There should be a clear purpose in interspersed discussion in narrative.

This purpose is generally manifested in the six aspects mentioned above. But in the specific application, we should pay attention to:

1. Pay attention to the most typical cases.

We should focus our discussion on the most touching place.

3. Focus on the discussion when the author is most excited.

4. We should focus on the significance of the whole paper.

5. Focus on the content that plays an important role in the structure of the article.

When we conceive a composition, we should consider whether we should interrupt the discussion and the role of this discussion in the text.

What is it, so as to arrange the discussion in the narrative in a targeted manner.

Syria is the basis of discussion, and discussion is the deepening of Syria.

In narrative, the author's feelings and understanding are mostly elicited on the basis of narrative description, and the feelings and subjective evaluation of the characters and events written are directly written. The author is like a commentator, commenting on the people and things he tells anytime and anywhere.

For example, Yang Shuo's "Litchi Honey", from seeing litchi orchards and drinking litchi honey to visiting apiaries.

I thought of a question and asked, "How long can bees live?"

Lao Liang said: "The queen bee can live for three years, and the worker bee can live for half a year at most."

I can't help shivering: what a lovely elf! I don't want anything from people, but I give them good things. Bees are brewing honey and life; Brewing the sweetest life is not for yourself, but for mankind. Bees are small, but how profound bees are!

This poetic talk warmly praised the spirit of selfless dedication of bees and gave people a strong shock. This argument is the product of the author's cognitive leap, which can not only make the finishing point, but also set off with the author's narrative.

First, discussion means reasoning and expressing opinions, that is, analyzing and commenting on a certain problem or thing and expressing one's position, viewpoint or attitude. The use of argument in narrative can deepen the central meaning of the article.

Discuss, sometimes at the beginning, sometimes at the end, or point out the theme of the article, or highlight the central idea of the article, or reveal the significance of the recorded content.

How to add discussion to the narrative? In fact, it is the same as writing an argumentative paper and commenting after the case-both of them "need a little analysis". We should answer "What is it?" From outside to inside, from here to there. "Why?" "How?" Such a question. -This is analysis. Let's talk like this.

What is this? ?

What is the evaluation of things (or people)? Example: ... how common it is for a teacher to solve a small dispute in a child's world; But looking back now, I felt that I had great support at that time! In the eyes of a child, how kind, fair and great his teacher is. -"My Teacher"

What is the essence of the matter? Example: ..... I deeply know that what I have experienced is only a trivial matter in the great revolutionary practice of beloved Premier Zhou. However, from this incident, what we can see is Premier Zhou's noble and approachable qualities, his deep concern for the working people and the true nature of a great proletarian revolutionary. -"A precious shirt"

What is the law revealed? Example: ... how touching it is that a young chef can create such novel works of art! Looks like a champion indeed. We study hard now, master the skills, and work in a down-to-earth manner in the future, and we will certainly make contributions to the motherland. -"Radish Flower"

What is the law revealed? Example: ... Is it that easy to be a farmer? There is not a step difference between ideal and reality. We need to constantly learn, supplement and improve ourselves. So, I took up my schoolbag again, held my head high and strode into the campus. -"My Farmer's Dream"

What is the significance of this matter? Example: ... In a blink of an eye, three years have passed. Looking back on my life path, I deeply realize that this upward spirit and enterprising personality have played a huge role in my growth path! It taught me to be ashamed, urged me to turn over a new leaf and urged me to pursue higher goals. Isn't this the kind of character that is needed today in the 1990s? It makes people excited, it makes people forge ahead, and it inspires people to create a better tomorrow. -"My" stubborn temper "

What is the significance of this matter? (Negative) Example: ... If you neglect your immediate efforts and the small loopholes in your thinking, study and work style, the building of your future career will collapse and be destroyed one day. -"Don't refuse to do small things"

Why? ?

Example of understanding intention: ... With these ideas, I understand: Mom and Dad think I have grown up and can't be coaxed like a child. They are teaching me to be modest in a special way and not to fall into the bad habit of exaggeration and complacency. What pure love. -"One thing when I was growing up"

Point out the purpose example: ... Ah! Dear brother, how brave and calm you were when you died! I saw it: you braved fierce bullets to defend the peace of our motherland; You are not afraid of bloodshed, but for the reunion of thousands of families in Qian Qian. -"nostalgia"