The legend of Glory Trail is the existence of magnolia.
Because Hua and Rong are both flat, as the first word of the couplet, they can be flexible, and both the upper and lower couplets use flat. The second, fourth, sixth and seventh (ending words) are not flexible. Therefore, Hua Dong and Wei Rong are used in couplets, so the levels and levels are not consistent.
In terms of durability,
"Bing" and "Cun" are both nouns and verbs with wide meanings.
You can change Zhongliang and Houpu into adjectives you like, but remember that the former needs to be flat and the latter needs to be quiet.
There are two basic forms of seven-character couplets:
Part I: ●●○○○●
Downlink: ○●●●○.
Part I: ⊙⊙●◎●
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Attention: ⊙ Flat tone ● Flat tone ○ Flat tone
Your couplets
Xiangri Dong Chao Qian Weiqiu
And Yuehua are the glory of several generations.
Part I: ○ ● ● ○.
Downlink: ○●○●●●
You can compare it yourself. The format is wrong. Of course, there are exceptions to any rules such as poems, songs and couplets, and some strange people and monsters can always break the rules. But this is a very high level, and beginners should abide by the rules.
You probably mean that the night is still young _ RM-the upstairs is too big for ordinary people, but it seems that there is _ in your house.
Of course, this is from your parents' tombstone. What you write is always good! Filial piety is enough, but it doesn't matter whether it is a couplet or not.
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Your progress is obvious. You will know the direction of your efforts in the future. You can practice calligraphy more, even more, so that your own writing will be better than others, because you are writing for your parents, and others are only outsiders no matter how talented they are.
Also: You can search Baidu and save Pingyun Water Meter, because there are very few words in couplets, and you can check every word, so that the cadence of couplets you write will be greatly improved in the future, and even experts will be full of praise.
(Note: Although the word "virtue" is two tones, it is entering tone. )