1, briefly describe the relevant contents of the original text. For example, Si Liu gave up his factory and Er Hadron sold his daughter. This part is written to explain where feelings come from and pave the way for the following discussion.

2. clarify the basic point of view. Choose the point that you feel most deeply and express it clearly in concise sentences. At most, the environment plays an important role in human change.

3. Put facts and reason around basic viewpoints. This part is the main part of the argumentative paper, which expounds the basic viewpoints, proves the correctness of the viewpoints by putting facts and reasoning, and makes the arguments more prominent and convincing. When the public order is good, Xiangzi can realize his dream.

4, around the basic point of view with practice. A good feeling after reading should have the flavor of the times and a true feeling. To do this, we must be good at connecting with reality. People cannot live without society, and society determines people.

Camel Xiangzi chapter 17 read the model essay as follows:

Er Qiangzi just bought his daughter Joy two months ago, and spent some time buying a car to make it himself. He is lazy, so he wants to sell his car instead of doing natural transactions. After the New Year, Tigress took the opportunity to buy a car at a cheap price. Xiangzi didn't like the car very much, but he kept pulling it. In April, Joy returned to the miscellaneous hospital, and the warlord's husband threw her away.

Joy became Tigress's companion. In order to support her family, Joy became a prostitute, and Tigress secretly provided a house.

I feel very sorry, very sorry and helpless, but I also admire him. I admire his previous strength and his progress. However, he failed to defeat himself and society, and was defeated after all.

Perhaps because of the extreme darkness of society, perhaps because of personal factors. In any case, at most, environment plays an important role in the process of changing people. If the law and order had been better at that time, Xiangzi might have realized his ideal and might not have become a walking corpse.

People cannot live without society, and society determines people. If we can't handle the relationship between reality and ideal, society and ourselves, we are likely to lose our original self.