In a few simple sentences, point out the argument and stimulate readers' interest in reading.

But if it's the college entrance examination, I don't suggest you take the risk ~ After all, you know that our education is the same now, and the quality of marking teachers is uneven. Maybe you can get high marks when you meet a good teacher with personality ~ I think you are a little risky ~ it's better not to write! ! !

The following is just my personal opinion. There are many templates and structures for college entrance examination compositions. It is best to let the marking teacher know your main idea clearly. After all, teachers will not be very comfortable reading papers in summer, so they should be concise.

I hope I can help you.