The first picture: desert camel array
The author outlines the desert outside the orangutan gorge with a still scene, showing us "the most monotonous and flat side of nature." The color is pure white and the sound is silent. At the turn of "however", the camel array is described in two ways: dynamic and static, and its shape is changing, from far to near; The color is changing, from black to scarlet, the voice is changing, from jingle to harmonious melody. These general human activities appear on the desolate and dead mountain, and become a landscape painting.
The last sentence reminds readers with abstract and concise words that although this article talks about scenery, it praises people's activities, and the hub of the article suddenly opens.
The second picture: farmers sing at night.
The place is the loess plateau, the time is night, and the object is the farmers who come back from hard production. First of all, static landscape technology is also used to describe the background, including terraced fields, bald mountains and tall plants. Speaking of the night of "March 5th, Ming", when farmers came back from production, people and cows came from the back hill, from far and near, from little to many, and the rhythm was slow and "down", forming a "silhouette" in the background, but after people passed by, a "simple short song" floated in, and as a result, the blue sky and the bright moon accompanied the farmers' songs.
Picture 3: The students came back late.
The place is still the same as before, the time is at night, the target is students, and intellectuals from all over the world have come back from production. If the previous section is about by going up one flight of stairs, then this section focuses more on the description of characters. With meticulous description, the author depicts students with different occupations and accents, but singing the same tune, which is a scene of coming home late; I also wrote a dinner scene, the color of the picture is gold, green, white foam, loess and so on. The joy of these students is set off by the swift river, which highlights their lofty spirit of coming to Yan 'an for revolution. This painting is "a beautiful picture composed of quiet nature and energetic people."
The connection between the second scene and the third scene is the return of production and the explanation of the * * * part. Writing about people emphasizes people's activities, people's spirit and people's vitality. This discussion is better than the last discussion on by going up one flight of stairs.
The fourth picture: barren hills and rainy days
The author changed the expression. First, I wrote the scene of "suit and tie" and "perm girl" having sex in the park, and then I used a lot of pen and ink to describe the harsh natural environment such as barren hills, muddy water, strange rocks and caves. Under such difficult conditions, some young men and women in the liberated areas still seize the time to study and pursue the revolutionary truth together. In contrast, it highlights the enterprising spirit of the latter, thinking that they are "two people with strong vitality who clearly understand the meaning of life" and that they are "not tired, not bored and not seeking excitement in nonsense", which is undoubtedly beyond the former. Can this not be eclipsed? This is the barren mountain miracle. Why is it not worth remembering?
The commentary in this section shows that "people are still composers of' landscapes'" and only "people with extremely rich inner life" can become the masters here. This third comment gives us a better understanding of the relationship between scenery and people.
Figure 5: Taolin Tea House
On the surface, this passage is dull and tasteless. In fact, from Si Wen's point of view, it is full of ups and downs and laughter. The author wrote a poem about scenery and praise people by intonation. The first sentence is ambiguous, only explaining "twenty or thirty peach trees", "half a plate of stone mill" and "a few feet to break the monument", using stones as stools and appearing as luxury goods. There are some crops beside Taolin. This will also become a landscape? Compared with parks, isn't it "ridiculous and generous"? However, in this Taolin teahouse, because a group of young people enthusiastically pursue revolutionary truth, they describe it from the perspective of general character description (language, action, form, etc.). ), and from the perspective of comparison with people who "kill time", highlight the strong atmosphere of pursuing revolution. It is better to praise people in this way of restraining scenery from praising people than before.
Therefore, the discussion in this section says, "the radiation of human lofty spirit fills the poverty of nature and adds scenery, form and content." This kind of "radiation", "filling" and "addition" shows that the human spirit is particularly important. With the deepening of feelings, the author can't help but say, "Human beings have created the second nature!" A deep sigh.
The sixth picture: the scenery in the north
In this painting, the author describes two soldiers from three aspects: shape, sound and color, which is full of twists and turns and fascinating. The author heard the "loud horn sound, the sound of surprises" and thought of the silhouette of a sentry soldier. This photo is still and close-up, and the author tries to describe the soldier's serious and brave expression. From this seriousness and courage, it is also related to the trumpets heard, which highlights the noble spiritual sentiments and distinctive image of the soldiers. The pink glow and flying red silk symbolize victory, and the bayonet flashes cold light. Through the combination of motion and static, the combination of rigidity and softness, and the combination of distance and distance, the tall image of soldiers is highlighted. The author imagined, "I was shocked. I seem to see the spirit of the nation and do it for them. " The author praised the great spirit of our Chinese nation frankly, openly and purely.
Writing here, the author had to end the article with the fifth metaphor: "It's really a' landscape', greatness in greatness!" Although the hypothetical sentence was used, it seemed euphemistic in the context of that era, but this amazing language, like the finishing touch, expressed the theme of warmly praising the lofty spirit of Yan' an army, people and nation under the leadership of the * * * production party.
Organization, the beauty of this article, lies in writing scenery; The value of this article lies in writing people. There are only six pictures and five discussion sentences in the full text, and the structure is complete. The content of the picture is different, and the expression is different. Form is scattered but spirit is not scattered, and matter is completely organized by human activities and the gradual sublimation of human spiritual realm. It's really no big deal, and I will never feel inferior.