Resume: 202 1, the new volume of candidates in Hubei province, the score of college entrance examination language 138, the composition of model examination is stable at 55+, and it is estimated that the composition of college entrance examination is close to perfection;
Commonly known as "those who get the college entrance examination need Chinese; Writing is the most important thing when you get Chinese ",although many students complain that" it took 20 minutes to conceive the composition, and there is only half an hour left to write "and" there is no time to conceive and even have no arguments ";
However, the senior warmly reminds you: "In fact, the 55+ language composition in the college entrance examination is very simple."
The examination points of that composition are: literary talent+examination+conception+structure+material+volume;
The high-scoring composition is undoubtedly: correct examination+novel and profound conception+rich content+advanced and beautiful language+overall beauty and striking.
First of all, there must be a questioner's thinking, that is, what do you want to test us in the college entrance examination composition?
Although it is exam-oriented education, the core inspection point is thinking and writing. For example, the key to argumentative writing lies in ideological depth and logic;
To put it simply, it is: novel and unique viewpoint+distinct and concise style+reasonable and beautiful layout+"profound" and concise theme.
The so-called layout is actually to make one thing clear in an orderly and logical way. The exterior of the structure is "order" and the interior is "logic".
Because the underlying logic of argumentative writing: what-why-how to do it, the steps are to examine the topic-conception-writing.
In recent years, the material tends to "comment on the times", which is to give you a realistic scene and let you express your own views and opinions.
To be "fast, accurate and good", we must first have empathy, extract the views clearly, and remember that the accurate is the best;
The so-called "digression" means that the topic has nothing to do with the material.
How about this idea?
Idea: self-confidence, the connotation is closely linked with truth, goodness and beauty, showing the breath of young people, such as vigor, hope and expectation for the future. From small to large, individuals ~ ~ society ~ ~ countries should always remember "prosperity, democracy, civilization, harmony, freedom, equality, justice, rule of law, patriotism, dedication and integrity".
Many students here have a misunderstanding: can you get high marks for your fancy composition? Wrong! ! !
There are many famous sayings and sentences, so does this composition have style? Wrong! ! This bathroom is edged with gold!
Although the evaluation standard of a good article is "rich, profound and literary", the premise of literary talent is that you have accurate ideas and clear logic.
Then, writing is very important. Please remember that the road is simple, and it is best to "have a clear and profound author's point of view under the simple appearance."
The so-called argumentative essay is to test the argument, and the steps are: introduction-discussion-connection-conclusion (introduction from the beginning-central argument-sub-argument 123(- sublimation/supplement/dialectics)-summary and restatement of the central argument).
The first step: clear your mind and outline. "The golden rule: What-what event caused your discussion (echo material), what do you think?
Why do you think so (give reasons for your opinion)?
What examples were there before or now?
Where does your opinion apply?
Who-what is character material?
How-how to do it in the future? "
Step 2: Structure "amazing title+crowned+streaky pork+leopard tail". Speaking of "a good composition is half the battle", it is best to stand on the shoulders of giants and quote+antitheses naturally. The rhyming style is the best, and the second "hook" caught the teacher's heart.
The example is as follows: "Keep it, don't donate it" (adapted from Hu Shi's "I don't have to be successful, I don't have to donate my skills")
Beauty and * * *, harmony in the world (from the famous sociologist Mr. Fei Xiaotong's Beauty of Beauty, Beauty and * * *, Harmony in the World)
"Until the ebb tide broadens the banks, the wind is just" hanging sails "(quoting Wang Wan's poem" The next berth on Beibao Mountain ",using Yifan as a metaphor for a book can be described as wonderful).
Secondly, the beginning of the article should be like a "phoenix head"-short and pithy, just like "the first sentence is like firecrackers, which is easy to ring at once";
For example, in Dickens' A Tale of Two Cities, there is a very famous beginning, "This is the best time and the worst time."
What about "streaky pork"? You need to skillfully use examples, comparisons, reasons and metaphors to make the big points smaller. Steps: viewpoint+material+analysis+summary.
Perhaps, "the difficulty of writing lies in using a tree-like structure to reflect the network thinking in a linear sentence."
Transition section, or available:
A philosopher once said, "..."
There is a famous saying that is widely circulated in life: "…" It tells us such a profound and ordinary truth …
Finally, there are three ways to write the ending: infectious, summative and sublime; The end of a good composition is also called "leopard tail", which echoes the beginning, points out the center, wraps the full text, and pays attention to "ripe fruit" and "natural fruit" If it has the effect of "stopping words, endless meaning and thought-provoking", so much the better.
Examples of universal endings are as follows: Roman Roland once said that there is a kind of heroism, that is, to love life after recognizing the truth of life.
Yunshan is grey, the rivers and seas are boundless, the wind of xx, and the mountains are high and the water is long. (adapted from Fan Zhongyan's "Mr. Yan Ancestral Hall")
Sip the nectar of a good book and experience ... (figuratively, novel and unique)
Blow out the desk lamp and cover the moon. -Ancient Zen Master
Only books are colorful; But literature is rich and beautiful, and it is beautiful in the Baihui. -Pi Rixiu
Shi Tiesheng "conversion is not in the sky, conversion is on the road."
Please note: the true feelings are revealed, the front and back links, and the end echoes.
Of course, size is also very important, and beautiful fonts add a lot of points!
The roll surface should be neat, horizontal and vertical, and the font should be in block letters. It is best not to alter it. It is suggested that the total number of words should be 850~900, and the paragraphs should be controlled at 7~ 10, with distinct levels, clear paragraphs, reasonable layout, symmetry and beauty.
But "if you want to learn poetry, you have to work hard outside poetry", so study hard when you can! !