Shandong examinee
As Dr. Sun Yat-sen said: As long as our generation shoulders the responsibility of China's reform, opening up and development, we can neither lose heart because of failure nor shrink back because of difficulties. We should be good at what they do and bad at what they do, which is in line with the laws of nature, and we will succeed in the end. Our generation is the strongest in China and the proudest in China. We should shoulder the heavy responsibility bravely, not afraid of difficulties, and achieve a sky that belongs to us in the long history of the motherland.
Not afraid of difficulties and shouldering heavy responsibilities, we must first attach importance to the call of the motherland.
Do you remember our beloved Premier Zhou Enlai? In times of social unrest and national crisis, Premier Zhou never forgot the call of the motherland, so he issued a loud cry of "studying for the rise of China". After the founding of People's Republic of China (PRC) and the construction of the motherland, he still shouldered the heavy responsibility and set up one immortal monument after another in the diplomatic history of China. Jacqueline, the first lady of the United States, said: "If there is one person I admire, it is Zhou Enlai!" It can be seen that his reputation and influence have shocked overseas.
It is precisely because of Premier Zhou's fearlessness and responsibility that we are stable and peaceful today. His charisma, statesmanship and diplomatic wisdom have always influenced our generation.
Being brave in difficulties and shouldering heavy responsibilities requires a kind of dedication and lofty realm.
Do you still remember Zhao Xiaoting, a female student of Wuhan University? She went to the mountainous area to teach many times, and finally stayed there forever. For the poor and kind children there, she used her holiday time to teach in the mountainous areas of Guizhou many times. Unfortunately, she was knocked down by a rolling stone on the way, leaving her youth there forever. She always shoulders her responsibilities and pays silently until the last moment of her life.
It is precisely because of Zhao Xiaoting's courage to shoulder heavy responsibilities that more and more young college students are called to join the ranks of volunteers and join the army of teaching in the west and the places where the motherland needs them most.
We don't have to do great things to shoulder heavy responsibilities. As long as it is for the people, positive things, even trivial things, can show our brilliance and value.
Do you remember those national and civilian heroes who have been active in our sight recently? The "most beautiful mother" bravely caught the baby falling from the 10 building, the "most beautiful female teacher" saw the roaring car struggling to push away the students around her, and the "most beautiful driver" endured the pain at the last moment of her life to stabilize the bus and comfort the passengers. Those ordinary people have done the most extraordinary things in their ordinary posts. They showed us their courage and belief that they are not afraid of difficulties and dare to take on heavy responsibilities.
Today, our generation is about to step into the society, and we are well aware of the heavy responsibility on our shoulders. Even though the mountains are high and the waters are long, even if there are difficulties and obstacles, we will certainly be brave enough to shoulder the heavy burden.
Rolling waves can't lift the boat of life, just as thick darkness can't cover the road ahead, our generation will be strong, not afraid of difficulties and take on heavy responsibilities. As Bi Shumin said: "A superior heart will not be gorgeous, but it will be strong."
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