When the footsteps in the wind and rain run out, when the life outside encounters difficulties, when the difficulties in your heart need to be confided, there is always a door open for you. Although this house is not gorgeous, it is enough to keep out the wind and rain outside the window and rekindle your enthusiasm for life.
This is home, a harbor full of love. I remember it was a rainy day.
As soon as the school bell rang, the students poured out like a flood. I also ran to pick up grandpa with excited steps.
Suddenly, I felt someone push me and I fell into a puddle. Suddenly, there was mud on my hands, clothes, shoes and socks.
I'm soaked to the skin, so cold! The man pushing me turned and ran into the crowd. I cried with a "wow" and no one came up to help me.
I walked out of the school gate sadly. Grandpa saw it and immediately took out a handkerchief from his pocket and let me hold it in my hand, which made my stiff hand feel warm.
Then I got on my bike and rode away quickly. The rain gradually subsided, and the cool wind hit my hands, and my face seemed to penetrate my flesh and blood.
I lie prone on grandpa's back, and grandpa's back is very warm. I can only hear the creaking sound of the bicycle, and it is getting more and more urgent.
Grandpa kept asking me "Is it cold" all the way and told me not to worry. Finally, when I got home, my grandfather helped me change clothes and prepare meals.
My father, mother and grandmother all take care of me. After a while, my cold body gradually eased and my dirty clothes were changed. I feel the warmth of home.
Here, there is no rain, snow and cold, only the stove built by my family is burning slowly. Although the wind and rain roar outside the window, the warmth of home is enough to melt the frost in your heart. Let the world be full of love, this intoxicating word has created a colorful life for mankind.
The world of love is full of sunshine and color everywhere, and it is hard for us to imagine how terrible this world would be without love. Love will create an infinite sky for life.
Bathed in the sunshine of love, we can turn indifference into kindness and hatred into tolerance. In life, we really need a love, and we need a kind of tolerant and indifferent feelings bred by love, so that we can see the world better.
When the flower of love blooms in the depths of our souls, all the troubles, disputes and misunderstandings in the world will be swept away and become a spring breeze-like warmth. I remember it was a Friday night. I turned on the TV and turned to the art station to watch the program "Lightning Stars Move".
This time, a college student in Fudan University was bedridden because of a sudden cerebral hemorrhage and became a vegetable. His parents are ordinary workers and can't afford huge medical expenses.
But this college student likes listening to Liang Guang's songs very much. Whenever he puts these songs into Liang Guang's songs, he will show them. Hands will be raised a little, or mouth will be opened a little. Seems to be very happy and want to sing together.
When Liang Guang learned about this situation, he immediately wrote a letter to the college student, encouraging him and telling him that he would definitely wake up. Later, he came to Lightning Star and made a program.
In the program, he touched many good people with a real example of a college student's sudden cerebral hemorrhage, but they had no money for treatment. They all dedicated their love to college students. Liang Guang also held a "Love Auction", in which a dress he wore when shooting the cover of his new album was taken as an auction item, and the starting price was 1 yuan, and it was sold.
At this time, Liang Guang sang a favorite fairy tale of college students. Once again, everyone donated money for college students, and the scene was very touching.
I also sent a short message to the program group with tears in my eyes, because a short message represents my heart. Finally, Liang Guang successfully raised the medical expenses of this college student.
At this time, the familiar melody sounded again at the scene. "... you have to believe that we will be like in fairy tales, and happiness is the ending. "
2. Know your own composition materials
This motto was written on the doorframe of the temple of Apollo in ancient Greece: "Know yourself."
Oberman: I am insignificant to the universe; But for myself, this is everything.
Marx: The essence of all truth is that man finally knows himself.
Lin Qingxuan: What a person needs when facing the outside world is a window; What a person needs when facing himself is a mirror. You can only see the brightness of the world through the window, but you can only see your own stains with the mirror. In fact, neither the window nor the mirror is important. What matters is your heart. Your heart is vast, your study is big, your heart is bright and the world is bright.
Human theme
1897 Gauguin's oil painting before his suicide "Where did we come from? Who Are We? Where are we going? This theme covers the essence of human philosophy.
Pope: To know yourself, you don't need God to see you. Only people can know human beings. People in this middle position are smart in ignorance and great in rudeness.
John? Locke (a famous British ideological educator): There are two kinds of impoliteness: the first is shyness; The second is misconduct and neglect. In order to avoid these two situations, we must abide by the following rules: Don't look down on yourself or others.
3. How to write an argumentative essay in a composition from many angles, whether it is a propositional composition or a material composition, we should broaden our thinking, use divergent thinking, analyze the problems discussed from all angles, explore all aspects of the problems as much as possible, and seek various answers. Then from many ideas, choose the best angle, that is, the most creative and effective angle to express your thoughts and intentions.
To choose the best angle, we should compare and weigh the advantages and disadvantages of each point of view according to the needs, screen from coarse to fine, and choose arguments from small, deep and new requirements. The so-called "small" means starting from small things and seeing big things from small ones.
The so-called "deep" refers to insight into the depths of things and avoiding simplicity and superficiality; The so-called "new" means to have original opinions, get rid of the common problems of conformism, have a sense of the times and be full of fresh breath. Never glance at the topic or material, draw a conclusion and start writing at once. Be sure to watch it several times and think about it several times. Seek differences from the same, and seek novelty from the differences.
4. Material composition "Grimm's Fairy Tales" Please draw up five topics from five angles. National Volume 1: Comic Composition National Volume 2: Path. Beijing: Look at the stars in a down-to-earth way. Shanghai: the city and me. Tianjin: The world I live in. Liaoning: Happiness. Shaanxi: Three short stories inspire students to talk about the successful environment. Sichuan: the most beautiful youth. Chongqing: Problem. Green Life in Zhejiang: Between Role Changes Jiangxi: Recovering Childhood Anhui: Writing Articles Based on Philosophical Poems Guangdong: Neighbors Traveling to Fujian: The Birth Story of Grimm's Fairy Tales Shandong: Writing Articles Based on Tolstoy's Famous Sentences Hainan Province: Participating in Ningxia: Honesty and Kindness (Source: Business Daily and Joint Survey) Celebrity Comments on Famous Writers and Scholars February River: Professor of Beijing Normal University and Lecture Room Moral: The topic is very social and contemporary. The situation of Ye Kuangzheng, a famous poet, scholar and cultural critic, is worse than last year. Lack of social topics User comments are the most shocking composition topic: 20 10 national volume 1 composition topic: "Cats eat fish" The most difficult composition topic: 20 10 Anhui college entrance examination composition topic: Xing Wu's composition is the worst comment: 20 10 Hunan college entrance examination composition topic: the most controversial composition topic in the morning: the most innovative composition topic: 20/0. 0 Beijing volume composition topic: "Look at the stars in a down-to-earth way" The easiest and gentlest composition topic: 20 10 Guangdong volume composition topic: "Begging for your neighbor" and "The soldiers are unpredictable, and the water is unpredictable." The famous saying of Sun Tzu's Art of War is very appropriate for college entrance examination composition. Judging from the trajectory of college entrance examination composition proposition in recent years, more and more attention has been paid to logical speculation, flashing rational light. We should look at the problem comprehensively from a dialectical point of view and avoid looking at the problem unilaterally, in isolation and statically. If candidates only pay attention to one aspect of the problem and don't look at the problem comprehensively and dialectically, it will be difficult to meet the best ideas.
5. Ask about your composition material: pay attention to yourself and know yourself. The words "I" and "myself" appeared in a large number of full-propositional compositions and semi-propositional compositions in the composition topic of the senior high school entrance examination in 2009. For example, I was moved by myself in Hangzhou, Zhejiang, I was very lucky in Jiangxi, I didn't expect this in Huanggang, Hubei, and Let Me Run in Lianyungang, Jiangsu. Out of My Little World by Linyi, Shandong Province, Everything is Beautiful in My World by Shaanxi Province, an essay selected by Hainan Province, and so on. Some of these "self-concern and self-cognition" questions require candidates to write about their emotional experience from the perspective of "I", while others require candidates to write about "I" from the perspective of "I". The general feature is to pay attention to the students themselves and their daily lives, and strive to let the candidates tell the truth and express their true feelings. It can be predicted that this kind of "I"-centered composition will continue to appear in the future senior high school entrance examination papers, so this edition will give special guidance and explanation to this kind of composition, hoping to help students prepare for the exam. Write as required. Du Xiaokang, a teenager on a lonely journey, tempered his body and mind in the hardships of life and spiritual loneliness. He was moved by his "growing up and being strong". Everyone is more or less moved by their own maturity, progress and transcendence on the road of growth, which is the starting point of beauty. Being touched by yourself is the sublimation of the spirit. Please write an article of 600-800 words on the topic of "being touched by yourself". Your thoughts are self-determined, and your style is self-selected. The names of your school and staff are not allowed to appear in the article. The real names of me and my classmates. (Composition Topic in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province in 2009) Proposition Features 1. Venting the true feelings: the composition content is no longer an artificial obstacle for candidates to write. In 2009, the composition in Hangzhou, Zhejiang Province changed in the propositional form, from last year's topic composition Calendar to the propositional composition Touching Yourself. This topic is somewhat unexpected, but it is also reasonable. Due to the fraud in recent years, the phenomenon of formulaic disease-free composition is increasing day by day. Under such a severe realistic background, this propositional composition can be said to be a benign guide to candidates' writing, allowing candidates to return to their true emotional world, to their sincere understanding of self-growth, to their profound understanding of life experience, and to the aesthetic purpose of harmony between composition and life. In short, the perfect combination of respect for truth, goodness and beauty and wisdom. The topic comes from the text "Lonely Journey". Paying attention to the unique inner feelings of Du Xiaokang, a well-known figure, is an important background on which the proposition is based. On this basis, the proposer strives to make students' rich, delicate and lively life enter the examination questions, become the main source of composition, and guide the candidates to write my heart, pay attention to themselves and their inner feelings. Express your true feelings. Judging from the writing content, the topic of "being moved by yourself" can be written as being moved by your own soul, your own personality and your own advantages ... in short, you can be moved by all your real events, behaviors and hearts. 2. Pay attention to yourself: "self" has become the focus of the senior high school entrance examination composition. This is a new information provided by the composition proposition of Hangzhou senior high school entrance examination this year. According to the curriculum standards, writing is a process of understanding the world, self and creative expression. The topic of "being touched by yourself" guides candidates to observe themselves, know themselves and evaluate themselves from the best angle. Make the examinee's will quality internalized and improved in reflection. 3. Proposition trigger: The word "Bei" in the topic urges candidates to express their true spiritual feelings. This essay proposition takes Du Xiaokang's life as the starting point of thinking, "firmness" as the emotional basis, "tempering" as the emotional process and "moving" as the emotional ultimate point. Greatly stimulated the examinee's thinking and emotion. The word "Bei" in the title reflects the value pursuit of writing with true feelings and urges candidates to write their true emotional life. The word "Bei" focuses on self-discovery, the process of spiritual perception, the rational analysis of candidates and the introspection of candidates. If the word "Bei" is changed to "Wei", what effect will this proposition have? Candidates are easy to break away from rational analysis, their emotional expression is superficial, and their compositions are easy to be false and empty. The thinking orientation of the word "Bei" is mainly reflected in three aspects: the emotion of the article should start from the inner self, take the initiative first and then be passive; Emotion is directed at oneself, not at others; Emotion is a positive psychological reflection under certain conditions. If there is negligence in these aspects, there will be different degrees of deviation. Candidates writing such a topic must not be simply assembled with a few model essays. The "Beizi" in the title reflects the characters, objects and protagonists of candidates' compositions. 4. Pay attention to the composition language: the quality of language skills has become one of the important basis for judging the quality of composition in the senior high school entrance examination. "Without a good expression tool, no matter how beautiful your thoughts and feelings are, your expression is not good and your expression is insufficient." It can be said that language ability is the most basic and stable factor in composition ability. Naturally, the examination of language ability has also become the main item of composition examination. Regardless of last year's "Calendar" or this year's "Moved by Yourself", from the content point of view, candidates have a lot to write. In particular, the topic of "being touched by yourself" is closer to the life and heart of candidates. Therefore, in the case that the composition content is no longer a writing problem for candidates, the quality of language ability is particularly important. From last year's "Calendar" to this year's "Moved by Yourself", the transformation and inheritance of the form of composition proposition conforms to the characteristics of the cultivation of composition ability and the requirements of the times for students' composition, and the language ability of composition has become the value pursuit of composition proposition in the examination room. Therefore, we should regard language tempering as an important task in our usual writing. Vivid and personalized language will make the article icing on the cake and make people happy to read. Dull language will darken the article.
6. Recognize your composition material and yourself. 1. Front material (1) Ancient 1. Bao: Recognize your own abilities and recommend Guan Zhong as the phase.
2. Huang Taiji: Recognize the situation clearly and don't rush to attack the Ming Dynasty on a large scale. 3. Liu Bang: After capturing Chengyang, you can clearly understand the strength and situation. Although he loves money without autumn, he won the hearts of the people in three chapters.
4. Zhuangzi: Fully aware of his own nature, regardless of the temptation of Xiang Chu. (2) Hyundai 1. Shi Tiesheng: Recognize the reality and engage in literary creation.
2. Sustainable development strategy: The central government clearly recognizes that China is the country with the highest energy consumption per capita GDP. 3. Ding Junhui: Recognize your interests and become a famous billiards player since childhood.
4. Jay Chou: Know yourself clearly, stick to your own way of music and don't follow the trend. 5. Zhang Yue: The host of CCTV's "Half the Sky", who knows himself clearly and does not blindly follow, forms his own unique hosting style.
Li Suli: Pay attention to your work. Although ordinary, it can make extraordinary contributions. 7. Liu Xiang: He used to be a high jumper. Later, he realized his advantages and changed to track and field 1 100 meter hurdles, and finally became a world champion. He also refused the invitation of the cast to play.
8. Horse: Being able to recognize the characteristics of one's hoarse voice and create a horse-like singing style with a deep voice and a long aftertaste. 9. Chen Shengshen: Realizing that he is not sociable, he immersed himself in mathematical research and eventually became a master.
(3) Foreign countries 1. Rice: Know yourself clearly, turn from studying piano to politics, and become a man of the hour in international politics. 2. Germany: Face up to the history of shame and acknowledge historical responsibility.
3. Singapore: a tiny place can realize its unique tourism advantage-sunshine. 4.mark? Twain: I was keen on invention at first, but I was not successful in business. I gradually realized my ability and became a famous writer.
5. Einstein: realized that his interest and ability are in the field of physics. Refuse to be the president of Israel. 6. Van Gogh: Even if a painting was not sold before his death, he could recognize his ideal pursuit and never give up, and was finally recognized by future generations.
7. Chaplin: Recognize yourself and turn your ugliness into a comedy advantage. 8.bill? Gates: Dropped out of college, engaged in software development, found a correct position in life, and eventually became the richest man in the world.
9. Hawking: Although physically disabled, he can recognize his advantages and potential in theoretical physics and write popular science works such as A Brief History of Time. (4) Literary works and other films "Huo Yuanjia": After some hardships, Huo Yuanjia recognized the spirit of martial arts and eventually became a master.
The eagle hits the sky, the fish is shallow, the camel walks in the desert, and the tiger roars in the mountains: they all find their own lives. Chess: Every chess piece has its position and function.
Second, the negative material (a) ancient 1. Yang Xiu: I was so arrogant that I didn't know my place clearly, and I was finally killed. 2. Six countries: In the face, they didn't understand the situation clearly, but they scrambled to bribe Qin, and their national strength was weakening.
3. Zhao Kuo: I can't recognize the reality, blindly confident; Eventually failed. 4. Xiang Yu: When Wujiang committed suicide, he still didn't recognize his own fault, thinking that "God will kill me".
5. Li Yu: I can't recognize my responsibilities and eventually become a prisoner of national subjugation. 6. Zhuge Liang: I can't recognize the general trend of the world.
Six out of Qishan. Died in Wuzhangyuan. 7. Han Xin: Unable to recognize his position, he was eventually demoted and killed.
(2) Hyundai 1. Some college graduates: When looking for a job after graduation, they don't know themselves clearly, so their goals are too high. 2. Sister Furong: I can't recognize myself and pose on the Internet.
4. Super girl: Its negative effect is to make thousands of boys and girls blindly follow the trend and lose themselves. 5. Hahan and pro-Japanese: blindly following the trend and losing their own personality and style.
6. The Great Leap Forward: the national economy regressed due to the failure to correctly estimate the strength and recognize the situation. 7. Lee Teng-hui and Chen Shui-bian: Regardless of the world situation, they are bent on Taiwan independence.
(3) Foreign countries 1. Newton: I didn't recognize myself and was hired by the British Mint. 2. Some Japanese politicians dare not face up to the history of aggression against other countries. Continue to beautify aggression and continue to "worship ghosts."
3. German juvenile division: an army composed of teenagers when German fascism was about to collapse. Unable to recognize the strength and situation, he enthusiastically participated in the war and was completely annihilated.
4. Nietzsche: arrogantly calling himself "the sun", unable to realize his own value and role. (4) Literary works and others 1. Don Quixote: I can't recognize the world clearly, blindly imitate the practices of medieval knights, and hit a wall everywhere.
2. Guizhou donkey: I didn't recognize my own strength and was finally eaten by a tiger. 3. Crosstalk "The Leading Role and Supporting Role": Peisi Chen's "supporting role" didn't recognize his supporting role, and he wanted to be the leading role and made a joke.
As can be seen from the above simple classification, the sources of composition materials are still very extensive. But need: we pay attention to observation, thinking and application.
Of course, the problems reflected by these materials are also obvious. First, although the vision of college entrance examination materials is invested in ancient and modern China and foreign countries, it is mainly based on people and things familiar to everyone in ancient and modern times, supplemented by foreign materials; Second, there are more positive materials than negative materials; Third, there are not many novel and appropriate materials, especially reviewing more than three compositions, which is even more difficult.
Therefore, we should pay attention to the following points when preparing for the composition of senior three: first, read more and try to occupy all kinds of writing materials; Second, we should examine and use the same material from multiple angles and levels, so as to change our minds; Third, we should pay more attention to the material in reality and express our views and feelings with simple and sincere civilian feelings and a sense of urgency to reality. The third point, I think it should be an important direction of composition examination in the college entrance examination.
Below, the author mainly takes the excellent fragments of the college entrance examination composition in the past two years as an example to talk about the preparation of the composition materials for the last two points. First, understand and use existing materials from multiple angles and levels.
In writing practice, students' understanding and application of materials often fall into a misunderstanding, thinking that a material exists only for one theme; Only the superficial meaning of the material is grasped, but the rich connotation cannot be deeply excavated. The same material can have different uses.
7. There are too many examples of universal composition materials! ! !
But I'll tell you a few paragraphs:
Start:
Spring silkworms died, but they left behind luxurious silk; The butterfly died, but left beautiful clothes; Thrushcross flew away, but left a wonderful song; Flowers withered, but left a wisp of fragrance; The candle burned out, but it left a bright light; The thunderstorm passed, but colorful neon lights were left behind. (Write casually at the back)
Tolerance is a kind of generosity, which can be selfless, fearless, dust-free and pollution-free. Tolerance is an open mind, a broader mind than the ocean and the sky, and a superposition, continuation and sublimation of broadness and generosity. Tolerance is measured, priceless and the basic law of life. (Tolerance can be changed)
Ending:
Only when we set out can we reach our ideal and destination. Only by working hard can we achieve brilliant success. Only sowing can reap. Only by pursuing can we taste honest people.
If friendship is an evergreen tree, it must be watered by a clear spring from the heart; If friendship is an unbeaten flower, then it must be the rising sun in my heart. Friendship can be changed.
I hope you are satisfied.
8. How to write a key from my perspective and composition materials Happiness is generally a locked heart. As long as there is a lock, we can open the door and find all the magic. Here, "key" has a figurative meaning, which refers to the method or way to open the door to happiness. In fact, there are many writing themes around us, as long as we pay close attention, we can find them! First, make a fuss about the word "happiness". Since you take "happiness" as the main topic, what you open with "key" is what you think can make you happy, and what you always want. It can also be that when you are frustrated or failed, your friends are always by your side to encourage you, help you, support you to regain your confidence and help you get rid of all the difficulties around you. Wait a minute. Second, pay attention to the moral behind the topic. That day, I found the key to happiness The implication is: I haven't found a way to make myself happy before, which is more troublesome and deeply confused. After that day, I was suddenly enlightened and found the key to happiness by accident. Third, I should pay attention to the use of details, especially psychological details. When I found this key, what was your psychology? What was your psychology when you picked it up? What did you feel after you picked it up? The more delicate the psychological description, the more you can reveal your true feelings and move people with emotion. Fourth, you must use the following skills to get high marks: environmental description, setting off the atmosphere; Combine narration with discussion, make the finishing point and deepen the theme; Contrast before and after, highlighting the center; Parallelism at the end enhances the momentum of the article and deepens the theme.