The deceased Fan Wen laughed at me floating in this earthly sky, light and elegant, but my heart was bitten by pain and indignation ... Yesterday, May 2, 12, 14: 28, with a loud noise, I fell down with my beloved residence ... While floating, I waved my hand, twisted my body and cried wildly; I want to catch my child, my 6-year-old son. Even if I am about to disappear from this land, I will hold his little hand for the last time and kiss his forehead for the last time. As long as he is safe and happy, I can't get it. When I finally landed, I saw his tender shoulders being squeezed by the reinforced concrete wallboard ... I closed my eyes and lost consciousness, but my soul began to rise, and finally became the light now. But my heart has never been elegant for a moment, because I have been watching, watching my young life, watching the tragic situation of my heart bleeding. I flew down and tried my best to move the hateful wall, but I cramped every muscle on my body and tightened every muscle on my body, and the wall remained motionless. It seems to be laughing, it seems to be barking, telling the world that there is nothing I can do. I screamed and twitched, and my heart was full of pain and indignation. I vent on the wall and on people: come and save my child! Are you not noble? Aren't you noble? Where are you now? Where are you ... makes me hysterical. The answer is silence. I am in pain and my heart is broken. It pains me to watch the child's little face turn from warm red to livid. I cry for help every second and every minute. Time is so long, so long, so long, 24 hours, 24 hours ... Suddenly, parachutes flew past me, one by one, and I saw a long green dragon running towards my children. I was shaking all over and excited. "come on Come on! Come on! " All my hopes are pinned on my cry. I saw the green military uniform waving its arms and shouting. I saw an old man shouting with all his strength, "As long as there is a glimmer of hope, we will make a hundredfold effort!" My heart suddenly froze. "What happened to me before, what I did and said before! How ridiculous I am! Who am I arguing with? " My heart is calm and my anger is extinguished. It is a kind of quietness and a kind of broadness. I touched the child's forehead twice and jumped into the boundless sky. I turned around and stared at the child who was still being crushed. I said softly, "wait a minute, son, be patient." There is a grandfather and a group of uncles looking for you, calling for you and saving you. Their hearts are burning with charcoal fire and full of anger ... I'll go first. Comments: This volume is 18+ 18+20=56. It can be said that this article subverts the general marking tradition, and its rich ideas, ingenious ideas, coherent context, fluent language expression and flying personality cannot but be amazing. Qingshan Tongyu (Guangxi examinee) "Hold your hand gently and dry your tears for you. This heart will always belong to you. Tell me not to be lonely. "On May 19, China, who had been running, paused for three minutes in the sharp air defense alarm. Seven days ago, at the same time, a devastating earthquake shook most of China, which was a national disaster. However, the national mourning is a tragedy, and the national mourning is an unprecedented happy reunion. A long time ago, the poet Wang Changling wrote in his poem: "The green hills are always stormy, and the bright moon is never two townships". Castle Peak cannot prevent us from sharing weal and woe, and the region will not disappear into the same moon above the United Nations. A person, a glimmer of hope, a firm heart. When the rescue team rescued Le Liuhui who was trapped under the ruins of the Wenchuan earthquake 100 hours, everyone present cried excitedly, but she didn't cry. " I believe someone will come to save me, I will, I believe you! "The weak woman cried, followed by the rescuer's hand, one hand and a dozen hands shook hands tightly. This is the simplest and most sincere reunion between a victim and her savior. How high is the altitude of 5 thousand meters? Ask the PLA soldiers who took part in the rescue, and they will tell you that 5 kilometers is the distance we can jump here quickly, holding hands with the affected people, regardless of the dark clouds. This is the most touching reunion between the villagers and the country. The ocean once divided the world into opposing regions, but today's ocean no longer prevents the love of the world from coming together. This love comes from the donation box in front of every convenience store in Oriental Japan, from the charitable organizations all over the States in the United States on the other side of the ocean, and from the friendship donations from those Asian and African countries on both sides of the mainland that are not rich. The ideological difference between China and the world vanished in the face of disaster, and with the continuous arrival of planes and ships from the East to China, this is the biggest reunion of the hearts of people all over the world and all countries. Sadness has existed since ancient times. However, since ancient times, who has seen such inspiring and earth-shattering unity? "Historical Records" has a cloud: the people and the people are United, then the family is safe, and the monarch and the people are United, then the country is prosperous. Today, this is the joint efforts of people and people, people and countries, and countries and the world. Why are you worried about family unrest and national prosperity? Castle peak together, we go through the storm together and get together. The bond that unites people all over the world may be such an expectation: to stand for the world, to stand for the people, to study in the holy land, and to create peace for all generations! [Comment]: The article is in line with the meaning of the question, and typical cases are selected for in-depth demonstration. The materials are fresh and rich, the ideas are ingenious, the viewpoints are novel, and the language is fluent. Set modern lyrics, ancient poems and realistic scenes in one furnace, rich in literary talent and profound in literary background. Beautiful writing, broad vision, lofty artistic conception and profound thoughts. Comment 60 points