Life is often gorgeous, however, an ordinary little thing can evoke deep feelings, and an inexplicable touch also comes to mind. ...

Grandma is a kind person, but in my eyes, she is just a nagging elder. Until now, I didn't know that what I did to my grandmother was so young, ignorant and cruel.

It happened a few months ago, and I still remember it vividly-

Every day after school, I put down my heavy schoolbag. The first thing I heard was my grandmother's affectionate greetings and concerned inquiries. Every day is the same. At that time, I was willful and always thought that I was a new and new human being with self-awareness and pursuit of fashion. However, grandma's vulgar ideas are alien to me. He doesn't care about my love. Whether I can understand what he said or not, I always end up with a "good".

"Ah-it's already 7 o'clock!" Wake up from the bed "damn, grandma didn't wake me up, I'm going to be late!" " "At this moment, grandma who just got up and got dressed came over and said apologetically," I'm sorry, I went to bed too late yesterday, so … "I shouted loudly," Cut the crap! It's all your fault! What did you say last time that you would wake me up earlier? If you are late, you will be forgiven ... "I complained a lot, but my grandmother patiently listened to me before saying," Well, you go brush your teeth and wash your face, and I'll prepare breakfast. "No need!" Grandma swallowed my pride, but I was so unreasonable that I left without breakfast. Sure enough, I was late. Not only was I scolded by the teacher, but I was also punished for cleaning the classroom all day, and I just failed the math test paper. So I couldn't restrain my inner anger and vented all my anger on my grandmother.

It happened to rain after school. I got wet on purpose. On the one hand, I am in a bad mood. On the other hand, I thought grandma would worry about me and blame herself for my mistake of getting wet and letting my grandson catch a cold in the rain. Only then did I know that I used my grandmother's love for me, that kind of selfless love. Suddenly, my grandmother called my name with an umbrella. I ran very fast on purpose and didn't accept her kindness.

Later, I learned that my grandmother got up late because she knitted me a sweater all night and accidentally fell down while chasing me for an umbrella ... My grandmother is still consistent with me, but when I see my grandmother every day, I dare not admit my mistake, but my vision is blurred. This tear is guilt? Is it moving? It doesn't matter anymore. Anyway, I'm trying to accept grandma's love, cry and be moved.

The outline generally consists of three parts:

(1) title. Write the title (or full title) in the middle of the first line.

(2) Main content and center. Under the topic, briefly describe the main content of this composition and the central idea to be expressed.

(3) Structural arrangement. This is the most important part of the composition outline, and the following five points should be paid attention to when designing:

(1) Arrange the organization order of materials. What to write first, then what to write, the full text is divided into several paragraphs, and what to write in each paragraph should be organized in a certain order in the form of subtitles.

(2) determine the key content. According to the needs of the expression center, determine which content is primary and which content is secondary, and mark the words "detailed", "secondary detailed" and "omitted"; The key paragraphs are to be written in several layers, which layer should be written first and which layer should be written later, and the preparation steps and order of key writing are listed in detail.

According to the selected materials and the central idea to be expressed, determine the methods of beginning and ending, and simply indicate them in the outline.

④ Design the timing, specific ways and methods of asking questions.

⑤ Consider how to connect and transition between levels and paragraphs, what to pay attention to and how to pay attention to it, and simply mark it.

Look, class. The following is an excellent and practical composition outline:

Title: An unforgettable thing.

Main content: I sprained my foot and Zhou Li took care of me.

Central idea: care for classmates and be anxious for others.

Structural layout:

I sprained my foot while practicing skipping rope.

Second, Zhou Li took good care of me. (Key paragraph)

1. Zhou Li helped me to her house.

Zhou Li washed my feet and sprayed "Get well soon". (details)

I feel much better. Zhou Li helped me home carefully.

I am very touched, and I still remember it vividly.

What problems should be paid attention to when writing an outline of a composition?

First, the form can be flexible. Generally speaking, there is no fixed format and uniform requirements for the composition outline, and the degree of items and details can be determined according to the characteristics of materials, the needs of expression and their own level. Generally speaking, when beginners write, the outline of the composition should be thin but not thick; With the continuous improvement of conception and layout, the outline of the composition can be written simply.

Second, we must carefully scrutinize and revise. After listing the outline, we should thoroughly examine the whole idea: Is the material selection relevant? Is the thinking clear and profound? What further trade-offs need to be made on the selected materials? Is the organization of materials rigorous and reasonable, and can it highlight the center? After careful consideration, make the necessary changes. Only when you are satisfied can you write.

Third, you must make an outline before writing. The purpose of writing an outline is to read for yourself and to serve you in writing this article well. Very practical. Some students don't know the purpose of writing an outline, think that the outline is dispensable, and even think that the teacher's requirement for the outline is "eventful autumn". Therefore, in order to cope with the teachers, they even write the composition first, and then "make up" the outline. This is really putting the cart before the horse and deceiving others.

Fourth, we must form the habit of "no outline, no composition". It is common for some students to have no outline before writing. When they see the topic for a while, they will start to write, write and think, think and write, step on the watermelon skin and slide wherever they go. Some people even tear it up and rewrite it in the middle of writing. As a result, precious time was wasted and the quality of the composition was seriously affected. The main reason for this situation is that they have not developed the habit of careful conception and layout.

When writing a composition, with the constraints of the outline and following the "plan", it is easy to write an article in one go, and it is also easy to meet the requirements of "being centered, organized and focused". On the contrary, it will be unclear, improper details, and forget things. Therefore, outline is an important method to improve the efficiency and quality of composition.

This prompts students: to write a composition, make an outline first; No outline, no composition. This is usually the case, especially when taking exams or taking part in composition competitions. Attention should be paid to practicing writing directly according to the composition outline from the second semester of grade five.