Viewpoint+material+analysis+summary
Point of view-clear (in a word, clean)
Materials-typical examples, concise narrative (use examples recognized by the public, it is best to use less people)
Analysis-insisting on central discussion is not free.
Summarize-summarize and reveal the theme
Note: It is best to use several materials, and each material should be analyzed accordingly.
Example:
The light of life changes with the place. (viewpoint)
Zara phillips, the granddaughter of Queen Elizabeth, was once rated as one of the "50 most beautiful people in the world" by People magazine. Her elegant manners made the British royal family proud. However, when Princess Zara resolutely decided to become an equestrian rider, the light of her life changed color.
Taking off her crown and dress, she trained as hard as ordinary riders and squeezed into the booth to choose saddles for others. In September 2006, she successfully won the "European All-around Riding Championship", which inspired the whole England. (example)
In this new position on the court, Princess Zara shines like dew. Her golden royal label turned into a bright red medal. In the palace, her beauty makes the royal family shine; On the court, her skills impressed everyone. (comment)
In the icing on the cake of life, each of us should learn from Zara, 25, how to add flowers suitable for icing on the cake and how to find the direction of the light of life in different positions. (Summary Extended Analysis)
Note: The materials must be analyzed.
Counterexample:
Since ancient times, talented people have been born in poverty. Sima Guang was born in poverty; Fan Zhongyan lost his father at the age of two and remarried with his mother. No matter how thick the porridge is, it is hard for him to drink when he was young. Song Lian, a scholar of Longtu University in Ming Dynasty, was as poor as a church mouse.
Van Gogh, a Dutch painter, was once poor and often relied on his brother's help in his life. Gorky, the great Soviet writer, was once a waif. Madame Curie just turned ten and went out to work ... It can be seen that poverty is also a fortune.
Disadvantages:
Arguments and arguments are separated from each other, and there is no necessary bridge between them. Argument is argument, and argument is argument; Argumentation has lost its proper function, and it is isolated and helpless, so it has lost its foothold.
This "unreasonable" argumentative essay is not convincing enough; No matter how full the argument is, it is just a pile of fragmentary materials.
Modify:
Since ancient times, talented people have been born in poverty. Sima Guang was born in poverty; Fan Zhongyan lost his father at the age of two and remarried with his mother. No matter how thick the porridge is, it is hard for him to drink when he was young. Song Lian, a scholar of Longtu University in Ming Dynasty, was as poor as a church mouse. Van Gogh, a Dutch painter, was once poor and often relied on his brother's help in his life. Gorky, the great Soviet writer, was once a waif.
Madame Curie just turned ten and went out to work ... these are extraordinary people. They were poor when they were young and later became talented scholars. The poor door is the soil where they take root, and it is also this barren soil that allows them to develop and mature, shape themselves and improve themselves, and finally become towering trees and bloom brilliantly.
From this perspective, poverty is not terrible. What is terrible is the loss of confidence and fighting spirit to get rid of poverty. If you are poor, you must work hard. Poverty encourages people to make progress. Isn't this rich?
Template 2
Viewpoint+truth+material+analysis+summary
Point of view-clear (in a word, clean)
Reason-further interpret the viewpoint, and strive to be accurate, specific and profound.
Material-a typical example, a concise narrative (it is best to use an example recognized by the public, such as someone)
Analysis-insisting on central discussion is not free.
Summarize-summarize and reveal the theme
Example:
The problem returns to its original state.
The movie "Let the Bullets Fly" not only makes people laugh, but also gives people a thought-provoking ending. After the bloody rain, Pockmarked Zhang got back into the saddle and galloped away to the mountains. Maybe the hero's home will be very rough! The ending of the film is always too montage, but I'm glad that the hero didn't go back, he just went back to the original point, where there is swords and shadows, there is heroic and free and easy.
Go back to the original point, return to the truth, and regain the truth. (make an argument)
Unforgettable Bi Shumin's words: "A beauty without a wrinkle in her brow is afraid of water flowing in her blood vessels." Indeed, people living in the modern world forget that they don't wear makeup and miss the origin of authenticity?
We are used to squeezing out insincere smiles and relying on cosmetics and masks. Little did we know that we were secretly happy that the traces of time and secular expressions were covered up, but together we erased our most precious side and the most surging life heat. (argument)
The origin of life lies in the publicity of personality, the expression of emotion and the breakthrough of personality. Returning to the original point is not to take off the mature coat, but to tear off the unnecessary packaging; Going back to the original point is not marking time, nor is it going back to the starting point. Second, go on the road with a calm and true attitude and gently raise your head. It has only traveled 20,000 miles and climbed countless mountains ...
Every time you fly, the flight attendants will demonstrate the use of emergency supplies for passengers. Facing the passengers, this is an opportunity for flight attendants to show their best, but I often see a suddenly cold face, which is very standardized but perfunctory. (factual argument)
I think, no matter how touching the face is, it can't stand casual interpretation and hypocritical fiddling. Back to the original point, although not perfect, it is also kind; Far from the origin, although exquisite, it is boring. Returning to the origin of life is to show one's natural and emotional side, to beat the most harmonious rhythm on the trajectory of life, and to interpret the truth, goodness and beauty in one's own and others' hearts. (analysis)
Then I thought of the famous demographer Ma Yinchu. Although at that time, many scholars had put down the dignity of intellectuals for the theory of hook fist, Ma Lao still maintained an unyielding attitude. Ningming died, but was born silently.
The rebel said that he had lost the origin of his position, while I said that Ma Lao had returned to the origin that a scholar should have. Never bow to those who convince others with strength rather than reason. This birth is so heavy and sacred, bearing the brilliance of human nature and the most stubborn bottom line of an intellectual. (factual argument+analysis)
The original plan is not the starting point, and those who adhere to the origin have boarded a moral platform, and the origin is the starting point. Those who stick to the origin and return to the origin will start from here and set sail again. This is the most dripping truth, the most insipid and the most vigorous.
In an impetuous society, we are satisfied with "not looking for branches and leaves", but isn't a society that everyone advertises "money-oriented" and "power-oriented" an anemic society that has lost its roots? Only when everyone consciously looks for the coordinates of the origin and regains the dignity of human nature can there be a day when "people's morality will return to thick".
Is it too high to go back to the original point and regain the truth? (The last three paragraphs, summary)
Template 3
Pros and cons: viewpoint+argument (argument+material+analysis)+rebuttal (rebuttal+material+analysis)+summary.
Example:
The flower of happiness blooms in the branches of gratitude.
I quit my job and go home, just like a flower falling from a branch, but this is not a heartless thing. It can be turned into the soil of spring and can also play a role in nurturing the next generation. This is the gratitude of flowers. I am willing to beg for it. This is the bird's gratitude. A scholar dies as a bosom friend, and a woman is her lover. This is human gratitude. Because they know how to be grateful, they have a heart of gold. Because they know how to be grateful, they created the legend of human warmth.
Knowing how to be grateful will make the world so beautiful. "Loyalty is a model, filial piety is Chen Qingbiao", which shows the true meaning of human gratitude and deduces the legend of human gratitude. In order to repay Liu Bei's kindness in taking care of the thatched cottage, Zhuge Liang visited Qishan seven times and skillfully defeated the enemy, which made great contributions to Liu Bei's farmland.
In order to repay the kindness of that year, he explained the true meaning of gratitude to later generations with his own energy. It was Shi Mi's misfortune to lose his parents when he was a child, but grandma used her warmth to make the poor child grow up and become famous everywhere. Being an official is the lifelong dream of many market readers. Is it wrong to be an official for ten years?
However, when this opportunity really came, Shi Biao never forgot his grandmother. He gave up the opportunity. Because he knows that "grandma can't live without the minister." He chose the latter between being an official and repaying kindness, and showed the world a great poem-repaying kindness.
Their gratitude warmed themselves and touched future generations. At that moment, happy flowers were burning on their grateful branches.
Gratitude is the foundation for us to maintain this world. Only when you are grateful can you be called a spiritual person, but once you lose gratitude, the consequences will be unimaginable. (Negative conversion) (Special attention)
The bloody case that shocked Yunnan University for a while is a lingering shadow of many people. Ma Jiajue's temporary sexual desire ended four young lives. I don't want to call him cruel. I just want to say that he really doesn't know how to be grateful.
Yunnan University trained him with knowledge, but he felt ashamed. His parents brought him up with great pains, but he made them realize the pain of white-haired people sending black-haired people; He does not know how to cherish the affection of his classmates. If he had a grateful heart, maybe none of this would have happened. When the grateful heart is gone, where is his flower of happiness at that moment?
Throughout the ages, what is the value of knowing how to be grateful? It is Chen Jian's unswerving gratitude to his comrades for guarding the tomb for decades; Jing Ke gambles to repay the gratitude of the Prince; Yuan Longping devoted himself to the research of hybrid rice for decades, which is a gratitude to the motherland.
Embrace a grateful heart, let us pass on our love. Deeply remember the selfless help of others and pass it on. The world is beautiful because of gratitude. There are no endless storms in the world, but gratitude has its youthful style. The flower of happiness, blooming in the branches of gratitude, is burning with its brilliance. (caring)
Template 4
Dialectical analysis: viewpoint+contradictory side (argument+material+analysis)+contradictory side (argument+material+analysis)+conclusion.
Example:
Adversity and success
Everyone yearns for a beautiful environment, because a good environment can make the road to success unimpeded; At the same time, people also realize that "great people have suffered a lot since ancient times, but there are never many great people". Prosperity makes a lucky man, and adversity often makes a great man. This is because, although prosperity paves the way for people's growth, adversity is more inspiring. (make comments)
Historical facts prove that bad luck can temper people's fighting spirit. Sima Qian, who was burned by corruption, followed the example of the sages who made unremitting efforts in adversity. With amazing perseverance, he completed the imperial masterpiece Historical Records, which was praised by Mr. Lu Xun as "the swan song of historians and the rhyme of leaving Sao", and became the immortal ancestor of historians.
Professor Li Guojie, an expert in mechanics and bridges in China, lived in the "isolation room" during the "Cultural Revolution" and was often interrogated. In this harsh environment, he resisted the pressure from all sides and wrote the monograph "Torsion, Stability and Vibration of Beam Bridges" with 654.38+ 10,000 words, which filled a gap in bridge architecture in the world.
Sima Qian said, "King Wen acted in Zhouyi, Zhong You wrote Spring and Autumn Annals, Qu Yuan banished Li Sao, wrote Mandarin blindly, and Sun Tzu trained his soldiers, but Han Fei imprisoned Qin, saying it was difficult ..." It really made sense to see that "hardships made you". (Contradictory party)
However, adversity can produce talents, which does not mean that adversity can produce talents. The key to a person's success lies in whether he works hard subjectively. Balzac said well, suffering is a stepping stone to genius, a treasure for the able and an abyss for the weak.
In the same harsh living environment, Bailey went through hardships and became a king, while some people degenerated into thieves; With the same disability, Zhang Haidi has become an example for contemporary youth in China, while some people have become beggars; It is also the shackles and prison bars of the Kuomintang reactionaries. Jiang Jie became an unyielding martyr, but Zhigao Pu became a shameful traitor. ...
It can be seen that in the face of adversity, people who lose their courage and determination to struggle can only sigh, complain and even indulge themselves; Only those who "hold the fate by the throat" can be "humble and unyielding", remove any obstacles and overcome any difficulties, and become "gentlemen" who can shoulder heavy responsibilities. (The other side of the contradiction)
We hope to have a smooth life, but for most people, this is impossible. What should I do if I encounter adversity? Never waver, never be discouraged, be proactive and strive for development. This is the attitude we should adopt.
Note: the argument of this article is old, and the key is to learn the dialectical thinking and structure of this article.
Other templates
Central argument+three links (connecting history, reality and self)+ending
The first paragraph puts forward arguments, and the second paragraph thinks about problems from a historical perspective, which can be biased towards examples; The third paragraph, think from the realistic angle, and the fourth paragraph think from the self angle. The end of the fifth paragraph.
Step by step: argument+what+why+how to do it+summary
Arrange the argument structure according to the idea of "asking questions, analyzing problems and solving problems", that is, answer three questions around the central argument: what to do, why to do it and how to do it.
Central argument+sub-argument type (commonly known as three-paragraph juxtaposition)