1. The structure of the paper is complete, and each part basically conforms to the English writing standard. The title of the paper is very good and creative. In order to write this paper well, the author has done the necessary research.

It is not difficult to see from the author's reference to the original work that the author is quite familiar with the original materials. The language is also sharp, the discussion is clear and reasonable, the viewpoint is unique, and it has necessary reference value. It is a good article.

2. The topic of this paper has strong application value, and the literature is collected in detail, and the knowledge learned is comprehensively used to solve the problem. The data obtained are reasonable, the conclusion is correct and there are innovative opinions.

In addition, the format of the paper is correct, the text is standardized, the organization is clear and the language is fluent.

3. The idea of the paper is clear, the sentences are basically fluent, the levels are clear, and the opinions are expressed accurately.

The author organically combines the basic knowledge of administrative management with the practical problems of inner-party supervision, and puts forward some better solutions to the practical problems of inner-party supervision. The literature consulted is closely related to the theme. However, the opinions demonstrated in some places are not very clear and convincing, which generally meet the requirements of graduation thesis. Some materials don't combine the theme well, and there are some minor problems in logical structure. Generally speaking, it basically meets the basic requirements of graduation thesis.