The fourth grade composition 1 should create a rich situation to stimulate children's emotions, emotions and thoughts, and guide children into emotional thinking situations. When children's emotional thoughts are stimulated, they will have a desire to read and express themselves, so that reading and composition can achieve good results.
If we guide primary school students to write spring compositions on campus, we should first take our children to the campus to look for spring, watch spring, draw pictures and discuss spring, so as to arouse their happy mood. They are in high spirits and active. How can they not write a good article? Through the teacher's classroom guidance, let children imagine boldly and think heuristically, guide students to spread their wings and let them soar in their existing living space and knowledge space.
The requirement of this exercise is to observe a scene and then write down the observed scene. In a certain order, the content is specific and the sentences are fluent. Last semester's composition training, I arranged to write a scene. This time, we should improve on the original basis, especially write the scenes in a certain order.
④ This practice teaching can refer to the following steps.
1。 Arrange students to observe a scene on campus in advance and put forward the basic requirements for observation.
1。 Students, the new semester has begun, and spring has quietly arrived. Miss Chun is dressing up the charming spring with her dexterous hands. do you want to see it ? It is best to read it carefully and introduce it to everyone after reading it. Show teaching wall chart (optical film or play multimedia courseware. If it is spring in the local area, it is best to take students out of the classroom and feel the spring directly. )
2。 Introduce new courses. Spring breeze blows, swallows return, peach blossoms are in full bloom, grass is green, willows sprout, and children fly kites. What a beautiful picture of spring scenery! Come on, children, let's go into spring together!
3。 Teacher: Spring has come, and the campus is showing different vitality. Before class, the students looked at the campus carefully. Do you think our campus is beautiful? What is the most beautiful? (Speak freely) Do you want to record these beautiful things with your notes?
4。 What did you find when we visited the campus in spring? What do you see? what do you think?
Health: Is it a bud or a bud on a branch?
One day, my father will take my brother and me to Bashang prairie more than 200 kilometers away. I am very happy. We packed our bags early in the morning and got on the bus to the prairie.
After a while, the car drove out of the busy city and drove on the country road. I am deeply attracted by the scenery here. Rows of tall poplars seem to be standing guard for the road. After walking so much, they always stand on both sides. After a while, the car began to take Panshan Road. The car was shaking so badly that everyone was a little shaky. I grabbed the armrest of the chair and looked out of the window. This is really a beautiful picture, with green hills on one side and deep valleys on the other. Below the valley is a clear stream. When the car drove forward, there was a white fog outside the window and I couldn't see anything. I asked my father what was going on. My father told me that the car was traveling through the clouds at an altitude of 20xx meters. After a while, the fog disappeared and the car had reached the top of the mountain. Looking back, the white clouds are already under our feet, just like the fairyland in Journey to the West. Over this mountain, you will reach Bashang grassland. There are several white clouds floating in the blue sky, the green grassland is endless, and yurts are arranged on the grass.
As soon as the car stopped, I dragged my father into a yurt. Ah! It's really cool inside. The round roof is covered with thick canvas, like a big umbrella. Dad told me that this is the need of nomads' nomadic life. Wherever they go, they put their yurts there.
Having a rest in the yurt, I ran out. From a distance, flocks of horses are running and flocks of sheep are eating grass. I can't help but pick up a small stick and run to catch the sheep. I also became a little shepherd boy. Just when I was able to drive the sheep, I saw a Mongolian aunt riding a horse and running on the grassland with her brother. I also ran to the horse and asked my father to help me get on it. At first, the horse ran slowly on the grassland, but later it ran faster and faster. Finally, the horse galloped on the grassland. I'm so nervous. The horse ran so fast that my ass hurt. I'm really afraid I'll fall off my horse. I clung to the reins ... after a while, the horse stopped and my heart calmed down. This is my first time riding a horse. Dad took a picture of me as a souvenir.
People here are very hospitable. They welcomed us with Mongolian etiquette, gave us roe deer meat, green mutton and yellow mutton, and took out koumiss for us to drink.
It's getting late. We should go home, but I really don't want to leave. The mountains, water and people here are more beautiful. As the song goes: "White clouds are floating in the blue sky, and horses are running below ..."
I love Bashang grassland.
Three families are everyone's home. There are all kinds of families in the world, from a blood relative to a collective, a country, even the whole world and the whole earth. In this family, all kinds of stories are happening every day.
Class 6 and Class 5 are a happy and integrated family. 65 people are very lively. Many things happen at home every day, some are happy, some are sad, some are excited and some are angry.
Happy time is always the most. Let's take a small example: the teacher was deliberately ten minutes late in order to let us write the composition "The teacher was absent for ten minutes". During these ten minutes, the class exploded-the students in the town performed various actions for us as if they knew the teacher's purpose, accompanied by strange sounds, which made everyone laugh; Classmates Xiao Ning and Cheng Xiao, unconsciously "presented" crosstalk music, all laughed askew; There was a dialogue with Sean Xiao (the fact is that the person in charge of discipline should not remember his name), and everyone laughed their heads off. When the teacher "fell from the sky", the whole classroom was suddenly silent. The teacher asked what happened, and the whole classroom was boiling again.
Interesting things happen almost every day, but there will inevitably be some sadness. There was a basketball game, and no matter how hard the cheerleaders cheered and the players worked, the game still failed. Everyone wanted to cry and went back to the classroom in frustration. On that day, there was no sound of joy.
The sixth five-year plan is like a happy family. Besides the sadness of graduation, the class organized the Happy Team and F5 to hold a grand graduation ceremony. The happy team bought a six-story cake and wrote the word "eternity" on it with cream, which made many students shed tears.
I am extremely sad and even more depressed. After the summer vacation, although we are not in the same class, there will always be "eternity" in our hearts, and we still feel like relatives after meeting.
Forever home-level 6 and level 5.
One summer night, I was lying in bed, looking at the outside world through the window.
First, I looked up at the moon, which was as bright as a mirror and lit up the whole night. If you look at its round face like a naughty child, it can still play with me: if my head faces east, it will follow me to the east, and if my head faces west, it will accompany me to the west. It's really fun, as cute as my little friend who plays hide-and-seek It's great to spend the night with me!
Secondly, what dazzles me is the stars. They sparkle like gems, and I really want to reach out and pick one; They are still like children's hands and feet, flying in the air, dazzling me. I think the sky is so beautiful tonight!
I hurried to the living room and told my mother, father and sister about this wonderful thing. When they heard my discovery, they all praised my small eyes. So, to encourage my discovery, they gave me a book. I was full of joy and fell asleep soon!
Son, you should also tell your relatives what you found! They will be proud of your new discovery!
Fourth grade, volume 2, composition 5, understand the requirements of exercises.
We all love our campus. It may be like a beautiful garden with green grass and flowers. It may have only a few bungalows, a few old trees and a small playground. Anyway, we spent many happy days in the lovely campus. Let's walk around the campus, have a look, choose a scene, observe it carefully, and then write down what we observe in a certain order. Pay attention to specific content and fluent sentences.
If you don't want to write about the scenery on campus, you can also write about the scenery in other places, or write about the unforgettable things that happened on campus.
Second, fixed-point practice methods
The campus is like a beautiful garden. It is a paradise for us to grow up and a temple for learning ... No matter what the campus is like, it has become a second "home" for students. How can we write the characteristics of the campus?
1. Determine the observation object and find the observation point.
We live on campus and love our campus. When it comes to campus, we will feel very cordial. We feel that there are many landscapes to write about, such as campus lawns, small gardens, rockeries, beautiful small flower beds, frequent grape stands, rich publicity columns and vivid sculptures. What kind of scenery do you choose? Choose the characteristic scenery you like and are familiar with as the description object, find the observation point and observe it carefully, thus completing this exercise. Because the observation points are different, the appearance and characteristics of the scenery you see are different. Finding the best observation point can present the campus more truly.
2. Observe carefully in order to grasp the characteristics of the scenery.
Whether observing the campus or observing a corner of the campus, we should do it in a certain order. There are three main orders of observation: first, the order is the passage of time, which can be written according to the changes of the seasons throughout the year or according to the changes of the scenery in a certain period of time; Second, the spatial orientation order, the scenery can be described in spatial orientation order, such as from far and near, from top to bottom, from left to right, from outside to inside; The third is to change the scene in order, that is, to describe the scenery seen in different places by the movement of the observer's foothold-where to go first, what scenery to see, and then what scenery to see. As long as the observed scenes are written in a reasonable order, the beautiful scenery of the campus will naturally appear to readers.
As we all know, different campuses have different styles and different characteristics. Only by grasping those unique things or unique scenery on campus, observing them carefully and describing them vividly can people see that it is different from other campuses, present its style and characteristics, and leave a clear and profound impression on people. In a word, we can find and express the characteristics from the angles of types, sizes, quantities, shapes, colors, structures and sounds of things, or from the static and dynamic aspects of things.
3. Develop reasonable associations and express true feelings.
No matter when observing or describing the mountains, rivers, flowers and trees on campus, we should release our hearts, develop reasonable associations, and vividly express the characteristics of the scenery by means of metaphor, personification, exaggeration and parallelism. Not only that, but also integrate your feelings into the scenery-you can express your feelings through the scenery or directly, so that others will have an emotional voice after reading your composition-share your joys and sorrows.
Third, the coach's idea of practicing.
Ideas 1: —— Introduction of the tour guide. When observing the scenery, you should choose the place where you can see the characteristics of the scenery best as your observation point, and introduce the scenery you have observed one by one in the order of observation like a small tour guide. Its advantage is that people feel at home.
Idea 2:-Reproduce color pictures. This way of writing is to reproduce a picture with words, that is, what you can observe can impress you. Let readers see bright colors, beautiful gestures and beautiful voices in the picture you describe. ...
Idea 3:-Describe it in chronological order. Practice first describes a scene as a whole, and then describes the characteristics of this scene in chronological order. The advantage of this writing is that it is very clear.
Through this incident, I deeply understand the composition of loving life and get the fragility of life. It is as fragile as thin ice, which makes me understand what life is.
Five or six years ago, I'm afraid I wouldn't have thought of this problem. O with the growth and knowledge increasing day by day, I gradually understand that the smallness of life, like the golden sand in the sea, is insignificant at all; Life is great, just like a bright night pearl, which is extremely precious. Therefore, we should love life. When it comes to life, I have to mention my mother. Because my parents gave me life. But my mother is a strange person. My way of education is always different: whenever I accidentally break or touch a part of my body, I apologize to my mother. This is a habit I have developed since I was a child. At first, I was reluctant. But when I experienced what happened the other day, I deeply understood that it was an afternoon without class. I walked happily on the way to the "small table". Suddenly, a classmate came running from behind and patted me on the shoulder and called my name O. I thought he was flirting with me, so I ran after him without hesitation and "returned" him without thinking. Then we met at close range. You hit me and I kicked him. O We didn't stop at the "small table". He grabbed the "water gun" and I picked up the water bottle ... Neither of us listened to menstruation's dissuasion and preaching. O just as I bent down to pick up something, the water bottle in my other hand hit my head. Something unexpected happened. The bottle full of water, coupled with excessive force, hit my head. Running down my forehead, ah, we were frightened, and everyone present was shocked. Ah, I covered my bleeding head and was very scared. O, because I've never seen so much blood shed, I naively thought, "Now I'm finished." "Let's go to the hospital!" I don't know who broke the terrible silence. O I was taken to the hospital by my classmates' parents and aunts. The doctor stitched up my wound. O I take injections and medicine, and I'm in a hurry at noon when CTo was originally at leisure. I regret it very much If we could all control it at that time, if we could listen to the advice of adults, if ... my mother would definitely not be able to work with peace of mind. O when my mother saw me after work, I was dressed like a seriously injured person who had just come down from the battlefield. O saw her mother's concerned eyes and listened to her earnest words. I bowed my head in shame and said from my heart, "Mom, I'm sorry!" " "
Through this incident, I deeply realized the fragility of life, walking on thin ice, and I know that we should love it as much as we love our eyes. O Only in this way can we love our family, our country and the world! Love life, let's draw colorful pictures with short life!
The dream of grass is green mountains and rivers, the dream of flowing water is to conquer the desert Gobi, the dream of birds is to fly over the steep mountains and rivers, and the dream of the earth is to raise thousands of creatures ... Everyone has dreams, and no one can lack dreams.
My dream is to be a successful fashion designer. I want all mankind to wear the clothes I designed, so that people will be chic, beautiful, generous and full of vigor.
Dreams are not enough. No cultivation, no sowing, no fruit. "Nothing is difficult in the world, as long as you are willing to climb." If you have a dream, you must know how to cultivate and sow, so that a successful dream is not far from me. Unit 8 Composition 350 Words: My Dream Unit 8 Composition 350 Words: My Dream.
If my dream wants to come true, I must have: wings of imagination, space to take me to imagine and find what I want; Full of sunshine, the sunshine of knowledge shines on your dreams; Iron-like will, with a dream of continuous progress, forge ahead will; A hundred thousand passions, with which we can do better. ...
I want to make a path for my dream. Whether it is a tornado or a storm, I will go forward bravely. If a stepping stone knocks me down on the road, I will endure the pain and finish the road. I want to learn from the brave spirit of the Red Army when crossing the grassland and climbing the snow-capped mountains.
Dream, let the earth shrink; Dreams make the plateau short; Dream, let tall buildings rise from the ground; Dreams make people travel in the sky …, dreams change everything, dreams achieve everything, dreams make everything beautiful …
Dreams make people constantly pursue one goal after another. People with dreams, let's light the candle of dreams! Light yourself up!
The fourth grade, the second volume, composition 8, sasha vujacic! It began to rain lightly, crying like a doll spanked by her mother. Dark clouds blackened the earth, and a transparent bead curtain hung down in the darkness, hazy. Like a constantly tearing element, it weaves diagonally between heaven and earth. It quietly hits the ground and blooms, as if smiling at you, making people feel like they are in a fairyland.
After class, everyone picked up an umbrella and hurried home. "come on If you get caught in the rain, you will catch cold! " There was a faint voice, only Weiwei stood alone at the school gate, and the wind brought her a little coolness. She was afraid: "How long will it take for the rain to stop?" Mom and dad are on a business trip today, forget it! "She rushed into the rain, and the rain soaked her clothes, so cold that Vivian kept nagging," It's too cold! It's too cold! " "Vivian! "A familiar voice flashed through her ear and Vivian suddenly turned around." It's Rongrong! ""Vivian! You run so fast! You can be a long-distance running champion! " Panting, Rong Rong ran over, put an umbrella over Vivian's head and dried her clothes with a handkerchief. When Wei Wei saw it, her eyes were involuntarily moist, and a huge wave was raised in her heart: I often haggle over every ounce, and I often don't understand others. Just this morning, I betrayed Rong Rong ... Vivian thought about it, and her heart was full of unspeakable taste and red.
Fruit-like face, sorry to say: "I'm sorry, Rong Rong." "No, if I hadn't stained your new shoes, how could this have happened?" Vomitted to stick out tongue, Rong Rong said. Suddenly, Rong Rong got a cold war. Vivian saw all the umbrellas covered her, but the relentless rain hit Rong Rong's thin clothes. "What's wrong, Rong Rong?" "Nothing! Just a little cold! " "no! A cold can't catch a cold! " Vivian was busy pushing the umbrella to Rong Rong, but Rong Rong pushed it to Vivian. "good! One and a half people! " "well! One and a half people! " They both hummed happily "Auld Lang Syne". Their songs seem to be infected with rain, and the raindrops as big as beans hit the umbrella. Ta da! Ta da! It seems to accompany them, and my heart is full of the warmth of friendship.
Yes, friendship lasts forever, and I believe this warmth will remain in their hearts forever.
Who do I admire most? Is it mom? Is it a teacher? Neither. That's my father.
My father used to be an ordinary math teacher, but now he is a respected barrister. According to my mother, my father taught himself legal knowledge and went to Xinhua Bookstore whenever he had time. He stayed for five or six hours. Riding a broken bike every night, across the whole of Hang Cheng, I went to Zhejiang University to go to night school, rain or shine. However, my father worked hard for three years and finally fell off the list by one point.
Dad never gave up. From the beginning of his new reading, he piled up obscure legal books like a hill. My mother calls my father a nerd.
I remember one night, I woke up in the middle of the night and found the light outside was still on. I ran out to find out, and my father fell asleep at his desk. I called my father, and my father answered absently, son, you go to sleep first. Dad, what time is it? It's two o'clock. Then why don't you sleep? Dad said: I have more important things. Go to sleep first!
Another time, everyone was eating. Suddenly, dad covered his mouth and coughed violently. I know dad is ill. Mom quickly stood up and patted dad on the back, touched his head and exclaimed, Oh, you have a fever! Let's go to the hospital! Dad refused, saying: I will take some medicine for the exam tomorrow. It is with such perseverance that my father finally passed the bar exam.
Elbow grease gives the best polish. This is a sentence that dad often talks about. I also want to learn from my father and make it my motto.
These days, I am particularly interested in observing grass. She appeared from the ground as if to tell people that spring is coming.
I encountered some problems in the process of observation: why did the grass stick its head out so early? Does she grow by herself or need someone to sow ... I checked the information on the internet, and it turns out that the weather started to go underground when it got warmer, so the grass is not afraid of cold. She still doesn't need sowing. In autumn, hay becomes grass seeds, which are blown away by the wind, spread into the soil and grow new grass. This is how she grew up from generation to generation.
Grass can be seen everywhere, under the wall, on the ground, in cracks ... how tenacious she is, no matter how much pressure she has to bear, she tries to drill upward and add a touch of green to spring. In learning, why not? As the "Code of Daily Conduct for Pupils" says: When encountering setbacks and failures, don't lose heart, don't be discouraged, and try to overcome difficulties. When we fail, don't treat ourselves as dwarfs, but believe that we are the best and make our own contribution to the motherland.