Ever since Pangu created the world and Nuwa created man, human beings have been suffering from the struggle of life reality full of contradictions. With the change of the stars, people in the 265,438+0 century seem to have fully understood and decided to eliminate the contradictions in life in the bell at the end of the century. Therefore, the "people's mind" court will arrest and bring to justice the mainstream contradictions in the world-emotional contradictions, personality contradictions and behavioral contradictions. The mirror of the court hangs high, and the judge is impartial. He asked Theory of Three Represents's theory, and Theory of Three Represents knelt on the ground and begged for mercy. "Because you are all over the ends of the earth, you are unscrupulous in society, causing trouble and killing innocent people. You instigated you to set a vicious trap among human beings, and finally someone went bankrupt. Your existence has seriously endangered the development of human society. What can I say if I am sentenced to death? " It is novel and unique to divide "contradictions in life" into three categories, and then use anthropomorphic techniques and deformed art to express the theme. Designed as a court trial, under the test of life and death, "contradictory" prisoners will definitely speak their minds]

Unexpectedly, Theory of Three Represents burst into tears and cried in chorus. As expected, the representatives of the three contradictions all have difficulties.

Complain about emotional conflicts first, shouting: "My Lord, I am really dumb to eat Rhizoma Coptidis-there is suffering!" At the beginning, when I was born, my master used me to do a great thing. He spoke wildly in the factory trade union, saying that he would respond to the call of the red-headed documents at the higher level and damage the student aid. He also said that cadres should set an example and enthusiastically invest in running schools; Also said to have love, love yourself. Finally, he called (actually ordered) every worker in the factory to donate to 20 yuan. As a result, he cheated the trust of the workers, even if he was promoted to the third level, he didn't give a penny, but swallowed more than half of the donated funds. The workers are so unbalanced that they scold me for having different opinions. In fact, I have complained, advised and questioned my master many times:' Why are you so extreme?' He doesn't care:' Who in this world uses other people's feelings unwisely? If I don't go with the flow, let me drink the northwest wind? These words really choked me. I also want to stop' making trouble', but people have repeatedly' used' my feelings to win over some people from their hearts, but I can't figure it out! There is a certain truth in the argument of emotional contradiction, that is, people use emotion, a very special thing, to make profits, which shows that emotional contradiction is innocent. ]

The judge nodded slightly.

Personality contradictions also made a speech: "Your honor, I am really wronged. I think how helpful my master was before I was born, but now he laments that the world is cold and the interpersonal relationship is indifferent, but he doesn't want to help people whose cars break down on the roadside, or even watch the fire from the other side, making it worse! The factory of one of his colleagues and his brother-in-law is in danger of closing down because of lack of funds. He could have lent him some money to bring him back to life. However, he not only ignored it, but also complained to his brother-in-law who came to the door for help:' Brother-in-law, you really don't know, I'm in danger now, and I'm really ashamed of my life ...' I was so angry that I asked him afterwards, but he said,' You are so stupid. Without him, did I lose a competitor? The world is like this, why can't I imitate it? This answer makes me feel at a loss as a contradictory figure. Finally, your honor, please observe clearly. "[The contradiction in personality leads to the inconsistency between personality and behavior in some people's behavior, which is a very common phenomenon and should arouse our great concern]

The judge mused and finally nodded slightly.

The saddest thing about behavioral contradictions is: "My Lord, I don't know how many times I took the blame from the story of' self-contradiction'. People behave inconsistently, it's their fault, not mine! Their horse manure has a smooth surface and there is a bag of sugar in it, which makes people feel that their face is decent and it is really hard for them. They have done a lot of things against their will by using the strategies of crossing the position in secret, watching the fire from the other side, hiding the knife in the smile, stealing the beam and replacing the column, bringing the dead back to life, drawing a salary from the bottom of the pot, fishing in troubled waters, shelling the golden cicada, attacking from afar, stealing the beam and replacing the column, and making a diversion. You see, some public security personnel arrest corrupt officials themselves, but they never take the initiative to arrest themselves in the event of being caught ... They are also complacent:' If it is unrealistic, where can we find our own survival? People like to report good news rather than bad news. "Are we playing the devil's advocate?" I was sad. I want to retire to the mountains and be a real Weng Tao, but they are under great pressure. Why should I worry? "[Contradictory stories lead to a topic, but it is a very common phenomenon that people's words and deeds are different, which must be highly valued by us]

The judge looked solemn, helpless and reasonable.

Finally, the judge summed up the record and whispered to them; "It seems that you have to grasp this, otherwise, it is likely that we all dare not eat ourselves, and we must never let the bad style become more rampant. Today, I will be exempt from the death penalty, but I must be a good citizen and try my best to persuade your master to develop in a kind direction. Only in this way can we have a good social environment. " [This ending is far-reaching: these three contradictions have not been beheaded, which is the necessity of life, and there must be contradictions in life; On the other hand, we should make good use of the particularity of contradictions in life and serve life. This is the theme of this article, but it is a bit implicit]

Comprehensive evaluation "1+1";

The article "Teaching Notes" brings an old material in the author's memory to life, and achieves the purpose of new bottles of old wine. First, the old materials such as eating apples, counting goldfish and counting birds are combined with "contradictions in life" to become novel and ingenious. Secondly, the old materials are taught by two students, one for each class, which reflects the flexibility and profundity of the ability to conceive. Thirdly, the integration of the article and reality, the deepening of the theme and the ingenious connection with the old materials make the whole article compact and complete. Finally, the theme of the article is profound, not revealed in simple materials, but fully explored its connotation, so that the phenomenon reflected in the article has certain social universality, thus having breadth and depth. Yao Qiang's "So that's it ..." is even more ingenious. It divides "life contradiction" into three kinds of contradictions: "emotion, character, words and deeds", and then expresses the theme in the form of court interrogation, which is very novel now. The judge decided to put these three contradictions to death, and these three contradictions tell their own difficulties from their own angles, and these arguments are closely related to people and things in real life, so we can see that the author only uses these contradictions to reflect and reveal the contradictions in real life. Formally speaking, these two articles are innovative. One boldly quotes old materials in his own composition, and the other expresses the theme with deformation and courtroom debate. From the content point of view, the content of the topic "Contradictions in Life" has basically been written, which is something to celebrate. However, a teaching note seems to lack a little content in the depth of thought, and So That it… is too subtle in the process of personification. A little carelessness will make people breathless and even unable to understand the content and truth. Supposedly, this can't be said to be its shortcoming, but the paper has never put forward the solutions to these three contradictions, which is for readers' understanding. At this point, it will be icing on the cake if some effective solutions can be put forward.

The integration of form and thinking;

The topic of "life contradiction" is very broad and should be rich in content. However, if this topic is careless, it will be generalized, indicating that the theme is not profound, the content is not substantial, and the form is not novel. In fact, as long as you think carefully, you can still enrich this article from both form and content. Here are a few examples for your reference.

One of the unity of form and spirit: writing several plays

It is nothing new for candidates to write drama compositions on the spot since the four-act drama of Jiangsu college entrance examination in 2000. On the topic of "life contradiction", we can design a drama from the perspective of how to solve the life contradiction. For example, you can write a contradictory story in daily life first, and then come to the conclusion: "What would it be like if people were more polite and tolerant?" Write the contradictory story in the second act of life, and then draw the conclusion: "If people are more humble and more understanding, how wonderful the world will be!" Write the third act of contradiction and draw the conclusion: "If people are more rational and considerate, will there be some redundant contradictions in the world?" Finally, it was discussed: "You need a person who can untie the bell and tie it to solve the problem. Since people have created contradictions, why not let them solve them? If you want to solve it, please always remember these twelve words: courtesy and tolerance; Modesty and understanding; Rational and considerate. " This analysis of how to solve the contradiction in life is much more profound than simply telling a story to describe the beginning, process and result of a contradiction in life.

The train of thought is further extended: the following problems should be paid attention to in drama composition: First, there should not be too many drama scenes; Second, the language must be very concise and concentrated, not sloppy; The third is to innovate. We can innovate in the following ways: First, we should change the genre of drama, use the method of film montage, and express our thoughts with several incoherent shots; The second is to reveal the theme in the form of sketches; Thirdly, the humorous art of cross talk can be used to express the main idea; Fourth, we should pay attention to the arrangement of the content of the written script, which is generally arranged in the order from reality to fiction, that is, the last scene is designed as abstract truth, ethics, ideology, cultural connotation, ideas and so on. To put it simply, it is best not to repeat all these scenes of the same type, otherwise it will feel like a running account.

The second integration of form and thinking: writing a mini-novel

Miniature novels and short stories have a broad market among middle school students, so they should be encouraged to create short stories. This topic can also be used to create mini-novels. For example, the first subtitle "Children's Words Are Unbridled" recalls his understanding of contradictions when he was a child and blurts it out without scruple; The second subtitle, "Between colleagues", is about coming to work just after graduating from college and entering the society. I found some contradictions between colleagues and between superiors and subordinates, and I was at a loss. I can't help getting used to this contradictory society. The third subtitle, "Middle-aged people", has finally adapted to the society in its own way and has a successful career. However, there is an emotional crisis in my small family, and childhood friends want to divorce, which is a very difficult contradiction in modern society; The fourth subtitle, "Thank you for the contradiction", is precisely because of the contradiction in my life that I cherish my career and marriage more. After a period of separation, "we" finally solved the contradiction in our own special way, got back together, and our career was booming, so "we" thanked the contradiction. It is precisely because of contradictions that our love and career have a home. Finally, I made a comment: "Throughout my life, I realized that if there is no contradiction, it is not life!" " Note: In this way, every link of "contradiction" should be well designed.

Further extension of thinking: as a kind of novel, the plot of mini-novel is often fictional, but it is fictional, so it can convey meaning better in some cases. So we can use "deformation" to achieve the purpose of conveying the theme. For example, we can write a science fiction work to express the contradictions in the future world, thus reflecting the universality and inevitability of contradictions in real life. We can also write a few fables or fairy tales to express the theme, which is also a better choice. In short, the choice of form should be conducive to the disclosure of the theme. Not limited by time and space. As long as we can serve the center, we can take any effective form.

The third integration of form and thinking: writing a speech.

We can design a speech to reveal "contradictions in life". 1. This speech will be delivered at the premiere conference of film and television works. Second, it may be more innovative to change the "contradiction" in "Contradictions in Life" into the movie "Contradictions". The third is to set up three shots in the text, that is, to design three groups of "contradictions" that reflect real life, and these shots should reflect people's words and deeds and ideological contradictions, and must be consistent with the theme. Fourth, the three shots will be arranged in the order from real to virtual, which is in line with human cognitive law.

Further extension of ideas: from the beginning of writing a speech, I think a country or a company usually holds a press conference, which provides a new idea for our composition. Also, you can draw lessons from the form of "International Chinese College Students Debate Competition" and write a debate draft about whether "life contradictions" can be solved or not. In fact, this middle school student can also do it. Some of our middle school students like to read Zheng's The King of Fairy Tales, and almost every issue has a debate draft. If we read carefully, we will certainly benefit a lot.

The fourth combination of form and thinking: write a few short messages.

If necessary, several short messages can be designed: through the short message exchange between God and his people, the relevant contents of "life contradiction" can be revealed. Specifically, we can do this: God's people write to God because of the "contradictions" in their lives, introduce their own thoughts, and so on; God wrote back to talk about the inevitability of life contradictions and asked him not to worry about it; However, the people still don't understand, and they wrote to ask about the specific measures to solve the "contradictions"; God wrote back and talked about some practical methods, but finally stressed that "contradictions in life" can't be eliminated in theory, but we can start from ourselves, think more about others, do more for the unit, and support our colleagues to minimize some unnecessary contradictions.

Further thinking: this method can be used in many topics such as generation gap, fatherly love and education, and can also be transformed into various forms such as writing messages, keeping diaries, writing notes and sending emails. Taking "education" as an example, if you want to write something about the concept of Chinese teaching, you can design a diary composition like this: the teacher asks the students to write an "A", and the students write a big "A" on a piece of paper, accounting for one, and he is criticized for writing a diary; After the teacher corrected his homework, he felt a lot and wrote a diary lamenting that he had never met such a naughty student. The teacher didn't criticize the students during the home visit. He wrote happily in his diary. When the teacher came home, he recalled what happened that day. Why is he so excited and confident when he is praised? He decided to change the teaching methods in China. In the Chinese class the next day, the students were very serious. They wrote in their diaries that they never raised their hands to answer questions, but in fact they raised their hands four times in that class and got three and a half correct answers. They began to like Chinese teachers and Chinese classes. After this class, the teacher found that the student was abnormal, but he understood the reason and decided to boldly carry out Chinese teaching reform.

Through the topic of "life contradiction", we can get some enlightenment from it: firstly, we should have depth in content, secondly, we should have some new ideas in the form of the article, and try our best to innovate in the article, instead of following others' advice. Perhaps from the topic of "living contradiction", we will gain something!