Fourth, an excellent composition shows life. The most important thing is to be a bird, greet the storm with a pair of wings, and stir the world with a pair of shoulders. Whether thin or strong, they are silently bearing the heavy pressure between heaven and earth. Inscriptions can add artistic charm to the article, but the language should be concise and not arbitrary. Inscriptions overlook the mountain through the window, and I was moved by a tree. This is an ordinary but extraordinary banyan tree. It is lush, with oblique branches and a huge crown. It looks like a magnificent palace. It seems (it's better to change it to "it seems" to avoid repetition) that it is bent by the crown of the tree and can't grow straight any more. However, despite this, it has not lowered its head, and is still fighting against the elasticity of time and life. (using long and short sentences has a strong emotional impact. It has created another glory of life within its power. "Green" bear, what a big tree! The creator is really amazing. In this common banyan tree, there is endurance that everything is striving for. This tree is painful, but it is definitely happy and great, because it bears the weight of life and deducts the beauty of life to the extreme! Isn't life a kind of patience? Isn't life itself a kind of tolerance? (Asking questions and setting questions can strengthen the language situation, and if used properly, it can add luster to the article. There are too many disappointments, too many bumps and too many pains in life. In an ideal kingdom, we carry the wishes and demands of our relatives and friends; On the road of life, we bear all kinds of malice and goodwill from the secular world, and we bear dullness or happiness; In the ocean of emotion, we bear all kinds of blows and sufferings, loneliness or joy of life changes. Poetic language is beautiful, so is simple, natural and concise language. The article is simple and natural, with no traces of knives and axes, which shows the author's artistic attainments. Language is the messenger of the soul, and a touching heart will inevitably produce touching language. Writing in the examination room should naturally reveal the true feelings, abandon the gorgeous emptiness with fresh personality and return to simplicity and truth; Simple narration contains rich life and culture. Endurance is a kind of strength, and it is God's passport to deal with difficulties. In the process of bearing, if we polish our will and life together on the grindstone of life's hardships and hardships, and forge our toughness and mind together in the furnace of frustration and pain, life will have thickness and strength, and we will be fearless. (Stick to the theme, aim high) After Sima Qian was castrated, in his letter to his friends, he mentioned a scene in which the sages rose resolutely after being flexible and patient in the predicament: Zhong Ni was in trouble, Qu Yuan was exiled, his eyes were blind, and his grandson was obese ... (Make good use of written materials, and there are inexhaustible written materials in the text) This is Sima Qian's firm spiritual monologue to accomplish his great ambitions, and more importantly, Gou Jian, the King of Yue, did not lose heart after his failure. He suffered humiliation and pain silently. He tried his best to encourage himself with asceticism; He did not forget the national humiliation, secretly accumulated strength and thought hard for revenge. Fu Cha, the king of Wu, was finally defeated and Wu was annexed. He explained the spiritual essence of "forbearance": self-improvement, never stopping and never slacking off. (Rich materials, good use of materials, four ancient and modern Chinese and foreign celebrity cases dig deep into material examples, making the truth easy to understand, clear and thorough) Tolerance is a kind of quality, venting and publicizing profound and broad personality charm. Hawking is a paralyzed man with only one finger moving, and his fate is extremely tragic. But he said, "I'm not sad. I am very lucky, because although God fixed me in this chair, he gave me the ability to imagine everything in the world and inspired me to fight in life. In fact, God is very fair to people. " In a hotel in Moscow, he suggested that everyone dance in wheelchairs; When he met with Prince Charles, he turned his wheelchair to show off ... He overcame his own bad luck and himself, which is worthy of being called "the fighting spirit of life"! A person who is good at bearing and able to bear may have a heavy pace in life, but life is rich and profound because of it. ) The old man Ba Jin is a big tree, silently bearing the weight of life in the dark night. He was born in a stormy age, and the darkness of society was like a boulder, pressing on him. His bent back bowed to the deep mother earth, which made him see the suffering of the people. Later, the light of the elk lit up his way, and he drew his bleeding heart with the strokes in his hand. Gradually, the old man Ba Jin straightened up in this heavy burden, because he was burdened with life, and he had to get up. He saw the beautiful morning glow in the distance and the road paved with words behind him. Home, spring and autumn are in his hands, heavy. It can be seen from Ba Lao that people's shoulders are like the wings of birds, and they are born to bear pressure. Therefore, they are a kind of spiritual promotion, moral cultivation and energy gathering. This passage seems to be based on other people's articles, and it is also a "bad policy" in the examination room with limited time. I remember a writer who said: As far as the happiness and pain of life are concerned, there is no spirit beyond self, but an internal examination. Without a thorough understanding of the world and a free and easy understanding of life, you will not maintain a calm and peaceful state of mind in the embrace of happiness. (Appropriate quotation expands the content of the article and deepens the theme of the article. Yes, a person who can really meet and bear all kinds of life experiences and challenges is by no means a narrow-minded mediocrity. He may be depressed, but the sky of the soul will not be overwhelmed by dark clouds; He may be excited, but he won't get lost in tears. Because he can handle himself. Comments: This paper closely follows the center of "life lies in taking responsibility", digs deep into material examples from two aspects of "tree" and "person", and combines with celebrity cases at home and abroad, with outstanding views, unconventional and generous arguments. The article has a macroscopic and generous temperament and speculative logic. This paper uses appropriate words, flexible sentences and expressive sentences. The staggered use of whole sentences and loose sentences makes the article have a strong sense of rhythm, beautiful words and touching scenes. In particular, poems, famous sayings and allusions are readily available, which shows the examinee's profound literary foundation and reading accumulation. Bearing is a kind of weight. "I really don't want to go home tonight, not to that poor family!" " "Won wiped her tears, dragging heavy steps under the dim light of night. The night without the moon is very dark. During the day, the birch tree, which looks like a fairy tale, disappeared at this time. The gurgling water around us seems to be telling the lover infinite grievances, and the insects mixed in the fields are crying sadly, which makes people feel a little cold in autumn. Ying sat on the ground and saw what happened just now ... (written in flashback) When Ying walked in the door, she found that her father had unusually lit a can of cigarettes and started smoking with a frown. Mom seems to have cried. What may happen should be foreseen. Sure enough, everyone sat glumly for a while, and my father spoke with difficulty: "Hey, don't sign up tomorrow-the money has not been confiscated!" "What? Do not sign up? " Xiang Ying suddenly fell into the cold cellar, and the cold that passed through her heart left her blank. She can't believe this sentence is not true, but her subconscious mind is blank, telling her that this is an unchangeable fact. Ying's heart is sinking, and she has been silent for a long time for her father. Otherwise, think again. Ying, this child has been admitted to a key middle school, and he is also the first seedling in our village. Otherwise, it will ruin her life. "Mother's heavy words made Ying tingle." All my life, all my life ... "Three words were repeated in Ying's mind. Yes, all my life, I want to go out and change my life! "Dad, I borrow some money! I will work in the county town during the semester holiday to earn tuition, and I won't ask for money from home next school year. "English has never begged her father like this. She was afraid that her sick father would be more embarrassed. When the father heard his daughter's words, his bronzed face suddenly elongated and tears flowed out of his heart. He looked at the hut full of awards, at his diligent and sensible daughter, and at his sick legs, and his nose ached. I've been stuck in this poor ditch all my life. The child has such a good opportunity, how can the father have the heart to douse the child's hope? His heart sank like a stone. He looked up and saw that the sunset glow was still red and stinging. No matter how heavy it is, it will usher in tomorrow's sun, and tuition will be paid tomorrow. He seemed to see his daughter's smiling face, and a beautiful book lay happily in her arms. He silently supported his crutch. Her father, what are you going to do? ""go to the village head's house. "My father's words are very peaceful, but they carry a lot of weight." Dad! ..... "English awkward, tears streaming down her face, she decided the weight of her father. That night, Ying heard the rustling of birch trees. Ying Xiang: Autumn must be gorgeous, because it carries a heavy past and a heavy harvest-it needs strength. General comment: The layout of this article is patchwork. The author did not directly describe the increase in tuition fees, and even refused to explain the result of the incident. Instead, I chose two typical scenes, which implied the pressure of my daughter and parents respectively, and effectively opened the topic of "bearing". The ending points out the theme of "bearing is a kind of strength" through the connection between the protagonist and autumn. Natural and decent, rich in literary talent, sincere and touching. Throughout the ages, history has been circulating. How many moments, even moments, have brought a lifetime of suffering to many people. Suffering can make life brilliant, but how many people in this world can bear the burden of that kind of life, how many people behind a strong appearance can't bear it, and how many weak bodies can bear it for a lifetime, even a thousand years. Once upon a time, there was a beautiful girl by the stream. Her slender hands are spinning gently in the quiet and deep stream, and often a few petals fall quietly on her head and shoulders. However, the war destroyed all this, and it was no longer a few petals on her shoulders, but the rise and fall of several countries and the curse of thousands of years. History is really cruel. Why should her weak shoulders bear so much, and why should she bear it again? Because she has a patriotic heart in her chest. After the moon closed, the cold brick was covered with bright moonlight. She moved gently. At the moment she opened her eyes, the dance began to change. Colorful silks danced on her, and the moonlight gradually dimmed. In the end, all that remained was her graceful dancing and the jumping of her skirt. She looks more beautiful in the dark, and beauty blooms on her. However, all this has become the hero's companion. How much pain and joy is behind her weakness? History is really unfair to her. She suffers only because of her concern for the people. After the flowers are buried, they are covered with red flowers on the tips of green grass, with a little dew. She gently lifted this splendid and fragile place on her body. The fog could not hide her weakness, but added a mysterious aesthetic feeling, and how much suspicion and slander there was after this beauty, all of which she had been bearing. Tears brought her another kind of pain. The world regards Lin Daiyu as a tragedy. In fact, she suffered a sense of victory, which trapped her great love. Throughout history, how many weak bodies are bearing what ordinary people can't bear. The world thinks that women made of water can only be as unbearable as water, but they are all wrong. Water can carry a boat and overturn it, and women also bear the country and family at critical moments. A moment-a lifetime of endurance comes from their love without regrets. V. My feelings Read excellent compositions and analyze and summarize the characteristics of excellent compositions. Examination of questions is the core. Whether it is a proposition composition or a topic composition, you need to carefully examine the questions. 2. Norms are the foundation. In college entrance examination composition writing, if candidates want to get high marks, they should at least standardize their writing, that is, meet the stylistic requirements and highlight stylistic features. Specifically, narrative writing should be based on narrative and description, especially the description of details, and its weight should not be less than two-thirds. (2) The notes should be true, the plot should be complete and tortuous, and the novel style should be tried. (3) There should be one or two distinct characters, prominent personalities and vivid personalities. (4) There should be not only two or three pieces or pictures, but also different sides to make them three-dimensional. (5) If there is any discussion, it must be few and precise. Writing an argumentative essay must also be a standard argumentative essay: (1) There must be a central argument that fits the topic, and it should be expressed as soon as possible, so as to be clear-cut and concise. (2) The central argument should be divided into two or three small arguments, and eyebrows and beards should never be mixed together. (3) It must be analyzed, that is, the central argument must be decomposed and relevant arguments analyzed. (4) It is best to use "progressive" to avoid "parallel" and straightforward narration. (5) Reasoning must be given priority to. 3. Contact is the key. Whether narrative or argumentative, only by connecting with reality can it be not empty and useless, and it can be colorful. Whether it is a proposition composition or a topic composition, it is only related to reality; Only with practical significance and practical value can we talk about theory; In order to become an "exclusive news", we can avoid theme collision. If you want to connect with reality, you must do the following three things. First, we must avoid making things up, be truthful and tell the truth. Second, to have true feelings, you must write your own joys and sorrows, ups and downs. Third, to dare to describe the soul vividly, we must show what we think. 4. Characteristic is life. If you want to get high marks, you must have your own characteristics, that is, you must have bright spots and brilliant places. It has the following characteristics: first, it is necessary to have a clever and witty thinking, which is both unique in thinking and innovative in understanding. Second, we must have strong thoughts and feelings, not only throughout, but also constantly developing and changing. The third is to have a unique perspective of life, which is not only an observation angle that others don't use, but also an understanding angle that others don't have. Fourth, we should have our own narrative characteristics, including our own narrative style, our own narrative angle and our own narrative rhythm. Fifth, we should have good rhetorical methods, or make good use of metaphors, or be good at parallelism or duality. Sixth, we must have our own language style, that is to say, we must show our specialties, show our elegance and highlight our personality. In short, we should strive to become smarter and smarter; To be lively and smart, this will not happen out of thin air. It must be cultivated consciously and strengthened through training. Dialectics is a magic weapon. College entrance examination composition questions, whether it is propositional composition or topic composition; Whether it is a topic-based composition or a comprehensive composition, it can be dialectically analyzed. Although not every question needs dialectical analysis, one thing is certain, that is, if you master the magic weapon of dialectics and make dialectical analysis, your article will be full of wisdom and insight in generate. Without the use of dialectical magic weapon, it is impossible to investigate and distinguish. 6. Viewpoint is the key. The competition of college entrance examination composition, of course, has the competition of skills and techniques, but more importantly, the competition of original opinions. Because you have no original ideas, you can't write a composition with high marks, and your composition will not be a masterpiece in the college entrance examination. The original opinion can only come from the examinee's understanding ability, cognitive level, ideological height and theoretical level. Sixth, there are written laws. 1. We should get to the point of the topic. Investigate the writing scope and key points of the topic. Do you explicitly ask to contact yourself? Do you want to draw up your own topic? Clear the writing essentials of all kinds of compositions. 2. conception. Association: From in-class to out-of-class, we should first open our minds and make associations, from positive to negative, from ourselves to others, from ancient times to modern times, from China to foreign countries, from animals to plants, from nature to human society, from study to life, from social activities to ideological understanding, from literature to art, from sports to military affairs, from mortals to great men ... 3. In order to make the materials fresh, it is suggested to use more teaching materials. Don't just pile up materials, simply describe and comment accurately. 4. Try to be smart. Be attractive at the beginning (straight to the point, straightforward; Create suspense and be fascinating; Ask questions and attract attention; Explain the situation, explain the background), and the ending is strong (make the finishing point and make people think; Summarize the full text and take care of the beginning; The narrative ends naturally; Express emotions and cause * * *). 5. style. Unlimited style does not mean that there is no style. You can write whatever you want. Two-thirds of narratives are enough, while argumentative essays are the opposite. When writing a narrative, it is best to set the protagonist as yourself, use the first person to enter the text, don't shout slogans, and be sincere. When writing an argumentative essay, we should pay attention to the appropriateness of examples, the analysis of things and the extension after quotation, so as to echo from beginning to end. 6. Title. Pay attention to the novelty of self-made topics, such as famous sayings, metaphors, questions and numbers. 7. content. Don't touch sensitive political events (such as talking nonsense about education, teachers, parents, etc.) ), and don't simply complain. Use less political jargon. 8. Beautiful language, different lengths, catchy; Quote more appropriate quotations and aphorisms; Some new words of the times can be introduced; Quote the lyrics of pop songs; Quote folk oral folk songs (but the guidance must be positive). It is forbidden to pack white and white; Don't use dialects that others don't understand. Write more sentences to increase literary grace: (1) symmetrical sentences-pairs of opposite, same or opposite, not necessarily the same number of words. (2) Hypothetical sentence: Prove the correctness of the argument by speculating the possible results under hypothetical conditions. (3) The sentence pattern of "famous words+explanations+example sentences". (4) Parallel short sentences: subject-predicate phrases, verb-object phrases and radical phrases. 9. Details. The narrative should be vivid and must be described in detail. 10. The style should be high. Put yourself in others' shoes and touch others with your feelings. Agile and open-minded, concerned about social life, full of sense of responsibility of the times. Sincere and beautiful feelings, carry forward the truth, goodness and beauty, and abandon the false, evil and ugly. The materials are novel and concise, the language is fresh and beautiful, the literary talent is flying, and the literary thinking is moving. The handwriting is neat and beautiful, and the roll surface is beautiful and generous. Vii. salary training 1. Think about the textbook materials that can be used as writing materials for this composition. Su Shi 1 and Su Dongpo have been relegated repeatedly, lacking in material and spirit, which can be described as scarred, but the sinister turmoil of officialdom has not suppressed his high will, and the poverty of life has not eroded his optimistic heart. He walked to the river alone and stood on the vast river, expressing the feeling that "the river of no return, the waves are exhausted, is a romantic figure through the ages." Although he knew that the world was difficult and dangerous, he said, "When will Feng Tang start?" "Pick up all the cold branches and refuse to live" and "Rain or shine" ... Su Dongpo is breaking through. He maintained his loyalty and independent personality in adversity, and resolutely stood at the mouth of the storm, braving the wind and waves. 2. Only with a poetic mind can we resist setbacks. When Su Dongpo was relegated to Hangzhou, he decorated the lakeside with supreme artistic techniques, making him an outstanding landscape design genius. At the age of 60, he was exiled to lonely Hainan. Summer is extremely humid, autumn is rainy, acclimatized, unaccompanied and lonely, but he has not felt pessimistic, nor has he lost the joy of life and beautiful ideals. He made his own ink, collected herbs and built houses. At the same time, he copied Tang Shu and Han Shu, annotated Shangshu, compiled Dongpo Zhi Lin, read Materia Medica, and wrote poems and lyrics. It seems that nothing in this world can knock him down, because he has always had a "poetic heart". 3. Although Su Shi was banished to the desolate Huangzhou because of Wutai Poetry Case, he still sang the words "River of No Return, Man of Eternal Romance". When Fang heard about Su Shi's experience of being relegated, he first "leaned over and didn't answer" and then "leaned back and smiled". This pitch is actually a taste of life, a gesture of life! I don't answer because I can't answer the bitterness of life, but I don't have to answer. This is the end of the world. Then he smiled at the sky. This is Fang's attitude towards life. He smiled proudly at life, letting go of the vicissitudes of life and not hurting anything. Life is naturally easy. Hawking is a paralyzed man with only one finger moving, and his fate is extremely tragic. But he said, "I'm not sad. I am very lucky, because although God fixed me in this chair, he gave me the ability to imagine everything in the world and inspired me to fight in life. In fact, God is very fair to people. " In a hotel in Moscow, he suggested that everyone dance in wheelchairs; When he met with Prince Charles, he turned his wheelchair to show off ... He overcame his own bad luck and himself, which is worthy of being called "the fighting spirit of life"! Beethoven Beethoven spent the rest of his life completely deaf, but he said, "I can be destroyed, but I can't be conquered." He fought against suffering with strong willpower. He used a small wooden stick, one end of which was inserted in the piano box and the other end was bitten between his teeth, to "listen" to the sound when composing music. He left nine symphonies, 32 piano sonatas, five piano concertos, 1 violin concerto, 16 string quartets and so on, which created great spiritual wealth for mankind. A symphony of destiny tells a tenacious vitality and plays a triumph of mankind. After Sima Qian went to prison, he wrote a letter to his friends, referring to the situation in which the sages rose resolutely in difficulties: Zhong Ni was in trouble, Qu Yuan was exiled, his eyes were blind, and his grandson was obese ... At this time, Sima Qian fully understood-didn't their painful situation be the same as mine? But no matter how painful they were, they never gave up their firm life ideals. Then why should I bow to pain and humiliation? This is Sima Qian's inner monologue in order to realize his great ambition, and it is also a brave struggle against the fate of suffering. Shi Tiesheng, a famous contemporary writer, hesitated after the misfortune of paralysis of his legs, and even thought about taking a holiday to end his life. But he was infected by the life rhythm of the altar, learned to persevere in bad luck and adversity, and learned that man is the master of his ambition. In the end, he overcame his illness and himself with tenacious perseverance and became a famous writer. Santiago showed extraordinary perseverance in the fight against sharks. Although he failed in the end, his strength perfectly embodies the great belief that human beings can be destroyed but not defeated. Hemingway believes that "life is a lonely struggle, and this struggle can never be won." He said that nothing in life can really be explained, improved and saved, so it is impossible to really ask what problems will be solved; However, in the unpredictable fate of life, it is entirely possible and necessary for people to control themselves and maintain their rationality and demeanor-this is the most important thing. Gou Jian, the King of Yue, endured humiliation and made peace after his defeat, but he was not discouraged. After returning home, he did not forget the national humiliation and struggled for revenge day and night. He encouraged himself with asceticism, secretly accumulated strength, and finally defeated Fu Cha, the king of Wu, and annexed Wu. He explained the spiritual essence of "self-improvement": self-improvement, never stopping, never slacking off. Li Qingzhao is like a prosperous begonia. In the sudden wind and rain, although she is green and fat, she no longer flutters in the wind, but stands stubbornly. "Life is a hero, and death is a ghost." In that teetering era, she explained "resistance" all her life. Just like the long autumn chrysanthemum in her works, she smiles at the west wind and still stands when the flowers are about to decline. She taught us a truth: when the body falls, let the mind stand; With the disappearance of wealth, we should keep high spirits.