It is said that after the four monks and apprentices in the Tang Dynasty learned from the scriptures and achieved positive results, they all sealed the Buddha. At this time, these four people became famous. Heaven and earth, a household name, the popularity index soared again and again.

However, problems also follow. After they completed the task of learning from the scriptures, their merits were satisfactory, and they were pampered, and their old problems were exposed again. After the monkey king removed the iron ring, he was always a monkey without restraint, often drinking and making trouble. Pig Bajie's gluttony and lewdness have been committed again, eating all over the star-rated hotels and falling in love with female fans; The sand monk has always been honest and kind. After unloading his luggage, he did nothing, ate and slept, and his head became more and more numb. What Tang Priests and disciples did to their disciples was to turn a blind eye and study the important thoughts of various Buddhists every day, which made it more difficult to distinguish right from wrong, not to ask good and evil, and to be tolerant of others.

Suddenly, one day, the Tang Priest lost a few disciples, so he called three disciples together. It pains him to see that his disciples have changed. He said to his disciples, "Amitabha, why did the disciples make mistakes again?" If this continues, how can I explain it to Buddha? "The disciples bowed their heads and said nothing. Silence for a while, the Monkey King patience not to live. He said to the Tang Priest, "Master, shall we build a temple to illuminate the demon?" When the Tang Priest was stupefied, Wukong added, "If anyone breaks the old habit again, he will go to the reflection hall to reflect, repent and turn over a new leaf." Tang Priest seems to understand. He said: "Amitabha, it is good to know your mistakes and correct them." "You discuss it and make a report." After that, I closed my eyes and read the scriptures.

Wukong three people began to discuss. Pig said first, "Build a reflection hall near Gaolaozhuang ..."

Wukong said, "Idiot, you still want to go to Lao Zhang's house! If you ask me, I think the "reflection hall" should be built in Guo Hua Mountain, a national poverty-stricken county. With the' reflection hall', the sluggish tourism industry may have a fire! "

"Big Brother is right." Friar Sand agreed.

Later, we discussed the modeling, public bidding, overall development, management and employment of the building. Then Pig Bajie went to Tianjie to find a female college student who danced belly dance and made it up and reported it to the master. After asking the Jade Emperor for instructions, the Tang Priest gave the following instructions with a stroke of his pen:

1, the whole project is contracted by Niu Wangmo, and the mountain soldiers will supervise the work, so it is not allowed to build the bean curd residue project. 2, shall not be in arrears with the wages of migrant workers.

3. Recruit college students who have not found a job to do the management work of the "reflection hall" and recruit laid-off workers to do technical work.

A day later, the resplendent "reflection hall" was built. Together with the original Guohua Mountain Scenic Area, it now integrates sightseeing, bathing, recuperation, entertainment, leisure and introspection. After the opening, there was a sea of people. When Tang Priest saw this, he was both happy and worried. He folded his hands and said, "Amitabha ..."

Comments:

This article is full of imagination and natural humor, which makes people laugh. Inspired by The Journey to the West, the young author created a story. The characters in the story are lifelike. This paper inherits The Journey to the West's language style and has a strange imagination. Describe your own personality characteristics. For example, the second paragraph summarizes the "old problems" of the four men. The second half of the article, connecting with real social life, criticizes the shortcomings of the times without leaving axe marks. The ending is thought-provoking with the words of Tang Priest.

2. Let life be wonderful because of reflection.

The eagle said: "Snails can climb to the top of the pyramid, and I also have the courage to reflect on myself, and I can spread my wings and soar in the blue sky."

The green leaf said, "Red flowers are dazzling and unique. I have the courage to reflect, and I can also decorate the spring and bring people beautiful enjoyment."

Xiaoxi said: "raindrops can penetrate clouds and land on the ground, but I have the courage to reflect, and I can also look down on mountains and rivers and work silently for mankind."

You see, nature is listening to the way of "I save three times a day"; Listen, nature is singing "introspection, you are teaching me to grow up". Then, as a human being, how can you be indifferent after being Confucius?

Turning over the picture of history, vivid examples show us the elegance of those sages and people with lofty ideals.

Zou Ji in the victory period was not complacent because of the praise of his wife and concubine, but reflected on himself many times and finally came to the conclusion that it was not easy to speak frankly. Gou Jian, the king of Yue, was not defeated because of the pain of national subjugation. Instead, I reflected on myself many times and tried my best to eventually become a generation of masters. Madame Curie was not arrogant because of refining radium. She reflected on herself many times and continued to study hard, eventually becoming a two-time Nobel Prize winner.

There are countless such examples, but how can you just see other people's actions and be indifferent to yourself? Let's close the picture of history and look at today's heroes:

Deng Yaping did not fall down after repeated failures, but constantly reflected on himself, so he trained hard and eventually became the pride of the motherland; Brother Huang, the torture of illness failed to erode his heart. After many introspection, he realized that the love of the whole country is more important than everything else, and gratitude can only be repaid. So I embarked on a difficult and long journey of gratitude; Tai Lihua, facing the dark world, she didn't lose heart, but kept reflecting. My motherland needs me, so in a quiet place, life is brilliant now!

Introspection is the dawn, which can bring you the dawn of the new century; Reflection is sunshine, which can bring you infinite warmth; Introspection is a street lamp that can illuminate the road you walk at night; Introspection … friends, introspection is also our friend. Let's always remember it and treat it well, because life is more exciting because of introspection!

Comments:

The author pays great attention to hierarchy, from nature to human society and from history to reality, and comprehensively discusses the important role of reflection. In the process of discussion, listing facts with compound sentence not only makes the expression concise and increases the capacity, but also makes the language neat and full of potential. However, young writers should also make some efforts in the coherence of language: connecting the context with turning sentences to make the article structure rigorous, which is good for young writers; However, transitional sentences should be consistent with the context. For example, the phrase "Confucius was the sage later" in the fourth paragraph is obviously inconsistent with the example of Madame Curie listed in the next paragraph. How can you just see other people's actions and be indifferent to yourself? It is also inappropriate to associate history with people and events today.

I won't make the same mistake again-introspection.

Japanese scholar Daisaku Ikeda said: "When any noble character is enlightened, it illuminates the darkness before."

So, please don't be afraid to make mistakes; But after making a mistake, you will reflect, so that you won't make the same mistake.

1992 Yang Zhenning, who won the Nobel Prize in Physics, was bent on doing a successful experiment, but he always failed. Americans laughed at him and said, "Where there is an explosion, there is Yang Zhenning." At this time, Yang Zhenning also realized that he was really not suitable for doing experiments. After thousands of introspection, he decided to give up and pursue other dreams.

Instead of focusing on his weaknesses, he turned to other dreams, so he succeeded and became a world-famous physicist.

On the contrary, Germany first became the chief culprit of the world war twice, and the key is not to reflect on itself. In World War I, it challenged Britain to know its people. As a result, it cost manpower and material resources and ended in failure. In just over 20 years, it provoked World War II, and the shadow of the war enveloped the whole world. Countless righteous people have died for this. But after all, justice triumphed over evil, the world anti-fascist war won the final victory, and German fascists suffered the consequences.

Now people gradually realize the power of introspection, because introspection makes people not make the same mistake again.

In today's Germany, they began to repent of the crimes they committed that year. They never deny the evil history that brought disaster to the whole world. They actively make friends with the whole world, and they have become powerful defenders of world peace.

We will no longer hate the Germans. Their thorough introspection touched the world, and we have reason to believe that they will not make the same mistake again.

Learn to reflect, you will be happier and the world will be better.

Comments:

The most striking feature of this paper is the use of comparative empirical methods: on the one hand, the comparison of cases is very representative, not only between China and foreign countries, but also between individuals and the whole country, or between scientific fields and political and military fields; On the other hand, there is a small contrast in the big contrast, Yang Zhenning and Germany constitute a big contrast, and Germany's past and present changes constitute a small contrast. Therefore, the author's skill in using contrast is superb. It would be even more wonderful if this young writer added that Japan did not reflect on the content of war crimes that caused anxiety and opposition in Asia and the world. In addition, the article also uses reasonable methods such as quotation to assist in comparing and proving viewpoints, which enhances persuasiveness and avoids monotony. It would be better if the sentences and titles were further revised, such as "So, please don't be afraid to make mistakes; However, after making a mistake, you will reflect on yourself, so that you won't make the same mistake. Because you can reflect on your mistakes in time and won't make the same mistakes again. " The title can be changed to "reflect, and you won't make the same mistake again"

4. Learn to reflect and learn to succeed.

Introspection is a mirror to help you find your own shortcomings; Introspection is a good friend's word, encourage yourself and motivate yourself to keep moving forward; Introspection is the driving force of progress and pushes us to success.

After Gou Jian defeated the prisoners, he reflected on the reasons for his failure every day, found his own shortcomings, constantly summarized them, and encouraged himself to work hard. Reflect on how to be king again. After several years of introspection, he worked hard and saved his strength, finally defeated Wu and realized his dream, so he became a virtuous king.

How great is the power of reflection! It can make a king of a kingdom become a king again.

A generation of tyrants, Shang Zhouwang, only knew about debauchery and pleasure every day, turned a blind eye to state affairs and was obsessed with beautiful women. Under the blow of the Western Zhou Dynasty, he lost many times, but he didn't know how to reflect. He thinks it's just temporary bad luck. He still indulges in debauchery every day and has never thought about why his country is so turbulent. Finally defeated by a small vassal state.

How important it is to reflect on yourself! If Zhou Wang could listen to the advice and reflect on himself in time, he would not go to the tragic situation of destruction.

With the continuous progress of the times, people pay more and more attention to the importance of reflection. To make progress, we must constantly reflect. Everyone needs reflection, an organization needs reflection, a group needs reflection, and so does a political party. During the war years, after constant introspection, our Party corrected the "Left" and "Right" mistakes within the Party, won great victories in War of Resistance against Japanese Aggression and the War of Liberation, and established People's Republic of China (PRC). In the era of peaceful construction, our party systematically summed up the experience and lessons since the founding of the People's Republic of China, corrected the historical mistakes of "anti-Rightism" and "Ten-year catastrophe" through introspection, set things right, and made major decisions on reform and opening up in line with public opinion, making our country prosperous and strong today.

Throughout the ages, success has always been born with this kind of reflection. Friends, let's learn to reflect and move towards success!

Comments:

The article has a clear-cut stand, highlights the important role of introspection with parallelism, then lists two ancient examples from both positive and negative aspects, further proves it with two facts in China's modern history, and finally summarizes it with a very clear structure; Especially after listing an ancient case, it is necessary to make a summary, which not only highlights the significance of citing the case, but also strengthens persuasiveness and makes the structure rigorous. But there are two points worth pointing out: first, the first paragraph "introspection is an encouraging word from a good friend", which is not reflected in the following articles; Second, we should change the order of Gou Jian and Shang Zhouwang's cases, so that the time order will make the content of the article smoother.

5. "introspection" lives in the palace of the soul

Hello everyone! My name is introspection. I live in the palace of the soul with vanity, selfishness and cunning. What? What is the palace of the soul? Oh, there's no harm in telling you. Before being born, everyone should choose a character as a companion in the palace of the soul and spend the rest of their lives together. I'm not afraid of your jokes. I tell you, I lived in the palace for many years. Strangely, since Ceng Zi took me as a companion, few people chose me, but cunning and selfishness prevailed. Alas, I can only wait for someone like Ceng Zi to choose me. ...

"Quick, reflect, someone chose you."

"What, did I hear you right?" It's finally time for me to show myself.

So, I have a little master. "It's all your fault. If it weren't for you, how could young master be criticized by his father? If you didn't encourage your teacher to reveal the grades that the teacher gave him wrongly, why is he crying in the room now? Yes, I wish you. " This is the third time vanity has accused me, but I think I did the right thing.

"Well, if you hadn't asked the young master not to look at other people's answers in the exam, he wouldn't have been criticized by the teacher." The "selfishness" I chose with me is also accusing me. Whoever chooses you is unlucky. "Almost everyone blames me. ...

But I helped my master a lot. People praised him as a good boy who corrected his mistakes and introspected himself since the Enlightenment.

The years are like running water. In a blink of an eye, I spent dozens of spring and autumn with Master, and now Master has a successful career. When many people come to visit their host, vanity, selfishness and others want to squeeze me out, but the host invites me in first. He proudly said to those visitors, "I can succeed because I reflect on myself every day, and I hope that reflection can always accompany me." Did you hear that? Master is praising me!

Since then, I have become a celebrity in the soul palace, and more and more people choose me; So more and more people succeeded, and I was listed as one of the traditional virtues and carried forward by people.

Comments:

This paper personifies introspection in a personification way, and describes the process of being selected, used and recognized in the first person, which is novel. By contrast, the article highlights the tortuous course and important role of introspection, with outstanding personality and clear hierarchy. The author should pay attention to the accuracy of some words, such as "everyone should choose a character as the companion of the soul palace before birth", and "character" can only be summarized as "vanity, selfishness and cunning" but not "introspection", so the system can be changed to "character".

6, introspection-the cornerstone of success

Gold is not enough, no one is perfect. Everyone has left indelible footprints on the road of life, and those footprints confirm our growth. However, everyone cannot avoid making mistakes. If you can't reflect, you will only make your mistakes more and more serious and deeper. Therefore, introspection is the cornerstone of success.

Self-reflection, so that their moral character is more noble. In ancient times, Lian Po and his colleague Lin Xiangru were embarrassed everywhere, but Lin Xiangru had a broad mind that didn't care. Lian Po heard Lin Xiangru's cruel words to the enemy and generous words to his friends, and finally repented, so he offered a humble apology to Lin Xiangru, and the two eventually became friends and became the backbone of Zhao. The story of "harmony but difference" has been passed down to this day. Because of Lian Po's introspection, his character was sublimated and he found the right course in the ocean of self. This kind of introspection makes people naturally relax, give up the chains of mistakes, and move towards success.

Work.

Introspection makes people's relationship more harmonious. Gorky said: "Learning to admit your mistakes when appropriate will become a mediator in your relationship with others." Some people are afraid to admit their mistakes, so they deceive themselves, never reflect on themselves, and insist that they are right, because they are afraid of losing face and rigid interpersonal relationships, and even your closest friends will abandon you. When Han Yu was young, he went to a friend's house to be a poetry friend. When he was writing, he knocked over his friend's bowl because of emotional excitement. When he got home, he reflected on himself: although breaking a bowl is a trivial matter, isn't it a great thing to be ruined by an impulse at work? So he came to apologize and cut off a bunch of hair as an oath. His friends were moved by his spirit, and they trusted Han Yu more, and became close relatives and trusted people.

From this perspective, introspection can make you a sincere person in the eyes of others. If everyone did this, wouldn't our world be wonderful?

Introspection makes the country rich and the people strong. As China people, no one will forget the history of modern humiliation. Due to backwardness, China is poor and weak, like a fish on a chopping board, at the mercy of foreign powers. Today, we reflect on our mistakes and stop closing the door, so we open the door and carry out reform and opening up. Today, China ranks among the world powers. If Japan can also deeply reflect on the heinous crimes committed in the war of aggression against China, Sino-Japanese relations will be more harmonious. Introspection can revive a nation and maintain world peace forever.

Self-reflection, turn olive branches into jade, thorns into smooth roads, and mountains into bright future. Self-reflection is so charming that it is a pleasure to reflect often.

Comments:

This paper adopts the discussion mode of "13 1": first, a central argument is obtained through simple discussion, then three sub-arguments are listed, and finally a summary is made. This will make the article clear and comprehensive.

In particular, the three sub-arguments are consistent from small to large in angle and scope, and discuss "pluralistic unity"-the first sub-argument puts facts and makes sense from the front; The second argument makes sense in the front, putting facts on the opposite side; The third argument is flexible and rich in both positive and negative aspects. The author should pay attention to the conciseness and coherence of the language: the phrase "everyone has left indelible footprints on the road of life, and those footprints confirm our growth" can be completely removed; Three paragraphs should have a transition from negative discussion to positive examples, three or four paragraphs can be merged into one paragraph, and five paragraphs of Japanese examples are not bound by the central content of this paragraph.

7. Being young is no excuse.

-A letter to my father

Dad:

Sorry, I quarreled with you again today.

You took me on a motorcycle, and the street view on the roadside took a step back like a clip. I know it's getting closer and closer to the examination room. I'm lying on your back, and I'm still trying to recite the test equipment of "good water, good mountain, good island" that you asked me countless times. Is it ready? You never tire of hearing it, but I'm tired of hearing it: "Dad, can you leave me alone?" You are finally silent. Dad, you don't know. I accidentally saw the white sideburns and remembered the hair dye that my mother hid in the cupboard and was about to run out. At that time, I suddenly felt that I was a sinner, a murderer and I murdered your youth. I don't want you to interrupt me to recite those ancient poems, because I don't want to murder your beautiful hopes again.

Dad, you must still be outside the school gate, find a piece of paper discarded by others, sit on the steps and hold a bottle of mineral water until I come out. Dad, I'm sorry! I know that youth is not an excuse; I know that the future road can't go like this; I know I used to be headstrong.

Dad, you must remember that a month ago, I broke the second model student report card and said to you angrily, "It doesn't matter how many points you get!" " "You must remember that a year ago I hid under the covers and didn't go to cram school. You yelled at me, "Don't torture me!" "You must remember that I ran away from home three years ago because you wouldn't let me watch The Windmill. When I looked at the pancakes on the stall and my mouth watered, you held out your warm hand and pulled me away. ...

Dad, you must remember a lot. Dad, you always forgive me. Dad, I was wrong.

Dad, it will be finished in ten minutes.

Dad, I'm going to high school in two months.

Dad, in three years, I will leave my hometown and go to college.

Dad, I will spend my whole life saying, "I'm sorry!" " "Because you wait for me and love me, not just these two hours.

Wish you all the best.

health

Your child is willing to give up the excuse of being young.

* * * * Year * * Month * Day

Comments:

Pay attention to the content and word order of words when writing articles. And this paper has done very well on these two points. First of all, by describing his father's sending the exam and the memories caused by it, the little author expressed his love praise for his father and his guilt for not understanding his father, which was touching. Secondly, the author uses the method of imagination and association to imagine his father waiting for the exam in a different place from what he saw and felt in front of him, and then thinks of things that he had had friction with his father before, and finally imagines the future scene, which is a combination of reality and reality and touching thoughts; The little author perfectly combines narrative, description, lyricism and discussion, achieving a perfect harmony; The little author also skillfully uses parallelism to express emotion and narrative, which is concise and rich, and the feelings are true and sincere, especially the last four parallelism paragraphs are arranged in chronological order, expressing strong feelings and making people cry. In a word, this article is an excellent exam composition.

9. Talk to your heart

I like being lonely and staying alone in a room in the dead of night, so that I can open my heart and talk to my heart. In self-reflection, I feel the power of progress.

I asked my soul, "Soul, do I care about my family?"

There was silence in my heart, but she showed several pictures in my mind. In the picture, the sound of my hastily closing the door masked my mother's "be careful" concern. My dissatisfaction with the food in the picture made my grandmother shake her head helplessly. After reading these two pictures, I feel extremely guilty. I know I am rude to my parents and indifferent to my family. So, I promise my heart that I will care about my family next time. My heart smiled.

I asked my mind again, "Mind, am I friendly to my friends?"

Heart nodded approvingly and said, "If a friend is in trouble, please help him enthusiastically." Once a friend encounters something sad, you can sincerely comfort him; A friend was depressed because he failed in the exam. You can encourage him and make him confident. Your care for your friends has been perfect, thank you! "

I smiled sweetly.

I asked my heart again, "Heart, have I ever respected others?"

The brain shook its head and said, "You haven't done it yet. A classmate accidentally touched your things, and you gave him a lot of criticism; A stranger asks you for directions, but you say' I don't know' because you are busy going home. and ...

I felt extremely ashamed, even a little ashamed. I realized my indifference and lack of love for people other than my friends. I quietly told my heart that when others need help in the future, I will definitely lend a helping hand and treat everyone with respect. My heart is cheering for me.

In the dialogue with your heart, constantly reflect on yourself and make yourself so reasonable and considerate every day. So, I thank my heart for reminding me; She made me reflect, she raised me, and she made my life more harmonious and beautiful.

Comments:

Many candidates have written this composition as a reflection book and a check draft, which is no wonder, reflection. The little author of this paper visualized the abstract reflection and wrote it with great interest. The reason for this is that young authors turn introspection into a dialogue between themselves and their souls through virtualization, find their own bright spots and shortcomings from the perspectives of relatives, friends and others, and finally sum up the important significance of introspection for their own growth, which is natural and clear.

In particular, young authors can avoid repetition and monotony. For the first time, he reproduced "my" attitude towards relatives by showing pictures, and for the second and third time, he reproduced "my" attitude towards friends and others from both positive and negative aspects, thus achieving "pluralistic unity".

10, the charm of reflection

The night sky is more dazzling because of the embellishment of stars; The pool water is more clear and pleasant because of the company of fish; Growth leaves a shining track because of the charm of reflection.

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Staring at the dark night sky, a sense of fear arises spontaneously and slowly spreads to the whole body; My eyes are gradually blurred, and my thoughts are driving the wind ship in the early morning that I don't want to mention. ...

Tears fall from eyes, lips and hearts, creating bitter ripples. I've always been obedient, but today I contradict my teacher. I can see the teacher's anger, but my anger is getting stronger and stronger. If you are not careful, it will erupt like a fire dragon, and the consequences will be unimaginable.

I don't know whether it was moved by my tears or because she couldn't bear it. The storm finally didn't come. She simply dropped a sentence: "Go home and think for yourself!" Then he turned around and left me alone.

This lonely night is the moment to wake me up. I recalled the scene during the day and deeply realized how tolerant she was to me, but I didn't realize it. Your eyes are obviously tears of love, filled with love for me, but I have no feelings. It was not until this late-night reflection that I realized the teacher's concern, tolerance and selfless love for me.

The silent reflection in the middle of the night made me feel the love of the teacher, the sad reflection in the hospital bed made me feel the love of my mother, the lonely reflection in the classroom made me touch the love of my classmates, and the reflection on the road of growing up made me taste the true love on earth. Introspection, let me taste endless tolerance, colorful growth process and sincere emotional paradise, which is the charm of introspection.

There is a light in the dark night sky, which is a meteor. In the panic and surprise, I made a beautiful wish, so that I can taste the charm of reflection at any time!

Postscript: the forest is full of vitality because of the existence of animals; Dreams are better because of the existence of faith; My life will be brighter because of the charm of reflection.

Comments:

In writing, the author tries to use film editing skills and choose close-ups to cut and paste, which not only leaves readers blank, but also saves tedious narrative texts, killing two birds with one stone. The little author also used a lot of pen and ink for psychological analysis and lyricism, which really reflected the value of reflection. Although this bold attempt has many immature places, such as the contradiction between the jumping of the plot and the clear explanation of the incident, the weakness of the point (the friction with the teacher) and the confusion of the user, it still proves its courage. In addition, the young author highlights the center by taking care of the inscription, especially the parallelism method, which is impressive. In addition, it is worth mentioning that the author's vivid language also adds luster to the article, such as "tears fall from my eyes, drip into my lips, drip into my heart, and make layers of bitter ripples", "The anger in my heart is burning stronger and stronger, and it will erupt like a dragon inadvertently".