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Fifth grade composition
No matter in study, work or life, everyone has written a composition, which can be divided into narrative, explanatory, practical and argumentative according to different genres. How to write a good composition? The following are four fifth-grade compositions I collected for your reference, hoping to help friends in need.

As the saying goes, "flying freely is as light as a dream, and the rain is as fine as sorrow." When your relatives are far away from home, do you cry, keep silent, disagree, or be as free as before.

This Tuesday afternoon, when I was doing my homework, the phone suddenly rang. I asked impatiently, "Who is it?" A familiar voice came from inside: "Ren Hao, we are going to Xinyang for an exam on September 29th, and we can't go back before1October 2nd." I didn't say a word after listening. After hanging up the phone, I threw myself on the bed and lost my voice.

In the evening, I ate half a bowl of noodles and went into the room. My heart was breaking at that time. When his birthday came, he was far away from his hometown, relatives and friends. Why? Why can't our father and son meet? Have we committed any heinous crimes? No, we didn't. Then what crime have we committed? What?

Today is the 29th day of the eighth lunar month, my father's birthday. Birthdays usually bring laughter and happiness, but I think this birthday will bring sadness and pain. At this moment, I really realized why Wang Wei and Li Bai wrote "Thinking of My Shandong Brothers on Mountain Holiday" and "Thinking of Quiet Night".

Tonight, I called my father and asked, "Dad, what's the date of the lunar calendar today?" My father said, "The 29th day of the eighth lunar month is my birthday." I said loudly, "Dad! Happy birthday to you! " And then I hung up.

When I wrote this article, I burst into tears.

When I was doing my homework, I sat in a chair and pondered what happened before: one day, I was reading in the study and the cup suddenly fell down somehow. When I tried to hit me, my father pushed me aside and almost hit me. ...

Dad, when your birthday comes, I want to say, "Dad, happy birthday and all the best!" " "

The fifth grade composition 2 "The Destruction of Yuanmingyuan" tells the story of the glorious landscape of Yuanmingyuan in the past and the process of its destruction, expressing the author's love for the splendid culture of the motherland and his hatred for the robber behavior of the invaders. Encourage people not to forget national humiliation and enhance their sense of responsibility and mission to revitalize China. This article is concise in language, rigorous in structure and ingenious in conception. It is a wonderful chapter in patriotism education for students.

After class, reflect on the whole teaching process. There are gains and losses. Let's talk about the benefits first. There are the following aspects:

1. Pay attention to the key points and difficulties in word teaching in the text. For the fifth-grade children, the new words in the text can't be all-inclusive, and everyone can speak them. But for the pronunciation that students can't solve by themselves, words and phrases can be explained. For example, pay attention to the pronunciation of this passage: the estimated "quantity" here should be read a second time. The exquisite "hook" should be seen first. The key word is "the stars arch the moon", which should be understood in combination with the text. This word summarizes the structural layout of Yuanmingyuan. The literal meaning of this word is "arch: gathering and surrounding." Like many stars gathered around the moon. "When teaching, I asked: What does the' star' in the text mean? The student replied, "Many small gardens". What does the moon mean here? The student replied: "Yuanmingyuan, Wanchun Garden, Changchun Garden". Many small gardens surround Yuanmingyuan, Wanchun Garden and Changchun Garden like stars. In this way, students not only learned how to understand words in context, but also knew the layout of Yuanmingyuan like the back of their hands.

2. Understand the structure of the article. This article is well organized. When teaching, students first summarize the content of each paragraph in their own language. Later, from the full text, the students found that the destruction of Yuanmingyuan summarized in the first natural paragraph of the text was an inestimable loss in the cultural history of China and even the world, and it was reduced to ashes with the "treasure of China garden art and the essence of architectural art" mentioned at the end of the article. Echo from beginning to end. The author's hatred and regret are vividly on the paper. The second to fourth paragraphs introduce the layout, architectural style and the preciousness of cultural relics of Yuanmingyuan in detail, and reproduce the grandeur of Yuanmingyuan in those days. The fifth paragraph introduces the destruction of Yuanmingyuan in refined and accurate language. This can not only help students understand the content of this text, but also teach students the methods of typesetting and writing.

3. With materials, through watching the documentary Yuanmingyuan, let students know the humiliating history of the Chinese nation for nearly a hundred years, warn students not to forget the national humiliation and revitalize the new China. In teaching, I first ask students to look up information and understand the historical roots of the destruction of Yuanmingyuan. According to the students' information, since the middle of Qing Dynasty, the science and technology of the whole country has lagged far behind the west, and the class contradiction has become increasingly acute. 1840 (20 years of Daoguang), western colonialists provoked the war of aggression against China-the first war; Then came the Taiping Heavenly Kingdom, which opposed the rule of the Qing Dynasty. 1856 10, Britain and France jointly launched the second war. First, he provoked the Guangzhou War twice, but failed to achieve the expected desire. In order to exert direct pressure on the Qing government, the capital of Chen Bing was decided. The invading army approached Tianjin1May 858, and the Qing government was forced to sign the Tianjin Treaty with Britain, France, Russia and the United States respectively. 1860 (the tenth year of Xianfeng) In July, the fleet of British and French aggressor troops rushed out of Dagukou again, and under the guise of exchanging contracts between British and French ministers in Beijing, they forcibly pushed forward and lured them to "make peace". The purpose is to force the Qing court to submit to the capital of Chen Bing. The corrupt and incompetent Qing government did not decide the attack and defense strategy. The invading army went straight to Tongzhou. On September 2 1 day, the Qing army was defeated in the decisive battle at Baliqiao, Tongzhou. The next morning, Emperor Xianfeng fled from Yuanmingyuan to chengde mountain resort in a hurry, resulting in a crisis situation in which the capital was ownerless, officials dispersed, soldiers dispersed and people feared.

4. Ask students to write down their thoughts after reading. After teaching this course, the students were in high spirits and filled with indignation. He was not only saddened by the destruction of Yuanmingyuan, but also hated the robbery of the British and French allied forces. Seeing this scene, I asked, "Students, the history of humiliation is deeply imprinted in our hearts. We are not only saddened, but also awakened, so that such historical tragedies will no longer be rewritten. So what should we do as teenagers today? Please write down your feelings. " Combination of reading and writing.

There is no perfect classroom, only regrettable teaching, and there are also some shortcomings after class to remind me that I need to improve in the future teaching:

1. For the materials consulted before class. Students just stay in mechanical printing from the computer, and there will be no clever use of trade-offs. The improved method is that reading materials is not allowed in class, and you can only answer according to your own understanding.

2. Perceptual reading is not enough. In particular, "The destruction of Yuanmingyuan is an immeasurable loss in the cultural history of China and even the world" is even more incomprehensible. So I didn't feel sorry. Strengthen reading training in the future.

As the saying goes, "Five Mountains don't look at the mountains when they return, and Huangshan doesn't look at the mountains when they return." This poem was written by Xu Xiake when he visited Huangshan Mountain. This poem fully expresses Xu Xiake's love for the great rivers and mountains of the motherland, and also skillfully describes the beautiful scenery of Huangshan Mountain.

Huangshansong

Look at this photo, you must know what this is-this is the famous welcome pine! Welcome Pine is the representative of Huangshan Song Qi. Like a hospitable host, he welcomes tourists with open arms. His fame can be imagined! From the Great Hall of the People to the walls of stations, hotels and gardens, there are patterns of welcoming pines! I also felt his enthusiasm. There are many exotic pine trees in Huangshan, such as upside-down pine, lianli pine, tuanjie pine and black tiger pine.

Shanshi Huang

See what the boulder in my hand is? This is the sudden emergence of the rock platform-flying stone! The flying stone weighs about 360 tons, and the contact area with the rock platform is very small, as if flying from the distant horizon, hence the name flying stone. The balcony on the edge of the cliff stone carving is the most frightening. It suddenly emerged from the dangerous rock facing the sky on three sides. I feel like I'm hanging on it.

Mount Huangshan

The sea of clouds in Huangshan is unpredictable and extremely spectacular! If you don't explain it, almost no one knows that this stormy sea spectacle actually happened at the top of Huangshan Mountain! It is called the sea of clouds because it is unpredictable, just like the surging sea, sometimes rough, sometimes calm as a mirror, and sometimes gentle! Stepping on the steps leading from the clouds to the fairyland on earth, I stood at the top of the mountain and looked into the distance, as if I saw a beautiful landscape painting that could hardly be described in words!

Huangshan Mountain on the tip of her tongue

The most representative foods in Huangshan Mountain are Huizhou fish flavor and Huizhou hairy tofu! Yeah! Gee! Does it look delicious? Want to eat! Stinky mandarin fish stinks, but it doesn't stink and smells good! Stinky mandarin fish tastes like salted fish, but it tastes 1000 times better than salted fish. Delicious, oily but not greasy, delicious! Hairy tofu is naturally fermented from tofu, and the skin of fermented tofu is Mao Mao, just like a small white ball! Cooked tofu, Mao Mao, who can't see the skin, tastes like Mao Mao. It tastes a bit like fermented bean curd, and it tastes like fermented bean curd, but it is not as salty as fermented bean curd, but it smells like soybeans!

Alas! Time always flies so fast, I really hope that time will always be fixed at this beautiful moment! Goodbye Huangshan! Goodbye, beautiful fairyland on earth! Goodbye, delicious food. ...

Under the scorching sun, the water delivery man brought buckets of cold water to every household. What supported him to carry the heavy bucket to every household?

It is faith!

How did the PLA soldiers defeat the invading enemy on the battlefield?

It is faith! Faith is a powerful force and the source of justice. When a person has almost nothing, as long as he does not lose faith, he will certainly succeed!

Everyone has a belief in their heart that supports them. Different beliefs will have different results.

When the primary school ran 1200m cross-country, I didn't know how to run down at that time, so I took the eighth place. Now I know it was faith that made me run so far.

As long as the faith is still there, tomorrow is bright; As long as tomorrow is here, faith will be forever strong!

As long as I don't give up faith, faith won't give up on me!

Faith is the backbone of courage, strategy and men; Faith is the catalyst of human civilization; Faith is not only the courage to cross the rubicon, but also the vivid combination of strategy and wisdom.

Lincoln said: "the height of the fountain will not exceed its source;" The same is true of a person's career, and his achievements will not exceed his own beliefs. "

Faith will always be my powerful weapon!