What do you think of reading the essay "Generals and Sentinels"? 1. The essay tells the story of General Pi Dingjun's night patrol sentry educating soldiers to defend their country. Second, the general was dissatisfied with the phenomenon of "false sky" in the political propaganda environment at that time. From the point of view of humanization, it is estimated that soldiers will be homesick on a moonlit night. Third, the general takes defending the country as every citizen's obligation to educate the soldiers, asking the soldiers to hold the guns in their hands at all times, safeguard national security, let the elders in their hometown live in a peaceful environment and build a beautiful home.
How do you feel after reading this passage? Writing skills in the examination room (beginning skills and ending skills).
A collection of skills at the beginning of senior high school entrance examination composition
A good beginning is half the battle. The beginning plays a very important role in the article. It can refine the center, complete the structure and attract readers. It can make the article icing on the cake and make the reviewers feel tired. This statement is not an exaggeration. Therefore, writing a composition should take more time, use more brains and write a good beginning. Please look at the wonderful beginning of the perfect composition from the senior high school entrance examination:
1. Write down the whole article.
Example 1. When I was a child, I was fascinated by the "children with wings-angels" printed on cartoons and greeting cards. Pure, cotton-wool white wings are a symbol of all good things, decorating my childhood dreams. (Chongqing full text "White wings decorate my dream ..." begins)
At the beginning of this article, I explained that I like White Wing, and took care of the title with "It decorated my childhood dream", which led to the following. This kind of beginning can give people the feeling that it is crisp and neat, and soon gets to the point without divergence. Should be the first choice at the beginning of the composition in the examination room.
2. Preface the title to remind people.
Example 2. Leaves are flightless wings; Wings are leaves falling in the sky. (Inscription of Chongqing's perfect composition "Wings, Leaves Falling from the Sky")
This inscription reveals the relationship between "wings" and "leaves" by metaphor. How can "wings" and "leaves" be equated? This question, like a mystery, immediately aroused the reader's curiosity. Only after reading the whole article will you know that this is a fairy tale of "the ugly duckling becomes a swan". The author replaced the "ugly duckling" with a fallen leaf, and wrote about his regretless choice, persistent dream, beautiful mind, novelty and uniqueness.
3. Write a scene to set off the mood.
Example 3. It's hot summer again, and cicadas start chirping. (Beijing's perfect prose "Power comes from those eyes" begins)
This article does not fall into other people's conventions. It starts from a small place, from a pair of "eyes" that can be seen and touched, and writes about the sunshine-like warmth and sudden progress brought by the eyes and emotions of a math teacher to every student in the class. The description of the natural environment at the beginning here not only exaggerates the specific atmosphere, sets off the emotions of the characters, but also promotes the development of the story.
4. Use contrast skillfully to illustrate the problem
Just after 8 o'clock in the morning, an angry mother pulled a tall boy and pushed open the door of Professor Zhang's office. As soon as I entered the door, my mother began to criticize the child to Professor Zhang. The boy seems to care nothing. He keeps looking up at the ceiling and his body is still shaking. From time to time, I also replied to the previous sentence to express my opposition. (Shandong Laiwu full text "In fact, this is not the case")
At the beginning of the article, the "bad" of the child in the eyes of the mother was greatly exaggerated, but when it came to the professor, the professor easily pointed out the "good" of the child. This contrast can only mean one thing. In fact, it is not that children are bad, but that there is something wrong with the vision of "mother" and the concept of educating children.
5. Turn your mind and be unique
I am a devil, a devil with an angel in my heart. (Shandong Binzhou full text "Let the angel stay in the heart forever" begins)
The title of the article is "Let the angel stay in my heart forever", but the beginning is "I am the devil", which makes people feel strange. Further down, the first paragraph begins with "I am the devil". Until the end, I will realize the beauty of this reverse thinking, in order to highlight the "angel."
6. The angle is novel and the reason is mixed.
Example 6. "The queen takes the needle, and the oranges are divided into two sides. What you hate in the world is the most poisonous. " Since the publication of Water Margin, people have used it to evaluate this character-Pan Jinlian. This character image has become a typical example of "* * *" and "* * *" in people's minds.
Pan Jinlian, you are really wronged! (Shandong Laiwu full text "actually this is not the case" begins)
The little author wrote the well-known story of Water Margin into his composition, but he didn't feel repetitive after reading it. Quoting the beginning of the Water Margin here subtly leads to the object of discussion-Pan Jinlian, which not only shows his own cultural background, but also compares his own views, which is reasonable.
7. The sentence pattern is concise and implicit
Example 7. I once missed the hero's happiness of "Qin Wang swept Liuhe and looked at He Xiongzai", and I once pursued the hermit's happiness of "picking chrysanthemums under the east fence and seeing Nanshan leisurely"; I also discussed the happiness of people with lofty ideals in Reaching the Peak, the other mountains all appear dwarfs under the sky.. . But after all, I am who I am, and I want to pick the most beautiful happiness to embellish the regretless youth! So, I got on the happiness train and started my journey to find happiness. (Jining, Shandong, the full text begins with "Taking the Happy Train")
Poetry is quoted at the beginning of the article, which makes the language of the article simple and fluent, poetic and rich in meaning.
8. Metaphorical deduction, highlighting the main idea
Everyone was born without wings. Only reading can make life fly. (Chongqing full text "Reading-Wings of Life Flying" begins)
The idea of this chapter is quite broad, and most people rarely associate reading with the topic of "wings". At the beginning, the examinee begins with the metaphor that "everyone is born without wings, and only reading can make life fly", which highlights the theme of the article "Reading-wings that make life fly".
9. Go straight to the point from the beginning.
Example 9. If an eagle has wings, it can fly high. When an airplane has wings, it can soar in the blue sky. I also fantasize about having a pair of wings, so that I can spread my wings and fly in the wind and rain. No one can stop me from flying across the world. (Chongqing full text "If you give me a pair of wings" begins)
"The Eagle and the Plane" begins by talking about "my" obsession with dreams, which sets a suspense for the following description of the reasons for people with wings.
10. Compare the beginning and inject poetry.
Example 1 1. Clouds and clouds are comfortable, which is the purity of the soul; Goose crossing geese used to be a clear gesture and a beautiful shadow of human nature; Flowers bloom and fall, which is the Yu Xiu fragrance of the soul. (Shandong Rizhao full text "Give me a chance to get to know you")
The author writes beautifully. At the beginning, he chooses several pictures drawn from nature to describe them. The sentences are neat, the words are catchy and full of charm.
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Example 1 1. What is happiness? (Shandong Jining full text "Happy Rain")
The title of the article is "What is happiness?" The first single sentence is segmented, which is thought-provoking and causes the following. The following uses Sima Qian, Tao Qian, Li Taibai, Liu Yuxi, Chen Jingrun, Lincoln, Gandhi and I to highly summarize the happiness view of eight people, which has the effect of "an arrow of a thousand miles". The author's rich accumulation can be seen.
12. The forum is extremely novel.
Example 12. What is happiness? Happiness is smiling eyes with tears; It is a kind greeting in the ear; It is children playing on the beach; Hand in hand with the sunset is the old man in the twilight; That is, on the night of Mid-Autumn Festival, the whole family gathers at a table to enjoy family happiness ... A thousand people will have a thousand interpretations of "happiness", just as a thousand readers have a thousand "Hamlet". (If you don't believe me, please go to the "Happiness" forum. ) (Tianjin full text "Happy Water in the Forum" begins)
This starts with the theme post of the forum, using rhetorical questions to attract readers' attention, using parallelism to make rational arguments, and using "a thousand people will have a thousand interpretations of' happiness', just like a thousand readers have a thousand Hamlets" to summarize their views on happiness. Fresh form, clever beginning, really brilliant!
What do you think after reading the essay The Sound of the Piano? I read an article "The Sound of the Piano" today, which tells the story of Beethoven's piano practice. Beethoven began to play the piano at dawn every day, and even his fingers were burning. He put a box of cold water next to the piano, soaked his fingers in the water to play, and so he played again and again, again and again. I will study as hard as him in the future.
How do you feel after reading the paper piano? Every morning, when the piano sounds on the balcony, she listens quietly. How she wishes to have a piano ... no, no, even if she can touch it, sit on it and play it once!
One day, my father came to the balcony and saw his daughter lying on the balcony, his fingers jumping on the balcony, and his father had worries. ...
My daughter has never seen her father buy decent clothes, and she always wears white overalls. My daughter knows that she should study hard. She wants to be admitted to the Conservatory of Music in the future, so that she can play the piano every day.
Father seems to be busier than before. He goes out early and comes back late every day, wrapped in mud and falling asleep.
Day after day, my daughter doesn't know why her father worked so hard, but she knows that his gray hair is countless ... year after year, five years have passed. My daughter was admitted to the best high school.
My father went to the bank to get a deposit, intoxicated with joy all the way, but he didn't know there were a pair of evil eyes behind him. He came to the shop and walked to a piano. This is a shiny upright piano, priced at 18000 yuan. "That's enough." He thought, so he called the clerk. When he opened the tool bag tightly held in his hand with joy, the cut made by a knife condensed his smile.
Father's tea and rice were not thought about, and he was suddenly haggard. Worry hung over her daughter's eyes. A few days later, my father took out something: a board, thick paper with a keyboard painted on it. Father said, "Dad is useless. I want to give you a real piano ... "My daughter saw her father's tears for the first time. "Dad!" The daughter doesn't know what happened, but she knows everything.
She sat there, her fingers jumping briskly on the keys, bathed in the warm melody, and her face was covered with tears.
Ah, Fanti and the fool read this short article. what do you think? The rich man got angry when he learned one thing, that is, farmers said Fanti was particularly clever.
Let people sit in the sedan chair, sit in the sedan chair. When the rich opened the curtains, they were walking in the street, and Afandi was riding a donkey in the street. The rich man said to Afandi unconvinced, "People say you are smart, so I just want to compare with you."
Two generations of love said, "Good!" The rich man said, "You are smart if you can pull me out of the sedan chair."
Afandi thought for a moment and said, "I have a few dollars here. Do you want them? " The rich man said, "Yes." Avanti added, "I'll give you money if you come over." The rich man walked from the sedan chair to the two generations with a bang. He said, "I pulled you down from the sedan chair." The rich man pattered back to the sedan chair. Afandi said, "I pulled you back to the sedan chair from below again." The people who accompanied him and the people in the street all laughed.
Read the short passage in the value tree section. what do you think? "Planting trees is really a pleasure." I just finished a parent-child tree planting activity and said to myself.
It turns out that our school organizes students to participate in family-based parent-child tree planting activities. I've always wanted to try planting trees. This opportunity has come, of course, we must not let it slip away. I took the lead in winning the first prize.
On that day, I walked into the Eighteen Arhats Forest Park in dagang town with great interest. I have always dreamed of planting trees in my heart, but think about it, the reality is far from perfect. Just when I could see the place where trees were planted in the distance, I heard someone say, "Wow, it's so simple, even the pit has been dug." I hurried to the tree planting place and picked two tall and strong trees. Small saplings with leaves. As a big girl sitting in a sedan chair-this is the first time, I don't know where to start. The older the wiser. My mother put the bucket aside in one hand and filled the hole with a shovel in the other. My mother shouted at me, "Hold the sapling steady quickly." On hearing this, I finally got something to do. I got up to hold the sapling. But I didn't want to do so little work. Without saying anything, I picked up a small shovel and followed her to fill the hole. Although the speed is far less than my mother's, it doesn't help. Finally, the pit was filled, and I quickly poured water into the roots, so that a small tree was fixed by me. I jumped from left to right excitedly. Because the mountain was slippery, I almost rolled down. Fortunately, my mother came in a hurry, otherwise the consequences would be unimaginable.
I'm so happy. I made five more trees. I was so happy that although my clothes, hands and shoes were dirty, I ignored them.
The feeling and experience of this parent-child tree planting activity is that this parent-child tree planting activity really kills two birds with one stone, on the one hand, it can enhance the emotion and friendship between mother and child, father and son. Secondly, we can plant trees and contribute to our green Guangzhou. But also can freshen our polluted air and beautify our environment. Third, we can cultivate our concept of labor from an early age, and it will also help us cultivate our awareness of environmental protection in greening mountains and forests.
Children chasing kites read this passage. what do you think? After reading this article, I understand that nothing in the world is impossible. The question is whether you are willing to persist and work hard. Just like the Wright brothers, their fantasy is to fly into the sky, which is ridiculous and impossible to outsiders, but they did it because they know how to work hard and persist. I have always believed in this world.
Idea: Every child has a dream, but the dream is not just an idea, but realized by his own practical actions and unremitting efforts! In this way, the dream will eventually become a reality.
After reading Tagore's "Career" and this essay, what do you think? After reading Tagore's Life, I feel:
There is no distinction between high and low occupations, only whether you are willing or not and whether you bring good feelings to people. Choose your own career that is free, happy, passionate and can contribute to others.