First, the inscription can not only explain the reasons for writing, but also create an environment.
For example, the inscription of "Feeling High School" says: "It is a clear spring in my heart, which can't stop flowing and vomiting. It flows forever and ever, nourishing everything in my life. . . . . "This inscription creates a strong atmosphere for the full text through beautiful description.
Second, the inscription should show the main content and reveal the connotation of the work.
Inscriptions should be sentences that reflect and reveal the theme and emotion of the article. It should let readers see through the highlights of the article and touch the pulse of emotion. For example, the inscription "Erase the boundaries in the heart" reads: "The boundaries on the surface can be erased by hand; The boundaries in my heart can only be smoothed by heart. " The inscription directly reveals the main idea of the article.
Third, the inscription should have rich meanings and lasting feelings.
For example, the inscription "Thank your father" reads: "When I was a child, my father was a harbor; When I was a child, my father was an idol; In middle age, my father is a period of time; My father is a history book at the end of the year. " In the inscription, I expressed my love for my father in a long way and praised this ordinary and noble family relationship in the world.
Fourth, the inscription should not only be concise and clear, but also be delicate and rich in literary talent.
You can quote inscriptions (such as lyrics, aphorisms, wise sayings, etc.). , it is best to be seen less by the marking teacher) or carve it yourself. The key to the inscription is conciseness, not too long and not obscure. For example, in Revelation of Echo: "Those who love others will always love others; Those who respect others will always respect others. " Mencius' words are properly used, which not only reveals the Lord, but also shows talent.
First, suspense attracts people to read.
Inscriptions appear suspense, which can immediately arouse people's appetite for reading; If suspense is set to "wonderful" again, it will be thrown into calm water like a stone, which will arouse people's desire to read and trigger a wonderful artistic conception of imagination.
Example 1: Write a composition on the topic of "Applause". (2003 Beijing Senior High School Entrance Examination)
I used to feel inferior and sad, because I knew how ugly you were, but at that moment, I really cheered for you …
-For disabled mothers
Example 2: Write a composition on the topic of "Book". (Tianjin Senior High School Entrance Examination in 2003)
A girl who likes reading, a girl who doesn't like reading. I am such a two-color girl. Would you like to listen to the blue loneliness of a two-color girl?
-inscription
Example 3: In the storm, (Changsha senior high school entrance examination in 2003)
How can we forget the wind and rain? Close your eyes and you will remember; The wind and rain are buried in my heart, but I can only talk with paper and pen. ...
-inscription
Example 4: Write a composition on the topic of "Hope". (One of the Examination Questions of Shandong Senior High School Entrance Examination in 2003)
I am a poor student. Who am I afraid of? Nobody pays attention to me anyway.
You might as well express your true feelings in the article, and I hope you can listen to my heart.
-Write to yourself.
Second, the true feelings are exciting.
The composition is written by heart, and the inscription placed in the "eye-printing" can only impress people with heart and emotion and attract attention.
Example 5: Writing on the topic of "communication". (Sichuan senior high school entrance examination in 2003)
Today is my birthday, but my blessing is silent; Today is your memorial day, and your tears are silent. Let me make paper with my heart, write with my tears, and then remember the bits and pieces of our acquaintance.
-To a close friend
Example 6: Write a composition on the topic of "maternal love" or "fatherly love". (2003 Zhejiang Ningbo Senior High School Entrance Examination)
The kite rises to heaven, and the silk thread can't help lingering; The geese fly south, but still turn back frequently. Years are easy to get old, and things are easy to change. In the lost years, what remains unchanged is the affectionate care of my mother.
-A message to my mother
Example 7: Write a composition on the topic of "Believe in yourself". (2003 Henan senior high school entrance examination questions)
Don't complain about your fate, we are all the darlings of God. Don't be afraid that there are mountains outside, and there are people outside. Believe in yourself: you are a mountain outside the mountain and a person outside the people.
I feel inferior to yesterday.
Example 8: Write a composition on the topic of "responsibility". (Guangxi Senior High School Entrance Examination and Chongqing Senior High School Entrance Examination in 2003)
Tens of thousands of years ago, human beings ate and drank blood; Thousands of years ago, human beings slash and burn; Decades ago, man landed on the moon ... men told men that men need responsibility.
-inscription
Third, singing "anti-tune" is unexpected.
As the saying goes: water is impermanent, and there is no formula in the text. Nowadays, calling for innovative spirit and encouraging individuality have increasingly become the main theme of composition. Innovation in the true sense is to be good at thinking about the same problem from different angles, different horizons and different levels, so as to gain different feelings and experiences, enrich the connotation of the composition and write original opinions. Of course, the requirement of "anti-tune" in the inscription is also the organic unity of personality and norms.
Example 9: Write a composition on the topic of "Dear Me". (Guangdong senior high school entrance examination in 2003) Hehe! What's wrong with "two sides and three knives" I am an out-and-out "two-faced".
-My self-portrait
Example attending: Writing on the topic of "Nature". (Heilongjiang Senior High School Entrance Examination in 2003)
I would like to be a frog at the bottom of the well, where it is cool and comfortable, and where it is hidden and safe. Come, come, come, please come with me and jump to the bottom of the well far away from human beings.
-A frog in a well warns the world.
Four, Meijia "Ming" collection
My father's kneeling made me understand that what my father and I lack is not love, but communication, heart-to-heart communication.
-Correspondence inscription
The earth gave birth to life, and life is precious, unique and fair to everyone. It is precisely because life is so precious that we should cherish it.
-Inscription for "Caring for Life"
When the ideal colorful wings beat the real air, I entered a delicate, hazy and rainy season. After swimming through my childhood dreams, I stood in the rain. 17 years old, with ups and downs, happiness and troubles.
-Inscription for My Happiness and Trouble
Many nights, I sang softly to the sunset; There have been countless dawns, and I told my thoughts to the morning glow. Teenagers are picturesque years, and teenagers are the season to fly amber dreams.
-Inscription "My future is not a dream"
My father warmed my wet and cold heart with motherly care; My father cared for my broken heart with motherly tenderness; My father healed my broken heart with my mother's hand. ...
-Inscription on "Family Affairs"
What is life? In the eyes of children, life is to grow up quickly; In the eyes of adults, life is to make money to live; In the eyes of the elderly, life is healthy and long-lived.
-Inscription of "Life tells me"
I lost so many things, even the most important things in my life, such as honesty and self-confidence. I should pick them up and take them on their way.
-Inscription for "Looking for Lost Things"
One day a few years ago, my friends and I were playing in heaven, and I was put into a sky-blue jar. Since then, my can life has started.
-Inscription of life in the jar
Maternal love is a long telephone line. No matter how far I go, I will always care about it, and it will always accompany me.
-Inscription for "Motherly Love"
Life is full of scenery. You are a mountain, you are a landscape, because you show the world the preciseness and grandeur; You are a weeping willow, and you are also a landscape, because you have shown the world your charm and charm.
-Inscription of "I am the scenery"
Jump, let me learn to be brave; Jumping makes me full of confidence; Jumping, always hitting my heart; Take me to the next leap.
-Inscription for "Smile, Jumping Music"
4. Inscription type:
In writing, in order to express the needs, concise sentences or famous aphorisms are drawn up before the text as an important explanation of the content of the article. Such sentences are called inscriptions. A good inscription can definitely make an article icing on the cake and add luster! Sometimes, it can even make a composition suddenly improve its ideological and philosophical nature, thus improving the grade of the article!
In recent years, many students have been learning to write inscriptions, but needless to say, a considerable number of inscriptions are not wonderful, but have become redundant. There are three main problems:
Far-fetched: Inscriptions are closely related to the content of the article, or refining the main idea, or deliberately rendering, or setting suspense, which is an organic part of the article. However, some students, regardless of the willy-nilly, press it mechanically as long as they look good and like it, and some even have nothing to do with it, which makes people feel ridiculous.
Concise and lengthy: the inscription should be concise, but concise and rich, giving readers room for imagination. Some inscriptions are tedious to read.
Excessive abuse: not all articles need inscriptions, and it depends on the specific situation. Generally speaking, it is mainly used in narrative, argumentative and explanatory texts. On the other hand, some students have to memorize the text by rote and overuse it.
So, how to write an implicit inscription? We might as well look for doorways from the perfect composition in the senior high school entrance examination.
(A) reveal the theme
Use inscriptions to point out the main idea, so that readers have a clear grasp of the center of the article. For more implicit prose, this way of pointing questions is especially needed, which can let the marking teacher have an accurate judgment on the article.
For example, the inscription "Flowers bloom and flowers fall" goes like this:
Death is not the opposite of life, but exists as a part of life.
The article writes that most flowers choose to bloom in spring, but no one sings an elegy for them before death; Chrysanthemums bloom quietly in the autumn when everything is dying. Even if the luster and style are gone, the autumn wind will sing for it, and the little girl will pray for it silently. Inscriptions closely follow the content and give us a clear hint of the main idea of the article, so that readers will not be biased in their understanding of the main idea of the article.
Gone with the Wind is the work of Li Qingzhao, a famous poetess, whose bumpy fate has made Li Qingzhao's literary achievements. The author wrote in the inscription:
Trouble has created the most beautiful scenery in troubled times.
Although this inscription uses rhetorical devices of metaphor, it is not difficult to see the theme revealed by metaphor.
(2) Explain the topic
When writing, you need to build a bridge between the topic and the article and get through the connection between your own article and the topic. It is undoubtedly a clever way to explain the topic in the inscription and write your own understanding of the topic.
In the inscription of Encourage Autobiography, this topic is elaborated as follows:
Encouragement is to learn the pulp of breaking the waves in the sea; Encouragement is a crutch of interdependence in life; Always give you infinite strength in the stormy waves, and always enhance your confidence in the trough!
The author expounds his understanding of the topic of "encouragement" with the help of metaphors, and points out the theme at the same time, which can be described as killing two birds with one stone. (3) In many inscriptions, we render the bedding, or quote aphorisms, or use famous sentences, or use metaphors to describe the arrangement and render the atmosphere. In the inscription of "Children in the Underground", the description method is used to render: I am an underground child, with cold eyes like animals, wandering in the autumn with falling leaves, and I am willing to see the lonely scenery on the sloping foot of the wall; No bird flew over to see the broken painting. ......
The inscription "The country intoxicates me" is rendered by arrangement:
The countryside is a beautiful place, a quiet place, an uncontroversial place and a simple place. ...
(4) Explain the statement
Briefly explain the topic in the form of an inscription, or explain the writing intention, or state the entrusted object, or explain the writing background.
The inscription of The Divine Comedy is:
I want to send this document to people who are committed to protecting the marine environment-
This paper takes three subheadings in Dante's Divine Comedy, namely "Hell", "Purgatory" and "Paradise", describes the process of the ocean from being polluted to returning to purity, and praises the efforts made by the environmental protection guards of the ocean. Obviously, the inscription is the object of praise in the article.
(5) Set suspense
Sometimes, inscriptions can also show its role in creating suspense.
"Listen, snail, don't cry" is inscribed with the following inscription:
On the grape trellis, a snail cries alone. His companions may have tasted the sweetness of grapes long ago, but how far will it go?
Why do snails cry? Why did the snail go so far (the inscription also implicitly quoted the campus folk song "Snail and Oriole" in Taiwan Province Province)? Such suspense deeply attracts readers.
The inscription of the article "Trees Immersed in the Sea of Praise" also has the same effect:
Snowflakes fall and melt with time; Roses bloom and fall with the passage of time, wither and bloom; And what will happen to people in different periods? Will it change! ……
There are many ways to write inscriptions. Interested students may wish to have a try.
Sample text
I have formed a good habit.
Candidates for the entrance examination
Character determines fate, and habit determines the future.
-inscription
In the eyes of teachers and parents, I am smart and flexible. But there is also a shortcoming, that is, carelessness and forgetfulness. I don't know how many times my mother has said this shortcoming, but I just don't want to change it after all. I don't think it is a big problem. Buy things if you lose them. And I also comforted myself by saying, "Who can have no shortcomings, as long as he is careful in big things?"
Mother said angrily, "You didn't cry until you saw the coffin. You will know when something is broken. "
I spat out my tongue and forgot my mother's lesson in the blink of an eye, still doing my own "carelessness"
Unexpectedly, I really let my mother say that my problem is finally broken-
Last year, I forgot to bring my admission ticket for the senior high school entrance examination, and it was not until I was blocked by the invigilator outside the examination room that I found it was a serious mistake, and sweat and tears dripped down my cheeks. I almost fainted when my mother tried to send me the admission ticket. Although the invigilator comforted me repeatedly, the "nerve-racking" just now still affected my first subject. Finally, the key high school I dreamed of for many years, because I didn't do well in the science exam for the first time, which affected my total score and passed me by. After the scores came out, all the teachers and classmates sympathized with me. I am like an eggplant beaten by snow. No matter how my mother scolds me, I can't reply.
As a last resort, I went back to my original school to repeat my studies. The teacher told me the story of the famous mathematician Chen Jingrun. Chen Jingrun used to pay little attention to Chinese because he studied mathematics. Therefore, his papers always fail to meet the standards of publication, and even his famous paper on Goldbach's conjecture has been delayed for many years. In those years when the publication was postponed, fortunately, no other mathematician put forward his research topic, otherwise his years of hard work would be wasted because of the defects in Chinese. Since then, I have a thorough and clear understanding of the fault of "Ma Daha". It turns out that a person's habits can determine a person's future. In the whole year of reviewing again, no matter what I do, I tell myself to be careful.
Now, I finally got rid of Ma Daha's faults and developed a good habit of being careful and meticulous.
[Comment] This article is worth learning from: 1, pointing out the center with inscriptions. 2. The "harm" of "Ma Daha" includes both "I" and "Chen Jingrun" lessons, which are specific and detailed. These are the "central materials" of the full text. Whether you can highlight the center of the article depends on whether the "central material" is dull and empty or concrete. We say that a good article should be "Leopard-tailed crested pork belly", and the "center material" determines the size of the pork belly.
Thinking development: this article can be applied to the composition of propositions or topics such as pain, growth, memory, taste, experience, knowing oneself, facing shortcomings, walking through mud, surpassing and remembering.
Summary format
Composition inscription
Express your true feelings and stir your heart.
Composition is the flow of the author's inner feelings and the flying soul. Telling the truth and expressing true feelings is the true meaning of composition. Inscription is an organic part of composition. Only by writing with sincerity and true feelings can we move people's hearts and arouse people's * * *.
For example, the inscription of a student's composition "Feeling Middle School" is: It is a clear spring in my heart, which flows endlessly and vomits endlessly, watering every grass and tree in my life journey. ...
This inscription creates a strong atmosphere for the full text through beautiful description. Poetically expounded the feelings of middle school, showing the love and praise for the beautiful life of middle school. The article is sublimated in emotion, deepened in conception and thick in texture.
Open the door to wake people up.
With inscriptions, the full text is mentioned in structure, so that readers can accurately grasp and clearly understand the thoughts and feelings carried by the article, so as to make an appropriate evaluation of the article. This method is especially needed for implicit prose or long articles, which can make the marking teacher have an accurate judgment on the articles.
Example: The inscription of a student's composition "Walking with You" is: They walked all the way, one carrying water, the other catching fire and moving forward hand in hand. Wisdom comes into being when they work hand in hand.
This note vividly and profoundly explains the topic of "walking with you", which is concise, shows the author's own understanding of the relationship between emotion and reason, and also points out his attitude and the center of the article.
Create suspense and attract people's attention
Creating a rich suspense atmosphere with inscriptions can arouse readers' interest in reading, arouse the wonderful artistic conception of imagination and attract the attention of marking teachers to their own articles.
Example: When a student wrote Applause, he planned to write an inscription like this: I felt inferior once, and I was sad because I knew how ugly you were, but at that moment, I really cheered for you. ...
Why "inferiority complex" and "sadness"? And why "cheer for you"? How ugly are you? These questions are like puzzles. Only by reading the complete text will you know that the author is a hymn to a disabled mother.
The metaphor is refreshing.
Metaphor has the characteristics of turning abstraction into concreteness, monotony into vividness and strong sense of pictures. Concrete and vivid metaphors contain profound and unique insights.
Example: A student's inscription in the composition "My heart is unchanged" is: The fish said: You can't see my tears because I am in the water; Water said, "I can feel your tears because you are in my heart."
In the form of metaphor, this inscription is full of philosophy and profound meaning, which makes people shine at the moment and never forget it.