Method 1: Start small and highlight the key points.
Hot materials often have great influence and involve a wide range. We must start from a small place and find the "points" related to the theme of the composition to avoid covering everything. For example, the fragment of the excellent composition "Back to the Origin" in the Guangdong Volume of the College Entrance Examination:
The gray sky overhead crossed the dusty road. I can finally stop and stand in that familiar and unfamiliar alley. I know that as long as I take one more step, I will return to the "origin" of my life-the old alley where I was born. That old lane full of Xiguan customs taught me the first lesson in life.
Stepping on Qingshi Road, I slowly stepped into the depths of the alley. What you see is a long-lost old house in Xiguan. There are three shallow stone steps in front of the crimson stage. A family's domestic cat lies lazily on the stone steps, enjoying the mild sunshine before noon.
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There are many angles to choose from in the topic of "Back to the Origin". This clip only starts from a small place and selects a life scene that the author is familiar with. This is also a familiar picture, close to the reader's life, stimulating reading interest and triggering the following thinking.
Method 2: Summarize the hot spots and refine the theme.
You don't need to elaborate on familiar events, but you should summarize the events themselves, and then extract the theme or conclusion. For example, the excellent composition "No one is an island" in the college entrance examination outline volume:
Convenient little things show not only a habit of doing good, but also the backbone of a moral society. 18 passers-by who were frightened by the "Peng Yu case" and "Xu Yunhe case" were interested in seeing poor Yue crushed by two wheels, but were afraid to pull her aside. The cold raindrops beat not only the land where Xiaoyueyue fell, but also the indifferent hearts of more than one billion people. Fortunately, someone is willing to lend a helping hand. Fortunately, the kind scavengers are willing to help Yue. Her pull not only pulled Yue from the brink of death, but also pulled us bystanders from the indifferent world of moral decline.
Sweepers, but some surpass all the best. Her kindness is not an earth-shattering heroic feat, but it is enough to make the indifferent soul tremble; Her beauty is not that she is ashamed to kill time in the dark, but that her charm is enough to impress everyone.
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The candidate wrote the boatman's charity behavior in the materials for Chen Xianmei, a garbage collector, and 18 passers-by, and he repaired the hole conveniently. Because of the great influence of this event, the author did not describe the details of the event, but highly summarized and focused on the discussion.
Method 3: Reproduce the scene and express the truth.
If the details of the hot material are not fully displayed, it may also lack touching power. We can choose some details, reproduce the scene and express our true feelings. For example, a fragment of the excellent composition "To Teacher Zhang Lili" in the Sichuan Volume of the College Entrance Examination:
Everything came so suddenly that the school bus suddenly started, and the students panicked and froze. The driver was also shocked. But they saw a scene that surprised them more. You bravely greeted him with your own flesh and blood and calmly pounced on the monster. In front of the tall school bus, you are so small and insignificant. But it is so small, but it has produced amazing efforts. You "easily" pushed away two overwhelmed and paralyzed children. The wheel ran over your leg at will. The student was saved, and you were paraplegic.
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In the choice of narrative person, the author chooses the second person to facilitate lyric and reasoning. In the narrative content, the examinee describes the details in the way of scene reappearance, which adds shock to the real and vivid narrative.
Examinations of "Carefully Preparing for the Exam" —— Also on "Talent" and "Virtue"
Talented women are virtuous.
Huang xiaohao
"A woman without talent is virtue" comes from Ode to Lady Qi written by Zhang Dai in Qing Dynasty. Traditional moral standards hold that women don't need talent, and "three obedience and four virtues" is the standard of a good woman. (at the beginning, quote the views of the ancients and comment on them. If you want to promote them, you must first suppress them. )
In the feudal society dominated by male chauvinism in China, in order to achieve the purpose of oppressing women more conveniently and deeply, the saying that "women are virtuous but not talented" was quickly publicized.
Today's society pursues "equality". Get rid of oppression and oppose oppression. Therefore, the saying that "a woman without talent is a virtue" will certainly not work in today's society, but "a woman with talent" is more suitable for today's society. (express your views in a timely manner. Take the husband and wife as an example. A talented, intelligent and idealistic woman is more conducive to family harmony and the growth of the next generation.
Ma Yun, founder of Alibaba Group, achieved today's success without his wife's help and full support. Ma Yun once said: "She (Mrs. Ma) has helped me in all directions. She fully understands and supports me in both career and life." Ma Yun's wife is undoubtedly a very talented person, so in an interview, Ma Yunhui proudly said: "She is not the kind of woman who is really unknown. Her career is developing very well. She is a woman who takes care of both career and life. " It is precisely because of Mrs. Ma's "talent" that she can help Ma Yun in her career and create Ma Yun's glory today. On the other hand, if Mrs. Ma has no talent or merit, how can she help Ma Yun? (Select Ma Yun, a hot figure, describe relevant events and write in detail. )
Li Yanhong's wife, Ma Dongmin, is a doctor. There is no doubt that her talent is outstanding. Her help to Li Yanhong's career is like the help of a propeller to a machine. Li Yanhong once admitted that he was not an adventurous person, but his wife gave him courage. At the large-scale celebration party held in Manhattan, Li Yanhong praised Ma Dongmin and said affectionately, "She is always at the most critical moment. Put forward the bravest suggestions calmly. As it turns out, her advice full of oriental wisdom has put me on the right path. " He also said gratefully: "In Baidu's venture, she pushed me forward at every step." (Choose the popular figure Li Yanhong. Describe the relevant events and write in detail. )
Why can Ma Dongmin help Li Yanhong so much in his career? With her extraordinary wisdom and talent, of course.
In this society that pursues equality, we should not say that a person is useless and ignorant. Sincerely accepting others' arrangements for their own destiny is a virtue! In this fiercely competitive society, no one will eventually be eliminated by this society.
Judging from many facts, such as Balzac, Prince of gymnastics Li Ning and Pan Shiyi, the chairman of SOHO, all have a very talented wife. And they have their own successful lives. (Omitted, rich materials are listed. )
Judging from the whole social phenomenon, the statement that "a woman is virtuous without talent" is simply incorrect. However, "talented women" can better adapt to the changes of the times, promote social progress and contribute to the happiness and harmony of families. Therefore, talented women are virtuous.