I am no longer careless, because when I grow up, I will always be more careful than when I was a child, and I will read the questions more carefully.
When I was a junior, I sometimes didn't know how to make a judgment question into a multiple-choice question. Therefore, I always get bad grades in exams because of carelessness. Especially in mathematics, there are "traps" everywhere. If I don't take it seriously, I can't pass the difficulty of mathematics at all, so I was a poor student in my junior year.
Now, I'm a little serious. I'll look at the problem word for word. However, I can't change a bad habit. I always lose my title. I have failed the Chinese exam twice in a row, so I didn't even get 90 points. After those two classes, every time I finish writing a topic, I will be busy checking whether there are any missing topics. Only after checking, will I be willing to do it with confidence.
From now on, I am not afraid to hand in my composition tomorrow. From then on, I am no longer afraid to write a composition. Oh, I'm going to the composition class again. I heard my teacher read other students' compositions and evaluate them with the best words in the world. Then I heard the teacher criticize my composition without naming it. What digressions are tasteless? I really want to be buried. I will be teased again today. Alas! I'm really afraid of writing a composition. After class, I sat down to prepare the scene I already knew. "Today I'll read a composition, written by a classmate in our class. I won't tell you the name of that classmate for the time being. Guess who wrote it after listening. " The students listened with their eyes wide open and their heads out. As usual, I still, it's not mine anyway. Let's talk about my bad. The teacher began to read the composition and watched it. My feeling told me that it seemed familiar. On further reading, I became more and more aware that it was mine. But I am not happy, because there will be criticism next. Anyway, my face is old. The whole class was silent, and I found that the students listened more and more seriously and devoted themselves more and more. Finally, I finished reading it. "good!" Say that finish, applause. "Do you know who wrote this composition?" The students are talking about either you or him, and of course she, but not me. "Yes++!" "ah!" The students turned to look at me, and I wanted to get into the ground again. Because only I know that this composition was actually written by my uncle. Then, the teacher commented on the composition, praising my progress in writing from beginning to end, from material selection to word selection. I believe I will make progress! In fact, the teacher knows that my composition was written by others. To tell the truth, I felt ashamed at that time, but besides being ashamed, there was also a kind of motivation and encouragement. I secretly made up my mind to write my composition well to thank my teacher for her trust in me. Since then, I have read more extracurricular books and accumulated more vocabulary and language. I am no longer afraid of writing a composition. Hello, I am a Chinese teacher. I wrote it for you today, and you can write it yourself later.
I can't write a composition. I want to provide you with some writing methods. I hope it will help you: First, careful observation is the golden key to improve your writing level. The article is the product of objective things reflected in the author's mind. To reflect the object, you don't have to observe the objective things carefully. Only by careful observation can we find broken jade from the mineral deposits of life phenomena and grab the shining treasure from the mixed sediment. If you don't master "observation", the golden key to open the door, the "iron gate limit" of the composition will definitely be impossible. Second, reading more and reading widely is the premise to improve the writing level. To write a good article, you must read more books. "Reading is like a million volumes, and writing is like a god." "I am familiar with three Tang poems, I can't write poems and I can't sing." Mr. Lu Xun also advocates reading more books. "You must pick many flowers like bees, so that you can brew honey. If you bite in one place, your income will be limited and boring. " We emphasize that we should not only read more, but also read selectively, and even more, understand the structural skills and language characteristics of the articles we read, and master the composition from them, so as to be more profound and diverse. Third, choosing materials skillfully and carefully is an accelerator to improve the writing level. The requirement of material selection is novelty. The so-called novelty means that the batch should choose something that ordinary people have never touched, or turn a blind eye to it with profound meaning. Once the author writes in a book, it will make people think deeply about exciting materials. The angle of material selection should be small, we should see the big picture from the small place and write the materials in everyone's eyes instead of what everyone wrote. To this end, we must compare, analyze and synthesize various materials in our minds, remove the rough and extract the fine, and transform and process them. Only in this way can the materials be novel. And this kind of positive thinking and repeated deliberation is very helpful to improve the level of composition. Fourth, practicing writing often is the key to improve the writing level. Want to enter the door of composition, make continuous progress, and more importantly, practice more. As the saying goes, "it is better to write one than to read ten articles." This tells the truth that writing practice produces true knowledge. After learning an article, we understand the structural methods and writing characteristics of the article, so we must learn to use these knowledge and methods to practice and make it our writing ability. In fact, we can all practice writing after learning the first text. However, fragment practice is a good way to practice writing, which takes a short time and achieves the purpose of practicing writing. Keeping a diary is also an effective way to practice writing. Keep a diary every day, and then the Russian foundation will be solid. Fifth, diligent revision and repeated revision are the catalysts to improve the writing level. Revision is an essential step in composition and an effective measure to improve the quality of composition. The predecessors said well, "the article is never tired of changing." "The article has changed." Cao Xueqin wrote a dream of red mansions, read it for ten years, added and deleted it five times, and Tolstoy's War and Peace was revised seven times. Mr. Lu Xun advocated that "it is not a pity to read it at least twice after deciding and try to delete unnecessary words, sentences and paragraphs." It can be seen that article revision generally refers to the process from the first draft to the final draft. When repairing, we should do five things: whether the text is fluent, whether the theme is clear, whether the structure is compact and whether the language is beautiful. In short, "the article has changed." Generally speaking, the article is always getting better and better, so we should work hard on "revision".
I can't write a composition. I am a middle-aged teacher who teaches writing. I'll teach you some skills. I hope I can help you quickly. In terms of quality, it mainly includes language expression, material selection, structural arrangement, text composition and so on.
Language expression, of course, should be smooth, accurate, vivid and novel. Avoid colloquialism, overcome students' accents, reduce typos, modify sick sentences and make the language beautiful. To avoid colloquialism and overcome students' accents, it is necessary for students to overcome the habit of keeping a running account and understand the harm of not grasping the key points and covering everything.
In order to make the language beautiful, some rhetorical devices can be used to enhance the vividness and appeal of the article. 2. In terms of quantity, it is mainly the requirements of words and paragraphs.
The word count is required to be 600 words, and a natural paragraph of about 10 is constructed. Don't use too many words in each paragraph, just three lines. It is of great practical significance and maneuverability to students.
3. In terms of structural arrangement, famous sayings of celebrities are quoted at the beginning, or figurative sentences \ personification sentences \ parallelism sentences are adopted, and celebrities are taken as examples in the text to enhance persuasiveness and appeal. In this way, your composition can reach more than 80 points. You can try. In addition, to really improve your level, you need to systematically train narrative, explanatory, argumentative and practical writing, as long as
5. I am no longer lazy, and write a composition with the topic "I am no longer ~ ~ ~".
"Hey, mop the floor!" Reluctantly, I pursed my lips, picked up the broom and swept it carelessly. I was energetic when I was doing other things, but I died when I was sweeping the floor. Often halfway through the sweep, I am exhausted and sigh and say, "I am so tired!" " "At this time, I was always scolded by my mother.
That's what I am. I have been lazy since I was a child. Whenever my parents ask me to do some housework, I will use the reason of being busy or pretend not to hear. But then, I began to do all the housework slowly and consciously.
It happened during the summer vacation. My parents are on business trips, leaving me alone at home. Originally, I thought Aunt Li next door would take care of my daily life these days. I didn't expect Aunt Li to go back to her hometown because of something at home. Hearing the news, I felt like knocking over a five-flavor bottle, and I couldn't tell what it tasted like. You can also contribute.
Thinking that my mother asked me to do housework before, I didn't do it. What should I do now? Thinking that the dishes on the plate had not been washed for several days, I washed them quickly.
Because I was a little unfamiliar with washing dishes for the first time, I put more water and less detergent, which made the bowl slippery and contained leaves. If you don't succeed the first time, you have to wash it again. Finally, it's worth the money, the bowl is finally cleaned, and the "People's Bowl War" is over! Looking at the crystal bowl makes me feel much better. That day I really realized the hard work of my parents doing housework. From then on, I began to work hard!
As I grew older, I became very diligent. Now, I want to say to myself with satisfaction: "I am no longer lazy"!
I am no longer timid.
I have heard many ghost stories since I was a child, so I always thought there were ghosts in this world, and I didn't even dare to sleep alone. The courage has also become very small.
Although someone sleeps with me every night, everyone is restless and my troubles are coming.
One night, my parents said that I had grown up and should not sleep with my grandmother. I should sleep alone. That night was my longest night and also my worst. When I was sleeping, I said, "Don't turn off the light." But my mother said, "Don't turn off the lights and waste electricity." So she still turned off the light.
I was so scared that I always thought it would be okay. There would be no ghosts in the world. But the more I think about it, the more I get scared. I was so scared that I covered my head and feet with a quilt. But it was summer, and I was too scared to get some air. Suddenly I heard the sound of "Ding Rinrin". I thought it was a ghost, and I was even more scared. But after a while, the sound stopped and I was relieved.
I stuck my head out when I heard no sound in the quilt. As soon as I saw something shining on the table, I quickly threw my head back and thought, what strange thing is this? How can it shine? I saw it was quiet, so I stuck my head out to look. It turns out that this is not a strange thing, but a birthday gift from my father on my birthday.
I looked at my birthday present and wondered why my father gave me this shiny thing. I was scared and thought it was something strange. It was a false alarm.
I didn't fall asleep until dawn. I get up very late. Grandma told me, "Those are stories. There are no ghosts in the world. There are ghosts. "
From then on, I believe that there is a god in the world, in my heart and in everyone's heart. I am no longer timid.
I'm not afraid of anything every night except sleeping. I fell asleep as soon as I lay down.
6. "I don't I don't admit defeat.
I kept drawing and writing on the paper, but I always wrote the word "lose". Did I really lose?
Last week, the teacher said that he would choose the monitor, and I made full preparations. The preliminaries started, my heart was pounding and my hands were shaking.
"Ren Chaonan." When the teacher called Ren Chaonan, she walked on the stage generously and was not nervous at all. Finally, she got the 1 1 ticket.
"Tianxing." Although Tianxing didn't make any preparations for mydriasis, when she heard the teacher calling her name, she bravely walked to the podium. Although she only said a few words, she was full of courage, so the teacher gave her 5 points.
Another classmate is me. Can I compete with them? At this time, the teacher said, "The first half is over, take a five-minute break." I'm just relieved
The game started in the second half, and my deskmate Lu Jing returned to my seat. I was so sweaty that I couldn't even walk normally, but I got a good score of 1 1.2. How happy I am!
After the first game, I was honored to win the second place in my class.
Five minutes later, the semi-finals began. I thought it would be more difficult, but I didn't expect to just ask each other questions. I asked a few questions and was honored to win again.
The most intense finals began, and the teacher asked us to say what we would say when we became monitor. I said a few simple words, while my opponent said a lot. I'm very nervous. Who can win the final victory?
This time, the whole class voted. I got a few votes, but Ren Chaonan got the votes of most students in the class. Hey, I have to step down.
Seeing other people's bright smiles, I secretly made up my mind that I must write countless "wins" in the next competition.
7. I have no mid-term exam tomorrow. I thought it was just a lion coming to attack me, but I fought him bravely. It's not that terrible. It's just a piece of paper. I want to fill it up. I also know that our teacher was more nervous than we were during the exam.
It is the cunning fox who plays tricks on me and confuses me with all kinds of questions, but I won't be fooled.
It is a Hercules, let me wrestle with it and win it carefully.
He is a clever brother. It is not easy to answer a question and test me.
I am confident in the mid-term exam and I am glad to get endless rewards.
Everyone wants to get a hundred points in the exam, but they should look at the questions carefully and be careful. It's not easy to do well in the exam, and it doesn't matter if you don't do well. As long as you are serious, you will get a hundred points next time.
I have a mid-term exam tomorrow. I want to relax, take it seriously and try to get a hundred points in the exam.
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I'm not afraid to write a composition.
Today is the first day of composition activity class, and it is also the first day that gives me the most headache. Although many things happen every day, I just can't write them, and I always feel that there is nothing to write. I have to bite a few strokes to write a composition, thinking hard, so tired! Today, I came to the activity place early, and my mother repeatedly told me to listen carefully so as to write a good composition. I can't write a composition, so I have to sacrifice my rest time to open a small stove. Soon, the teacher came, wearing a suit and glasses, about thirty years old, looking gentle and amiable. After class, the teacher gave many examples, funny language and vivid metaphors, which made every student listen with relish. Unconsciously fell in love with the composition. In class, the teacher assigned a composition topic "Happy Family" for us to practice in actual combat. I wrote it down all the way according to the teacher's method. The teacher said that my writing style is concrete and vivid, and praised my writing style as great! I'm so happy today, I think I'm not afraid to write a composition!
I don't want to write a composition.
I finally have time to express my anger. After reading the idol Han Han's "Student Composition Should Be Abolished", this desire is getting stronger and stronger.
"A lot of reading is more beneficial than a lot of writing. Writing not only weakens your talent for writing articles, but also subconsciously tells you that it is normal and necessary to say something against your will, which is the key to survival. The latter is the only benefit that composition brings to students. It allows students to know the reality in advance, and telling the truth will not end well. It is the composition that destroys many students' interest in literature. "
I always agree with Han Han. My thoughts are still far from the height of Han Han, but what I see in front of me is enough to make me feel sorry for the times.
Last Friday, the composition teacher read the composition written by several "composition experts" in our class, which described spring. In the north of China, where there are only two seasons in winter and summer, and there are no cotton-padded jackets and half sleeves, composition experts can write spring vividly, which can be used as a local tourist leaflet. I endured nausea and chest tightness and listened to these compositions. I think it can be roughly divided into three categories.
The first category: essay model. Writing this spring composition has made me admire many students in my class-I dare to show off my old-fashioned composition at any time. These people's routines are nothing more than propaganda and suppression of "going to the mountains to find the footprints of spring", but they have been looking for "I am disappointed, is spring really not coming?" But at this moment of despair, "I suddenly found that a stubborn grass stuck its head out from under the stone." Note: this kind of grass must be "stubborn", it must be crushed under a stone but still growing. Because we should not only see spring from the grass, but also see tenacious vitality to enhance the height of the article.
The second category: master of prose. The mark of this guy is cleverness, but in fact he is very backward in his bones. No matter what style he writes, even an argumentative essay, he should also write the charm of prose, and it is a refreshing and emotional argumentative essay. There are often words like "I cried when I wrote this". But this is not the best. Best of all, any article of these people can't be separated from the postscript. Just write, but they don't seem to know what the inscription and postscript are for. They always write something inexplicable and pretend to be profound.
The third category: "Small Four" Replicator. I have always hated Jing M Guo, a junior, because I can't see anything worth appreciating except Jing M Guo's excellent writing about the environment and girls' psychological activities. But it was he who charmed countless girls who wrote their compositions with his tone and his words. Everything belongs to him, but the only thing is not his own. This composition is disgusting!
To tell the truth, our composition has regressed now. In addition to being melodramatic, it is an ode or reprimand, or it is to play the truth that "there is a literati in the world, you copy me and I copy him". I really sympathize with our current students. An ancient poem can last forever, but we students still work hard for a teacher's topic.
I am really disappointed. I really don't want to write a composition. However, the times have decided that we can only write such things for adults.
Please think that I am no longer timid. When I was a child, my grandmother told me a story about ghosts, which left a deep memory for me. Since then, I dare not stay at home alone, nor dare I go out alone at night. Everyone says I'm a coward.
My careful father found my courage particularly weak. In order not to make me a coward, it was raining outside one night. My father said to me, "Mei Mei, go and buy a bottle of wine for my father." When I hesitated, my father said, are you afraid of ghosts? As soon as I heard it, I said, I'm not afraid I took my father's money and went out under an umbrella. It's raining hard and the wind is chaotic. I started to run to the distant store to buy wine. On my way home, I looked around from time to time and always felt that a "ghost" was following me. When I got home, I told my father that I had just seen a ghost, which scared me to death.
What does a ghost look like? Why is it not afraid of you? "Well ... he may think I'm timid and unwilling!" "Ha ha, there are no ghosts in the world. I think it's obvious that you have a coward in your heart. " "I don't believe it?" "Then let's go and see what ghosts look like."
"I'm not going, I'm afraid." "Hey, your father is here, you don't have to be afraid."
Dad pulled me to the window, and I saw the "ghost" following me, which scared me to retreat straight behind my father. Dad grabbed me and said, "The ghost you are talking about is the shadow after the branches shake. I took a closer look, and sure enough, as my father said, I bowed my head shyly. "
From then on, I was not afraid of ghosts, because I knew there were no ghosts in the world. I no longer hide my tears. I have been considered a careless child by my parents since I was a child, because I never cry easily.
Whether I was sick when I was a child or being scolded and beaten now, I looked fearless and was praised as a revolutionary martyr by my mother. People say that "girls are flesh and blood made of water" and "men don't flick when they have tears". When I was a child, I was a strong girl. When they had tears, I wouldn't flick.
But a girl's strength has nothing to do with her grades. I did badly in the final exam of the first semester of junior high school.
I was walking in the street, and my mind was blank. It's past seven, and the winter night is unusually dark and cold, but the silvery moon is hanging in the sky, which is really beautiful.
I have never been sentimental, but I am also worried now. When I got home, I took out my report card and looked at my parents' disappointed expression. I was speechless, and neither were my parents.
Without shouting or scolding, my mother just patted me on the shoulder and said, "Let's eat, son." My heart seems to have been stung by something and twitched.
I suddenly looked up: "Mom, I ..." It's good to know my mistake. Come on, let's eat. "Maybe the room temperature is a little high and my eyes are a little sour.
I tried to suppress my feelings and sat at the table with a straight face. Maybe today's hearing is special.
I can hear chopsticks touching the bowl and everyone chewing. The air seems to be frozen. I feel suffocated and don't know what to eat.
I looked at my parents, and they looked at me. In an instant, my grievance, loss and sadness came to my mind together. I put down my chopsticks and walked into my cabin. When I passed my mother, I said, "Mom, thank you, I'm full."
I didn't turn on the light, only opened the window. Winter is extremely dark and cold, and only the silvery white moon hangs in the sky.
I looked at the moon, and sadness swallowed up all my feelings. I didn't struggle, let tears slide down my cheeks and drop into five petals in my palm-I was wrong, so I should study hard.
These are tears of repentance, and I won't hide them. Yes, I'm strong and won't cry easily.
But if you always don't face up to your emotions, people will become indifferent. Tears are not weakness, but the best expression of true feelings.
Until now, when I am sad, I often remember the unusually dark and cold winter night. Only the silvery white moon is hanging in the sky, which is beautiful ... I will do whatever I want without hesitation. If you want to succeed, you must be resolute. If you hesitate, you will accomplish nothing. This is the experience and lessons of countless successes and failures, and it is also my own personal experience.
Therefore, I will give myself a "death order"-don't hesitate to do something. Yes, because of hesitation, I missed countless opportunities to answer questions and was branded with the "crime" of not speaking actively; Because of hesitation, I missed the opportunity to show my style on stage; Because of hesitation, I became a coward in the eyes of teachers and classmates.
Indeed, I lost a lot because of hesitation, which is a pity. With the growth of age and the improvement of knowledge, I clearly realize that hesitation will miss great things.
As long as I don't hesitate, it brings me courage, courage and joy of success. I remember that at the beginning of the new semester in grade five, the class teacher came to recommend the class cadres, otherwise they would not be eligible for election.
This new trick stumped a group of indecisive people. After the struggle, I no longer hesitate. So that night, I wrote my speech.
The next day, although my heart was pounding, I was too nervous to face my classmates, and my mind was blank. But I still grit my teeth, try to calm myself down and try to remember what I recited last night. Although it was not very smooth, it won warm applause from the students.
Perhaps my courage to stop hesitating touched my classmates. In the election campaign, I became a glorious squadron cadre and realized my dream.
I'm so excited, so excited! From then on, no matter what problems are difficult to solve in my study or trivial matters in my life, I will not hesitate to ask others for advice. Believe in myself, I will be able to control my own destiny without hesitation.
I'm not afraid to write a composition anymore. Yesterday afternoon, I accidentally saw the CCTV 10 program "Talking about Composition" and was immediately attracted. There is a simple reason. Writing used to be a pain. My greatest fear in high school was writing a composition. I failed the HKCEE exam twice because I didn't write a composition. The third make-up exam forced me to write a phone number, and 800 words was not enough. Fortunately, I finally passed! I barely wrote a paragraph for the first time in the two college entrance examinations, but I still didn't write enough words for the second time. I was so sad that I couldn't write a composition at that time! May be affected by the trauma at that time, a lot of things are buried in my heart. I obviously have a lot to say, but I just can't say it! Now come back and let me write my composition again. I can write it in less than half an hour. Perhaps this is what the teacher said about people's growth, life experience and accumulation of experience. Thank you very much for going to primary school.