First of all, it is emphasized that the graduation thesis is academic writing, and the expression of the first person "I" cannot appear in the thesis, but should be converted into "theauthor" to show rigor.

Then it emphasizes that the revision of literature review should pay attention to the format, label data categories such as (j) and (m), and pay attention to the arrangement method of order.

Guidance record:

This guide mainly puts forward suggestions on the first draft of the paper submitted last time.

Firstly, the overall framework and content of the paper are affirmed. In addition, it is pointed out that the brackets are omitted in the first draft and the words of thanks should be placed after the bibliography.

Secondly, the language expressions in English abstracts are modified and polished, and the idiomatic expressions are pointed out. Finally, it is pointed out that there are grammatical errors such as singular and plural numbers and spelling mistakes in the paper, and it is required to read it several times to check and correct the grammatical errors.

Guidance record:

This guidance is mainly aimed at the revision of the second draft of graduation thesis and the matters needing attention in defense.

1, pay more attention to the format when revising the second draft of graduation thesis. For example, the spacing of directories in references and the website address of online literature should be in a new line.

2. The statement of the defense requires fluency, and it is best to leave the manuscript.

Purpose of writing the executive summary

1, in order to make the instructor have a general understanding of the main contents of the article and know the main results and main logical order of the research before reviewing the full text of the paper.

2. In order to make other readers have a general understanding of the problems studied by the author by reading the executive summary, if there is a curse, they should read the full text further. Here, the abstract has become an "advertisement" to recommend papers to many readers.

3. So the abstract should prompt the main points of the paper, so that readers can understand the main points of the paper at a glance. The abstract of the paper should be concise and comprehensive, and should not be too verbose to grasp the main points or just a few dry ribs, lacking materials to explain the views.

4. The executive summary can be divided into reporting summary and indicative summary. The report summary mainly introduces the main methods and results of the study and the analysis of the results, and gives a comprehensive hint to the content of the article.