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Word count: 1500 word composition

This article is suitable for: senior one and senior three.

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This composition is about 1500 words in Grade Three. The topic is "Talking about Fences and Removing Fences". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. The first time I stepped into this middle school, I saw two flower beds on the left and right sides of the big playground at first sight, which made me extremely excited and happy. However, a closer look shows that the original good flowers and plants are surrounded by bamboo fences, which are uneven and disappointing, and my good interest is greatly reduced. Comments: Start with the topic. From the first impression of entering school to writing, the brushwork is changeable. First, it gives people a sense of beauty, and suddenly their interest is greatly reduced. This is the so-called "there must be waves among literati." The next year, now, the school deliberately pulled down these bamboo fences. Standing on the playground and looking around the whole campus, there are green grass and trees on both sides, neat and clean teaching buildings and antique office buildings, showing a natural, fresh and harmonious beauty. Comments: The beauty of overlapping words, the greenery, the freshness and harmony in the antique, the solid language skills and the touch of the pen are all written naturally from the experience of life, without any affectation. In order to prevent naughty students from trampling on the grass, destroying flowers and trees and protecting these delicate flowers and trees, school leaders once surrounded the flower beds. Now, the school leaders have torn down the bamboo fence to make the campus look more elegant. Indeed, those fences are like scars on the fair skin of beautiful girls. Who wants to?

Comment: Zhu Ziqing likes to compare beautiful women with scenery. In A Dream of Red Mansions, Tso also looks at girls with great purity. He sincerely believes that "daughters are made of water and men are made of mud" and that "all the beautiful scenery of mountains, rivers, the sun and the moon is only for daughters, and men with beards are just dregs". In fact, that is to say, comparing some scenic spots with girls seems to be more in line with the traditional aesthetic habits of China people. At this point, our male compatriots will be wronged. But can we completely deny what school leaders have done before? No, their original intention is good, but what school leaders do now is just for "elegance"? These are two completely different educational concepts!

Comments: From what you see in front of you, we can draw out the inner essence of things, and explore the concept of being a man and educating people through superficial phenomena, from outside to inside, from here to there, from things to people. This conception method is worth learning by students. Ask yourself and answer yourself, and set questions to attract readers' attention. The former is that we don't trust others, and we should set up a defense line before the work begins. I don't think we can treat others like this in our lives. But there are always people who cast suspicious eyes on others, and they are always on guard, afraid that they will do something harmful to you, afraid that they will be bad to you, and so on. Then who likes being with you? Who wants to be your bosom friend? So you can't really communicate with people, and you are lonely. Without communication, your heart will dry up, and if you persist in loneliness, you will be indifferent!

Comment: Yes, how can it be so cold between people? If so, even in summer, you will feel cold to the bone. Therefore, the article is not only giving educators a profound advice, but the author has stood at the height of being a man and smelted a bucket of gold for educating people-the essence of being a man!

The latter is to be honest with others and get along with others with an open heart. We can also imagine that when your mother asks you to add a dress to give you care and warmth, you can say "thank you" sincerely, and your mother will feel infinitely gratified; When a good partner achieves something, no matter how big or small, you sincerely say, "You are great!

",partners will be very happy; When a classmate has a problem that he can't solve, the classmates will appreciate it if you help him solve it enthusiastically. During the lecture, the teacher made a little mistake. You raised it sincerely, and at the same time, you made progress. Even if you meet a complete stranger and you smile at him honestly, he will remember a smiling you. Your frankness has infected everyone around you, and you have benefited a lot. Why not turn a "fence" into a "bridge"? I think the school leaders are aware of this, and they have wisely torn down the tangible and intangible walls together!

Comments: If the above is only a superficial analysis and reasoning of the phenomena seen, then this paragraph will become stale. The first sentence is the central sentence, which dominates the whole paragraph, from total to sub-paragraph. Then, a concrete picture emerged in front of me. You see, your mother's care, your courtesy, your encouragement, your sincerity and your smiling face, just like TV cameras, come face to face, which is dazzling and unforgettable. This inspired us again. Although argumentative essays are mainly based on general examples and abstract reasoning, if we can make this boring lively, why not? Therefore, argumentative essays should be written vividly so that readers are willing to read them. what do you think? Of course, if we insist on removing the image, it will be like a rich bowl of fish, with attractive fat scraped off, leaving only a pile of fishbones that sting people's throat!

Have a taste of this and you will feel better ... If you think we are bad, we may really be bad. If you think we are good, our hearts will be warm, and we will do better than you think!

Comments: At the end of the article, the purpose is clear, the central argument of the article is pointed out, and the main idea of the article is well highlighted. The fence should be torn down!

Comments: At the end of the chapter, the whole article ends in four concise words, echoing the beginning of the article, and re-emphasizing the author's distinctive views from another angle, which is thought-provoking, short and powerful, that is, the ending of some celebrity speeches is like ringing a bell!

That is, it is powerful and beautiful, and the sound is lingering. It's really "three days without stopping"!

General comment: the demolition of a small garden in the school only leads to thinking about educational methods, and deeply excavates the extraordinary educational laws contained in ordinary things, which is thought-provoking!

Reading such a beautiful article is not correcting the composition, but drinking a pot of good tea, which is cool and delicious; This is tasting a glass of mellow and intoxicating wine ... Comments Teacher: Long Yongzhong.