1. What is a structural model? Jane? .
The composition of the college entrance examination should first be conceived as a whole. Beginning and end, transitional care, theme development, material selection, etc. You should consider it comprehensively before writing. Think clearly before you can write clearly; If you write clearly yourself, the marking teacher can see clearly; The marking teacher can only give a clear score if he sees it clearly. In my opinion, the composition structure of the examination room should be concise, because the average reading time of each composition is only one minute when the teacher marks the papers. Therefore, it is best for an argumentative paper to include only three parts, five to eight paragraphs: the first part, a brief introduction of raw materials, on the basis of which one's own feelings are drawn out, as the central point of view, this point of view should be clear and clear; The second part is divided into three to five sections. The first two paragraphs (or three paragraphs) give an example from different angles at home and abroad, and make a close positive argument. The latter paragraph (or two paragraphs) can be compared with the previous paragraph by selecting cases from the opposite side; The third part summarizes and sublimates the viewpoints discussed in the full text, giving people a sense of wholeness. This kind of structured article is concise, rigorous and not rigid, and it can also make the marking teacher clear at a glance.
Second, the outline? Quick? .
The college entrance examination tests both ability and speed. For the composition outline listed in the examination room, you can write a simple structural model first, and then write out the words and example sentences that may be used, such as famous sayings and aphorisms, ancient poems, and examples at all times and all over the world (especially those with the flavor of the times today), which are simple and clear, as long as you can understand them. Before writing on paper, you can browse and modify it and choose the best one. This can not only save time, but also do it in one go, avoiding repeated alteration of the text.
Third, what is the content? New? .
1. The topic should be novel and unique. ? Half the questions are good? Many marking teachers judge students' examination ability and writing level according to the topics of their lives. Therefore, if you can draw up a unique topic and attract the teacher's attention with beautiful scenery, the score will naturally be high.
2. The beginning should be novel and unique, and the ending should be profound and touching. Starting from the reality of the topic, choose your best style, carefully create the beginning and end, and ensure high marks.
3. The materials should be fresh and appropriate. If the materials are novel and related to the topic, you can show your agile thinking ability and profound cultural background, which will make the marking teacher feel refreshed and the composition score will naturally be by going up one flight of stairs. We should avoid popular and simple materials, be good at finding unused materials from real life, historical allusions and literary masterpieces, and pay attention to the appropriateness, typicality, novelty and diversity of materials.
Fourth, what is the intention? Deep? .
1. You should deduct your life. A high-scoring composition must be written to the point. The ability to deduct questions is actually the ability to examine questions. If the deduction is not tight, the score will be very low.
2. I have a deep mind. Do you want it? Dig three feet? . ? Does eternity mean high? Many candidates' exam-oriented compositions are often superficial and lack depth. The idea is that we can look for theories from the fields of history and culture? Dig three feet? Depth. Through vertical and horizontal comparison, ideal and realistic observation, accidental and inevitable analysis, I try to find a rational answer dialectically. Marking teachers generally have a soft spot for insightful and philosophical compositions and give them high marks.
Don't be vulgar, naive and indifferent? Hippies There are some vulgar compositions in the college entrance examination every year. We must understand that the college entrance examination reflects the national will, and the national will focuses on promoting truth, goodness and beauty. Some students like to play devil's advocate. No matter what they write, they are written in a sarcastic tone, which is very serious. The college entrance examination composition should be elegant and broad-minded, and avoid philistinism and vulgarity.
Fifth, what are the emotional needs? Really? .
The article doesn't complain? Duck painting? , but the ups and downs of sustenance. Sincere and simple feelings are a pleasure to read and a pleasant taste to taste. The natural expression of true feelings can often impress examiners. To impress the marking teacher, we must first put ourselves into it and move the true feelings. Articles with true feelings often get high marks.
Sixth, what is language? Beautiful? .
Fluent and beautiful language gives people a pleasing feeling, and this language ability should be exercised by ordinary efforts. There are no typos, no ill sentences, fluent words and phrases, the language context is connected from beginning to end, and the meaning can be opened and closed freely, which is the first level to achieve language beauty. Vivid words, flexible sentences and meaningful sentences are the true embodiment of language beauty. The linguistic beauty of composition can be practiced from the following aspects:
1. Appropriate quotations from famous sayings, poems, proverbs and allusions of ancient and modern Chinese and foreign celebrities;
Second, the comprehensive use of various rhetorical devices, such as parallelism, metaphor, rhetorical questions, duality, exaggeration, etc.
Third, the comprehensive use of a variety of sentence patterns, such as multi-purpose short sentences, variant sentences, inverted sentences, double negation and so on.
Fourth, enrich your life and cultural accumulation. Because? There are poetry books in my belly. .
The fifth is to hammer words and refine sentences, and enhance the momentum of the article by means of spreading, suppressing, arranging and asking questions. In a word, polished language can combine complexity with simplicity, abstraction with concreteness; It can make sentences more vivid, implicit, humorous and meaningful; It can make the meaning of the text more vivid, more philosophical and more intriguing.
Seven, the text to? Jay? .
A man's face is like a man's face. It is the first brick that knocks on the teacher's heart. The time for marking the college entrance examination is tight and the weather is hot. The marking teacher faces the computer screen every day, and his mentality is very subtle. If the handwriting is clear and correct, the font is beautiful and generous, and there is no obvious smear mark, the test paper will win the favor of the marking teacher immediately, so the impression score will be high. Imagine: a scribbled test paper appears in front of you, and you are extremely tired and even a little anxious. Would you like to watch it alone? Too sloppy composition, often only look at the beginning and end, maybe the low scores of the three compositions will come out. Of course, the words we write are not necessarily practiced calligraphy (of course, practicing calligraphy is better), but only the words written are of the same size, carefully written one by one, without scribbling or altering (if you really want to modify them, you should also lightly cross them out with a pen, and you must not scribble or scribble), so that the marking teacher can know what words you are writing and achieve an overall effect.
What is the composition of the college entrance examination here? Want it? How many? Quick success? 、? Weird? But getting high marks in the exam-oriented composition is indeed an effective strategy. It is hoped that senior three students will pay attention to it and take corresponding measures according to their actual situation to make composition review and preparation more targeted and effective.
Five key points of getting high marks in composition
In the college entrance examination, candidates usually spend about 45 minutes writing, especially when the marking teacher is so fast. It's not that teachers are irresponsible, but that time is tight and tasks are heavy. Statistics show that a composition should be corrected in about 2 minutes. Does the teacher have to? Look, smell, ask and cut? When it's done, some time will be shorter. At the same time, the composition of college entrance examination accounts for almost half of the total score of Chinese, and its importance can be imagined and self-evident.
Based on the above reasons, it is decided that if you want to get a high score in the composition of the college entrance examination, you should do the following five things as much as possible? Key words? .
Key one: clear.
Including the theme, structure, form and other aspects of the article, strive to be clear, so that the marking teacher can see your article at a glance, specifically:
1. The theme can be presented to the marking teacher through the first enclosing sentence, so that the marking teacher can? Peeping at a leopard? That is to say, no Occupy? 、? Waste? The more precious the reviewer's time is, the more you can have a clear understanding of your composition.
Please look at the beginning of a high-scoring composition in Beijing 20 10, which reads:? Looking up at the starry sky, there are dreams we pursue. Down-to-earth, silent struggle, is the only choice to realize your dream. ? This is the center of the article. Start with the theme, showing the theme and center.
2. The structure can be layered, parallel, contrasting, etc. , so as to give readers a clear and profound understanding; You can also use rhetorical devices such as parallelism (paragraphs), personification, and questioning to make the reviewer understand the structure of your article at a glance. For example, 1988 The national college entrance examination composition topic "Habit" has the beginning of a high-scoring composition:? Just as the stream is used to running and the sea is used to roaring, I am used to thinking, daydreaming and revealing my feelings in my diary. ?
3. Forms can be inscriptions, postscript, letters, diaries, fables and other forms. Or summarize the main sentence of each paragraph in concise language and put it at the beginning of the paragraph; Or put a philosophical sentence that reflects the central meaning of the article? A proud word? Divided into paragraphs independently, this is the highlight of the article, which can make the reviewers shine.
For example, this inscription was used in a high-scoring composition of Shanghai 20 10. If a country does not understand the principle of sustainable development, it will not make a difference in the development of the 2 1 century. ?
Key 2: Integrity
Due to the improper allocation of candidates' time, the article is headless or anticlimactic. This will not only fail to meet the requirements, but also deduct points. More importantly, the meaning of the article is incomplete, so it is difficult to give reviewers a sense of completeness. Such an article will certainly affect the score.
As Lin Shu, an expert in modern history, said: For people to watch the evening sacrifice, the writing is heavy. ? Reviewers always pay more attention to the last part of the article, and often leave an overall impression in their minds, thus setting the grade of the article. If you want to get high marks in the composition of the examination room, the ending must echo the beginning, so that the head and tail are rounded and the structure is complete.
For example, the beginning and end of an essay entitled "Be your neighbor" in Guangdong Province on 20 10: Being your next door makes me feel very happy. Being your neighbor really makes me happy. ?
Key three: washing and practicing
The composition of the college entrance examination, whether writing argumentative, narrative or argumentative, should be concise and to the point, not verbose, but should be treated equally: if it is a material composition, the material should be simply quoted and refined, rather than copied in large chunks; If it is a propositional, semi-propositional or topical composition, the narrative of events and stories should also be treated differently according to the style, and it should be concise and summarized as far as possible, especially argumentative essays. The text is concise and clear, and the words are rich in meaning. The reviewers will definitely like it.
For example, Shanghai's college entrance examination composition "Facing the Sea" has such a wonderful saying:
The sea is different from a big river. The river flows slowly, just like in Lao Dan? Quiet, reserved, mysterious, hug? ; And the sea has changed greatly, like Zhuang Zhou's? Let go of that hole? . The majestic potential of the sea, the pride of the sea, the tranquility of the sea, what I heard was Meng De's? Martyrs are full of courage in their later years? ; What I saw was too white? A lonely sail is coming from the sun? ; I'm thinking about Zishou? The moon, now at sea, the horizon * * * at this time? .
Key four: flexibility
The so-called flexibility means that people and things can be written through artistic processing on the basis of real and reasonable life? Perfect? 、? Coincidence Because the living environment, fields and horizons of candidates are limited, this determines that candidates can and should write like this, which is essentially different from the fabrication advocated by Mr. Lu Xun? Combine all kinds of people into one? The requirements are the same. For the sake of typicality, a person's clothes can be from Shandong, his hat can be from Beijing and his face can be from Zhejiang. The purpose is to write down the personality characteristics of the characters and the essential attributes of the problems.
For example, articles selected into the text, especially novels, narratives and argumentative essays, are such masterpieces that have been passed down to this day and are often read and updated.
Key 5: Details
This is very important, as the saying goes? Details determine success or failure? , but it is often ignored by students.
The detail here means that the face is clean and not scribbled, so that black ink balls can be seen everywhere; Write neatly, and the font should be neither big nor small: or out of line, or? Hide? In the corner of the grid, it looks dazzling or awkward, which consumes the eyes; Try to avoid typos, because three typos will deduct 1 point. When writing, if you encounter words and phrases that you are not sure to write correctly, you should use synonyms and synonyms instead. Work hard? Write hard and use hard; Sentences should be fluent and semantically coherent. After writing, if time permits, it is best to read them through. With the help of language sense, make some changes to the uneven, unclear and unclear places, without affecting the expression of meaning and the comprehension of the marking teacher. If the style meets the requirements, especially if it is written in letters, we should pay attention to this problem.
Because seemingly insignificant details play an invisible and decisive role in the score of the composition. After all, a pleasing face is like a beautiful face? Beauty? Similarly, who can bear to destroy her spirit and charm? The composition is naturally the same.