Pupils. Ok, composition evaluation
1. The vivid description of the details reveals the inner world of the characters, which is the success of this paper.
The article ends with ….
3. At the end of the article, the central sentence is revealed, and the pen is clear, short and powerful.
4. The ending is full of expectation and enthusiasm, and the words are poor.
The poetic language at the beginning and end of the article is full of imagination and rhythmic beauty, which makes people want to read and love to read.
6. Although it is a trivial matter, it is vividly described by the author, and an indispensable stroke at the end highlights the theme of the article.
7. Although the story is ordinary, it is sincere, rich and touching.
8. The end of the article is unconventional, giving people the feeling of wanting to rest.
9. The ending is clear and meaningful.
10, the full text has many wonderful sentences, which adds some literary interest to the article.
Middle school students' compositions are well commented.
1. This paper adopts the first-person writing method, which makes … have great advantages and plays a good role in characterization and central presentation. It is friendly, natural and credible to read, with clear thinking and lively rhythm.
2. The process of this paper is concrete, clear and coherent. At the same time, the author added appropriate psychological description to fully express the author's feelings.
You can associate snow with the pursuit of life. Starting from the details of life, the spirit of innovation is commendable. This article reflects your plain writing style. Who says "boiled water" is not the best drink?
4. The quotations of some common sayings in the full text are just right, with nostalgia as the clue. It just reflects your ideology.
5, your article is very creative-use the form of geometric proof questions to complete the idea. The full text is very literary!
6. The author has a strong ability to control the situation. The whole article is written in one go, and the style of writing is like running water, giving people a comfortable feeling that shines at the moment!
7. As a casual feeling, your article is witty and colorful. The rich life experience and delicate thoughts and feelings revealed between the lines surprised the teacher. I hope you will make persistent efforts in your future writing and form a landscape of your own!
8. You are a student with strong opinions and no lack of real knowledge. I quite agree with you, but it would be icing on the cake if the writing arrangement was more compact.
9. This paper chooses a brand-new angle to let your thoughts run freely here, which is your greatest success. What the teacher wants to remind you is that when dealing with the world, there are always some rules that we need to grasp, so that your thoughts will be more profound and you will always receive the effect of "seeing the world through dripping water".
10, such beautiful handwriting and clear and neat structure can not help but give people a refreshing feeling. This is really what teachers should learn from you. Let's promote each other in the future Chinese study, shall we?
Good comments on college students' compositions
1, you are very good at observing life and can keenly capture meaningful moments; You are a student with great potential.
2. The language of the article is fluent, which also shows the teacher's feelings. You are the teacher's bosom friend. I hope we can learn from each other and collect a bunch of fragrant flowers in the garden of literature.
Your handwriting is neat and beautiful. Teachers should learn from you. If the material selection of the article is novel, it will definitely complement the writing style. what do you reckon ?
4. Great! Your article reproduces the simplicity and frankness of the northeast people, which makes readers feel refreshed. The language is extremely fluent, and the use of synaesthesia is particularly clever. Your writing style is conquering and attractive. Work hard and create more glory!
Your article is like a slow flowing stream, delicate and smooth. Beautiful writing, sincere and delicate feelings, very personal style. May you continue to pick the waves of life on the road of writing and make your style more perfect!
6. It is wise for a teenager who is not deeply involved in the world to enter a complex society. The language of the article is plain and soft, and the description is very casual, as if leading readers to stroll on the Yuan Ye of the mind. The disadvantage is that the discussion is slightly angular. You know, incisive arguments can make the finishing point and make your article more profound. Keep practicing and you will be better!
7. The writing of this article is beautiful and fresh, full of certain philosophy. It is written that "I" walked by the sea, and the sea not only gave me the enjoyment of beauty, but also caused my meditation and association. It can be said that the sea gave me a swimming space, and "I" injected life into the sea, making the sea a "person" with noble personality strength. After reading this article, it gives people a sense of beauty and is thought-provoking.
8. School life seems dull except after class, but this paper is good at finding the extraordinary from the ordinary, and it is written with relish: in the tense morning, the noon of the battle, and the tired night, every paragraph chooses a lens with great life interest. The fresh and lively language vividly shows the students' positive mental outlook.
9. This article is highly ideological and artistic, which makes people linger after reading it. Ingenious conception, using comparative techniques to deepen the theme; The plot is also quite clever, and the whole story is both unexpected and reasonable. The language is unpretentious, and the author's love and hate are all contained in the narrative, which can make readers feel and think deeply.
10, the quotation of several common sayings in the full text is just right, with nostalgia as the clue. It just reflects your ideology.