The topic of this essay aims to guide candidates to treat people and things around them with an optimistic and open-minded attitude, pay rational attention to society, calmly analyze things and actively think about life, so as to have confidence in society and see hope.
In today's era, it is no longer simple and pure, all beings are impetuous, people are indifferent, faith is lacking, morality is ruined, interests are supreme ... all kinds of bad phenomena emerge one after another. Ordinary people, as individuals, are easily overlooked. They are more and more aware of the hardships and monotony of life, and the confusion and loss of their hearts often breed boredom, fatigue and even nothingness, while ignoring the hidden hopes and beauty in life. We should have the eyes to find beauty, feel the heart of beauty, look for "spring buds" and "vitality", and blend into this beautiful "spring" to feel the social fashion and the beauty of life.
In the materials of the topic, "no enthusiasm", "no belief", "bored", "tired" and "lifeless" are in sharp contrast with the scene of spring buds that appeared later, so in writing, there should also be a process of comparison: we can see both the dark side of society and the sunny side of society; We should not only find the shortcomings of things, but also find the advantages of things; I am saddened by the ugliness of human nature and feel the sublimity of human nature; Not only must we face the disappointments that happen from time to time in life, but we must also realize the beauty that exists everywhere in life; We should not only bear the pain and temper of life, but also experience the happiness and hope of life ... and we should pay more attention to the latter.
When writing, if it is difficult to put forward new ideas and clear ideas in general terms, write from a certain angle (such as lack of faith and firm belief, monotonous and full life, ugly and bright society) or from a certain phenomenon (food safety, celebrity drug abuse, college students' mental state), and focus on the big issues.
In practical writing, most students choose to write argumentative essays. There are also many excellent works in the narrative, which express real feelings and write about things around us. Some articles are good at capturing the details of life and expressing true feelings, which are affirmed by teachers.
For example, a classmate wrote that "I" was an art student, and my grades have been poor. I feel that I have no future and I am very confused. Once I saw foreign candidates come to our school with easels and musical instruments on their backs. They were persistent and optimistic. They learned to fight for their dreams, but also infected with "I" and realized the truth that life should fight.
For another example, a classmate wrote that my parents divorced, and "I" had been living in a haze, resenting my parents, being tired of life and refusing to study. Later, "I" found that my parents still loved me deeply. They had difficulties and made a choice about marriage. "I" should look forward more, see love, see hope and see the beauty of life.
However, problems such as unclear stylistic features are still serious:
1. We don't stick to the materials, but start from some accumulated materials and come to a point: the examination of the questions is not accurate, or there is a suspicion of "plagiarism". Some people talk about "faith" (people always have a little spirit), "honesty" (touching China's loyal brothers), "dedication" (people who are willing to pay are the most beautiful), "patriotism" (environmental protection spirit), "modesty" (stepping back to broaden the horizon), "love" (walking with love) and "being fair.
2. "Spring buds sprout quietly on the branches ..." is more of a metaphor, but many students have not found its abstract meaning, just staying in the spring of natural attributes. If there is an article about "I" in senior three, I will feel bored facing the sea stacks every day, but when I see the grass on the sixth floor, I will be infected by the beauty of spring. The article is delicate and euphemistic, and the writing is exquisite and beautiful, but the whole article describes the natural scenery (a few scenes have implications), and it is rated as second class, with 48 points.
If this article can deepen the theme, write more "I" to see the hope of life, feel the happiness of life, and thus lead to thinking, then it can be rated as a volume.
3. The narrative in the argumentative essay is too long. Some students wrote nearly 200 words about a family who washed clothes for a living in the Song Dynasty.