is red, orange, yellow, green, blue and purple. When all the colors come together, they gather into endless light, shining with the sun and the moon, shining with human beings, and love illuminates Wenchuan, China and the whole world ",which deepens one layer along the above colors. The idea that "love is red, orange, yellow, green, blue and purple" shows the depth of the author's thought and the ingenious conception, which is really the crowning touch of the article and the sublimation of the theme of the article.

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