Composition evaluation 1 1, the language of the article is concise and standardized, and the opening is attractive.
2. The opening is concise, concise and orderly, quite innovative and impressive.
3. At the beginning of the question, the words are very attractive.
4. Be able to make good use of language, action and psychological description to make the case concrete and vivid.
5. The paragraphs are a link between the preceding and the following, and the detailed description highlights the quality of the characters and is touching.
6, the transition is natural, and each paragraph is explained clearly.
7. The psychological description is exquisite, the metaphor is appropriate, and the words are vivid.
8. The article tells the reader in a relaxed and pleasant tone, which is memorable.
9. The ending is implicit and points out the theme.
10, the ending is simple and touching.
1 1. The article is meticulous, orderly and vivid, which is a masterpiece.
12, the article is novel in material selection, ... It is full of rural life and children's interest. It makes people feel very happy and comfortable after reading it.
13. Appropriate use cases and clear explanations.
14, this article is based on real life, with appropriate materials, great originality, clear paragraphs, natural transition, full of interest and strong readability.
15. In this paper, materials are organized around …. The language is accurate, vivid and vivid, and the content is extremely rich and concrete. It is a successful work.
16, the article is lyrical while narrating. Concentrate on expressing emotions at the end, which not only takes care of the beginning but also summarizes the full text. Coherent from beginning to end, in one go.
17, the article is short but vivid. Delicate description, strong flavor of life, accurate wording and sentences. At the end of the article, it is revealed that the central sentence is really a clear stroke, and the summary is short and powerful. Through careful observation, this article is vividly described in appropriate language. Although the article is short but not monotonous, the language is popular but interesting. A major feature of this paper is the meticulous description of the characters' language, demeanor and movements. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished. The article will be written in detail, and the warmth like sunshine will be revealed between the lines, so that the theme of the article will naturally be sublimated to a higher level.
18, pay attention to observing specific things and develop appropriate imagination, which is the success of this paper. The article melts feelings into the scenery, describes the scenery while expressing feelings, and is good at using analogy to make the article vivid and concrete, which makes people feel helpless.
19, easy to understand, simple to understand
20. Description of experimental phenomena,
The composition evaluation is 2 family styles and family precepts 1. The full text has a bright rhythm, fresh language, and is always full of humor and fun to read.
2. The article is novel in content, reasonable in structure, fluent and coherent, and naturally accessible. The details are quite ingenious. Extremely rich in skills.
3. Start with feelings and end with feelings. In this way, the article is coordinated from beginning to end, and the theme of the article is repeated, which is very infectious.
4, the text is ok, but the description is not wonderful.
5. The content is not substantial and the structure is not compact.
6. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main features of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.
7. The content of this article is vivid and rich, the language is novel and refreshing, and the structure is unique and reasonable.
8. The sentence is fluent, but the beginning and the end can't echo.
9. Make a clear analysis and use appropriate words.
10, although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and the indispensable ending highlights the theme of the article. ——
1 1, the end echoes the beginning, and the structure is complete.
12, the end echoes the title and points out the center.
13, the article is detailed and pertinent, with prominent points and just the right ending. The language is simple and profound and thought-provoking.
14, starting with emotion and ending with emotion, the article is coherent and infectious.
15, the beginning is concise, the key points are prominent, the details are appropriate, and the content is specific.
16, the article fully and appropriately renders the atmosphere and gives a delicate and vivid description of the key objects, which is impressive and ambitious.
17, the article is practical and contains simple and profound philosophy, which is refreshing and full of emotions.
18, this article is full of passion, and you can feel the author's feelings between the lines. The full text has clear levels and fluent sentences.
19, the case narrative is vivid, concrete and interesting.
20. The language of the article is fresh and lively, the description can grasp the main characteristics of things, and the length is short and pithy, which is worth reading.
Composition evaluation 3 1. His works are ingenious in conception and concise and fluent in writing. The imagination is bold, creative, novel and attractive to read.
2. imaginative and innovative. Introduce yourself at the beginning, and introduce yourself below. In addition, the language of the article is concise and humorous.
3. The article is not long, but the process is clearly described, and the activities of the characters are concrete, real, vivid and interesting. The full text is compact and complete in structure and fluent in writing.
4. The plot is lively and interesting, the narrative is clear and complete, and it also shows the author's intelligence and wit, full of family life interest, and his writing is fluent and vivid.
You are very good at grasping the characteristics of things and describing them carefully, which shows that there is emotion between writing and writing. The article is very convincing and thought-provoking. In writing, the plot is vivid and the article is magnificent, which is very instructive to read.
6. This article expresses sincere praise for the beautiful mind with concrete examples, vivid and beautiful language and novel and unique writing style.
7. There are three main advantages of this paper: this paper can closely follow the requirements of the topic and write the process completely. Rigorous structure, focused. The language is concise and fluent, and the beginning and end are natural and accurate. The beginning is concise and natural, the structure is clear, and the psychological description is true, which reflects the author's good language control ability. The characteristics of this article can be summarized as cordial, warm and meaningful.
8. The description in the article is fresh and lively, cheerful and clear. The childlike innocence between the lines makes the article have it.
9. A major feature of this article is the detailed description of the characters' language, manners and movements. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are still unfinished.
10. The article will be written in detail, and the warmth like sunshine between the lines will naturally sublimate the theme of the article to a higher level.
1 1. The music is beautiful, and so is the language of this article. Poetic language and fantastic imagination, how beautiful! The "reading" and "feeling" of the article are closely related, and the action is described with examples, which is touching at the beginning and has real feelings. The structure of the article is concise and reasonable, and the author's understanding of the original text is also very profound and thorough. The full-text language is forceful and hit the floor, which makes people excited and excited.
12. Although the language of this article is not gorgeous, it is extremely accurate and vivid, full of emotion and truth, and it is very interesting to read. A large number of spoken English in life is used to make the article more natural and close to the people. The ending is clear and meaningful.
13. This composition has novel materials, wonderful ideas and lively language. There is a fresh breath of life and children's interest between the lines.
14. The article narrates the events according to the sequence of events. The language is fluent and the level is clear. It looks very happy from beginning to end.
15. The article is full of respect, gratitude, affection and emotion from beginning to end, which is the shocking force of this article.
Composition evaluation of family style and family instruction 4 1. Improper arrangement of details and unclear priorities.
2. The content is mostly outlined by lines, lacking point-by-point description.
Can't keep up with the times, and the content is too old.
4. The theme is prominent, the center is clear and the thinking is clear.
5. The views are clear, likes and dislikes are clear, and people can see at a glance.
6. Directly highlight the theme in the content, clear and to the point, without redundancy.
7. The theme is serious, the thought is noble, and the enterprise is strong.
8. The center is not clear enough and the concept is not clear enough.
9. The theme is vague, the meaning is vague, and the purpose of writing is not clear.
10. Although there is a central theme, the expression is not strong enough and the words are not true.
1 1. The expression is unclear and unconvincing.
12. The theme is not serious enough, and there are still dross in thought.
13. The plot is tortuous, and the narrative process has a certain sense of ups and downs, which reflects the curvy beauty of the plot and is fascinating.
14. The plot is strong in faltering, and there are accidents at ordinary times, which can attract readers' attention.
15. The plot changes irregularly, with occasional suspense, waves and surprises. The development process of the event embodies the author's innovative ideas.
16. The plot develops smoothly and lacks certain ups and downs.
17. The plot changes are unremarkable and lack new ideas.
18. The plot is straight and there is no suspense. It seems to be a running account.
19. The process is detailed, but the ending is short. Unreasonable structure, giving people a tiger
20. The idea is unreasonable and the content is full of loopholes, which can't reflect the truth of life.
2 1. The plot is ups and downs, and the transformation is too fast and not coherent enough.
Composition evaluation of family style and family instruction 5 1. Briefly explain the time, place, result …
2. The language is concise, standardized and attractive at the beginning.
3 ... begins with ... which is more innovative.
4. The opening is concise, concise and orderly; Pay attention to description ... leave a deep impression.
5. I used a scene metaphor at the beginning, which is quite innovative; Flashback the beginning and render the artistic conception.
6. Getting to the point at the beginning is also a way of writing.
7. The beginning is very lively. The use of personification makes the beginning lively.
8. Ask questions at the beginning to attract readers.
9. Cut to the chase at the beginning, making people clear at a glance.
10. Point to the beginning and use attractive words.
1 1. The description of the scene and atmosphere adds a lot of color to the article;
12 ... briefly describe the wonderful place; Link local work with overall work.
13. briefly introduce the situation and naturally transition to the next paragraph;
14. The situation description causes suspense;
15. Make full use of language, action and psychological description to make things concrete and visual.
16. Briefly describe the cause and effect and pave the way.
17. Dialogue or some psychological description can be added to this part.
18. It is more appropriate to change … to ….
19. Naturally, the connecting link between the preceding and the following, and the detailed description highlights the quality of the characters and is touching.
20. Describe the scenery in the narrative, measure people and compare them with each other.
2 1. personified language makes the article more vivid.
22. The description of appearance is very interesting, which highlights the loveliness of …. The introduction is all my own ideas, which are very infectious.
23. It is very vivid to use the method of giving examples in a column diagram.
24. The transition is natural, and each paragraph is explained clearly.
This part refers to the examples in the text. The language is too flat, so it can be modified appropriately to make it more vivid.
26. The beauty of ... is vividly written through rhetorical devices such as metaphor and personification. This section can also be expanded to show …
27. The use of figurative sentences is accurate. Add ancient poetry to associate, full of charm.
In sharp contrast to ..., stand out from the crowd. ...
29. It is impressive that primary school students can have such an experience.
30. The metaphor of ... is well used.
Composition evaluation of family style and family instruction 6 1. The selection of materials is too popular, to some extent, it is not representative, the theme is outdated, and the concept is outdated.
2. Although I chose events with certain narrative value in my life, because
3. The analysis is not thorough, the excavation is not deep, and the hidden truth of the incident is not deeply reflected.
4. The materials are plain, too old, vulgar, simple and naive, and there is no new idea, so it is difficult to deeply reflect the authenticity of life.
5. Failure to reflect the truth through trivial matters, and lack of proficiency in the expression of "seeing the big from the small".
6. Lack of multi-angle description of the characters, only a narrow theme is selected, showing the one-sided personality characteristics of the characters.
7. Strong emotions, such as volcanic eruption, can deeply move readers.
8. Sincere feelings, strong feelings, like mellow wine, make people drunk if they don't drink it.
9. Emotions are true and natural, and there is no suspicion of affectation. Express your true feelings with a plain heart.
10. The mental journey is true and delicate, and the thoughts and attitudes of the characters are clear to readers at a glance.
1 1. The feelings are true and delicate, and the words are touching, which really comes from the author's heart.
12. Seek the gains and losses of life from self-reflection, reveal the true feelings in confession, and the words are powerful and shocking.
13. The language is simple, the feelings are dull, and the affection is not deep enough.
14. The feelings are so strong that I can't seem to feel them. Instead, they are posing and performing by themselves.
15. Lack of depth of emotion, failure to convey feelings through scenes, failure to generate feelings from events. Although feelings are hidden in words, they fail to dig deep.
16. Psychological depiction is not vivid enough to effectively express the attitude, likes and dislikes of the characters.
17. Things repeatedly emphasize the author's point of view from different angles and aspects, with thorough reasoning and clear organization.
18. Quoting classic examples of famous sayings is more convincing and can express the author's point of view more powerfully.
19. Strong arguments, thorough and reasonable analysis and strong philosophy.
20. The examples are rich, the materials are properly selected, and the descriptions are detailed and convincing.
2 1. The logical reasoning ability is weak, and the evidence is not conclusive enough.